1、中考書面表達解題技巧和專項訓練18中考寫作主要考察學生可否比較得體的表述個人的看法和想法，能否擁有清楚地描繪事物和過程的能力。最近幾年來，它以考生熟習的生活題材為主，給考生必定的思想空間，只有掌握它的解題技巧，才能做到有的放矢，有恃無恐。1寫作前要做好“兩備”。捕獲信息，包含資料提示，寫作要求、文體和詞數等；列好綱要，把所寫的內容理清思路，列成若干條，選好要用的人稱、時態和詞語。2寫作中要做到“三要”。書寫要規范仔細；句子要多用熟習的、吻合英文風俗；不熟習的詞語要用同（近）義句替代。3寫完后要做到“四查”。查內容能否吻合題意、查句子能否流通暢順、查語法能否有錯誤（包含時態、語態、單詞拼寫、大小

2、寫和標點等）、查詞數能否吻合要求。【個案剖析】假定你叫李磊，請你針對這封信的內容，給這位父親寫封回信，說說你的看法。要求：條例清楚，語義連接，句式規范，筆跡工整。詞數80左右。Deareditor,Imsorrytotroubleyou.Ihaveadaughter.Sheis13yearsold.Shelikesmakingtelephonecalls.Assoonashegetsbackfromschool,shepicksupthetelephoneandcallsherclassmates.Shetalksandtalks,sometimesfor2or3hours.Wecantuse

3、it.Itellhimnottodoit,butsheisunhappy.WhatshouldIdo?Aworriedfather【步步點撥】1、本文主要談如何糾正孩子愛打電話的問題，屬于學生比較熟習的話題。2、本文的格式是書信。特別要修業生注意稱號、正文、結束語和簽字。3、問題的解決可從內因和外因兩個方面出發。內因能夠從學生的天職是學習去談；外因能夠去找老師，找同學的家長幫忙，也能夠為她安裝上部電話，讓她付話費。4、本文屬于闡述文，要求在文章中有明確的看法，并用案例論證。【例文品讀】DearSir,Dontworry.Youcanhaveawordwithherandtellherwhatt

4、odo.Asastudent,shemustputherheartintothestudy.Makingtelephonestoomuchisbadforherstudy.Ifshegoesondoingit,youcantellittoherteachers.Ithinktheycanhelpyou.Youcanalsofindoutwhomyourdaughtercallsup.Youmayasktheirparentsforhelp.Youmaybuyatelephoneforher.Shecanmaketelephonecallswithherowntelephone,butshemu

5、stpayforitbyherself.Yours,LiLeiLinPing面表達（一）敘文ADear,ThankYouforYourLove提示：在你的成程中，獲得了家人、老及朋友的關，你必定他心存感謝。你全目（如：DearMum,ThankYouforYourLove），用英寫一篇短文，表達他所做的一件令你深深感的事情，并表達你的感謝之情。要求：1依據所目寫一篇短文；2數許多于60個；3.言流，寫范，卷面整。文中不得使用真人名、校名，否以零分。_B一到考，同學有不完的故事。在你的中，那些生在考內外的故事，必定有使你到現在感觸、忘的吧?以考，寫一篇“AnUnforgettable(忘的)Ex

6、perience的”短文。以下提示可能你有幫助(可依據需要用)：finalexam,mid-termexam,nervous,warmwords,relax,confident,givethebestperformance(dowell),fail,注意：100字左右；不要使用真姓名和所在學校名稱。_C你班班委會決定將于6月18日上午行初三離校前的最后一次班活。若是你是班，你依據表格中的活內容，用英寫一篇短文，向你班外籍老次活的安排。短文的開和尾己出。內容8：009：001“大后你想做什么？”2如何暑期9：0010：101唱歌、跳舞2表演短3其余10：1011：001打教室2維修桌椅3其余11

7、：0011：301攝影2互留號、地址3其余明：1自行表格中“其余”的內容，所的內容必詳細、合理；2要求言，條理清楚；3數：70左右(不包含已出的短文的開和尾)。OurclassisgoingtohaveafarewellpartyonthemorningofJune18,_D昨天小自行上學，路燈，被一出租撞倒，被警察送去醫院。老和同學聽到個壞信息，放學后去探望他，他很高到老和同學。他：“我知道我了，我此后會恪守(obey)交通。”Xiaohuawenttoschoolbybikeyesterday.（二）文E在一堂英上，老全班同學展開相關“做家”的，若是以下是你所做的小，你依據個用英想全班做一

