1、讀后續寫基本流程Tips for writing:1. Thorough reading 2. Creative plotting（構思）3. Swift drafting4. Careful polishing5. Neat copying 1讀后續寫基本流程1續寫合理流暢生動高級豐滿整潔讀后續寫基本要求requirements2續寫合理流暢生動高級豐滿整潔讀后續寫基本要求requirem續寫Writing Practice3續寫Writing Practice3讀后續寫 閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。 Our unpla

2、nned travels were pure joy until this day. It was day eight of a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest, a two-week festival held in Munich, Germany, and Switzerland for Alps hiking. We wanted to book two rooms in Munich. Knowing none were available, we chose to try our luck and find a hotel along t

3、he freeway. At Freiburg (a German city 278 km west of Munich), we found the local hotel rooms were all booked for a festival. So we journeyed merrily down the road to find rooms. To our surprise, all the hotels we contacted were booked up. There was no room for us in Germany. So we went across the b

4、order into Switzerland to Basel. A large city in another country would provide two rooms for us, we thought. 4讀后續寫 閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落 It was in Basel that our bad luck began. I drove while my wife and son burned up their phones in broken self-taught German looking for two rooms. I rolled up to a stop

5、 sign and the GPS said, Turn left. Looking at the road signs, I scratched my head (撓頭) because something didnt seem right. But, of course, I followed the command of my GPS pilot. Quickly it was clear that we were no longer on a road, but train tracks. “Calm down,” I instructed my wife and son. “Ill

6、simply drive a bit until I can get off the tracks and back on a road.” This calm was short-lived as our teenage son, Mitch, noted, “Dad, there s a train behind us!” While we were processing this dilemma, another tram appeared in the distance.5 It was in Basel that our b Our car was not pressed flat

7、like a soda can. I eased it off the tram tracks onto a crowded pedestrian- only(行人專用的) square. Hundreds of people were enjoying their weekend outdoors. We were safe, but obviously not where cars were allowed. The best plan I could think of was to (丟棄) the rental car. What a stupid idea! 6 Our car wa

8、s not pressed fParagraph 1:About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car with his stick. _ Paragraph 2: We were freed from our painful experience, but still had no place to sleep for thenight! _7Paragraph 1:7寫作過程Writing Process8寫作過程Writing Process8體裁：記敘文時態：一般過去

9、時原文核心內容解讀：一家人外出旅行去參加慕尼黑啤酒節，路途困難重重，很難預定到房間的故事。1. 解題思路9體裁：記敘文1. 解題思路9When：It was day eight of a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest.Where：Munich(Germany) Freiburg(Germany) Basel (Switzerland )who：I /my wife/my son, Mitch/ an elderly gentleman2. 文章脈絡10When：It was day eight of a fam2. 文章脈絡What:We wan

10、t to book two rooms in Munich but none were available.At Freiburg, all the hotels were booked up and there was no room for us so we decided to head for Switzerland to Basel, hoping to find two rooms.It was in Basel that our bad luck began. Following the command of my GPS pilot, we were no longer on

11、a road but train tracks. Eventually, I drove my car off the tram tracks onto a crowded square where cars were not allowed.112. 文章脈絡What:We want to book t兩段首句定一框 根據續寫的第一段首句與第二段首句確定第一段的框架。（我們找到了停車處）二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句與正能量結尾來確定。（我們最終找到了住所） 3. 寫作思路12兩段首句定一框二框二首正能量 3. 寫作思路12 詞1）籠統詞變具體詞2）單詞變短語3）詞匯派生4. 高分

12、精煉13 詞1）籠統詞變具體詞2）單詞變短語3）詞匯派生4. 高分精1）籠統詞變具體詞籠統詞具體詞beautifulhandsome (英俊的), attractive (吸引人的), graceful (優雅的), fine (精美的)gladexcited (興奮的), pleasant (愉快的), joyful (歡喜的)importantvital (至關重要的), critical (決定性的), significant (意義重大的), primary (首要的), profound (深刻的)badmean (卑鄙的), evil (邪惡的), selfish (自私的), d

