1、一棵開花的樹一棵開花的樹 席慕容席慕容 當你走近當你走近 請你細聽請你細聽 那顫抖的葉那顫抖的葉 是我等待的熱情是我等待的熱情 而當你終於無視地走過而當你終於無視地走過 在你身後落了一地的在你身後落了一地的 朋友啊朋友啊 那不是花瓣那不是花瓣 那是我凋零的心那是我凋零的心 如何讓你遇見我如何讓你遇見我在我最美麗的時刻在我最美麗的時刻為這為這我已在佛前求了五百年我已在佛前求了五百年求佛讓我們結一段塵緣求佛讓我們結一段塵緣佛於是把我化做一棵樹佛於是把我化做一棵樹長在你必經的路旁長在你必經的路旁陽光下陽光下慎重地慎重地開滿了花開滿了花朵朵都是我前世的盼望朵朵都是我前世的盼望一棵開花的樹一棵開花的樹-

2、席慕容席慕容作者簡介：作者簡介：席慕容席慕容(1943-)，蒙古族女詩人。，蒙古族女詩人。出生于四川。十三歲起在日記中寫詩，十四歲入臺北師出生于四川。十三歲起在日記中寫詩，十四歲入臺北師范藝術科，后又入臺灣師范大學藝術系。范藝術科，后又入臺灣師范大學藝術系。1964年入比利時布魯塞爾皇家藝術學院專攻油畫。舉年入比利時布魯塞爾皇家藝術學院專攻油畫。舉辦過數十次個人畫展，出過畫集，多次獲多種繪畫獎。辦過數十次個人畫展，出過畫集，多次獲多種繪畫獎。1981年，臺灣大地出版社出版席慕容的第一本詩集年，臺灣大地出版社出版席慕容的第一本詩集 七里香七里香，一年之內再版七次。其他詩集也是一版再，一年之內再版

3、七次。其他詩集也是一版再版。版。出版的詩集有出版的詩集有七里香七里香、無怨的青春無怨的青春、時光九時光九篇篇、邊緣光影邊緣光影、迷途詩冊迷途詩冊、我折疊著我的我折疊著我的愛愛等。等。席慕容多寫愛情、人生、鄉愁，寫得極美，淡雅剔透，席慕容多寫愛情、人生、鄉愁，寫得極美，淡雅剔透，抒情靈動，飽含著對生命的摯愛真情。抒情靈動，飽含著對生命的摯愛真情。影響了整整一代人的成長歷程。影響了整整一代人的成長歷程。 譯文一譯文一：A Blooming Tree 一棵開花的樹一棵開花的樹 How can I render you encounter me 如何讓你遇見如何讓你遇見 At the very mom

4、ent of my prime time 在我最美麗的時刻在我最美麗的時刻 I have been entreating the Buddha for 500 years for the sake of it 為這為這 我已在佛前求了五百年我已在佛前求了五百年 Begging the Buddha to bridge us with a worldly tie 求佛讓我們結一段塵緣求佛讓我們結一段塵緣 Thereby, the Buddha grows me into a tree 佛於是把我化做一棵樹佛於是把我化做一棵樹 Standing beside the footpath you wa

5、lk along regularly 長在你必經的路旁長在你必經的路旁 In the sun 陽光下陽光下 Are ardently but discreetly blooming blossoms 慎重地開滿了花慎重地開滿了花 Any of which is the anticipation of my preexistence 朵朵都是我前世的盼望朵朵都是我前世的盼望 When approaching 當你走近當你走近 Do listen earnestly 請你細聽請你細聽 The vibrating leaves 那顫抖的葉那顫抖的葉 are my passion for awaiti

6、ng 是我等待的熱情是我等待的熱情 When you are ultimately getting by without the slightest attention 而當你終於無視地走過而當你終於無視地走過 Those scattering all over the group 在你身後落了一地的在你身後落了一地的 My dear friend朋友啊朋友啊 Are not petals 那不是花瓣那不是花瓣 But my fading heart.那是我凋零的心那是我凋零的心 譯文二：譯文二：A Tree in Bloom How do I let you meet me, At my m

7、ost beautiful moments. For this, I beseeched the Buddha for five hundred years, I beseeched him to let us meet in earthly life. Buddha let me become a tree, Growing on the roadside that you pass by every day. Under the sunlight, It carefully bloomed with flowers all over, Every bloom is my longing f

8、rom a previous life. When you come near, Please listen carefully , Those shivering leaves,Are the passion of my waiting. And when you finally passed by unawareness Those that fell off and covered the ground, Friends, Those are not flower petals , Those are my withering heart. 整體對比：整體對比：個人偏向于譯文二，首先，它

9、比較忠實原文，原詩的意思表達的很全面再次，它的結構比較整齊 有的地方像咱漢語里講的首尾呼應最后，也是最重要的 它的韻律感相當的好 我們漢語里講平仄，英語里面也有種朗讀起來的美感 這個版本讀起來瑯瑯上口 而譯文一生詞較多，讀起來感受不到詩歌的意境和音韻美一棵開花的樹一棵開花的樹如何讓你遇見我在我最美麗的時刻譯文一：譯文一： A Blooming Tree How can I render you encounter me At the very moment of my prime time譯文二：譯文二： A Tree in Bloom How do I let you meet me, At

10、 my most beautiful moment. 為這為這我已在佛前我已在佛前求求了五百年了五百年求佛讓我們求佛讓我們結一段塵緣結一段塵緣佛於是把我佛於是把我化做化做一棵樹一棵樹譯文一: I have been entreating the Buddha for 500 years for the sake of it Begging the Buddha to bridge us with a worldly tieThereby, the Buddha grows me into a tree譯文二譯文二:For this, I beseeched the Buddha for fiv

11、e hundred years, I beseeched him to let us meet in earthly life. Buddha let me become a tree, 長在你長在你必經必經的路旁的路旁陽光下陽光下慎重地慎重地開滿了花開滿了花朵朵都是我朵朵都是我前世前世的盼望的盼望譯文一：譯文一： Standing beside the footpath you walk along regularly In the sun Are ardently but discreetly blooming blossoms Any of which is the anticipati

12、on of my preexistence譯文二：譯文二：Growing on the roadside that you pass by every day. Under the sunlight, It carefully bloomed with flowers all over, Every bloom is my longing from a previous life. 當你走近當你走近 請你請你細細聽聽 那那顫抖顫抖的葉的葉 是我等待的熱情是我等待的熱情譯文一：譯文一： When approaching Do listen earnestly The vibrating leav

13、es are my passion for awaiting 譯文二：譯文二： When you come near, Please listen carefully , Those shivering leaves, Are the passion of my waiting 而當你而當你終於無視終於無視地走過地走過 在你身後在你身後落了落了一地的一地的 朋友啊朋友啊 那不是花瓣那不是花瓣 那是我那是我凋零凋零的心的心 譯文一：譯文一：When you are ultimately getting by without the slightest attentionThose scattering all over the groupMy dear friendA