1、精選優質文檔-傾情為你奉上故事續寫積累一、環境描寫的素材環境描寫分為客觀和主觀兩種角度：客觀為從環境事物本身入手，主觀則從觀察者角度描寫。通常在描寫時主客觀交替進行，主觀描寫比重稍大。客觀環境描寫：Part 1 環境描寫的adj要求：有聲，有色，有質感，有味道the blue sky(藍天） the songs of birds（鳥鳴） the thundering clouds（電光閃雷鳴）the fragile flowers (嬌嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草） the fragrant roses（艷麗的

2、玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太陽）Part 2 環境描寫的verb （vi&vt）要求一)Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar）1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,一陣風吹，吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像卷起的窗簾。2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that

3、sprinkled the slope.風，輕柔卻寒冷，輕點著樹枝，攪動著斜坡下的灌木叢。3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.涼爽的微風吹拂著寂靜的公園。4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. (冷風吹拂過我的頭發）The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift.（今日正是放風箏的好天氣，強勁的風力帶動了風箏的上升。）二)Water (flow/travel/move/meander/ent

4、er)聲音：1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某處，潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。顏色2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 水是深藍色的，陽光在透明的玻璃表面閃閃發光。3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank. 離此不遠,有一條小溪，在綠

5、色的河岸間奔騰閃耀。4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在溫柔低語，就一位天真少女對著她那慈愛的母親細細私語。 (action, sound, colour)三)Sky (stand/ appear/turn)1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.天空是濃濃的灰色，伴著擁擠的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far 藍藍的天空高高聳立主觀

6、環境描寫：1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某人發現某物（狀態/動作/被）.2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 某人看到/聽到/感到/聞到某物（狀態/動作/被）3.It was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此.以至于4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/ 景物使我如此陶醉/驚訝/sth held sb entirely in their power 景物讓我完全驚呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like 景物看起來像二、場景描寫的素材

7、（來自原著：追風箏的人）1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to

8、 give some lift, make the sweeps easier. （放風箏的場景描寫，從各個角度，立體描述）空中已經掛著至少二十來只風箏，如同紙制的鯊魚，巡游搜獵食物。不到一個鐘頭，這個數字翻了一番，紅色的、藍色的、黃色的風箏在蒼穹來回飛舞，熠熠生輝。寒冷的微風吹過我的頭發。這風正適宜放風箏，風速不大，恰好能讓風箏飄浮起來，也便于操控。2. The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.湖水澄藍，波平如鏡，陽光照在湖上熠熠生輝。3. Then I glanc

9、ed up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now call home. （場景、比喻）我抬起頭，望見兩只紅色的風箏，帶著長長的藍色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它

10、們舞動著，飛越公園西邊的樹林，飛越風車，并排飄浮著，如同一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山，這個我現在當成家園的城市。4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the sun like a branding iron searing the back of your neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.（場景、比喻）天空一碧如洗，陽光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂，

11、到了夏天它們也干涸了。黃包車嗒嗒走過，揚起陣陣灰塵。5. Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. And from below, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某個地方傳來樹枝劈啪作響的聲音，還有貓頭鷹的叫聲。寒風微微拂動樹枝，吹過山坡上的灌木叢。而下面，水流在山谷

12、淌動，傳來陣陣微弱的聲音。6. By three oclock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.（天氣）到三點時，雨停了，鉛灰色的天空陰云密布，一陣寒風吹過公園。7. The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.（景象）太陽開始下山，那些搖搖

13、欲墜 的房子的裂縫中，滲出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描寫時間，動作，心理和情感一)、情感好詞：1.喜樂Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond. 她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發光。Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface. 他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem. 一陣激動聲穿過他們。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom. 笑聲在房間里縈繞。Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure. 他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。Awildgaiety（快樂）took

14、holdofher. 一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile. 令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發光，嘴角保持著穩定的微笑。Iwaswildwithjoy. 我欣喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription. 我高興得難以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface. 她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom. 她的笑容照亮了整個房間。Sheshedtearsofjoy. 她高興得流下了眼淚。He

15、reyesweresparklinglikediamonds. 她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness. 她洋溢著幸福。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement. 她激動得滿臉通紅。Joywelledupinsideher. 她心中涌起喜悅。Iwasfloatingonair. 我漂浮在空中。Amusementgleamedinhiseyes. 他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。 2.憤怒：Iwasseizedbyanger.我充滿了憤怒。Hewasfumingwithrage. 他氣得大發雷霆。Hisangerboil

16、edover. 他的憤怒爆發了。Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage. 他幾乎控制不住怒火。Hewasbreathingfireandfury. 他充滿著怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger. 他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。Hegavemealookofburninganger. 他憤怒地看了我一眼。Heglaredatmewithburningeyes. 他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。Heflaredupattheword. 他一聽到這個字就勃然大怒。Hisfacecloudedwithanger. 他氣得臉色陰沉。 3.悲傷煩惱Hestoodsil

17、ently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks. 他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness. 我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears. 她的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine. 聽到這個消息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒在酒里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom. 她突然哭了起來，跑出了房間。Shesobbed,

18、hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears. 我努力忍住眼淚。/ 我的眼里充滿了淚水。Afrown（皺眉）nowstoodonhisface. 他皺起了眉頭。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他們坐在那里，帶著一臉憂郁。Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface. 這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen. 他滿是悲傷Theywereimmersedinsorrow. 他們沉浸在悲痛之中。Thesedayshewasin