1、Peter 編制）2016 年高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯1.12016 全國新課標I 短文改錯（10分）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but therestaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to h

2、is success is honest. Every dayhe makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle saysthat he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2.12016 全國新課標II】短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）The summer holiday is

3、 coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during theholiday. Wecan chose between staying at homeand take a trip. If westay at home, it is comfortablebut there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. Ifwe go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you vi

4、ew and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a goodidea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.3.12016全國新課標III 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for

5、me . They were also the bestand worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn t understand me so I ho

6、ped I couldbe freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.4.12016 四川】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）It is Mother s Day today. Though it s a western

7、 festival, it s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of

8、flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes whatI cooked were Mom s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “ Happy Mother s Day！” Mom was grateful and moving.5.12016浙江】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）When I was a very young children, my father created a r

9、egular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we d greet het at the door. He would askwho we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink whileshe prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they cha

10、t, myfather would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there ！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2015 年高考試題分項解析之專題 短文改錯1.12015 陜西】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題分，滿分15分）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anyt

11、hing special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the

12、 floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them andjoked, “ I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”Myfavorite picture at the party is of mycoach and meenjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!2

13、.12015 四川】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題分，共15分） Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you someof theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch andafter school. We've been spend

14、ing a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs memany. And I started to see this as a time wasting activity! In fact ,I don t like to go anymore, so I m afraid I ll lose their friendship. Howdo you think I should do If you are me ,would you talk to himP

15、lease help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.12015 浙江】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class,I could easy see the football fie

16、ld. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. Theview from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the

17、 road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I wasdreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.4.12015 新課標全國II】One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with

18、his parent. It was very crowded. Tonysaw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very muchthat he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to

19、wait outside a shop.Five minutes later, Tony sawparents. Momsaid, “ Hownice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.5.12015 新課標全國I】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I amliving in a ci

20、ty, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountainsare green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has beenpolluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already becomea very seriouslyproblem. The airs we breathe in is

21、getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dyingout . Wemust found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we ll live to regret it .2014 年高考試題分項解析之專題 短文改錯1. Correction 1（2014 課標全國 I ）Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry

22、 tomatoes（ 圣女果 ）in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we a

23、llow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2. Correction 2（2014課標全國 H ）My dream school starts at 8:30 . and ends at 3:30 . They are three lessons in the morningand two in th

24、e afternoon. We didn t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the

25、 classroom buildings. Wecan lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.3. Correction 3（2014 浙江 ）I was taking a train to London s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage wasno

26、ise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comesto check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn t find his ticket but becamequite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who f

27、ound a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.4. Correction 4（

28、2014 遼寧 ）Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog Cleo.We ve called several time about Cleo s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she s outside

29、. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a averageof six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o clock. That is too muchfor us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies an

30、d goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely, Jack and Rose5. Correction 5（2014 四川 ）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarmgo off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to l

31、ead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and cl assmate. Don t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it s a false alarmand there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when so

32、meone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.2016年高考試題分項解析之專題-短文改錯（答案解析）1.12016 全國新課標I 短文改錯（10分）【答案】1. that -where 2. but 去掉 3. had -have 4. honest - honesty 5. or一 and6. using fused 7. becoming 前力口 of 8. the - 9. ourf his 10. steadfsteadily【解析】試題分析L thaiTwUere考查宜語從句的引導詞.介詞后面的言語從句缺少狀語，根據

33、句意聲蜥此處表示地點.故把 that 改為 wtereo2. 去掉but 考查連詞. Tboufifc不和but連用,故去掉but.【歸納總結】在英語中though、although、while或者as等引導的讓步狀語從句不和 but連用；連詞 because不和so連用；此外，return 不和back連用。3. had -have考查動詞時態。文章是介紹現在的情況，應該用一般現在時。4. honest - honesty考查名詞。此處是指誠實是他成功的秘訣，用名詞形式。而形容詞honest意思是“誠實的”，是指人的性格特點。5-皿5d考查連詞.根據句意判斷此處是表示并列關系，戰他or改為如

