個人介紹：環球雅思精英輔導老師劉樂吟教育教學背景：畢業于愛丁堡大學（UK)Master

of

science

碩士學位曾任：英國愛丁堡聯邦政府移民成人英語教育講師英國Gold

Brother，HawickKnitwear

Vice

Manager獲得證書：高級BEC，國家二級翻譯，上海緊缺人才高級口譯，專業八級，職業教師資格證，雅思8分獲獎經歷：2011年度中央電視臺“希望之星”英語風采大賽海南賽區大學組一等獎；全國賽區第33名。2011年“外研社”杯全國英語演講大賽海南賽區專業組一等獎2012年獲?？谑腥嗣裾馐聝S務辦公室組織的首屆“友城杯”英語演講比賽第二名環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導課程全程安排：28日晚17-18點：邏輯論述訓練（針對TR,CC)29日晚17-18點：高分表達示范（針對LR,GA)30日晚17-18點：學生作文錯誤講解+語法難點串講（針對LR,GA）31日晚17-18點：學生作文錯誤講解+語法難點訓練（針對LR,GA）環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導本課教學目標：寶貝兒們能夠：理清劍橋考官范文寫作邏輯，論點論據消化獨家橫向縱向邏輯擴展使用橫向，縱向，橫縱向邏輯擴展環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導Some

experts

believe

that

it

is

better

for

children

to

begin

learning

aforeign

language

at

primary

school

rather

than

secondary

school.Do

the

advantage

of

this

outweigh

the

disadvantages?Give

reasonsforyour

answer

and

include

any

relevant

examplesfrom

your

own

knowledge

or

experience.Write

at

least

250

words.Warm

upC9T1WRITING

TASK

2環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導第一步：審題?。。。?！關鍵詞：learning

a

foreign

language審題標志性詞語：rather

thanPrimary

school

√

Secondary

school

X問的什么：議論文環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導樂吟老師獨家分論點擴展之：橫向邏輯擴展縱向邏輯擴展環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導C7T1WRITING

TASK

2It

is

generally

believed

that

some

people

are

born

withcertain

talents,

for

example

for

sport

or

music,

and

othersare

not.

However,

it

is

sometimes

claimed

that

any

child

canbe

taught

to

become

a

good

sports

person

or

musician.Discuss

both

theseviewsand

give

your

ownopinion.Give

reasonsforyour

answer

and

include

any

relevant

examplesfrom

your

own

knowledge

or

experience.Write

at

least

250

words.環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導考官范文personal

opinion段------先天和后天同等重要I

personally

think(反面論點：）

thatsome

people

do

have

talents

that

are

probably

inherited

via

their

genes.

Such

talents

can

give

individuals

a

facility

forcertain

skills

that

allow

them

to

excel,

while

more

hard-working

studentsnever

manage

to

reach

a

comparable

level.

But,

（論點：）as

withallquestions

of

nature

versusnurture,they

arenotmutually

exclusive.（論點擴展A1）Good

musicians

or

artists

and

exceptional

sports

stars

have

probablysucceeded

because

of

both

goodtraining

and

natural

talent.

(A2:)Withoutthenatural

talent,

continuous

training

would

be

neither

attractive

nor

productive,and

without

the

training,

the

child

would

not

learn

how

to

exploit

anddeveloptheir

talent.反：天賦論反：教學論環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導同意天賦論Personally,

(攻擊反面：）teaching

does

demonstrate

a

route

map

of

what

to

be

done.Yet,

this

demonstration

instructs

somany

individuals

that

consequently,

the

individual’sindividuality

is

absent,

thus

the

mediocre

ones

would

hardly

(點題）become

a

good

performer

or

an

excellent

sports

person.（論點：A）the

issue

of

whether

natureoutweigh

nurture,

in

my

eyes,

depends

on

what

the

apprentice

is

about

to

learn.Regarding

to

music

or

sports,even

substantial

training

would

probably

notbe

enough

forone

to

excel.

