板書內容包括：三篇小作文范文，大作文講解板書，

最后附有第一二節課講的基本寫作句型板書。

KeepWorking&GoodLuck!

小作文范文

1.道歉信范文

DearSirorMadam,

I'mastudentofouruniversityandmylibrary

cardnumberis34567.Iamwritingthisletterto

apologizefordamagingHarryPotterIVthatI

borrowedlastweek.

Ialwayshadthehabitofreadingbytheschool

lake.ButyesterdaywhenIwasabouttotakeout

thebook,Icarelesslydroppeditintothewater,

whichmadethebookimpossibletoreadanymore.

IamsorryforthemistakeandI'dlovetobuy

anewoneorpayafineuponyourrequest.

Pleaseacceptmysincereapologiesandletme

knowwhatIneedtodo.Lookingforwardtoyour

reply.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

2.投訴信范文

DearSirorMadam,

I'mastudentofEnglishDepartment,livinginroom

204inBuilding2.I'mwritingthisletterto

apply/request/askforasingleroominthefollowing

semester.

NowIamsharingtheroomwithXXX,oneof

studentsofXXXdepartment.Firstofall,heisamember

ofthestudents/union,andhiscolleaguesoftencame

forallkindsofstudents'activitiesatthetimewhenI

neededtostudy.Besides,Ifoundthatheoftenusedmy

computer/books/shampoowithoutaskingme.

Therefore,Iamwonderingifitispossibleforyouto

arrangeasingleroomformenextsemester,which

wouldbenefitmeandalsoleaveshimafreespace.

Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldsolvethis

problemformeassoonaspossible.Lookingforwardto

yourreply.

Yourscordially,

LiMing

3.通知范文

EnglishSpeechContest

March4,2010

Inordertoenrichextracurricularactivitiesand

providestudentswithachance/stagetoshowtheir

Englishability,theEnglishClubisgoingtoholdan

EnglishspeechcontestonApril10th,2010in

cooperationwithGuangdongEnglishChannel.

Thecontestwillinclude2rounds.Thecontestants

shouldprepareforanEnglishspeechwithin5minutes

onthetopicofwildanimalsprotection.Every

contestantwhoentersthesecondroundwillbe

awardedanOxfordDictionaryandthefinalwinnerwill

havethechancetoenjoyafivedaystourtoBritain.

Allthenon-Enilishmajorsarewelcometotakepart

inthecontest.Thosewhoareinterested,pleasesignup

attheEnglishClubofficeonthefifthfloorofschool

librarybeforeMarch15,2010.

EnglishClub

大作文結構、

Agoodopening…關于背景句

1.

弊

問題：

Today,Chinaisconfrontedwiththeproblemofthe

poorlivingsituationoftheseniorcitizenmore

seriously.

Oneofthepressingproblemsfacingournation

todayisthattheyoungergenerationlackofthe

abilityofhandlingpressure/difficultieson

theirown.

2.關注

Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionabout同

|picture/cartoon/drawing/photograph]inthe

newspaper/amongpeople/amongyoungpeople.

Thereisagrowingawarenessoftheimportanceof

thebenefitsthatglobalizationcanbringus.

3.發展

Withthedevelopmentof

在過去的XXXX年期間，我國/世界的XXX有了巨大的

爰展。

Greatchangeshavetakenplacein(hecountryside

ofChina]inthepastthreedecades.

Thepastthreedecadeshaswitnessedthegreat

developmentin主題thankstothereformbeing

carriedout.

時間+witness+n.

Para]

（背景?句+）如圖所示+選定主語做倒裝+定語從句/分

詞伴隨

關于描述圖畫|language

選定主語：圖畫的主赭，

主角所在的位置

|Anoldliesontheground.

Onthegroundliesanoldman.

Asisshownvividlyinthepicture,inthe

sunshine/infrontofusstandsabeautiful

Americangirl,(whois)dressedintraditional

Chinesecostume,wearingal1kindsofdecorations

andsmi1ingsplendidlytous.

為口圖所示，條布面前站著一個美麗的美國小姑娘,who

穿著傳統的中國服飾，wearing各種飾品而且，

smi1ing燦爛地對我們。

如圖所示，球場的市間躺著一個可憐的老人，蜷縮ing

成一個足球的樣子，被他的四個子女(who把守著家門

就像守門員goalkeeper一樣)踢出家門。guard

Asisdrawnridiculouslyinthecartoon,inthe

middleofthefootbal1field1iesapooroldman,

crouchingonthegroundlikeabal1andkickedout

ofhomebyhischiIdrenwhoguardattheirhouse

doors1ikegoalkeepers,

vigorously

Asisvividlyshowninthephoto,inthechairof

ahairsalonsitsayoungman,askingthehair

dressertomakehishairasstylishasDavid

Beckham,aBritishfootballmegastar,atthe

cost/priceof300yuan.