34、鼠8國里-used考查被動語態。根據句意可知此處表示被由含義，be used fof特用來去做，1. becamirg of考查介詞口固定矩謂二dream of夢想做某事78. the fa考壹冠詞考 囿定坦語:in且sthort time在短時間內&9 our-岫 考查代詞中根據句意可知此處是指叔叔的生意，用W指代。10. stcad-Fteadily考查副詞口根據句意可去恥選即。即是實意動詞，意思是嘴長Z不是系動詞，故用副詞修飾,2.12016 全國新課標II】短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）【答案】改為 what改為choose 改為taking 改為and 后加t

35、he改為our 改為knowledge 8. 刪除 can或 can改為 should 改為think 改為 much【解析】試題分析：考查記敘文，“我”和同學們對暑假的旅游計劃的討論。11KW改為wfcat考查特殊結構a嘴殊疑問詞枇在本句中作為短語talk about的定語，其中wM還要作為由詞面的邏輯實諳。句意;同學們和我在談論暑假期間做什么。2一曲僦改為choose考查句子結構口巧睛態動詞）動詞原形才可以在句中作為謂語部分，而本句中說/是過去式。3.takc改為taking考查并列結構本句中動名詞矩語staying at home與taiiiiga燉構成封冽關系,都作為介詞bctwooi

36、的后語。4but改為皿d考查連詞。句意：如果我們待在家里，很舒服也沒有必要花錢“上下文之間是并列關系，而不是節封斤關系，所以使用款d連接上下文口5 abm11后加He考查定冠詞中在英語中定冠詞占通常表示特指，本句中也牛修飾mH表示特指這個世界。改為our考查代詞。應該使用our與本句的主語we保持一致。句意：如果我們出國旅游，我們就拓寬視 野并學到書本上學不到的知識。改為 knowledge 考查名詞單復數。本句中名詞knowledge 是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。8. 刪除 can 或 can 改為 should 考查虛擬語氣。動詞 suggest 作為建議的時候，后面的賓語從句要使用虛擬語

37、氣“ (should)+ 動詞原形”, 所以本句可以刪除can 或 can 改為 should 。改為 think 考查時態。本文介紹我和同學們商量暑假旅游的事情，全文以一般現在時為主，所以本句使用現在時think 。改為much考查代詞。本句中代詞 much代替不可數名詞 muchmoney作為動詞cost的賓語，而many通常 代替可數名詞復數形式。【名師點睛】高考短文改錯考點層次一般而言可依次分為詞法的測試、句法的測試和語篇的測試三個層面。考點層次越高，就越能測試出考生運用語言的能力。低層次的考點往往側重于語法方面的考查，而高層次的考點往往側重于考生對文章意義方面的理解。一、詞法改錯詞法

38、的測試包括：定冠詞和不定冠詞的用法；名詞的單復數和名詞的所有格；動詞的時態、語態、語氣，情態動詞和非謂語動詞等；人稱代詞、人稱代詞的格、物主代詞、指示代詞、連接代詞、不定代詞等的用法；介詞的搭配；并列連詞、從屬連詞的用法；形容詞、副詞的區別以及比較級和最高級的用法；固定搭配和習慣用法。例如：本題中的后加the 考查定冠詞改為knowledge考查名詞單復數改為much 考查代詞二、句法改錯句法的測試包括：主謂語在數上的一致性；名詞性從句、定語從句和強調句；句子結構的連貫性、完整性、對等性和邏輯性。例如：改為what 考查特殊結構。改為choose考查句子結構改為taking考查并列結構8. 刪

