1、惠州育智文化傳播有限公司第三部分 寫作10練配套作業(yè)英語知識運用 1寫作訓練 1 一、短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。In China, people and giant pandas had been living togethe

2、r for thousands of years. But Chinas human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged re

3、sult of development has been that it has divided the pandas habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and h

4、ave babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.【試題分析】1第一句hadhave。一個動作表示持續(xù)到現(xiàn)在，還會持續(xù)下去用現(xiàn)在完成進行時。2第二句greatgreatly。副詞修飾動詞。3第四句meanmeans。主語是單數(shù)，現(xiàn)在時態(tài)中謂語動詞也用單數(shù)。4第五句live 前加to。迫使某人或某物做某事，force somebody或something to do。

5、5第六句damageddamaging。形容詞修飾名詞，“有害的” 是damaging 。6第七句pandapandas。很多熊貓，名詞用復數(shù)形式。7第七句把of劃掉。because后面加句子，而because of后面加名詞。8第七句whichwhere / in which/ live后加in。定語從句中缺少地點狀語，which只能做主語或賓語，或live后面加介詞用which。9第八句cancant /cannot。根據(jù)語境，大熊貓不能交配產(chǎn)仔，用否定形式。10第九句BesidesHowever然而，令我們慶幸的是，人們在幫助大熊貓創(chuàng)造保護區(qū)。前后表示轉(zhuǎn)折。二、書面表達請閱讀下面圖畫，按

6、要求用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)為120左右的短文。內(nèi)容要求：1描述畫面；2概述其含義；3談談個人感想。注意：1.短文開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)；2可適當發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實、行文連續(xù)；3文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。參考詞匯：鑿，鉆 boreIn the picture_【參考范文】In_the_picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wa

7、ll and he was absorbed in his reading.This is s wellknown story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy，being poor，couldnt afford even a candle，so her bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and ne

8、ver get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future

9、.寫作訓練 2 一、短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Dear mum and dad，I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year. I

10、have to remind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008. Worrying about the journey，I was unsettled for the first a few days. As a result, I suffer from “time lag”. This is similar with the “jet lag” you get from flying, but it seems that you keep getting flashbacks from your previous time peri

11、od. So I was very nervous and uncertain at first. However, Wang Ping, my friend and guide, were very understanding but gave me some green tablet which helped a lot. Wellknown for their expertise，his parents company transported me safely into the future in a time capsule.Yours，Li Qiang【試題分析】1文中第二句，yo

12、urselfmyself。根據(jù)句意：我不得不一直提醒自己我真的在3008年。根據(jù)句意，我提醒的是自己而非他人，故選用反身代詞myself。2文中第二句，realreally。本句句意見上一題分析。考查副詞擔當狀語。通過對句子的分析可知，real在此句中擔當狀語，應用其副詞形式。3文中第三句，worryingworried。考查形容詞用法。現(xiàn)在分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞，通常用來形容事物。而此句句意為：對于這次旅行很擔心，我在最開始的幾天里很不安。是對句子主語I的情況進行的說明，故用worried。worried是由過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞，通常用來修飾人，或者與人有關的事物。把Worrying改成Worri

13、ed，注意首字母大寫。4文中第三句，去掉a。句意見上一題分析。在最初的幾天，用短語：for the first few days。不需要再使用冠詞。故去掉a即可。5文中第四句，suffersuffered。根據(jù)上一句I was unsettled可知，這里的時態(tài)應該確定為一般過去時。故把suffer改成suffered。6文中第五句，withto。考查固定短語：be similar to，意為：和相似。句意為：這和你坐飛機時的時間差是很相似的。故把with改成to。7文中第七句，werewas。本句考查主謂一致。一定要確定好主語，本句主語是Wang Ping，其后的my friend and

14、guide是同位語，故謂語動詞和Wang Ping保持一致即可。所以本句把were改成was。8文中第七句，butand。考查連詞的用法。前一分句意為：我的朋友和向?qū)跗椒浅＝艹觯缓笠环志湟鉃椋航o了我一些綠色的藥片起了不少作用。兩個分句之間并沒有轉(zhuǎn)折關系，而是并列關系，故把原句中的but改成and。9文中第七句，tablettablets。考查名詞。名詞tablet是可數(shù)名詞，當前文有some修飾時，需要用其復數(shù)形式，故把tablet改成tablets。10文中最后一句，parentsparents。考查所有格。主語his parents和company之間存在所有關系，故用his paren

