從語篇分析角度入手，

提升試題評析課的

思維品質(zhì)訓練

廣東番禺中學

黃麗從語篇分析角度入語篇分析試題評析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏觀分析篇章體裁：說明文微觀分析語法銜接：指代詞匯銜接：重現(xiàn)、同現(xiàn)說明對象：Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstillAsolarstill語篇分析試題評析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏

Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstill（蒸餾器）isoneofthebestwaystoobtaindrinkingwaterinareaswheretheliquidisnotreadilyavailable.

DevelopedbytwodoctorsintheU.S.DepartmentofAgriculture,it’sanexcellentwatercollector.Unfortunately,youmustcarrythenecessaryequipmentwithyou,sinceit’sallbutimpossibletofindnaturalsubstitutes.

Theonlycomponentsrequired,though,area5＇5＇sheetofclearorslightlymilkyplastic,sixfeetofplastictube,andacontainer—perhapsjustadrinkingcup—tocatchthewater.Thesepiecescanbefoldedintoaneatlittlepackandfastenedonyourbelt.ItsfunctionthenecessaryequipmentTheonlycomponentsmilkyplasticplastictubeacontainerdrinkingcupThesepieces上義詞下義詞 Abuild-it-yourselfsolarst 2.Toconstructaworkingstill,useasharpstickorrocktodig

ahole

fourfeetacrossandthreefeetdeep.

Trytomaketheholeinadampareatoincreasethewatercatcher’sproductivity.

Placeyourcupinthedeepestpartofthehole.

Thenlaythetubeinplacesothatoneendrestsallthewayinthecupandtherestofthelinerunsup—andout—thesideofthehole.3.Next,covertheholewiththeplasticsheet,securingtheedgesoftheplasticwithdirtandweightingthesheet’scenterdownwitharock.

Theplasticshouldnowformacone(圓錐體)with45-degree-angledsides.Thelowpointofthesheetmustbecentereddirectlyover,andnomorethanthreeinchesabove,thecup.關注句式的使用 2.Toconstructaworkingst33.Whatdoestheunderlinedphrase“thewatercatcher”inparagraph2referto?A.Thetube.B.Thestill.C.Thehole.D.Thecup.34.What’sthelaststepofconstructingaworkingsolarstill?Digaholeofacertainsize. B.Putthecupinplace.C.Weightthesheet’scenterdown.

D.Covertheholewiththeplasticsheet.33.Whatdoestheunderlinedp 4.Thesolarstill

works

bycreatingagreenhouseundertheplastic.

Groundwaterevaporates(蒸發(fā))andcollectsonthesheetuntilsmalldropsofwaterform, rundownthematerialandfalloffintothecup.

Whenthecontainerisfull,youcansucktherefreshmentoutthroughthetube,andwon’thavetobreakdownthestilleverytimeyouneedadrink.How：furtherexplanation 4.ThesolarstillworksHow35.Whenasolarstillworks,dropsofwatercomeintothecupfrom

.theplastictubeB.outsidetheholeC.theopenairD.beneaththesheet35.Whenasolarstillworks,Pa1:thebuildingmaterialofasolarstillPa2-3:thebuildingprocedureP4:theworkingprincipleofasolarstillPa1:thebuildingmaterialofPage

93.語篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架， 畫出篇章結構圖3.理清4個關系 段落與篇章、段落與段落、 句子與段落、句子與句子

2.尋找段落主題句段落大意

1.典型篇章（具備文體的典型特征）一二三四Page

9Page93.語篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架，3

1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredictedthatonlinelearningwillmakeplace-basedcollegeslesssignificant,andfiveyearsfromnow,studentswillbeabletofindthebestlecturesintheworldonline.IapplaudMr.Gates.Butwhat’stakingussolong?Pa2:Asearlyas1997,MIT(麻省理工）decidedtopostvideosofalluniversitylecturesonline,forfree,forallpeople.Buttoday,howmanystudentshaveyoumetwhomasteredadvancedmathematicsornuclearphysicsfromanMITonlinevideo?Unfortunately,theanswerisnotmany.WhydoestheauthorquotewhatBillGates’predictionaboutonlinelearninghere?Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredicPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqualityofonlineeducationwebsitesandtheexperiencetheyprovidetostudents.ThosewhogototheMITwebsiteandwatchcoursesonlinearesurelyverysmartpeople,butifsnotlikeplayingavideogamesuchasWorldofWarcraft.Onlythemostardentstudents,thosewhoarehighlymotivated,willdevotethemselvestostudyingtheseboringonlinevideos.Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.WhereistheAvatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.遞進式問題原因分析，找到問題的根源AnalyzethereasonsPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqu Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.Whereisthe

Avatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.

