1、一、寶山區 二、崇明區 三、奉賢區 四、虹口區 五、黃浦區 六、嘉定區 七、金山區 八、靜安區專題09材料作文（解析版）目錄九、閔行區（無） 十、浦東新區 十一、普陀區 十二、松江區 十三、徐匯區 十四、楊浦區 十五、長寧區一、寶山區十二、話題作文69. Write at least 60 words about the topic " An act of kindness”.（以"一個善意的 舉動''為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）“贈人玫瑰，手有余香:意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同贈人一只玫瑰 般微不足道，但它帶來的溫馨都會在贈花

2、人和愛花人的心底慢慢升騰、彌漫。因此， 善待他人也是善待自己，請結合生活中的一次真實經歷，談一談你對善良的看法。（注 意：1.短文中不得出現任何真實人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。2.照搬 閱讀語篇內容不得分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表達僅供參考）have trouble with/doinggive a help hand.treat sb with kindness.試卷第1頁，總1頁試卷第2頁，總2頁69 .例文：An act of kindnessHere is a touching moment in my life t

3、hat I will never forget.1 still remember that was a rainy day. 1 failed an exam, and 1 felt very upset. What's worse, I didn't bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. When I looked up. 1 saw a big umbrella and my deskmate、Mike. He sai

4、d , “An exam can't stand for everything. 1 believe you can get good grades next time. " His words really touched my heart and cheered me up . After that, 1 studied harder and made great progress.It s our duty to show kindness to others arornid us. I tliiiik everyone should treat others with

5、 kindness, when have trouble with something.【詳解】1 .題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時結合題目要求，進行作答寫作，第一段引出話題“善意的舉動 第二段記敘一次善意的舉動；第三段說明自己對善意的看法。2 .寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述故事內容：記敘善意的舉動這件事情，時態采用一般過去時為主, 說明自己對于善良的看法，采用一般現在時為主。需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。二、崇明區十一、話題作文64. Write at least 60 words on the topic "Things I love to do at weekend

6、s'5 （以"周末我喜歡做的事''為 題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）在緊張的學習之余，周末做些自己喜歡的事可以調門放松一下自我，以便更有效地繼續下一周的學習, 請談談你周末喜歡做的事，并說說理由，64 .例文：Things I love to do at weekends1 often do something interesting to relax myself at weekends.One of my favorite things to do at weekends is to go to the beach. The beach

7、is beautiful all through the year. I usually drive there. When the weather is hot, I enjoy swimming or just lying in the sun. Besides, I like to read books. If the weather is nice, I'll take a good book to the park and stay there reading for hours. I think there's nothing as delightful as re

8、ading a good book.【詳解】1 .題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，在寫作時可以分兩段式來寫，第一段點題，指出在周末會做喜歡的事 情放松自己：第二段描述自己在周末喜歡做的事情以及原因。2 .寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述：時態采用一般現在時為主，適當使用過渡詞，文章應保持層次清 楚，內容飽滿，表達流暢©三、奉賢區十二、話題作文64. Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根據以下情景寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標 點不占格。）Mr. Smith用特殊的方式給他的學生上了“精彩一課二你的老師一定也以他/她獨特的

9、方式給你留下過深 刻的印象。他/她或許組織過精彩的活動，他/她或許講述過精彩的故事，他/她或許請以“AwonderfMlesson （精彩一課）”為題，記錄老師給你上過的精彩一課。64.例文:A wonderful lessonWe have many classes every day. but I think the most wonderfill class is yesterday s Chuiese class.Our Chinese teacher is Miss Li. Although she is ven* young, she knows a lot. She always

10、 tells us about the culture and customs of different places and so on. Yesterday in the Chinese class. Miss Li did not take the Chinese book but took several pictures that looked very bad. On these pictures, some children standed in the field looking at the distance, some children even picked up thi

11、ngs to eat from the trash cans. All of us were surprised and didn't know what Miss Li meant. By explaining the content of each picture and the story behind it. Miss Li let us know that there are still many children in many areas who do not have food or go to school, so that we know how to cheris

12、h every day of school, and also let us sympathize with those children more.Since then, every time I have finished reading books, I will donate them to the community workstation, hoping to give them to those children who do not have books to read.【詳解】1 .題F解讀：文章屬于話題作文，主要是以“A wonderful lesson”為主題展開描寫，內

13、容可以按照自身的情況 適當的發揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當的詞匯和短語。2 .寫作指導：文章主要用一般現在時和一般過去時，人稱用第一和第三人稱展開描述。主要是介紹自己的 精彩的課堂以及為什么是精彩的，從中學到了什么等。寫作時語言要簡單易懂，文章結構要完整，多使用 簡單詞語表達，意思要通俗易懂。四、虹口區十五、話題作文80. Write at least 60 words on the topic "Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times“（以“ 在困難時期，幸福感不一定會消失"

