-人教版[整理]書面表達指導46、法律有權打破平靜。——馬·格林47、在一千磅法律里，沒有一盎司仁愛。——英國48、法律一多，公正就少。——托·富勒49、犯罪總是以懲罰相補償；只有處罰才能使犯罪得到償還。——達雷爾50、弱者比強者更能得到法律的保護。——威·厄爾-人教版[整理]書面表達指導-人教版[整理]書面表達指導46、法律有權打破平靜。——馬·格林47、在一千磅法律里，沒有一盎司仁愛。——英國48、法律一多，公正就少。——托·富勒49、犯罪總是以懲罰相補償；只有處罰才能使犯罪得到償還。——達雷爾50、弱者比強者更能得到法律的保護。——威·厄爾高考英語書面表達講座

2009.3高考英語書面表達講座專家指出:1999年到2003年,英語試卷的信度和效度在各門學科中都是最高的。但2003年高考英語（全國卷）的書面表達試題偏容易，區分度也不太明顯，今年高考英語書面表達方面的難度將有所增加。英語書面表達的解題要領（二）把握時態語言得當正確使用動詞的時態、語態是書面表達的重點。在高考閱卷中，對時態、語態的錯誤扣分是很重的！盡量多用習語忌用中式英語常見錯誤舉例分析一、動詞錯誤Therewerehundredsofstudentscouldn’tgotoschoolbecausetheywerepoor.Hewouldn’tabletoworkouttheproblem.Hemanagedtoswimacrosstheriver,butfailed.WeiFangfellfromthetreeandherleghurt.Hewasputintoprisonforthreeyearsinhisthirtiesthoughhehasn’tdoneanythingwrong.I’vedelayedtoreturnyouthebook《EnglishUsage》,whichyouborrowedmetwodaysbefore.常見錯誤舉例分析(續)二、中式英語Hecostfiveyuantobuyanewdictionary.Recentlyourvillagehastakenplacegreatchanges.ThefactorybrokeoutabigfirelastSunday.MrLipraisedLiPing’srapidprogressinEnglishstudy.Chinesepopulationismany,butyourfriendsarefew.Iwasverydifficulttorefuseandhadtoreceiveherinvitation.常見錯誤舉例分析（續）三、結構錯誤Beingayoungman,heworkedinabankandanewspaper.Hewroteabout300stories,someofthemhadbeentranslatedintoChinese.We’llorganizetovisitDafengMiluDeerCentrethisSaturdaymorning,November27.We’llinviteAmericanstudents,ourEnglishteachersandstudentsfromotherclassestotakepartinourparty.Eachyearmanypeopledieandarehurtonroadaccidents.Weshouldteachchildrendon’tplayandridebikesontheroad.Whileridingabike,keeptherightoftheroad.英語書面表達的解題要領（三）

緊扣要點條理清楚可先在認真審題的基礎上盡量用英語列出提綱。這樣就不容易遺漏要點。敘述時，我們一般地可按照揭示語的先后，參照時間、事件、圖畫逐一敘述(如句式需要，也可適當調整語序)，就比較容易地達到“條理清楚”的要求。英語書面表達的解題要領（四）連貫流暢書寫規范確當地使用關聯詞語，使句子間的邏輯關系更加明確，使整篇文章條理清楚，連貫流暢，例如：

句子連貫的相互關系舉例

HewasinterestedinEnglish

andinmathsaswell.(遞進)Hurryup,orelseyou’llmissthelastbusfortheschool.(轉折)We’dlikeasinglesmallhouse,whereastheywouldratherliveinaflat.(對比)Eitheryoumustimproveyourwork,orI’llfireyou.(選擇)Itmusthavebeenrainingallnight,foralltheroadsarewet.(解釋)Thereseemedtobenochancesofsuccess,therefore,allofthemwentaway.(結果)Tosumup,allyoureffortswillbehighlypaid.(總結)Firstofall,youshoulddigahole;secondly,putayoungtreeinit;then,coverthetreewithsomeearthandpressit;andfourthlyandlastly,poursomewaterinit.(順序)常用關聯詞語舉例1.表示并列或遞進:and,aswell,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示選擇:or,either…or;3.表示轉折:but,however,nevertheless（然而）,although,though,orelse,otherwise,afterall,bytheway,incidentally（換言之）;4.表示因果:because,as,since,for,forthisreason,so,asaresult,thus,hence,therefore,accordingly(因此);5.表示條件:ifso,unless,providedthat（假如）onconditionthat（如若）;6.表示對比:while,whereas,instead,not…but,onthecontrary,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,e.g.,thatis,thatistosay,namely,viz,ie,inotherwords;8.表示順序:tobeginwith,foronething,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,soonafterwards,sincethen,fromthenon,lastly,finally,intheend;9.表示強調:also,besides,furthermore,moreover,what’smore,certainly,actually,infact,asamatteroffact;10.表示結論:tosumup,inall,altogether,inaword,inshort,generallyspeaking,asisknowntoall.英語書面表達的解題要領（五）