15、ts，表示他父母的公司。二、書面表達(2015湖北卷)請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Questioning is a bridge to learning.When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer，you will learn.注意：1.無須寫標題；2除詩歌外，文體不限；3內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的具體事例；4文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；5詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。_【參考范文】Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.If

16、we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true，we can find the correct answer and learn more.Two years ago，our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class.Although the answer seemed a little strange，nobody but I doubted it.Thinking that his solutio

17、n might be wrong.I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.Half an hour later，I managed to find the correct answer.When I showed my answer to him，the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a b

18、ridge that helps us to seek the truth.寫作訓練 3 一、短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help

19、others.At school I get along well with my classmates.Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time.Its the relationship among my desk mate and me.He is a hardworking student, who keeps school rule well.But hes a person with few words.Whats more, he got angry easily.I dont know what t

20、o deal with him.Maybe thats why weve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts.I value our friendship.I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better.I do hope we will be close to each other than before.【試題分析】1文中第一句，ready后加to。考查固定短語：be ready to do sth.，意為：樂

21、于做某事。本句中缺少to，故加上to.句意為：我每門功課都不錯，而且樂于助人。2文中第三句，ThereforeHowever。前一句意為：在學校，我和同學們相處得很好。后一句意為：我有一個一直困擾我的問題。兩句話之間存在轉(zhuǎn)折關系，故不可使用Therefore，意為所以，而應該使用帶有否定意義的副詞。3文中第三句，myselfme。此句句意為：然而，我有一個一直困擾我的問題。這里不需要使用反身代詞myself，只需要使用代詞的賓格形式作賓語，故把myself改成me。4文中第四句，amongbetween。此句考查among和between之間的區(qū)別。Among指三者及三者以上的之間，而betw

22、een指兩者之間。此句指同桌和我之間的關系，故把among改成between。5文中第五句，rulerules。本句考查名詞rule的用法。rule作規(guī)章制度講時是可數(shù)名詞，如前面沒有a等修飾時，常用其復數(shù)形式，泛指規(guī)章制度。此句句意為：他是一個刻苦的學生，非常遵守學校的規(guī)章制度。故用復數(shù)形式，把rule改成rules。6文中第七句，gotget。本句考查時態(tài)。通過閱讀上下文可知，本篇文章是以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，陳述目前的情況，而本句突然出現(xiàn)了一般過去時，而且沒有講述過去發(fā)生的事情，所以需要把一般過去時改成一般現(xiàn)在時。主要主語為he，故用gets。7文中第八句，whathow。本句考查短語deal

23、 with的用法。此處deal with表示交往的意思，這個句子的句意為：我不知道該如何與他交往。故使用how表如何，而不用what。8文中第九句，whybecause。根據(jù)后面的weve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts可知，這里說明的是兩個人關系有問題的原因，所以不用why而用because，構成句型：thats because，表示那是因為。9文中倒數(shù)第二句，去掉with。about為介詞，其后之間用代詞each other作賓語即可，不需要再使用介詞with，故去掉with即可。句意為：我希望我們能多了解彼此，多

24、理解彼此。10文中最后一句，closecloser。通過than before，可知此句話為比較級，故把close改成closer。句意為：我真希望我們能比以前更親密。二、書面表達(2015上海卷)Guided WritingDirections：Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.學校即將舉辦“讀書節(jié)”，目前正廣泛征集“讀書節(jié)”宣傳冊圖片。假設你是該校學生潘陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包

25、括以下內(nèi)容：1簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；2闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳“讀書節(jié)”的理由。_【參考答案】Dear Sir/ Madam，Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, Im writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing h

26、eatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration.As far as Im concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being apprecia

27、ted. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you cant help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book,

28、the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will

29、ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and Im

30、looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Pan Yang寫作訓練 4一、短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。There are lots of experience in

31、our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. Im interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous wh