8、個。NameHouseworkWuJunCleanuproomsJiaMeiHelpmuchcookdinnerWangPingWashclothesI提示：1.內容：你和你同學所做的家活；你做家活的看法；所寫單詞數在80個左右報告的開頭和結尾已給出，不記入總詞數。Dearclass,Goodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussionworkinourgroup._Thatsall.Thanksforlistening!F家庭作業是老師、家長和學生共同關懷的事情，在某校的一次班會上，就這個問題進行了熱情的議論。出現了下邊兩種看法：看法支持原因作業過多有利能夠復習學過

9、的內容；能夠練習老師在講堂上講的內容；能夠寬闊思路；能夠填補老師沒講到的內容。作業過多有害老師應當教給學生如何學、如何理解；不可以歇息好；作業是一種悲觀的學習；要占用很多時間。假定你是班主任，寫一個總結講話，并提出自己的建議：做適合的作業仍是有必需、有作用的。參照詞匯：passive(悲觀的)；suitable(適合的)_（三）說明文G6月6日是“全國愛眼日”(NationalEyesCaringDay)，請依據以下提示寫出一份宣傳稿，讓全校的學生關愛自己的眼睛。題目已給出。要求：1詞數：50-80。2書寫規范，語句通暢，行文流利，構造完好，語法正確。內容需包含以下重點：1愛眼日主題為保護視力

10、。2保護視力對中學生很重要。3視力不好會給生活和學習帶來不便。4號召同學們都養成優秀的用眼習慣以保護視力。提示詞語：視力eyesight；主題topicLoveYourselfLoveYourEyes_H閱讀理解電視廣告詞“Ifwedidntsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwouldbeourtear-drop.”依據提示，寫一篇60詞左右的短文。提示：1、生活離不開水。2、水污染嚴重。3、應當保護水源、節儉用水。_I禮拜五上午8：30全市初三年級將進行英語測試，你班的英語教師有事，請你替她在班上作一些事項交代。重點以下：1此次英語測試特別重要；(Smith)暫時2作好

11、考試的各項準備，不要睡得太晚，千萬不要遲到3做題時必定要看清題目(的要求)，書寫要清楚；;4老師希望大家考出好成績。5要求：不要逐句翻譯，字數6080，你要講的首句話已給出。FellowstudentsMayIhaveyourattention，please?_J小明和小華是在“手拉手”活動中結成的一對學習伙伴。前不久，小明來信向小華咨詢如何學好英語請你以小華的名義給他寫封回信。內容包含：1學習英語的基本方法(listencarefully;speakmuch;readwidely;learn.byheart;practisewriting;.);2你的領會和其余建議。詞數：80詞左右。信的開

12、頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。DearXiaoMing,Imgladtoreceiveyourletter.InyourletteryouaskedmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell._K請以Believeyourself,andyouwillwin為題，寫一篇自己在學習或生活中碰到的并戰勝困難的短文。要求吻合題意，內容完好，表達清楚，書寫規范。提示：1.你碰到了什么困難？2.你是如何戰勝困難的？3.你從中領會到什么？_（四）應用文L豐富多彩的暑期生活馬上開始了，快約上幾個好朋友一同去旅游吧。假定你是馬琳，請你經過e-mail的方式對你的朋友張鵬發出邀請，組織好此次旅

13、游。提示：1.對他發出邀請；2.你的計劃簡介，包含活動內容、目的、時間、地址等等；3.提示他需要準備的東西；4.商定出發時間和會面地址；字數：80100詞；6.開頭和結尾已給出，不包含在所要求的字數內。Hi，ZhangPeng!Ihopeallisgoingwell._Hopetoseeyousoon!Sincerelyyours,MaLinM若是你叫楊明，今日頭疼、咳嗽、發熱，媽媽要帶你去醫院看病，不可以上學。特想你的班主任吳老師告假。請依據上邊的提示寫一份30詞左右的告假條。注意告假條的格式。_N假定你是第一中學三年二班的頂峰，鑰匙丟在操場上。請以頂峰的名義寫一則6月27日你不慎將帶有棕色

14、小猴飾物的30詞左右的尋物啟事。LostJune26thGaoFengO若是你的名字叫Mike。今日在網上看到下邊這則征筆友(Pen-pal)的帖子，請依據帖子內容寫一封詞數為5070的回信。要求：1、表達交友夢想；2、陳說交友原因；3、供給個人信息。注意：文章的開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數；寫作時，要求連接過渡自然。Post:Pen-palwanted:14or15yrsoldPostedbyKaylaon6/21/0Hello!Iam14yrsold.MynameisKayla.MybirthdayisMay13.Iliketoread,climbtrees,domaths,andIli