14、為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）.小到個人，大到團隊、城市、國家，都會有困難時期，但即便是困難時期，人們還是能感受生活中的 小喜悅，感受幸福溫馨的片刻，清結合自己或他人的經歷，說說困難時期的幸福感。（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予計分）80 .例文Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult timesEveryone may have difficult times. Even in difficult times, people can still feel the small j

15、oys in life.One day, it was raining hard when I was on my way home from school. I didn't take an umbrella, so I was wet. Suddenly, a stranger came toward me. He passed me an iinibrella and said he could drive me home. I didn't know him but I was verjf thankful he helped me. Although the weat

16、her was cold. I felt very warm in my heart.【詳解】題解讀：這篇作文要求學生們以“Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult tunes在困難時期，幸福 感不一定會消失''為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。題目中并沒有規定具體的寫作內容，學生們應發揮想 象力，結合自己的實際生活，寫一篇切題的文章。這是一個難點，學生所選取的生活中的事例應合情合理。 寫作指導：審題可知，這篇短文應以一般過去時態、第一人稱為主來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫 作時應注意英語句式結構和表達習慣

17、，寫完整的句子，以簡單句結構為基礎，穿插并列句、復合句、非謂 語結構等復雜句式，提升作文檔次。同時注意上下文的銜接，使文意連貫、表達流暢。五、黃浦區十六、書信作文93. You are planning a reading club on line, so you decide to invite a friend of yours to join you by email.（你正在籌備一個在線閱讀社團，你決定通過電子郵件邀請一個朋友加入。）In your emaiL you need roduce your plan of the reading club.talk about

18、what kind of books you are going to read.give the rcason(s) why you want to nin the club.(注意：文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。)93. Dear Eric,How are you these days? The reason why I'm writing is to invite you to join the reading club online.Since the smartphone is becoming more and more popular, the

19、 number of the people who read books in their spare time is on the decrease. Therefore, I want to create a reading club online. I'd like to give the invitations to my friends and people around me. Then, they can give the invitations to their friends. In the end. the number of members will increa

20、se quickly. I will recommed some books on history and art to the members in order to enrich their konwledge. I hope you can join us and help me.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【詳解】1 .題干解讀：該題目是寫一封邀請信。要求按照英文提示來寫一封電子郵件邀請一個朋友加入你正在籌備的 一個在線閱讀社團，可適當發揮。2 .寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述故事內容；時態采用一

21、般現在時為主；描述細4時，細0描寫完整, 符合文章要求，可適當增加細節；同時，細節描述要有邏輯，保證條理清晰C六、嘉定區十二、話題作文59. Write at least 60 words about the topic "When I met with a problem/' （以"當我遇到問題時“為題寫 一篇不少于60個詞的短文。標點符號不占格。）在日常的生活與學習中，我們應該具備一些解決問題的能力。請結合一次自身經歷，說說你是如何解 決那個問題的，并分享一下你的經驗：如果未能解決，也請談談你從中獲得的教訓。（注意：短文中不得出現任何真實人名、校名及其它相關信息

22、，否則不予評分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表達僅供參考）have difficulty in enable me to. help me realize.59 .例文：When I met with a problemEveryone will meet a difficulty during his life, especially for a student. I used to have difficulty with my homework. For example, sometimes I can't work out a

23、 maths problem. In front of a difficulty, different people have different attitudes. Some will give up. To me. I will never give up. I will think it over and over. till I have solved it. Or I will turn to my teachers and classmates for help. This experience makes me know the importance of thinking o

24、ver the problems.【詳解】1、題干解讀：題目要求以“當我遇到問題時”為題寫一篇短文，要求結合一次自身經歷，介紹如何解決那個 問題的并分享經驗；如何未能解決，談一談從中獲得的教訓，可適當發揮。2、寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述自身經歷：時態采用一般現在時為主：描述經歷以及如何解決的問題并分享經驗或描述未能解決問題，從中獲得的教訓時，應詳細具體，敘述完整，保證條理清晰。七、金山區十二、材料作文64. 以“is important （ 是重要的）”為題，寫一篇至少60個單詞的短文，標點符號 不占格。Cody liked the freedom that came with his

25、 first summer job. He worked at Mitchelfs Farm where people could come and pick the corn, berries and tomatoes out in the fields themselves. Then they'd bring their produce to checkout stand, where Cody would weigh it and charge （收費）the appropriate price. Mr. and Mrs. Mitchell were usually busy

26、somewhere else, so Cody was trusted to manage the stand by himself.For die most part, Cody obeyed the Mitchell's rules. When someone asked for a discount or a sample, Cody said no. But he did sometimes change the rules for friends, much to their delight.“Go ahead, taste a few berries before I we

27、igh," he'd say when it was someone he knew. It was against the niles to eat something before you bought it, but everyone wanted to.One day, a man came to stand with a basket of corn he had picked. Cody weighed the ears of corn and told the man how much it cost. The man looked confused."

