1、語寫作課教案1學習好資料How to write a composition單位阿城區交界一中姓名鄒靜How to write a composition ?Teaching Aims:According to the form, teach students how to write a composition using the effective sentences. Train the studentswriting ability.Teaching Important Points:1.Improve the students writing ability.2. Teach the

2、 students how to get the key words and how to use effective sentences to complete a coherent composition.Teaching Methods:DiscussionTeaching Aids:1 .the multimedia2 .the blackboardTeaching Procedures:Step 1:Introduction of the basic elementsSix steps to wHte a composition Analyzing the task Finding

3、out the main points Thinking of key points/phrases©Forming sentences Combining the sentences into a passage©Copying normallyStep 2 Discussing the compositionPresent the writing materials to the class, ask students to do some brainstorming: 目前，許多學校對學生采取封閉式管理，學生對此看法不一。請根據下表 所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談談自己

4、的看法。（字數：150左右）有的同學認為有的同學認為1.學校限制我們的自由；1. 學校是學習知識的地方；2.學生和社會接觸少；2.學生應該安心在學校里學習；3.學生的興趣和愛好得不能得到3. 學生缺乏自覺性，離開了老充分的發展。因此師，可能會你的看法：. Analyzing the task:寫作人稱為第三人稱和第一人稱，詞數150詞左右，時態一般現在時. Finding out the main points第一段:有的同學認為：1 .學校限制我們的自由.2 .學生和社會接觸少.3 .學生的興趣和愛好得不到充分的發展.因此第二段:有的同學認為：4 .學校是學習知識的地方.5 .學生應該安心在

5、學校里學習.6 .學生缺乏自覺性，離開了老師，可能會.第三段:你的看法：7 .呈現觀點：贊成哪一方？8 .說明理由/提出措施 Thinking of key points/phrases :1 .Let the students work in groups of four to get the key words of each point orally.2 . Ask several students to report their answers to the rest of the class. Present these key words and phrases to the wh

6、ole class. (Point 7&8 is flexible, encourage students to express whatever they want to say freely. If they can Chinese is also allowed. Then help them to translate what they say into English.)要點序號關鍵單詞和短語1.Limit freedom2.Have little chance to get in touch with3.Interests and hobbies/ fully develo

7、ped4.The best place to get knowledge5.Put one's heart into6.Lack the ability to control / affect7.It is :to keep students at school / (dis)agree to8.Organize various activities /develop . Forming sentences (pay attention to the use of conjunction)Ask students to say sentences one by one accordin

8、g to the points given.Step 3 Presentation1. Three keys to improving your composition:A. learn to use superior phrases.B. learn to use abundant sentences.C. learn to use suitable conjunction.邏輯角度合適的過渡性詞匯時間順序first, then, finally/at last , soon after, immediately, suddenly, nex空間順序here, there, on one s

9、ideon the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to并列關系and, as well as, also轉折關系but, however, yet, instead, though, otherwise, despite, on the contrary, in spite of因果關系because, since, as, thanks to, as a result, thus, owing to, due to條件關系as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless對比關

10、系similarly, like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand,遞進關系Besides, in additon, moreover, what ' s more, furthermore, what' s worse, to make matter worse舉例for example, for instance, such as, in other words, that is to say讓步關系though, as, even if/though, whether, who/where/what/when+eve總

11、結歸納in general, generally speaking, above all, after all, in short, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, all in all過渡性 I think, I ' m afraid, you know, as we all know, as far as I know, 插入語 in my opinion, personally2.Change sentences:(Present some typical sentences written by the students to the c

12、lass. Ask students to use superior phrases or sentences to change the sentences).In addition, students dod t have the ability to control themselves. In addition , students lack the ability to control themselves. /In addition, students can t manage themselves well due to a lack of self-control. They

13、may play computer games and forget to study.They may spend much time playing computer games instead of studying./They may get addicted to playing computer games instead of studying hard. In school we should study hard.f In school we should concentrate on/be absorbed in /devote our body and soul to s

14、tudies. Keep students in school all day are bad for students.fIt's bad to keep students at school all day.(5) School is the best place to get a lot of knowledge, students should put their heart into their studies in school. School is the best place to get a 10t of knowledge so that students shou

15、ld put their heart into their studies in school. Some students cant behave themselves well but for teachers remind us. Some students couldnt have behaved themselves well but for/without teacher help ./Some students ca H behave themselves well unless teachers remind us to do so . Some students leave

16、the school may do something unrelated to their studies. Once they leave school, they may do something unrelated to their studies. We can only enjoy ourselves when we have school holidays. Only when schools break up can we enjoy ourselves.3.Fill in the blanks: Present the model one (without some conj

17、unction )to the whole class, ask students to fill in suitable conjunction ,Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it.Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom , and have little chance to get in touch with society .They ar

18、e not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies ,they have less interest in their studies.Some other think school is the best place to get knowledge theyshould put their heart into their studies., Some students lack the ability to control themselves .out of school, they may lose control of t

19、hemselves and do something that will affect their studies., it is necessary to keep students at school .at the same time schools should organize various activities students can enjoy theirschool life.Step 4. Feedback1. Let the students work in groups to correct each othe s composition and try to find out as many mistakes as they can.2. C