高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習科技故事——高科技機器狗給艾格尼絲奶奶帶來了陪伴和愛1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文GrandmaAgnesisninety-nineyearsoldandstillliveinthesamehouseahe'slivedinformorethansixtyyears.Shewasoneofthirteenchildrenraisedonafarm.Andnow.sheisrathersetinherways,Fortwelveyears,Grandmaagesenjoyedthecorupanyofherdog,Snoopy.Theblackandwhitespottedmustwasaconstantpresenceinherhomeandheryard.DuringthetimethatshehadSnoopy,GrandmaAgnesstartedshowingsignsofdementia.Myfamilyworkedtogethertokeepherlivingindependentlybutsafe.Itwasdifficultformydadthedayhepulledthebatteryfromhercartokeepherfromusingherstillvaliddriver'slicense,Everyvisitafterthatday,GrandmaAgneswouldinsistthathebuyheranewcarbatterybecauseherswasdeadagain.Dadnoddedandagreedtodoit,knowingthattheconversationwouldsoonbeforgotten.4續寫原文Threeyearsago.Snoopypassedaway,Mydad.AuntCarolandUncleEdthoughtofwaystoensurethatGrandmaAgneswouldknowthatSnoopywasgone,TheyhadburialserviceinthebackyardwithGrandma.UncleEdprintedapictureofSnoopywith“RestinPeace”writtenacrossthebottomandstuckittotherefrigerator,Butonthedailyvisits.GrandmaAgnesstillaskedaboutSnoopy,Sheaccusedtheneighborsoftakingherdogbecauseshewassurethatsheheardbinbarkingfromtheiryard.Havingafamilymemberwithdementiaisheartbreakingandtrying.ForeveryvisitI'vemadeinthepastfiveyears,mydadhasmadeapointtotellmethatsheprobablywon'trememberwhoIamnorthatmykidsarehergreatgrandchildren,I'vesatthroughconversationswherewepatientlyrepeatedanswerstoquestionsthatwereansweredafewmomentsago.GrandmaAgnesisstillthere.andshe'sstillherstubbornself.butshedoesn'tgrasptheworldaroundher,AndyetsheinsistsonlivingindependentlyandaskingaboutSnoopyconstantly.5段首句Paragraph1：Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithgoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAges.Paragraph2：Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithgoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAges.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點8續寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了艾格尼絲奶奶已經99歲了，還住在已經住了60多年的那所房子里，奶奶很喜歡她養的狗史努比，但是三年前史努比去世了，于是艾德叔叔給她買了一只高科技機器狗，奶奶和這只機器狗相處很愉快。作者的家人很感激這只高科技機器狗給艾格尼絲奶奶帶來了陪伴和愛。9續寫思路分析Para1：Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithgoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAges.由第一段首句內容“幾個月前，艾德叔叔想出了一個好主意，給艾格尼絲奶奶買了一只機器狗?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懓衲峤z奶奶和機器狗的相處經過。10續寫思路分析Para2：EveryoneinourfamilyispleasedthatGrandmaAgneshasbeensokindtoSnoopy.由第二段首句內容“我們家的每個人都很高興艾格尼絲奶奶對史努比這么好?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫艾格尼絲奶奶如何照顧機器狗以及作者一家對機器狗的看法。11續寫思路分析續寫線索買機器狗——奶奶相信機器狗是真狗——奶奶照顧機器狗——家人感激機器狗帶來的陪伴12續寫素材可用詞匯：行為類提出：comeupwith/putforward購買：buy/purchase習慣于：getusedto/getaccustomedto情緒類真實：real/true/actual高興：pleased/glad13續寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Ithassoftfurandbarkswhenitsensesmotionnearby.(運用了when引導時間狀語從句)[高分句型2]OurfamilyisgratefulthattheroboticdoghasbroughtGrandmaAgnescompanionshipandsomeonetolove.(運用了that引導賓語從句)14Part3范文呈現15范文呈現Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithagoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAgnes.Ithassoftfurandbarkswhenitsensesmotionnearby.GrandmaquicklyadoptedthedogashernewSnoopy.Herconditionhasledhertobelievethatheisananimalandnotarobot.ShegotusedtoSnoopy'sbarksandregardedthemasrequestsforfoodoranap.ThefooddisappearingeverynighthelpedconvinceGrandmathatSnoopywasarealdog.Wefoundfromthecamerathattheneighborcatclimbedoverthefenceandateallthedogfood.16范文呈現EveryoneinourfamilyispleasedthatGrandmaAgneshasbeensokindtoSnoopy.Shewouldpethimgentlyandcarefullypreparefoodandwaterforhim.Once,whenthedogdidn'tmove,eatandbark,sheanxiouslyphonedUncleEd.ShewasafraidSnoopywasill,UncleEdfoundhejustneededchangingbattery.OurfamilyisgratefulthattheroboticdoghasbroughtGrandmaAgnescompanionshipandsomeonetolove.It'sbeautifulthatherloveofdogscancontinuethroughthistimeinherlife.17范文譯文幾個月前，埃德叔叔想出了一個好主意，給艾格尼絲奶奶買了一只機器狗。它有柔軟的皮毛，當它感覺到附近的運動時會吠叫。奶奶很快收養了這只狗作為她的新史努比。她的狀況讓她相信他是動物而不是機器人。她習慣了史努比的吠叫，并把它們視為對食物或小睡的請求。每天晚上消失的食物讓奶奶相信史努比是一只真正的狗。我們從攝像機上發現，鄰居的貓翻過圍欄，把所有的狗糧都吃了。18范文譯文艾格尼絲奶奶對史努比這么好，我們家的每個人都很高興。她會溫柔地撫