15、ketowatchfootballgames.IloveEnglishandIwantmorechancestotouchit.IthinkIneedtodowhatIliketodo.Idliketohave-palwhoapenhasdifferenthobbiesfrommesothatwecanlearnfromeachother.Pleasewritetome.MyemailaddressiskaylaThanks!Kayla收件人(To):kayla抄送(Cc):None主題(Subject):Re:Pen-palwantedHello,Kayla,Bestwishes!MikeP

16、下邊描繪的是200年5月15日（周三，晴日）你的一次經歷，請依據其內容，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的日志。日志的開頭格式已給出，不計入文章總詞數。注意重點完好，語法正確，上下文連接，并適合發揮。重點：1、下午放學后2、爸爸出差，媽媽患病臥床3、照料媽媽，送醫院，買藥，燒飯、洗衣服等等4、此后受父親母親夸獎5、該經歷對自己的感想May,15,200,WednesdayFine_Q若是你是班，參照取信息，寫一口通知。Somethingtosay;amatchwithClass4;exciting;welcome;encourage;win;thefirstplace;agoodtime要求：1.短文中

17、不得出你的真姓名和學校。2.可用所信息，也可適合。數：6080。_（五）看作文R好多父親母親希望孩子將都花在學上。若是你是中的學生，依據示將昨天下午放學回家后生的事情和你的想法用英述。數60左右，文章開已出，不入數。注意：不得用真姓名和校名。Yesterdayafternoon,Iwenthomeafterschool._Key:ADearMum，ThankyouforYourLoveDearmum，IalwaysfeelIamtheluckiestchildinthewor1d，becauseIhaveyouasmymum.YouaresuchagreatparentIstillrememb

18、erthedaywhenIfailedmymathsexamIwassofrustratedwhenIgothomeYouwerenotangrywithmeInstead，youpraisedmeformyhardworkandencouragedmetokeepon.TearscameintomyeyeswhenyoutookmeinyourarmIcametoknowhowmuchyouBAmongmanyexamexperiences,Istillrememberwhathappenedinthefinalexamlastterm.InthepastIalwaysfeltnervous

19、atthebeginningofexams.Andbecauseofthis,Inevergavethebestperformance.Butinthelastfinalexam,whenIgotthepaper,!wassurprisedtoseesomewarmwordsonthepaper,“Hi,everyone.Believeinyourselfandyouwilldobest.Goodluck.”Seeingthesewords,thefeelingofnervousnesssoondisappearedandIbecameconfident.Ididbestthattime?Ev

20、ersincethen,wheneverIhaveexams,thesesimplebutwarmwordsalwaysencouragemeandmakemefeelconfident.COurclassisgoingtohaveafarewellpartyontheroomingofJune18.At8:00,welltalkaboutWhatareyougoingtobewhenyougrowup?.Afterthat,wewilldiscussourplanforthesummerholiday.From9:00to10:10,wellsing,dance,putonshortpand

21、enjoyourselves.At10:10,wearegoingtodosomecleaning,repairthedesksandchairsandgivebookstothepupils.At11:00,welltakephotos,giveeachothertelephonenumbersandaddresses,andgivepresentstotheteachers.At11:30,thepartywillbeover.DXiaohuawenttoschoolbybikeyesterday.Whenthelightwasred,hecrossedtheroadandwashit/k

22、nockeddownbyataxi.Hewassenttohospitalbyapoliceman.Whenhisteachersandclassmatesheardthebadnews,theywenttoseehimafterschool/class.Hewasverygladtoseetheteachersandclassmates.Hesaid:IknowIhave“donewrong.Iwillobeythetrafficrulesfromnowon.”EGoodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussionworkinourgroup.WuJuncleans

23、uproomsatweekendsandJiaMeilikescookingdinnerwithhermum.WangPingsometimeswashesclothesforherfamily.Asforme,Iusuallyhelpmyfatherwatertheflowers.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforusstudentstodosomehousework.Bydoingit,wecanhelpourparentsandunderstandthembetter.Wellalsolearntotakecareofourselves.Besides,wecanr

24、elaxourselvesfromhardworkanddevelopourabilities.Thatsall.Thanksforlistening!FLoveYourselfLoveYourEyesJune6thisNationalEyesCaringDayThetopicisCaringforEyesight.ItisbelievedtohavegoodeyesightisveryimportanttoeveryoneespeciallytousmiddleschoolstudentsduringourgrowthtimePooreyesightmayresultinmanydiffic