31.WhydoestheauthormentionHollywood? A.ToshowthatHollywoodproducesmanysuccessfulmovies.

B.Toprovethateducationismoreprofitablethanentertainment. C.Toarguethatmoviedirectorsshouldproduceeducationalcontent.

D.TourgethatmoremoneybespentdevelopingeducationalwebsitesTopicsentence舉例是為了證明觀點服務。本題實際問這個段落的主題是什么？ Pa4:TherealquestioniswhyPa5:BillGates’predictionisgoingtohappen.Thereisnodoubtaboutit. Butitwillonlyhappenwhenwecreatehighleveleducationalcontentandexperiencesthatengageandexcitemorethanhaseverbeenpossibleintherealworld.What’sthewriter’sattitudetowardsonlinelearning?positiveHowcanweturntheminreality?OffersolutionsTheauthor’sattitudestowardonlinelearningandhissolutionstoit.首尾段呼應Pa5:BillGates’predictionisPa1:Pa2:Pa3-4:Pa5:Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.AnalyzethereasonsTheauthor’sattitudestowardonlinelearningandhissolutionstoit.12345Pa1:Leadstothetopic.Raiset熟悉英語作者的思維特點英語篇章建構的特點建立某些題材、類型、模式、連續(xù)體的圖式典型文體謀篇布局的特點，語言特色5.總結提升（1）--純語言學習角度熟悉英語作者的思維特點英語篇章建構的特點建立某些題材、5.總結提升（2）--備考解題角度好處：1.拋棄只見樹木，不見森林的做法，提升學生對典型文體篇章結構的理解；2.不僅理解字面意思，更關注段落與篇章，段落之間，句子與段落，句子與句子的關系3.邏輯分析能力的提升直接帶動七選五和完形填空解題能力的提升5.總結提升（2）--備考解題角度好處：1.拋棄只見樹木，Page

18提升對語言的感受力核心素養(yǎng)Page

181.人物的情感態(tài)度2.由淺及潛3.語言邏輯思維4.提升思維品質(zhì)Page18提升對語言的感受力核心素養(yǎng)Page體會：1.好的教學方法一定吻合人的認知心理學。人獲取信息的通道：視覺：大于70%聽覺：15%其他：…2.講評課一定要做課件。課件是老師教學思維/解題思路的外化,幫助學生最大限度地獲取老師的信息，實現(xiàn)高效教學。體會：1.好的教學方法一定吻合人的認知心理學。有高果效有高果效Thankyou!Thankyou!從語篇分析角度入手，

提升試題評析課的

思維品質(zhì)訓練

廣東番禺中學

黃麗從語篇分析角度入語篇分析試題評析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏觀分析篇章體裁：說明文微觀分析語法銜接：指代詞匯銜接：重現(xiàn)、同現(xiàn)說明對象：Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstillAsolarstill語篇分析試題評析模式（1）2017年高考閱讀D篇篇章分析宏

Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstill（蒸餾器）isoneofthebestwaystoobtaindrinkingwaterinareaswheretheliquidisnotreadilyavailable.

DevelopedbytwodoctorsintheU.S.DepartmentofAgriculture,it’sanexcellentwatercollector.Unfortunately,youmustcarrythenecessaryequipmentwithyou,sinceit’sallbutimpossibletofindnaturalsubstitutes.