39、除 can 或 can 改為 should 考查虛擬語氣三、語篇改錯語篇的測試包括：上下文的時態是否一致；上下文中的代詞指代是否一致；上下文中的邏輯關系是否一致。改為and 考查連詞改為our 考查代詞和邏輯關系改為think考查時態3.12016全國新課標III 短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)【答案】years worst 去掉 myself so told freewearing for A needt解析】試題分析；題目主要考查學生對詞?去的掌握情況F測試學生能否在具體的語境中靈活運用，5Ly.y即考查名諭復觸口 13Tg年是復救概念，yw是可數名諭，故把y皿改為&quo

40、t;即。52 foew0m考查形容詞最高孤。根據前句3-19歲是最困難的時期何知f應該使用最高孤$皿d表并列,根據Kst可知，and連接了兩個最高級，放把w班里改為補rm去掉考查冠詞口小有忖起初，是固定詞組,不需要冠詞，故把旗去掉,5*ywrselfmyself考查反身代詞。句意：我認為我什么都知道，可以自己童主意了。這里指作者自己做決定】根據主語I可知應該用0時此故® yvaself改為皿nyKlf*so 考查 so/such 的用法。my parents didn t seem to think so我的父母似乎不這樣認為，so 指代上一句的內容，故把such改為so。told考

41、查時態。通篇回憶過去的事情，使用的一般過去時，故把 tell改為told 。free考查形容t副詞。be后跟形容詞構成系表結構，be free from. 擺脫,不受 的影響，故把freely 改為free。wearing考查固定搭配。by是介詞，意為“通過”，后跟名詞/代詞或動名詞，故把wear改為wearing。59一34”考查介詞。leave即砧即寓開某地前往另一地，mile酢是目的地，故把9改為f&r口601八口國1考查狀語從句 whenever引導讓步狀語從句,意向無論何時，隨時，從句缺少主語下根據句意可知，這里指出需要父母的幫助,故在,區配ver后to I。考點：名詞；形容

42、詞；代詞；介詞；最高級；固定搭配；時態【名師點睛】改錯中動詞、連詞以及上下文語境也是出題者經常會考慮的出題知識點，其解題方法如下：1 .動詞錯誤的發現與解決英語中有許多的短語動詞，是很難從字面上判斷其意義的。其中與介詞構成短語的動詞是最常見的。我們在分析題目的時候，發現有動賓搭配的時候，應該考慮該動詞是否是一個短語動詞，并進而分析構 成該短語動詞的介詞有無遺漏。對于短語動詞的熟悉是一個長期積累的過程，需要隨時總結與記憶。以 下是考試中常見到的短語動詞：account for ； add up to ； back up ； break down ； break away from ； bleak

43、 out ； break up ； break in ； break off ; bring about; bring up； bring out; bring down； build up； call off ; call for ； call on； carry out; check in ； clear up； come off ; come around; count on； cut down； cut off ； do away with ； dwell on ； fall back on ； fall out ； get over ； get out of ； get at ； g

44、ive out； give up； give off ； hang on； hold back； keep back from ； keep up with ； lay off ； lay down； live up to ； look into ； look forward to ； look over； make up； make out； pass away； put up with ； role out ； run out of ； set about ； take over ； take up ； take in ； take off ; turn up ; turn out ; w

45、ork out 等。還有一種常考的動詞的用法就是語態。在所分析的文字中包含謂語動詞，那么應該分析是否是這方面的問題。其中應該重點分析主語與謂語動詞的關系是主動還是被動。2 .連接詞錯誤的發現與解決例： However, a second person thought that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manners .本題所考查的就是比較連接詞的用法。從前文的more我們就可以看出，下文的as是不恰當的，正確的答案應是比較連接詞than。一般來說，比較連接詞所考查的重點集中在 as與than的用法上。句意中

46、是否還有比較意義是很容易辨別的，我們一旦覺察到句子有比較的意思，就應考慮是否是as與than的用法混淆。此外定語從句的連接詞也是要特別注意的。我們看2000年6月的第74題：Instead , this other person told us a story , it he said was quite well known .在這里，句子的后半段很明顯是一個非限制性 的定語從句，所以應將it改為which.非限制性的定語從句的連接詞在近幾年的考試中反復出現，應該引 起我們的重視。解決此類問題的方法是，凡是發現有復合句的分析對象，首先就要考慮從句的連接詞。 首先看是否有連接詞，其次看連接詞是

