1、四級漫畫四級漫畫(mnhu)作文寫作方法作文寫作方法第一頁，共37頁。一是更加重視能力的日積月累；二是引導英語學習的實用性。第1頁/共37頁第二頁，共37頁。內容描述評論；二段寫對應現象、意義或危害，尾段寫看法和建議并展望！第2頁/共37頁第三頁，共37頁。第3頁/共37頁第四頁，共37頁。words but no more than 180 words.第4頁/共37頁第五頁，共37頁。本篇作文體裁明確，話題清晰，內容要求具體，即：簡要解釋手機的過度(gud)使用并分析其可能產生的后果。可以看出，題目明確要求寫的“現象”、“危害”，此外可寫的是“建議”。第5頁/共37頁第六頁，共37頁。第6

2、頁/共37頁第七頁，共37頁。第7頁/共37頁第八頁，共37頁。6. . Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: 第8頁/共37頁第九頁，共37頁。“Dear Andy, -How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs

3、 for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.第9頁/共37頁第十頁，共37頁。This simple but thought-provoking cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be indifferent.The mod

4、ern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help of the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.第10頁/共37頁第

5、十一頁，共37頁。words but no more than 180 words.第11頁/共37頁第十二頁，共37頁。第12頁/共37頁第十三頁，共37頁。第13頁/共37頁第十四頁，共37頁。第14頁/共37頁第十五頁，共37頁。“Dear Andy, -How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you co

6、me down-stairs for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.第15頁/共37頁第十六頁，共37頁。This simple but thought-provoking cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be ind

7、ifferent.From my perspective, the electronic contact can/cannot replace face to face communication owing to the following factors. .As far as Im concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people. 第16頁/共37頁第十七頁，共37頁。From my perspective, the electronic contact ca

8、nnot replace face to face communication owing to the following factors. To begin with, over-reliance on electronic contact will damage the interpersonal relationship, for the cold machine never replaces a warm-hearted greeting face to face（個人關系）（個人關系）. For example, the aged parents would like their

9、only son who works far away home to come back home more often rather than to talk with him on the internet occasionally（例證（例證(lzhng)）. Whats more, face to face communication is preferable because it is beneficial to build a harmonious society（社會層面）（社會層面）, for it attaches more importance on human aff

10、ection and feelings instead of convenience and speed.第17頁/共37頁第十八頁，共37頁。words but no more than 180 words.第18頁/共37頁第十九頁，共37頁。Judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken（建議）（建議）. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive us of

11、cell-phones（社會層面）（社會層面）. Moreover, we ,as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start（個人方面）（個人方面）.建議控制手機建議控制手機(shu j)的使用。的使用。第19頁/共37頁第二十頁，共37頁。Personally, in view of the overuse of mobile phones, I hold that we individuals should raise the necessary awareness that go

12、od relationship are reinforced by sincere and face-to-face communication.強調強調(qing dio)面對面交流的重要性。面對面交流的重要性。注：注：face-to-face communication. communicate face to face.第20頁/共37頁第二十一頁，共37頁。It is high time that we took effective measures to curb/control this trend. I cherish a belief that cell phones them

13、selves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them. 態度態度(ti du)中庸，中庸， 強調一定條件下手機的作用。強調一定條件下手機的作用。第21頁/共37頁第二十二頁，共37頁。第三段寫作建議：第三段寫作建議：建議控制網絡的使用。建議控制網絡的使用。 強調親情的重要性，建議面對面強調親情的重要性，建議面對面交流。交流。強調網絡的有效性的同時，建議適強調網絡的有效性的同時，建議適當使用，可作為當使用，可作為(zuwi)面對面交面對面交流的

14、補充。流的補充。第22頁/共37頁第二十三頁，共37頁。第三段寫作建議：第三段寫作建議：建議控制網絡的使用。建議控制網絡的使用。 強調親情強調親情(qn qn)的重要性，的重要性，建議面對面交流。建議面對面交流。強調網絡的有效性的同時，建議強調網絡的有效性的同時，建議適當使用適當使用 。第23頁/共37頁第二十四頁，共37頁。Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way. After all, Internet is invented to bring conveniences to our life rat

15、her than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach（以網絡（以網絡(wnglu)的作用作為前提條件，以便提出建議）的作用作為前提條件，以便提出建議）. If we want to keep our interpersonal relationship more effectively, we should spend more time with them face to face in real life（建議）（建議）. Only in this way can we not only make full use of the commun

16、ication tool（替換（替換e-mail,避免重復）避免重復） on the net but also make our relationship tighter. （進一步（進一步強調建議。）強調建議。） 第24頁/共37頁第二十五頁，共37頁。Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way（承認電子交流方式（承認電子交流方式(fngsh)的作的作用）用）, but it is face-to face contact that

17、 deepens the feelings and emotions between people（同時強調（同時強調直接交流的好處）直接交流的好處）. 第25頁/共37頁第二十六頁，共37頁。下面提供英語四級寫作中常用詞的替換詞，讓你的作文不再平庸。在考前這幾天中每天上午看一遍、下午背一遍，晚上(wn shang)再默寫一遍，確保熟記于心。大多數人大多數人 most people 2) 經常經常 often 3) 我相信我相信 I believe 4) 必須必須 must5) 知道知道 know 6) 因為因為 because 7) 最后最后(zuhu) at last 8) 然而然而 bu

18、t 9) 如果如果 ifthe majority of the populationfrequentlyfrom my standpointIt is a must for us tobe aware ofin thateventuallyhoweverProvided that第26頁/共37頁第二十七頁，共37頁。10,各行各業的人各行各業的人 all kinds of people 11) 引起，導致引起，導致(dozh) lead to 12) 人人 people 13) 好的好的 good 14) 懷的懷的 bad 15) 很多很多many 16) 越來越越來越 more and more 17) 很很 very 18) 方面方面 side 19) 表明表明 showPeople from all walks of lifeContribute toindividualsBeneficial, desirableundesirablenumerousan increasing number ofextremelyaspe