Asissimplydrawninthepicture,inthedarkness

1iesalamp,burningvigorously,1ighteningthe

surroundingandgivingoutwarmthtotheendless

darknessaroundit.

|As|isshownvividlyinthecartoon,onthe

playground|runs|ayoungman,機回istiredbutstill

keepsrunning,|rushing|tothefinaldestination,

Which|,atthesametime,isalsoanotherbrandnew

start.

每篇文章都不一樣的句子一話題內容

每篇文章都一樣的句子----題型

para2.

闡釋含義(內涵intendedmeaning,symbolicmeaning)

廢話+內涵的解釋+圖到論證的過渡

盡管圖畫很簡單，但是內涵很深刻

Simple函thepictureis,itsintendedmeaningis

reallydeep.

(Theauthor'srealpurposeisnotthepicture

itself,buttoleadustofindthefactbehindit.)

11revealsthefact/problemthatover-fishing

causesthesharpdecreasingoftheseaspecies.

比喻

Simpleasthepictureis,itssymbolicmeaningis

reallydeep.Itreveals/indicated/…thefact

that…+從圖到論證的過渡

本體喻體

floweryoungpeople

greenhouseparents/family

stormhardship/diff...

Simpleasthepictureis,itssymbolicmeaningis

reallydeep.Flowersarerevealedasthose

chiIdrenwhoareover-protected,andparents|are

naturally/definitely〔associatedwith]thegreen

house,whilethestormoutsideisreferredtothe

hardshipanddifficultieswhichchildrenmay

encounter/comeacrossintheirlife.〔Nowadays,it

isnotuncommontoseethZT|manyyoungpeoplelack

oftheabilityofhandlingdifficultiesontheir

own,becauseofover-protectionfromtheirfamily

andparents.

Para3

I負君畝I:簡單的評價+解決問題

評價(這個現象不好1-2句)+廢話+具體的措施(A/B)

+預測結尾

如何評價這個現象/這種做法不好：分析危害。1-2句

情況是如此的嚴害常們應該立刻采取方法去解決它。

Thesituation|bein目soserious,itj_shightime

that|wetookcertainmeasurestosolveit.

thatcertainmeasuresweretakento...

示范段落1

Thiskindofbehaviornotonlycausestheelder

peopletosufferfrompoorlateryears,butalso

isagainstthecherishedvirtueofournation.The

situationbeingsoserious,itishightimethat

certainmeasureweretakentostopit.Ononehand,

itisurgentforthegovernmenttoenforce/issue

relativelawsandregulationssoastobetter

protecttherightsoftheelderpeople.Andthose

whofailtofulfilltheirresponsibi1ityoftaking

careoftheirfathergenerationsshouldbesubject

tocertainpunishment.Onthqotherhand,every

Chineseneedto|be[wareof|thevalueofour

traditionalvirtueandthesignificanceofcaring

fortheold.Ifthesolutionsmentionedaboveare

wellimplemented,theproblemwi11besolved

effectively.

solutions

社會（政閑r,法布況構）一夕卜因/

個人一內

A:relativelaws®ulations

B:people/individualsshouldbeeducated

示范段落2

Thesekindofdeceptiveadvertisementsnotonly

violatetherightsofconsumers,butalso

barricadethedevelopmentofeconomy.The

situationbeingsoserious,itishig[timethat

certainmeasuresweretakentostopi|0nonehan@,

itisurgentforthegovernmenttoenforce

relativelawsandregulationssoastobetter

protecttherightsoftheconsumers.Andthose

advertiserswhomakefalseormisleadingpromises

shouldbesubjecttocertainpunishment.|0nthe

otherhand」everyconsumershouldevaluatethe

informationtheadvertisementstrytoconveyso

thattheycankeeptheirfeetonthegroundand

wi11notbeoverswayedbythem.Ifthesolutions

mentionedabovearewellimplemented,theproblem

willbesolvedeffectively.

Para3

正面圖：具體論證

觀點+論證證明+結論（觀點repeat）

1.解釋法:才巴觀點解釋詳細

論點：Smokingdoesgreatharmtoourhealth.

Usuallysmokerssufferahigherrateofmany

seriousdiseases,suchaslungcancer,thannon-

smokers.Somechainsmokerswouldeven1ive

shorterthanpeoplewhodon'tsmoke.

Internetbringspeopleasignificantlylarge

amountofbenefits.11isthebestplatformfor

peopletoattaininformation.

2.舉例法

Love........

Lovecanmakepeopleaccomplishallimpossible.

Forinstance,inthewestprovincesofChinaexist

somepoorfamilieswhocannotsupporttheir

childrenseducation.ItistheHopeProjectthat

makesitpossibleforchildrenfromthesefamilies

toreceiveeducation.