注意文采妙用結構一、變化開頭Agroupofchildrenwithbeautifulflowersintheirhandsweremarchinginfrontoftheparade.Marchinginfrontoftheparadewereagroupofchildrenwithbeautifulflowersintheirhands.二、巧用構詞法Hedrovethecarbackoutofthegarage,thendroveawaywithgreatspeed.Hebackedthecaroutofthegarageandspedaway.(轉化法)Justlikeabirdinthesky,hecouldoverlookthewholecityfromtheTVtower,whichwas218metrestall.Fromthe218-metre-talltower,hecouldhaveabird’s-eyeviewofthewholecity.(合成法)英語書面表達的解題要領（五續）

注意文采妙用結構三、運用分詞或介詞結構Whensheheardthenews,shebegantocry.

Hearingthenews,sheburstoutcrying

Atthenews,sheburstintotears.

Thewomancarriedababyinherarmsandgotonthebus.

With/Carryingababyinherarms,thewomansteppedontothebus.MrSmithwasinvitedbyNanjingUniversity,MrSmithwenttomakeaspeechonDNA.InvitedbyNanjingUniversity,MrSmithwenttogivealectureonDNA.AttheinvitationofNanjingUniversity,MrSmithwenttodeliveralectureonDNA

英語書面表達的解題要領（五續）

注意文采妙用結構四、注意變化詞語Whenhewasachild,Thomsonwasinterestedinmaths,andwhenhegrewup,hewasveryinterestedincomputers.

Asachild,Thomsonshowedhisstronginterestinmaths,andwhenhegrewup,computersarousedhisgreatcuriosity.英語書面表達的解題要領（五續）

注意文采妙用結構

五、注意變化結構

Therearegreatchangesthathavehappenedhere.Thereisanewclassroombuildingononesideoftheroad.Thereusedtobeaplaygroundontheothersideoftheroadbefore.Butthereisabiglibrarynow.Thereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinthelibrary.Thereisanewplaygroundinthefrontoftheschool.Therearemanytreesinandaroundtheschool….…Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplacehere.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobe,nowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyou’llcomeandseeitforyourselfsomeday.英語書面表達的解題要領（五續）

注意文采妙用結構

六、運用倒裝、強調手法Theboywassobravethatheledtheenemyintoourringofencirclement(包圍).

Sobravewastheboythatheledtheenemyintoourringofencirclement(包圍).IdidnotrealizetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwelluntilthen.

NotuntilthendidIrealizetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.

ItwasnotuntilthenthatIrealizedtheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.SuchisSunShuwei,ahardworkingandsuccessfuldivingstar.(NMET1991)Suchisourpresentlife,ahappyandcolorfulone!(NMET2001)注：最后兩句常用來總結全文

看圖寫話的寫作要領1.仔細審圖(特別注意時間、地點、方位、物品、顏色、數字、性別等)2.提綱立目(一般用keywords列出要點)3.連詞成篇4.檢查潤飾1)要點是否遺漏?2)動詞是否用錯?3)語言是否得當(有否拼寫錯誤)?4)全文是否連貫?以2000年高考英語表達題為例2000年英語書面表達題提綱（Keywords）7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2000.walkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastanelderlymancameoutoftheparksawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetthecarhitthemanfellwithacrythecardroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwestthedriverwasayoungwomantheplatenumberwasAC864OnepossibleversionItwas7:15

onthemorningofFebruary8,2000.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.ThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmakearightturnintoParkRoad.Thenextmomentthecarhitthemanwhilehewascrossingtheroad.Hefellwithacry.Thecardidn’tstopbutdroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwest.InoticedthedriverwasayoungwomanandtheplatenumberwasAC864.

AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.2003年看圖書面表達題

OnepossibleversionDearBob,I’mgladtolearnthatyou’recominginSeptember.I’vefoundaplaceforyou.It’sasmallflatof25squaremetres,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Therentis500yuanpermonth.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact,it’sonlyonestop.Doyouthinkyou’dlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.

Yours,LiHua。下面四幅圖描述了你班同學上周的一次研究性活動。請你根據圖畫內容用英語寫一篇短文,在某英語刊物上介紹這次活動情況Onepossibleversion

Lastweek,wedidresearchintohowlaid-offworkersgettheirnewjobs.Wehadadiscussioninthreegroupsandthenbeganourresearchseparately.GroupOnesurfedontheInternetandlearnedthatmostofthelaid-offworkershadalreadygottheirnewjobs.Inthevocationaltrainingcentre,thestudentsinGroupTwoweretoldthattherewerefivetrainingcoursesforlaid-offworkers.Aftertraining,theybeganworkingasrepairers,cooks,typists,householdworkersandsalespersons.Theotherstudentsinterviewedsomelaid-offworkerswhohadgotnewjobs.Awomansaid,“Withthehelpofthecitygovernment,I’vefoundmyjob.”

Whatagreatdealwe’velearnedthroughtheresearch!關于圖表的英語書面表達的寫作要領1.審讀圖表(一般用keywords列出要點)2.提綱立目3.連詞成篇4.檢查潤飾1)要點是否遺漏?2)動詞是否用錯?3)語言是否得當(有否拼寫錯誤)?4)全文是否連貫?請根據下表所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇介紹中國第一個航天英雄楊利偉的短文。姓名楊利偉出生時間1965年出生地遼寧省飛行狀況1.1987年加入中國空軍,飛行時間為1350小時。2.2003年10月15日9時乘坐神舟五號飛船進入太空,繞地球飛行14圈,在太空中度過了21小時,于次日早上6時23分成功返回地面。3.進入太空前,他花了5年時間來訓練.在太空中他記錄下了他看到的一切,并向電視機前的觀眾展示了中國的國旗和聯合國國旗。注意：1短文標題已給出；2詞數：100左右

China’sfirstspaceman—YangLiwei優作欣賞

China’sfirstspaceman—YangLiweiYangLiweiwasborninLiaoningProvincein1965.In1987hejoinedthePLAAirForceandhadarecordof

/experienced1350hours’flightinthesky.OnOctober15,2003,heflewintospaceinShenzhou5Spaceshipat9o’clock,circlingtheearth14times,whichtookhim21hoursinspace.Hemanagedtoflybacktotheearthat6:23thefollowingmorning.Beforeenteringspace,hehadspent5yearstrainingforthatflight.Inspacehemadeavideorecordingofwhathehadseen,andpresentedtotheaudiencebothChina’snationalflagandtheUNflag.AllofusareproudofYangLiwei,China’sfirstspaceman!優作欣賞

《英語周報》書面表達題

OnepossibleversionI’maseniorthreestudent.Generallyspeaking,I’mforbringingthecellphonetoschool,forit’sveryconvenientforusto

getintouchwithourparentsandfriends,especiallywhenthere’ssomethingurgenttooccur.What’smore,wecanacquiremuchmorefunfromit.Ofcourse,there’resomeproblemsinusingit.First,itwillinterferewith/disturbourteachingwhenusedinclass.Second,itwillbeawasteofmoneyandtimetokeepchattingonthephoneandsendingshortmessageswithit.Accordingly,Isuggestthatcellphonesshouldbekeptfrombeingusedinclass.Asavaluablepossession,weshouldseetoitcarefully,andmakegooduseofit.YoursLiHua

優作欣賞2001年高考書面表達題

OnepossibleversionDearDick,Hownicetohearfromyouagain!YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?Inshort,thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekends,doingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.NowIhavemorefreetime.Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchas

readingbooks,visitingmuseums,andtakingcomputerlessons.IntheeveningsIcanwatchnewsonTVorreadnewspapers.What’smore,Icangotobedearlier.AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.Bestwishes.LiHua優作欣賞2002年高考書面表達題

OnepossibleversionDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechsrgedforparks.

Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.What’smore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.

Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandother