1、12345記敘文的篇章結構：記敘文的篇章結構： 開頭開頭the beginning-交代必要交代必要的背景，如：時間，地點，人物的背景，如：時間，地點，人物等。等。中間中間the middle-交代故交代故事情節（事情的主體）。如：事事情節（事情的主體）。如：事件的發生，發展和前因后果件的發生，發展和前因后果結尾結尾the ending-事情的事情的結果或感想，愿望等（結果或感想，愿望等（the result or feeling）6 根據下根據下列圖畫中列圖畫中 Tom Tom 騎自騎自行車的經行車的經歷，用英歷，用英語寫一篇語寫一篇故事。故事。 短文要寫短文要寫得連貫、得連貫、完整。完整。

2、Sample 17 1. 主題主題 : 2. 時態：時態： 3. 人稱人稱:1. Go over the requirementA story （a traffic accident)past tenseTom , he 8 Tom /ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/ the other day/ one day2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)9 The driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pic

3、tures（who, what, where, when, why, how)10 A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)11Key wordsKey wordssentencessentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The drive

4、r was caught.ride a bike /run fast tosee the accident/remember the number /call the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened that he ran away.1

5、2 Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.Passage 13. Writing a passage 簡單句大王13 The other

6、day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot.

7、 Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.Passage 2 14 Go over the requirement（person, tense, style） Summary : How to write a picture story?Go

8、 over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. )15 點題（時間、地點、點題（時間、地點、人物、事件人物、事件） 事件的起因事件的起因 事件的發展事件的發展/ /過程過程 事件的結果事件的結果 扣題扣題 16記敘文句型優化記敘文句型優化17 半個月：半個月：half a month 15 days 半年：半年： half a year 6 months 兩個禮拜兩個禮拜: for

9、tnight 開始：開始：at the beginning of summer 結束：結束：at the end of winter 然后：然后：Shortly afterwards / without waiting 有時：有時：sometimes at times 最后：最后：At last eventually 結果：結果：as a result consequently 期間：Within / during the vocation - in the middle of the night 18 20年后：年后：in 20 years 有一天：有一天：one day the other

10、 day 第二天：第二天：the following day 現在：現在：Now at the present time 有一次：有一次：On one occasion 另一次：另一次：On another occasion 一禮拜后：一禮拜后：A week later a week passed / went by 晚上：晚上：In the evening / in the morning/ in the afternoon/ in towards evening/ morning/ afternoon 19記敘常用鏈接詞記敘常用鏈接詞時間順序：Early in the morning /

11、In the early morning; In the middle of the day / At noon; Late in the afternoon / In the late afternoon; Far / Deep into the night; 20記敘常用鏈接詞記敘常用鏈接詞Shortly afterwards, at once, immediately, all of a sudden, suddenly, soon;The moment, as soon as, the first time, not until, next time, etc;In the past

12、/ At present / In the future ;To start with, next, then, finally;At first, in the beginning; at last, in the end; 21記敘常用句型記敘常用句型On arriving at the spot, he was shocked.Unfortunately he had his feet broken at the age of 12. and fortunately, the teacher didnt find him copying others exercises.22To my

13、great surprise, there was a big fish on the hook.To my shock/disappointment/satisfactionout of expectation/without hesitation23書面表達24The cat crept slowly through the grass.The cat was watching the mouse the whole time.Watching the mouse the whole time, Watching the mouse the whole time, the cat crep

14、t slowly through the the cat crept slowly through the grassgrass. .25The gold was hidden under the ground.It was safe for many years.Hidden under the floorboards, the gold was safe for many years.26 There is a girl. She is sitting between us. 2. This is a book. The book was bought yesterday. There i

15、s a girl who is sitting between us.This is a book which was bought yesterday.Rewrite following sentences273. . 走在大街上，他遇見了一個老朋友走在大街上，他遇見了一個老朋友. . While he was walking in the street, he met an old friend.4. _, the city looks beautiful.Walking in the street從天空中看，When it is seen from the sky, the city l

16、ooks beautiful.Seen from the sky2829readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）目瞪口呆）要點：要點：1老人穿著拖鞋讀報, 狗在邊上睡覺。2 老人想出門，叫狗拿鞋。3 狗閉著眼睛，一動 不動，汪汪直叫， 老人很納悶。4 貓嘴里叼著鞋走進 來，老人目瞪口呆。參考詞語參考詞語: slippers (拖鞋拖鞋)30readingsleepingAn old man was sitting in an armchair at home,reading his newspaper. Beside him lay

17、 a dog, sleeping soundly.31catdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）目瞪口呆）Seeing the cat, he was totally dumbfounded.32The fire is burning, so I feel warm.I lost my bike, so I had to walk home.With the fire burning, I feel warm.With my bike lost, I had to walk home.33My mother sat in a chair with a newspaper in her h

18、and. She left without saying goodbye.He died with his work still unfinished.34shoesslippers (拖鞋拖鞋)with his slippers on35eyesclosedDog barkedwith two eyes closed36catdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆目瞪口呆）shoesThe cat came in with the pair of shoes in its mouth.37An old man was sitting in an armchair at home, read

19、ing his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog, sleeping soundly. Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while, but he couldnt go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog to get the shoes for him. Out of his expectation, the dog just barked with two eyes closed again. The old man was compl

20、etely puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, he saw the cat coming towards him with the pair of shoes in its mouth. Seeing this, he was totally dumbfounded.3839 A car / run fast to/run into him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly 2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)402004年

21、遼寧年遼寧 下面下面4幅圖片描述的是幅圖片描述的是星期天上午星期天上午在在中山公中山公園園里發生的一件事。請根據圖片所提供的信里發生的一件事。請根據圖片所提供的信息用英語為你校的息用英語為你校的“英語園地英語園地”寫一篇短文。寫一篇短文。 注意：注意：短文須包括所有圖片的主要內容。短文須包括所有圖片的主要內容。短文的內容要連貫、完整；短文的內容要連貫、完整； 短文單詞數：短文單詞數：100左右（已給句子中的單左右（已給句子中的單詞不計入總詞數）；詞不計入總詞數）； 參考詞匯：貨攤參考詞匯：貨攤stand (n.) ; 搶奪搶奪 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕逮捕 arrest (v.)41

22、421點題（時間、地點）點題（時間、地點）星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁2事件的起因事件的起因年輕婦女的包被搶年輕婦女的包被搶3事件的發展事件的發展/過程過程人們追趕搶包者人們追趕搶包者 ；長排椅上坐著一位老人；搶；長排椅上坐著一位老人；搶包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒4事件的結果事件的結果兩名警察逮捕搶劫者：兩名警察逮捕搶劫者：5扣題扣題婦女感謝老人，人們稱贊老人的機智婦女感謝老人，人們稱贊老人的機智43審題審題描述過去描述過去個人經歷個人經歷第三人稱第三人稱4.主題：主題：3.人稱：人稱：1.體裁：體裁：2.時

23、態：時態：記敘文體記敘文體 一般過去時一般過去時44星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤 One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand 年輕婦女的包被搶年輕婦女的包被搶 snatch her handbag away 人們追趕搶包者人們追趕搶包者 run after the snatcher 在附近長排椅上坐著一位老人在附近長排椅上坐著一位老人 There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby提綱提綱45 從老人身旁跑過從老人身旁跑過 Run past the

24、 old man 拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間；拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間； pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the snatcher; 摔一大跟斗摔一大跟斗 fall down on the ground heavily46 兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者 Came in a police car; arrest sb. 感謝老人的幫助感謝老人的幫助 Thank sb. for his help 稱贊老人的機智稱贊老人的機智 Praise the old man for his cleverness4

25、7 1、幾天前、幾天前 the other day; several days ago 2、使人感到意外、使人感到意外 to ones surprise 3、就在這時、就在這時 at that moment; at that time常用關聯詞常用關聯詞48 副詞：副詞：suddenly, unfortunately, suddenly, unfortunately, luckily, immediately luckily, immediately as a result as a result so/suchthat so/suchthat two hours later, two hou

26、rs later, and and 49One Sunday morning, many people went to Zhongshan Park. As it was very hot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. 50Seeing this, immediately a few people began

27、 to run after him. However, the snatcher ran so fast that it was not easy to catch him. Luckily , there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby. 51 As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man cried and fell do

28、wn on the ground hard. 52A few minutes later two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.53 第三節：書面表達(滿分30分) 中學生在學校打手機或在課堂上發短信已成為普遍現中學生在學校打手機或在課堂上發短信已成為普遍現象，為此許多學校規定不允許學生帶手機到校，更不允象，為此許多學校規定不允許學生帶手機到校，

29、更不允許在教室里打手機或發短信許在教室里打手機或發短信. 下面是關于一個學生因上下面是關于一個學生因上課發短信而違紀的事例，用英語將這個事例寫成課發短信而違紀的事例，用英語將這個事例寫成記述文記述文，詞詞120個左右個左右 故事大概意思： 阿福上課時想起父親因病住院，想用手機給阿福上課時想起父親因病住院，想用手機給父親發短信問問情況，不料正好被老師看見父親發短信問問情況，不料正好被老師看見,老老師叫他立刻收起手機。阿福感到不樂。課后，師叫他立刻收起手機。阿福感到不樂。課后，阿福解釋緣由并保證今后不帶手機到學校阿福解釋緣由并保證今后不帶手機到學校composition correcting 54

30、寫作步驟寫作步驟:第一步審題第一步審題, 做到四確定做到四確定 1. 體裁格式體裁格式, 2. 主體時態主體時態 3. 中心人稱中心人稱 4. 內容要點內容要點: 記敘文記敘文一般過去時態一般過去時態 ( 4 ) 第三人稱第三人稱When the other day, Where in an English courseWho Ah Fu What Send message to his father, find bywhy be ill in hospital how explain, reason, promise 55 Phones are forbidden in class 1)Th