47、否正確，尤其是 which與that的不同應用。3 .語言環境類錯誤的發現與解決從歷年的考題來看，語言環境類的錯誤是最有章可循的。這類錯誤一般是一行中的關鍵詞與上下文所 體現出來的意思完全相反。此類題的解決也較簡單，那就是將不符合文意的詞改為它的反義詞即可。如 第54題就是屬于語境錯誤。句意：我認為我什么都知道，可以自己拿主意了。這里指作者自己做決定， 根據主語I可知，應該用myself ,故把yourself改為myself。4.12016 四川】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）【答案】5.去掉on 7. 在in和kitchen 之間加the which（ 或去掉what）【解

48、析1試題分析，和媽媽過母親節貨1一班-帆1句意；螞螞有一個全職工作，但是她不得不做多數的家務口此處表示轉折關系,故把詼-限心Zbou5cwmlffi-housework/ousewsV是不可數名詞 故把 hou5cwoiks- -bouacwrl >3.of-and 固定搭配：bott -and一,兩個都一口故把s2nd.4.crctgOt句意；在過親節我們起床早根據句意可加用一般過去時態，故把gCt一駁U5一去掉on固定詞組；的曲>ppi£g去購物。可知去掉 皿his 句意；在爸爸手里。故把1時-一3口7在M和kit&的之間加此 句意：我在圉房里做飯.此處特指在

49、廚房里。救在m和laichen之間加小口13tM曲曲就去掉what）H世考查引導定語從句的美系代詞“句意：我做的菜是媽媽最喜歡的電Theses做先行詞指物，定語從句缺少引導詞,從句缺少賓語，可知引導詞在定語從句中作賓語？故把what-tiiatRliidL減去掉印hslja9 .fewiiteEtftvorite 看如面£本身就是“最喜歡7故把fkvoritesl由v<rtiie（>10 .m-oving-moved句意；螭媽即感激有整動故把皿死助一小5司。【名師點睛】表示情感的現在分詞和過去分詞surprising 令人驚訝的，surprised 感至U驚訝；frigh

50、tening令人害怕的，frightened 感至U害怕； moving令人感動的，moved感動；exciting令人興奮的，excited 感到興奮；boring令人厭煩的，bored感到厭煩；annoying令人煩惱的，annoyed感到煩惱的。現在分詞的主語通常指事物；過去分詞的主語通 常指人。比如第10小題moving-moved 句意：媽媽即感激有感動。故把 moving-moved。考點：考查短文改錯5.12016浙江】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）66 .【答案】children 改成child工解析】試題分析；因為前面有不定冠詞a,所以這里用單數。故child

51、ren改成child中考點：考查名詞單復數67 .【答案】late改成later【解析】試題分析：late是形容詞“遲的”，或副詞“遲地”，但是“一段時間后面應該接later ”，表示“ 時間以后"。故late改成later 。考點：考查副詞68 .【答案】at后面加the1解析】試題分析；at th。end <?£為固定搭酉，意為書結束的時候一故H后面加the考點：考查冠詞69 .【答案】her改成him【解析】試題分析：根據上文可知我們每天在門口迎接爸爸。用 him指代my father ,作greet的賓語。故her改成him o考點：考查代詞70 .【答案】w

52、as改成were【解析】試題分析：這句話的主語是we,謂語用復數，而且這篇文章是作者回憶小時候的事情，用一般過去時。故 was改成 were。考點：考查主謂一致71 .【答案】knowing改成know【解析】試題分析：pretend后面接不定式作賓語，這里是否定式 pretend not to do 。故knowing改成know。考點：考查動詞不定式72 .【答案】去掉had【解析】試題分析：句意：他和我媽媽會喝些東西。這里不是虛擬語氣，不能用 would have done ,用would do 表示“過去常常做"。故去掉 had。考點：考查動詞形式73 .【答案】chat改成