28、;But I was here yesterday, and you told someone that for every five ears you buy, yon get one free/ he said.Cody had it in his memory. He had indeed offered that deal to the Thomases, who happened to be his neighbors. Now he felt sad about it. He saw Mrs. Mitchell working close by. How was Cody goin

29、g to explain that he had given a deal to those he knew while he made everyone else pay full price?The man saw that Cody was looking at Mrs. Mitchell. Is that die owner? May I speak to her?” he asked.Cody thought about offering the man the same discount, but there were people in line behind him. and

30、they were carrying corn, too. Cody hung his head and walked over to seen Mrs. Mitchel.男孩Cody的暑期工作經歷告訴我們，遵守規則，保持誠信，勇擔責任和公平待人等是非常重要的品質。 請結合你自己的經歷和感悟，分享你的一個故事，談談你對某一種優秀品質的理解與感受。（注意：1.短文中不得出現考生姓名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不給分。） 遵守規則（follow the rules）保持誠信（keep honest）勇擔責任（take responsibility）公平待人（be fair

31、toothers)64 .例文Following the mles is importantIn our daily life, there are many rules for us to follow. Following the rules can make the world in order so that everyone's time won't be wasted. But there are always some people trying to break the rules Just to show how different they are. Som

32、e even thinks it is cool to do it. Recently, I was riding my sliding plate in the railway station. I paid no attention to the staffs* warning and just kept the way I was. I even shouted at the staff. At last, when a policeman came. I apologized and promised not to do it again. I only thought about m

33、yself and ignored the rules. What I did wasted everybody's time. From then on, I must follow the niles.【詳解】1 .題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文寫作，根據所給材料，作者以“遵守規則很重要''為題展開，首先介紹了遵 守規則的重要性，接著點出有些人為什么會不遵守規則，為自己的故事作鋪墊，最后表達了自己的決心。2 .寫作指導：本文采用第三人稱和第一人稱行文，一般現在時和過去時交替使用，清楚明了：文章開頭和 最后介紹遵守規則的重要性以及自己的感受時，有正反論述，說理到位：描述自

34、己的故事時，詳細完整， 具體生動。八、靜安區十二、話題作文69 . Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占 格）在美國新澤西這一走丟孩子的眼中，馬是世界上最美好的事物。你眼中最美好的事物是什么呢？請以“The greatest thing m the world”為題，結合自身經歷談談你的看法。注意：短文中不得出現考生姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。照抄閱讀語篇不得分。69.例文:The greatest thing in the worldWhat is the greatest

35、 thing in the world? It is a smile. A smile can start a friendship and make us feel warm and joyful.Last year when I entered the new school, I had no friends and felt lonely. Then a boy with a big smile came up to me. I felt warm and cheerful because of his smile and we soon became good friends.How

36、great the power of a smile is!【詳解】1 .題干解讀：該題屬于話題作文，作文標題是“The greatest thing in the world”。題目要求結合自身經歷談談 你眼中最美好的事物。注意文章字數不少于60詞。2 .寫作指導：由于作文是夾敘夾議的議論文，表達觀點時用一般現在時，描寫經歷時用一般過去時，人稱 為第一人稱。作文可以采用“三段式”結構，第一段表明觀點，第二段敘述經歷，第三段再次強調自己的觀點。 作文完成后注意檢查語法、單詞拼寫和標點。九、閔行區（無）十、浦東新區十二、話題作文64. Write at least 60 words on the

37、 topic "My choice”.（請以“我_的選擇”為題，寫一篇不少于 60 字的短文。）人生即是選擇。你在生活中一定做過無數次選擇，或許是明智的，亦或許是錯誤的：或許是難忘的，亦 或許是遺憾的請結合你以往的一次選擇，談談它對你的影響或你的感悟。（注意：短文中不得出現任何真實人名、校名其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）64 .例文：My best choiceEveryone has to make different choices in the life. Five years ago, I also made my choice. When I played with my

38、little brother. I broke my mother $ fhvounte vase. I knew she would be angry. I wanted to lie at first. But soon I changed my idea. I told my mother the truth. To my surprise, my mother praised me instead.Honesty is valuable. If it is our mistake, we should accept it and then we can correct it. Thus

39、, we can make progress in our life.【詳解】1 .題干解讀：該題目屬于夾敘夾議的文章寫作，要通過自己的一段經歷，談談自己所做的選擇對自己的影響 或獲得的感悟。2 .寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述自己的一段經歷，說明自己做了如何的選擇，時態用一般過去時： 最后要談自己的感悟，可以用一般現在時。注意敘述時的完整性，并保證條理清晰。十一、普陀區十六、話題作文80. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I can be a winner”（以"我可以成為嬴家”為題，寫一篇不少于 60詞的短文，標點符號不占格）提示：

40、馬拉松愛好者Allen的人生經歷告訴我們：每個人都能夠在某方面取得成功。請結合具體自己的經歷 談談你對這一觀點的認識。（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。照抄語篇不得分）80.例文：I can be a winnerThe life experience of marathon enthusiast Allen tells us that everyone can succeed in some way. I couldift agree more with that.At the beginning of learning English, I felt it

41、was very difficult. I dared not speak English because my pronunciation was not standard. I also thought my classmates would laugh at me. It wasnl until I learned Allen's life story that I realized I could work to change that. I began to get up early every day to read English. I tried my best to

42、imitate the pronunciation by listening to English songs and watching English movies. Finally; I got an A in the final speaking test.I believe that as long as I persist, my spoken English will be better and better. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.【詳解】1 .題干解讀：閱讀題干可知，本文要求以“我可以成為贏家”為題

43、寫一篇記敘文。根據提示可知寫作內容包括 結合自己的經歷和經驗談談關于“每個人都能夠在某方面取得成功二寫作要思路清晰，層次分明，邏輯清楚, 語言的表達符合語法結構。2 .寫作指導：例文采取三段式的寫作手法，時態為一般過去時和第一人稱為主，第一段寫根據馬拉松愛好者 Allen的人生經歷告訴我們：每個人都能夠在某方面取得成功：第二段聯系身邊小事和經驗來說明：第三段 寫個人觀點和感受。十二、松江區試卷第17頁，總15頁十六、話題作文89. Write at least 60 words according to the following information.雖然寫給地球人的一封信中所提及到的問題

44、確實存在,但是我們人類正在努力改變現狀。相信你也看到 身邊的變化或感受到自己的變化了。請選取其中的一個題目A change around me（我身邊的變化）或A change about me（我的變化）,寫一篇不少于60詞的短文,標點符號不占格。注意：1、短文中不得出現真實姓名和校名及其它相關信息.否則不予評分。2、照抄閱讀語篇不得分。89.高分范文A change around meEnvironmental pollution has been around for a long time. People have taken action to improve the situati

45、on. In my town, we used to leave nibbish everywhere. It was a heavy job for street cleaners to clear and separate all kinds of rubbish. Activities have been organized to arouse people's awareness of rubbish separation in the neighborhoods, at schools and even in public places. Now everyone in my

46、 town begins to put different kinds of rubbish into different bins.As a result, our town is getting cleaner and more beautiful.I believe this change will help us live a happier life.【詳解】1 .題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，首先要陳述提及的問題：環境污染確實存在，然后指出人們正在努力 改變現狀的措施，最后寫身邊的變化以及自己的感受。2 .寫作指導：本文應該用第三人稱闡述存在的問題以及具體的措施：時態采用一般過去

47、時、現在完成時、 般現在時以及一般將來時的結合。注意將存在問題、改變現狀的措施以及看到的身邊變化按照順序陳述清 楚，保證條理清晰。十三、徐匯區十二、話題作文64. Write at least 60 words to talk abouLHow technology afiects me". Does die development of technology affect you in a positive way or in a negative way? What do you think of the influence? How do you deal with it?請以

48、“How technology affects me”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，談論科技發展對你帶來了正而的影響還是負面的影響。你怎樣看待科技對你的影響嗎？你怎樣面對這些影響呢？（注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。標點符號不占格）64 .例文:How technology affects meWe live in an information time. Almost every person has one mobile phone. Ifs very convenient for me to learn the world using our tel

49、ephones. I can send my greetings to my friends by phones. I can also communicate with my friends. I can get too much information by my phones. I can't imagine what our life will be like without telephones. Telephones are our good friends, but some children are addicted to mobile games, which aff

50、ects their study. So we should use mobile phones properly.【詳解】1,題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，在寫作時根據漢語提示，淡論科技發展帶來了正面的影響還是負面的 影響：怎樣看待科技的影響：如何而對這些影響等。2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來介紹內容：時態采用一般現在時：在介紹內容時，力求語言準確，內容完整，行文連貫，保證條理清晰,十四、楊浦區十二、話題作文64. Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標 點符號不占格。）法國“蜘蛛人''阿蘭.羅伯特的經歷告訴我們，戰勝恐懼也可以是一種勇敢。你對勇敢的理解是如何的 呢？請以叮he time Iwas brave（那次我很勇敢）”為題，根據自身的經歷談談你對勇敢的理解。（注意：L短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2,照抄閱讀的語篇不得分。）64 .例文：The time I was braveIn our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving fo