Theonlycomponentsrequired,though,area5＇5＇sheetofclearorslightlymilkyplastic,sixfeetofplastictube,andacontainer—perhapsjustadrinkingcup—tocatchthewater.Thesepiecescanbefoldedintoaneatlittlepackandfastenedonyourbelt.ItsfunctionthenecessaryequipmentTheonlycomponentsmilkyplasticplastictubeacontainerdrinkingcupThesepieces上義詞下義詞 Abuild-it-yourselfsolarst 2.Toconstructaworkingstill,useasharpstickorrocktodig

ahole

fourfeetacrossandthreefeetdeep.

Trytomaketheholeinadampareatoincreasethewatercatcher’sproductivity.

Placeyourcupinthedeepestpartofthehole.

Thenlaythetubeinplacesothatoneendrestsallthewayinthecupandtherestofthelinerunsup—andout—thesideofthehole.3.Next,covertheholewiththeplasticsheet,securingtheedgesoftheplasticwithdirtandweightingthesheet’scenterdownwitharock.

Theplasticshouldnowformacone(圓錐體)with45-degree-angledsides.Thelowpointofthesheetmustbecentereddirectlyover,andnomorethanthreeinchesabove,thecup.關注句式的使用 2.Toconstructaworkingst33.Whatdoestheunderlinedphrase“thewatercatcher”inparagraph2referto?A.Thetube.B.Thestill.C.Thehole.D.Thecup.34.What’sthelaststepofconstructingaworkingsolarstill?Digaholeofacertainsize. B.Putthecupinplace.C.Weightthesheet’scenterdown.

D.Covertheholewiththeplasticsheet.33.Whatdoestheunderlinedp 4.Thesolarstill

works

bycreatingagreenhouseundertheplastic.

Groundwaterevaporates(蒸發(fā))andcollectsonthesheetuntilsmalldropsofwaterform, rundownthematerialandfalloffintothecup.

Whenthecontainerisfull,youcansucktherefreshmentoutthroughthetube,andwon’thavetobreakdownthestilleverytimeyouneedadrink.How：furtherexplanation 4.ThesolarstillworksHow35.Whenasolarstillworks,dropsofwatercomeintothecupfrom

.theplastictubeB.outsidetheholeC.theopenairD.beneaththesheet35.Whenasolarstillworks,Pa1:thebuildingmaterialofasolarstillPa2-3:thebuildingprocedureP4:theworkingprincipleofasolarstillPa1:thebuildingmaterialofPage

303.語篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架， 畫出篇章結構圖3.理清4個關系 段落與篇章、段落與段落、 句子與段落、句子與句子

2.尋找段落主題句段落大意

1.典型篇章（具備文體的典型特征）一二三四Page

30Page93.語篇分析模式24.回顧篇章總體框架，3

1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)1.典型篇章（議論文）1.(廣州一模C篇)PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredictedthatonlinelearningwillmakeplace-basedcollegeslesssignificant,andfiveyearsfromnow,studentswillbeabletofindthebestlecturesintheworldonline.IapplaudMr.Gates.Butwhat’stakingussolong?Pa2:Asearlyas1997,MIT(麻省理工）decidedtopostvideosofalluniversitylecturesonline,forfree,forallpeople.Buttoday,howmanystudentshaveyoumetwhomasteredadvancedmathematicsornuclearphysicsfromanMITonlinevideo?Unfortunately,theanswerisnotmany.WhydoestheauthorquotewhatBillGates’predictionaboutonlinelearninghere?Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredicPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqualityofonlineeducationwebsitesandtheexperiencetheyprovidetostudents.ThosewhogototheMITwebsiteandwatchcoursesonlinearesurelyverysmartpeople,butifsnotlikeplayingavideogamesuchasWorldofWarcraft.Onlythemostardentstudents,thosewhoarehighlymotivated,willdevotethemselvestostudyingtheseboringonlinevideos.Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.WhereistheAvatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.遞進式問題原因分析，找到問題的根源AnalyzethereasonsPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqu Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.Whereisthe

Avatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.

31.WhydoestheauthormentionHollywood? A.ToshowthatHollywoodproducesmanysuccessfulmovies.

B.Toprovethateducationismoreprofitablethanentertainment. C.Toarguethatmoviedirectorsshouldproduceeducationalcontent.

D.Tourgethatmoremoneyb