53、chatted【解析】試題分析：根據主句內容myfatherwouldliftmysister 可知while引導的時間狀語從句用一般過去時。故 chat 改成 chatted 。考點：考查動詞時態74 .【答案】in改成on【解析】試題分析：3也£ top of.為固定搭配，意為“在頂部0故W改成g。考點：考查介詞75 .【答案】excited 改成exciting【解析】試題分析：這句話的主語是形式主語it ，真正的主語是to be up there ，主語是物的時候，表語應該用現在分詞形式的形容詞。故excited 改成 exciting 。考點：考查形容詞【名師點睛】高考短文

54、改錯考點層次一般而言可依次分為詞法的測試、句法的測試和語篇的測試三個層面。考點層次越高，就越能測試出考生運用語言的能力。低層次的考點往往側重于語法方面的考查，而高層次的考點往往側重于考生對文章意義方面的理解。這篇短文主要是一些詞法錯誤，詞法的測試包括：定冠詞和不定冠詞的用法；名詞的單復數和名詞的所有格；動詞的時態、語態、語氣，情態動詞和非謂語動詞等；人稱代詞、人稱代詞的格、物主代詞、指示代詞、連接代詞、不定代詞等的用法；介詞的搭配；并列連詞、從屬連詞的用法；形容詞、副詞的區別以及比較級和最高級的用法；固定搭配和習慣用法。例如：本題中的66. children 改成 child （名詞單復數錯誤

55、）67. late 改成 later （副詞錯誤）68. at 后面加 the （冠詞錯誤）69. her改成him （代詞錯誤）71. knowing改成know （非謂語動詞錯誤）72. 去掉had （虛擬語氣錯誤）73. chat 改成 chatted （動詞時態錯誤）74. in改成on （介詞錯誤）75. excited 改成 exciting （形容詞錯誤）2015 年高考試題分項解析之專題 短文改錯（答案解析）1.12015 陜西】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題分，滿分15分）【答案】76. 去掉 in 改為 something 改成 best 改成 decided 改為 step

56、s 改成 good 改成 when/while 改為 the 后加 to 改為 enjoying【解析1試題分析;文章介紹作者的教練退秣了,在退休鬃會上作者送給教練自己親手烘焙的餅干口教賽非常高興。跖,句意：我的足球教練上個星期退休了。屋tw代k前面不加介詞，去掉小中嚇句意；我想在他退休聚會上為他做些特別的事情*肯定句用50mHiing。冏.向意：找螞螞做的是世界上最好的餅干口用最高級,AtE改成b«。沖句意；所以我決定向她求助。這篇文童使用一般過去fl寸:ducidu改成decided0儆句意:媽媽教我一些基本的烘焙的步驟門皴P是可數名詞，用復數起p”Sl.Rlg：我認為這些餅干很

57、好。偷表語用彤容詞，WM改成卯同,立句意；我唯一的錯誤是在我將它們打包的時候將它們掉在地上.皿也改成wMn whig附這里是特指第一段提到的退休聚會。a改為山部舁句意；我可能明年要再退休一次,只是想得到更多這樣的拼干“用不定式做目的狀語，jun后加3。卜工句意：我最喜歡的照片是我和找的教練在聚會上開工州享受濟干立出后面接動名詞,my sadi and皿是邏輯主語,時。丫改為喇勢中【考點定位】考查短文改錯【名師點睛】這篇短文改錯是記敘文，短文的內容和學生的日常生活有關。錯誤之處的設置都是平常學 生容易錯的地方。考查點比較全面，各種詞性都考查到了，也涉及到一些語法知識的考查，如：非謂語 動詞，時態等。2.12015 四川】短文改錯(共10小題；每小題分，共15分)【答案】61.加上 to 62. tell told 63. friend -friends-singing 65.man廠much but 67.Ho-What 68. are were 69. him them 70. 去掉 with【解析】試