Culturalblendingcanbeseeneverywhere.

Forinstance,

Amongalltheimpressiveexamples/facts/stories,

thefirstonepoppingintomymindisthat...

n.

Icanthinkofnobetterexamplesotherthanthe

HopeProjecttoprovehowgreatlovecanbe..

3.反證法（虛擬語氣）

Iftherewerenosuchfundsandhelpfromthose

warm-heartedpeople,thesechildrenwouldnever

getthechancetoobtaineducationandprecious

knowledge.Consequently,bynomeancouldthey

havetheopportunitytochangetheir

1ife/destiny.

示范段落3

Culturalreintegrationhasbecomean

indispensablemeansofpromotingfurtherculture

developmentand|maintenance|.Inarapidly

modernizingworld,culturalblendinghasalways

beenplayinganimportantroleofhelping

differentnationsinculturalcommunication.|By

nomean§shouldweignorethefactthatthese

culturalheritagenotonlybelongtoacertain

nationbutthewholehumanbeingworld.Andfor

allthecountries,thereexiststhedangerthat

someoldcustomsandtraditionsmaybecomelost

becauseofthemodernization.IfPekingOperaor

SwanLakeperishedfromtheEarthoneday,itwould

beanimmeasurabletragedy.Whileitiscultural

blendingthathelpstopreservetheseprecious

heritageofhumanhistory.

Ibelievethatmulti-culturescanbedefinitely

keptalivebytheeffortofallpeople,ifwefully

realizethesignificanceofdoingso.

數據圖畫作文

barpielinetable

graph,diagram

數據圖表，提綱作文，情景作文

數據圖表

1.描述圖表（詞匯和句型的選擇）

As....,黑板.Andasisshowinthepiegraph,t[Eie|

number]ofsmokingpeople/smokers,whichis1.1

bi1lion,account^for|approximately|20%inthe

worldpopulation,whichis5.8billion.Moreover,

smokingwouldcause200bi1lionworthlostand3

mi1lionpeoplediedirectlyorindirectlyeach

year.

Wecanpredictahopefuldeclinewiththetobacco

consumptionandthenumberofthesmokersaswell.

Threereasonswouldmakeustodrawthis

assumption.

firstly

As+

吸煙人口，whichis...占到世界總人口，whichis...

的百分之20.

Thenumb鈕ofsmokingpeople/smokers,whichis1.1

bi1lion,account^for〔approximately120%inthe

worldpopulation,whichis5.8billion.

表示倍數比較的句型

Theconsumptionofbeefis3times(asmuchas)

thatofpork.

Theconsumptionofbeefis2timesmorethanthat

ofpork.

Asisshowninthebargraph,theoverall

consumptionoftobacco|in1995(14.2bi1lion)is

slightlylowerthanthatin1994(14.364billion)

byapproximately0.16billion.

提綱式作文

開頭句Manypeopleappreciatetheconveniencesof

thecity.Forinstance,123

However/Ontheotherhand/Onthecontrary,....

123

Besidestheadvantagesmentionedabove,也都有

缺點。1212

第一第二次課的上課板書整理

優秀寫作=很好的寫作水平+很高的英語水平

簡單句基本結構

主謂（賓）

家+表

定語狀語同位語

中文—英語

中文設計的更好，才能有希望寫出更好的英語句子。

互聯網會對涉世未深青少年施加大量的負面影響。

Internet,oneofthemostimportantinventionsin

the20thcentury,wi11alsohaveasurprisingly

largeamountofnegativeinfluenceonpeople,

especiallythose|inexperienced|children.

1.|adj.+

very+adj.

very:significantly,surprisingly,astonishingly,

extremely......

2.名詞+同位語

Internetis___

Internetisaplatformforcommunication.

Internetisthebestchanneltoobtaininformation

formodernpeople.

Internetisawonderfultooltogetentertainment.

Internetisatechnologyadvancingoursociety/

changingourlives.

Internetisoneofthemostimportantinventions

inthe20111century.

（母雞下蛋圖）Advertisement,animportantmethod

formodernbusiness/topromoteproducts

（愛心一盞燈圖）Love,thenoblestemotionofhuman

beings,bringshopetothosedesperatepeople.

09年真題：網絡的遠和近

互聯網為人們提供了大量的有用信息。

Internet,thebestchannelformodernpeopleto

getconnectedwiththeworld,providesuswitha

surprisinglylargeamountofusefulinformation.

互聯網為人們提供了一種獲取大量有用信息的快捷途

徑。

Internet,thetechnologyadvancingourlives,

providespeoplewithaneasy〔access而a

significantlylargeamountofinformationof

greatuse.

3.adj.T介詞短語后置定語

important,valuable,useful,helpful,necessary,

significant,

of+surprisingly〔great

importance,value,use,help,necessity,

significance

useless=ofnouse.