(論點擴展:A1）It

is

quite

normal

to

witness

that

there

are

people

who

areable

to

sing

a

song,but

not

all

of

them

can

sing

as

pulsating

as

Micheal

Jackson.(A2)Similarly,in

terms

of

sports,

although

each

member

has

been

trained

for

aconsiderable

amount

of

time

in

a

football

team,

there

is

still

a

significant

differencebetween

Ronardo

and

the

others.（論點重申：）All

theses

evidence

argue

for

theimportant

even

vital

role

of

one’s

innate

ability,Namely,talents.In

sum,

without

nature,

nurture

would

probably

be

fruitless,

especially

in

the

field

ofsports

and

music

which

will

work

more

smooth

for

a

gifted

apprentice.樂吟老師劍C7T2

橫向邏輯示范反：教育論反：同等重要論環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導C9T2WRITING

TASK

2Somepeople

believe

that

unpaid

community

service

should

be

acompulsorypart

of

high

school

programmes

(for

example

working

fora

charity,

improving

the

neighborhood

or

teaching

sports

to

youngerchildren).To

what

extent

do

you

agree

or

disagree?Give

reasonsforyour

answer

and

include

any

relevant

examplesfrom

your

own

knowledge

or

experience.Write

at

least

250

words.中槍的請戳one.。。。。。。環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導C9T28分作文時怎樣煉成的之橫向邏輯第一段：改寫—介紹—表態第二段：Life

skills:

1.learn

to

communicate,2.time-management,

3.improve

organization

skills

4.after-school

activities第三段：1.creativity,2.

employability

3.respect

work

and

money第四段：1.healthy

lifestyle

and

exercise

2.

reduce

the

teens’

crime

rate第五段：結尾重申態度，表達愿望。環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導縱向邏輯聯系示范C9T2全反對式示范---橫縱向（并列＋遞進）第二段

A(CS)

B(HS)From

my

perspective,

unpaid

community

service,

to

some

extent,provide

the

high

school

students

with

certain

social

workingexperience.

However,

分論點一social

service

is

quite

time-consuming

at

the

same

time.

擴展1.The

senior

middle

schoolstudents’

time

are

limited,

given

the

fact

that

they

have

to

makebothdecisions

and

efforts

on

their

future

career.

2.Working

for

acharity,

or

attempting

to

improve

the

neighbourhood

will

definitelyrequire

time.

3.Thus,

If

this

kind

of

service

were

made

mandatory,students

will

definitely

be

distracted

from

their

academic

study.分論點：社會服務浪費時間

Btime

+Atime

=ABTIME1.2.橫

3為縱B高中生時間緊＋A為慈善做義工需要花很多時間（點題）強制社會服務會使得學生分心學習時間不夠樂吟老師劍C9T2

橫縱向邏輯示范環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導第三段縱向邏輯（因果）示范：分論點二：The

right

to

choose

what

to

do

in

one’s

life

is

abasis

of

what

we

know

about

freedom,

which

is

by

all

means

trueto

any

living

civilian

in

the

community,the

high

middle

schoolstudents

included.論據:1.

Compulsory

societal

work

neglectsstudents’

rights

of

choosing,2.thus

might

demotivate

those

whooriginally

willing

to

volunteer.（因果推論：）3.Consequently,theeven

worse

situation

is

that

it

might

even

result

in

the

teens’dissatisfaction,which

is

probably

the

leading

cause

of

the

teenageranti-social

behaviors.每個公民都有選擇權強制社工忽視學生選擇權

忽視選擇權打擊學生積極性打擊積極習慣造成青少年的不滿和反社會行為樂吟老師劍C9T2

縱向邏輯示范環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導第四段橫縱向邏輯拓展）Community

service,instructing

sports

to

younger

students

alikerequire

the

trainer

to

have

professional

skills,which

is

something

thehigh

middle

school

students

can

not

provide.（擴展分論點的論據：）Skateboarding

for

instance,is

considered

to

be

dangerous

to

thechildren

even

with

professional

instruction

and

training,

let

alone

guidedby

an

amateur.Senior

middle

school

students

are,most

often

than

not,notprofessional

insports

training,

therefore,their

kind-heartedassistance

would

probably

turn

into

disasters

to

the

children

beinghelped.主題句（分論點）：運動需要專業人員的指導（舉例論據（拓展）滑板是危險運動，需要專業人員指導因為高中生沒有專業運動培訓技能所以他們提供的社會服務幫助是沒用的樂吟老師劍C9T2

縱向邏輯示范環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導C8T2WRITING

TASK

2Increasing

the

price

of

petrol

is

the

best

way

to

solvegrowing

traffic

andpollution

problems.To

what

extent

do

you

agree

or

disagree?What

other

measures

doyou

think

might

be

effective?Give

reasonsforyour

answer

and

include

any

relevant

examplesfrom

your

own

knowledge

or

experience.Write

at

least

250

words.環球雅思樂吟老師4月寫作高分班真題精講輔導