31、e other day 2) in an English class, 3)when. 4) His teacher _ told to put it away immediately office ,after class. 5) unhappy, 6) not, but scold, school regulation 7) ill in hospital, asked about 8) But the teacher _ 9, made an apology , promised 56 Sample Remark Today Ah Fu was trying to send a shor

32、t message with his cell phone in an English class when he suddenly found the teacher standing before him. His teacher looked at him sternly and told him to put it away immediately and go to the office after class. Ah Fu felt upset/unpleasant. 敘述過去的事情常以敘述過去的事情常以時間短語開頭，時間短語開頭， 交代交代時間時間交代時間發生的交代時間發生的地點

33、地點發生事件發生事件4)事情的經過事情的經過(收起，收起，office)5)事情的經過事情的經過 (unhappy)57 Sample RemarkIn the office, his teacher didnt scold him ,instead, she told him that it was a school regulation for students not to use cell phones in class. Ah Fu then told the teacher that his father was ill in hospital, and he just asked

34、 about fathers illness. 6)事情的經過事情的經過(老師教育）老師教育） 7)說明原因說明原因8)事情的經過（老師教育）事情的經過（老師教育）58 Sample RemarkStill, Ah Fu made an apology to his teacher and promised never to use it any longer in class. The teacher nodded and hoped that he could keep his promise. 9)結果結果（態度）（態度）10)老師的態度老師的態度59 假設下面六幅圖畫描述的是你在假設下

35、面六幅圖畫描述的是你在5月月3日日(星期星期五五)的一段親身經的一段親身經 歷。請你根據畫面所示內容，用英語寫歷。請你根據畫面所示內容，用英語寫一篇一篇100字左右的日記。字左右的日記。 Sample 160今天下午我去看電影今天下午我去看電影.在路上在路上,我看到一個手提箱我看到一個手提箱從一輛自行車上掉了下來從一輛自行車上掉了下來.I went to see a film this afternoon.On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.61我撿起箱子我撿起箱子,并想騎車人大聲喊叫并想騎車人大聲喊叫,但

36、他卻已經騎遠了但他卻已經騎遠了.于是于是,我攔了一輛出租車去追趕我攔了一輛出租車去追趕失主失主.I picked up the case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away.I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.62我終于追上了失主我終于追上了失主,并把箱子還給他并把箱子還給他.失主非常的感動失主非常的感動,他拿出一些錢來感他拿出一些錢來感謝我謝我,但被我拒絕了但被我拒絕了.I caught up with him at last and gave the case bac

37、k to him.The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.63May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I

38、stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . 64一，合并為簡單句一，合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語把其中一句改為分詞短語把其中一句改為介詞短語把其中一句改為介詞短語 二，合并為復合句二，合并為復合句 三，把復合句改為簡單句三，把復合句改為簡單句把從句改為分詞短語把從句改

39、為分詞短語把從句改為介詞短語把從句改為介詞短語 四，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、四，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調句、主從復合句、分詞狀語等強調句、主從復合句、分詞狀語等. 五，注意使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。五，注意使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 六六. 適當的聯想與發揮。適當的聯想與發揮。65I went to see a film this afternoon.One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on my way to the c

40、inema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.66I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, however he rode too fast to hear me.I shouted at the man the moment I picked it up, ne

41、vertheless, he was riding so fast that he couldnt hear me.67Suddenly, I had an idea.I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man.I caught up with him at last. Suddenly, an idea flashed into my mind. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. Certainly, it didnt take me long to catch up with the ma

42、n. 68I gave the case back to the man.The man took out some money to thank me.I refused.Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. However, I refused him politely.69實戰演練實戰演練Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minut

43、es to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill. 1、簡單描述一下這位同學生病的情況；2、同學、老師和我是如何幫助他的；3、人和人之間的這種相互關愛給我的感受是.70DIY寫作模板：架構階段寫作模板：架構階段第一段：開篇句：第一段：開篇句：About _ Oclock one evening in _, doing sth_. 擴展句：擴展句：_. (展開描述展開描述)第二段：主題句：第二段：主題句：Without hesitation, _. It wasnt long before _.第三段：結尾句

44、：第三段：結尾句：Is _? No matter what happens, we_. 擴展句：1、When _ , people showed _ spirit regardless of _.2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.71 DIY寫作模板：填充階段寫作模板：填充階段 第一段：開篇句：About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was

45、lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. 擴展句：His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature, which was 38.5. 72 第二段：主題句：Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. 擴展句：1、One roommate brought a

46、blanket for him.2、Another supported him in the ambulance.3、Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.73 第三段：結尾句：Is he a suspected SARS patient? Nevertheless, no matter what happens, we wont retreat. 擴展句：1、When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to

47、their own health. 2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, the unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. 74 范文About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5. Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money