25、ultiesinourdailylifeandstudyWehopeeverystudentcanfromnowonformgoodhabitswhenusingeyes.Remember,aclearworldisonlyforbrighteyes.GWaterisveryimportanttous.Wecantlivewithoutwater.Thereislessandlesswaterontheearth,butsomeofusdonttakecareofthat.Theywastealotofwaterandpourwastewaterandlitterwastethingintot

26、heriversandlakes.Theriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Wemustdosomethingtostopthem,protectwaterwellandsavewater.(Ifwedontsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwouldbeourtear-drop.HJustnowsomestudentstalkedaboutwhetherdoingmorehomeworkisusefulornot.Somestudentsthinkthatdoingmorehomeworkisuseful.Theythinkthatby

27、doingmorehomeworktheycanreviewthethingstheystudyandputintopracticewhatislearnedinclass.Itwillalsohelpthemknowwhattheylostandopentheirminds.Butsomestudentsthinkthatdoingmorehomeworkisnotuseful.Theythinkthatstudentsshouldbetaughthowtolearnandhowtounderstandwellinsteadofdoingmorehomework.Theyalsothinkt

28、hathomeworkisapassivelearningandtakesmostoftheirtime.Somestudentsoftendoituntillateatnightandtheydonthaveagoodrest.ButIthinkthatdoingsomesuitablehomeworkisnecessaryanduseful.Thankyou.IFellowstudents，MayIhaveyourattention，please?Mr.Smithcantbeherebecausehehassomeothersthingtodo.Heaskedmetotellyousome

29、thingabouttomorrowsEnglishexam.TheEnglishexam：starts30inat8themorning.Itsanimportantexamsodonrtitbe.Welatemustfogeteverythingreadyfortheexam.andhaveagoodrest.Wehavetoreadthequestionscarefullybeforeweanswerthem.Andwehavetowritetheanswersclearly.Mr.Smithwishesusgoodresults(highmarks).JImgladtoreceivey

30、ourletter.InyourletteryouaskedmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Ithinkyoumustlistencarefullyandbeactiveinclass.Speakasmuchaspossible.Dontbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Youdbetterreadwidelyandlearnsomeimportantpartsbyheart.Youshouldpractisewritingoften.Ofcoursetherearemanyotherways.YoucanalsoseeEnglishfilms,lea

31、rntosingEnglishsongsormakepenfriendswithforeigners.Theyareallveryhelpful.Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.ImsineyoulllearnEnglishwell.KBelieveyourself,andyouwillwin.OnenightinAugustwhenIwasdoingmyphysicsexercises,Imetadifficultproblem.FortyminutespassedIstillcouldntworkitout.Theanswerwasont

32、helastpagesoftheexercisebook,howIwantedtoseetheanswer!Butmyteachertoldustodomyhomeworkbyourselves.Mysisterwasinahighschoolthen.Shedliketohelpme.ButIrefused.IthoughtoverthelessonIhadinthedaycarefully,fromoneexamplemyteachergaveusIworkedtheproblemout.HowhappyIwas.Nowfriends,remember,“Believeyourself,a

33、ndyouwillwin.”LHi，ZhangPeng!Ihopeallisgoingwell.Whatsyourplanforthecomingsummerholidays？Someofmyclassmateswouldliketogocycling.Willyoucomewithus?Weareplanningtoridetothemountainsaroundourtown.Wehopetogetawayfromourschoollifeandgetneartothenatureandsmellthefreshair.Wehopeinthatwaywecanrelaxourselvest

34、horoughly.Wellstartat8:00nextSundaymorning.Ifyoucancome,pleaseletmeknowandwellwaitforyouat7:50infrontofourschool.Whatsmore,geteverythingreadyfortheouting,suchasyoursunglasses,hat,foodanddrinks.Wehopetohaveapicnicinthemountains.BesuretocomeandImsurewellhaveawonderfultime.Hopetoseeyousoon.Sincerelyyou

35、rs,MaLinMMay28,200DearMr/MissWu,ImsorryIcantgotoschooltodaya.Iheavedache,acoughandafever.Mymotherisgoingtotakemetoseeadoctortoday.Dontworryaboutme.IassoonasIfeelalittlebetter.NowImwritingtoyoutoaskforsickleave.YangMingNLostthJune26Ilost/leftakeywithabrownmonkey(toy)ontheplayground(onJune26th)Willthefinder/anyonewhofounditpleasecometoClass1,Grade3ofNo.1MiddleSchool(orcall/ringon)?Thankyou!GaoFengOHello,Kayla,ImMike.Iam15yearsold.Imgladtoknowthatyouwouldliketo