Itisabookofgreatuse.

Thisbookisofgreatuse.

helpful

Yoursuggestionisofgreathelptome.

過度沉溺于網絡，尤其是網絡游戲，會導致肥胖和近

視以及其他心理問題。

ExcessiveaddictiontoInternet,especiallythose

time-consuming,evenviolentandmeaningless

onlinegamesoftencausessomenaturalresults,

suchasobesity,poorvisionandother

psychologicalproblems,whichis...

4.非限定性定語從句

大作文

句子，which+非限

代替前面的整句話

Smokingdoesgreatharmtoourhealth,whichis

knowntoall.

o)=Smokingdoesgreatharmtoourhealth

o),whichhasbeenwel1provedbymanyexperts.

3,whichisanundoubtedfact.

o),whichisafactthatnoonecandeny.

o),whichisfirmlybelievedbymostpeople.

①，whichisknowntoall.

ManychiIdrenaresinglechiIdandareover

protectedbytheirparents,which(這)leadstothe

factthattheyhavegreatdifficultiesfacingthe

problems.

大作文圖畫作文一描述圖畫

As+非限從自,完整的簡單句.

后面的完整句子

引出描述圖畫

卜一如圖所示|

AsisXshowninthepicture,+才苗述

X:clearly,obviously,apparently,

ridiculously,...

shown:drawn,depicted,i1lustrated,

demonstrated,...

picture:photo,cartoon,drawing,

graph,diagram

5.分詞狀語：描述圖畫

As...,anAmericangirlisdressedinChinese

costume,wearingallkindsoftraditional

decorationsandsei1ingtous.

描述圖畫，選定了描述主體一只用一個謂語動詞，其

他的用分詞狀語

Asis.......alampisburningvigorously,

lighteningthesurroundingsandgivingout

warmth.

As...,|anoldman|liesonthefootbal1field,

crouchingandkickedbyhischildren1ikeaball.

1.倒裝句

A:完全倒裝（輔助描述圖畫）

B:部分倒裝

never

bynomeans

innocase|

atnotimes

notonly...butalso...

hardly...

few,little少到幾乎沒有

部分倒裝：句子中含有否定詞

1.否定詞

2.only+狀語（狀語從句）

X|have|neverhim.

NeverhaveIseenhim.

We|canthejobonlywithhishelp.

Onlywithhishelpcanwefinishthejob.

|否定詞+助動詞+主語+實義飛

情卷動詞

Firstly,/Tostartwith,/Inthefirstplace,

/Mostimportantly,/Mostobviously...

Syc?ndly,/inthesecondplace

遞進Furthermore,/whafsmore/

補充Besides,/Inaddition,

第一，…

我們也不能夠:忽?視另夕卜-，點、…

Bynomeans|should|we|ignore|thefactthat...+

W一

2.強調句型任何句子都能用

Itis被強調部分that…期余句子

who

Internet〔provided]ws-withasignificantlylarge

amountofinformationofgreatuse.簡單句

Itwastheoldpeoplewhoprovideduswith....

11is/was+被強調晶|成分|+tha的who+剩余的句子

Ourhabitswereformedwhenwewereyoung.

人的習慣是在年輕的時候養成。

Itiswhenweareyoungthatourhabitsareformed.

溫室花內圖

口was|stabi1ity|that|destroyedyoungpeople's

ambitionandbarricadedtheirsteps.

Juvenilecrimesgreatlyincreasebecauseof

parents5indulgence.

Itis|becauseofparents,indulgence|that|the

juvenilecrimesgreatlyincrease.

愛心一盞燈圖：愛令世界轉動。

Lovemakestheworldgoround.

Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround.

3.省略句

Whenwalkingonthestreet,Isawhim.

時間狀語從句，條件狀語從句，讓步狀語從句

A:主句從句必須主語一致

B:從句謂語必須含有系動詞

省略句，省略從句的主語和系動詞

Thoughhurtbyusmanytimes,ourparentsalways

loveuswholeheartedly.

Aftercarefullyweighedinmind,the

idea/solution/pointsoundsquite

reasonable/practical/feasible.

4.as倒裝讓步（狀語從句）：

體貼如李覓，他還是沒能達到芳芳的要求。

ConsiderateasRemeis,hecouldn,tmeetff's

requirements.

as倒裝讓步：

1.從句主句主語一致

2.Though/a1though/evenif+從句（adj表語/adv狀

語）,主幻

Adj表語/adv狀語+as+從句主語+從句謂語，主句

跑得快到博爾特這個份上，他也追不上超人。

FastasBoltruns,hecannotcatchupwith

superman.

就算一個學生非常努力的學習，他可能還是找不到合

適的工作。

Hard轂astudentworks,hemightbeunabletofind

asuitablejob,hedoesn'thavethenecessary

work