32、en I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes peopl

33、e successfully.【試題分析】1experienceexperiences名詞誤用。根據(jù)謂語動詞are，可知此處主語應是復數(shù)形式。2holdingheld 非謂語誤用。competition和hold之間是被動關系，所以應用過去分詞。3beenchosen 語態(tài)誤用。主語I和chose之間為被動關系。had been chosen被選中。4memyself 代詞誤用。devote oneself to sth.致力于。5suchso 形容詞副詞誤用。such后加名詞，so 后加形容詞或副詞。根據(jù)nervous，可知用so修飾。6a去掉 冠詞誤用。catch sight of看見，不

34、用冠詞。7dodid 時態(tài)誤用。本文講的是去年的事情，所以此處應用一般過去時。8inwith介詞誤用。be filled with沖滿。9confidentconfidence形容詞誤用。根據(jù)結構可知，此處強調(diào)的是句子的主語，所以應用名詞。10successfullysuccessful/succeed副詞誤用。Make sb. do sth.或make sb.adj.是固定結。二、書面表達(2015湖南卷)Section C (25 marks)Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions give

35、n below._請以老師當眾表揚你為話題，用下面所給的句子開頭，續(xù)寫一篇英語短文。 As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.注意：1. 將所有句子寫在答題卡上；2. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)不少于120個；3. 不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。_【參考范文】One possible version：As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_bein

36、g_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates.Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old ladys head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness.

37、 Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi quickly. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital. The old lady was saved and we also felt very pleased. Whats more, I remembered the number of the car, and the traff

38、ic police caught the driver later.寫作訓練 5 一、短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy

39、about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led her into the store. There she bought hi

40、m some new shoes and a complete suit of warm clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.【試題分析】1第一句去掉front前的the。在商

41、店窗戶外面的前方站著，用 in front of，而in the front of表示內(nèi)部的前邊，去掉the。2第二句hashad。通篇是過去時態(tài)。3第三句passespassing。現(xiàn)在分詞作定語，表示主動關系。4第四句herhim。文中講述一個小男孩，代詞性別用錯。5第五句warmwarmly副詞修飾動詞，而形容詞修飾名詞，clothing是名詞。6第六句soand前后句是并列關系。7. 第六句comego。“回家”go home。8第七句looked 后面加at。“看著某人”look at somebody。9第七句howif /whether。問那個女士是否是上帝。10. 第八句chi

42、ldchildren。one of復數(shù)名詞。二、書面表達(2015浙江卷)在班級活動中，當你的想法與大多數(shù)同學不一致時，你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學的意見？請你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英文寫一篇100120個詞短文。要求如下：1從以上兩種做法中選擇一種；2以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學校、同學姓名等真實信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認定。When I Have a Different Opinion_【參考答案】When_I_Have_a_Different_Opinion We may

43、have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly. Once we were discussing where

44、to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.寫作訓練 6 一、短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同

45、桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention, please?I have something important to tell you. Our p

46、lan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain. Now I will introduce their plan for today. We would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning. A school has a history of 85 years. Then well go to an exhibition of some new invention. I think it will be interested.

47、The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel. Well set out at 8：30. Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time. You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions. Thank you for listening.【試題分析】1文中第二段第二句。has to后面加be考查被動語態(tài)的用法。本句句意為：我們?nèi)ムl(xiāng)村參觀的計劃由于下雨不得不推遲到明天。計劃和推遲之間存在

48、被動關系，故需要使用被動語態(tài)。不定式的被動語態(tài)在其后加上be就可以了，故在to之后加上be。2文中第二段第二句。because后面加of考查because和because of之間的區(qū)別。雖然兩者都可以表示“因為”，但是用法卻不同。because之后加上表原因的分句而because of之后加上表原因的名詞或動名詞。此句中表原因的是名詞the rain，故需要使用的是because of，所以加上of。3文中第二段第三句。theirour通過上一句可知，此處講的是our plan，故把their改成our。句意為：現(xiàn)在我介紹一下我們今天的計劃。4文中第二段第四句。wouldwill通過上文Now I will introduce their plan for today.可知介紹的是即將發(fā)生的事情，故用現(xiàn)在將來時而不是過去將來時。所以把would改成will。5文中第二段第四句。去掉on本句考查時間狀語的用法。句意為：今天早晨我們將坐公共汽車去參觀一所學校。今天早晨作時間狀語不需要加介詞，故去掉on。6文中第二段第五句。school前的a改成the此處所指的學校是上文提到的學校。在英語中，表上文剛剛提到的可數(shù)