1、2013高考英語書面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練（42）及參考范文：書面表達(dá)精選23，第三部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11除起）不計分。To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to m

2、ake the switch from paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by Florida newspaper says that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead(n.鉛). In fact, lead is a metal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. In fact, lead in t

3、he bags is not possible to pollute food. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeating use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures.第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)（共1小題；滿分30分）假設(shè)你是學(xué)校學(xué)生

4、會的一員，為了擁有一個更美好的校園，你發(fā)出了全員環(huán)保的倡議，并制作了如下圖的海報。請根據(jù)海報內(nèi)容及以下要點寫一份倡議書。寫作內(nèi)容1.環(huán)保是我們中學(xué)生義不容辭的責(zé)任。2.我們可以養(yǎng)成這些環(huán)保習(xí)慣。3.讓我們?nèi)巳硕紴榈厍蚰赣H盡一份綿薄之力吧。要求: 注意文章的地道性和連貫性高考資源網(wǎng) friends,Do you want to live in a beautiful world? _The Students Union改錯：To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch from

5、 it paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by Florida newspaper says to athat reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. Lead is a soldmetal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. I fact , Lead in the bags is not humans或

6、a或beingspossible to pollute food. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeatinglikely goes repeated use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags arewithout decoration. We request that the government can take some measures. should 13,第

7、四部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分, 滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改 10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night,

8、for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the

9、company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever

10、he believed was helpful.學(xué)科王第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）2月4日，星期天上午，你們班同學(xué)騎車到學(xué)校附近的公園組織了一次環(huán)保活動。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一篇日記，發(fā)表你對此次活動的看法。1組學(xué)科王掃除：清理廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物2組宣傳：樹立標(biāo)牌，告訴游客要愛護花木3組演講：向游客宣傳“白色污染”的害處以及保護環(huán)境的重要性你的看法注意：1日記必須包括表內(nèi)所有的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；2日記格式及首句已給出，不列入總詞數(shù)；3詞數(shù)：100詞左右。 4參考詞匯：煙蒂cigarette end 標(biāo)牌 boardFebruary 4, Sunday FineThis

11、 morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. _短文改錯：Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to soa big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the

12、 interview. known anMr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, wholooking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the was或lookedcompany, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he

13、helped the idea waitingworkers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he Luckilywas the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give becausethe job to whoever he believed was helpful.*結(jié)束24，第三部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。

14、錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（ ），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞; 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Dear Brown,Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for childrenI have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you ar

15、e fit to itHow about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a riverIt is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all aroundEverybody sleeps in tents, that is very excitingWe usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a funI am sure it will be an unforgettable experienceIf you are interesting in it, rep