13、isgusting (令人厭惡的)goodexcellent (優秀的), awesome (令人驚嘆的), outstanding (杰出的)poorPoorly-dressed(穿著破爛), be in rags(衣衫襤褸), needy (貧困的)veryterribly (極度地), extremely (極其), highly (非常), greatly (大大地)141）籠統詞變具體詞籠統詞具體詞beautifulhandso2）單詞變短語單詞短語likehave a passion forlookstare at/glare atbeginget down tostandStru

14、ggle/spring to ones feetraiseput forwarddesirelong forusemake use ofdecidemake up ones mind152）單詞變短語單詞短語likehave a passion 3）詞的派生前綴示例un- 不；非unconsciously (無意識地), untruth (謬誤)in- 不；非illogical (不合邏輯的), irrelevance (不相關)non- 無；沒有nonsense (廢話), non-stop (直達的；不停的)dis- 不；非；相反dishonest (不誠實的), disappear (消

15、失)re-又；再；重新reapply (再申請), reassuring (令人放心的)anti- 反對antifreeze (防凍劑), anticlimax (掃興的結局)auto- 自己(的)，無人操作（的）autobiography (自傳), automatic (自動的)163）詞的派生前綴示例un- 不；非unconsciouslyTom is a boy. He is a student. He works hard. That makes his parents happy.Tom, a boy, who is a student, works hard, which mak

16、es his parents happy.Being a student, Tom, a boy, works hard, making his parents happy.Being a good student, Tom, a clever boy, works especially hard, making his beloved parents extremely happy.Being a marvelous learner, Tom, an intelligent teenager, works especially hard like a honeybee, making his

17、 beloved parents extremely happy.4. 高分精煉羅列合并簡化美化豐滿替換、文學句 For example:17Tom is a boy. He is a student.無靈主語1. My pen involuntarily hesitates. 我不知該從何處下筆。2. Anxiety tore the boy into pieces. 這個男孩焦慮不安，整個人都崩潰了。3. The thick carpet killed the sound of my footsteps. 我走在厚厚的地毯上，一點腳步聲也沒有。 4. All attempts to fin

18、d rooms failed. 尋找房間一切嘗試都失敗了。5. The astonishment robbed me of the power to say anything. 我震驚得說不出話來。4. 高分精煉18無靈主語1. My pen involuntarily he Paragraph 1: About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car with his stick. Hearing the knock, I rolled down the window wit

19、h my heart beating wildly, wondering what would happen to us. “Why did you park your car here without permission?” asked the gentleman, confused. Feeling embarrassed, I explained to5. 范文賞析 參考范文（一）19 Paragraph 1:5. 范文賞析 參考范文 5. 范文賞析him the dilemma we were faced with. Much to our surprise,not only did

20、 the gentleman guide us to a parking lot but also he showed us around the city, where we saw a large number of people dressed in festive costumes. It was then that we felt a sense of relief.20 5. 范文賞析him the dilemma wParagraph 2: We were freed from our painful experience, but still had no place to s

21、leep for the night! I scratched my head again, desperate and extremely exhausted. Having sensed our awkward situation, the gentleman politely asked, “I live alone, would you mind staying with me tonight?” “It is so kind of you to offer us accommodation! Sir!” I replied, 5. 范文賞析21Paragraph 2:5. 范文賞析2

22、1feeling excited and grateful. We had fun with each other and never before had we had such a wonderful night. As you can see, next time you are in great trouble, keep in mind that God will open a window for you when he closes the door!5. 范文賞析22feeling excited and grateful. About that time an elderly

23、 gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car with his stick. Sheepishly I rolled down the window and heard these serious words, “Sir, you can t be here in that car.”Yes, I explained why we were there. Make your way slowly and carefully to that street, he said nicely, pointing his stick to an opening 100 yards and hundreds of people away. I thanke