1、餅狀圖作文餅狀圖作文I餅狀圖作文寫作注意的要點(diǎn)：餅狀圖作文寫作注意的要點(diǎn)：百分?jǐn)?shù)所表達(dá)的意義及正確的表達(dá)法百分?jǐn)?shù)所表達(dá)的意義及正確的表達(dá)法：如“20%的人認(rèn)為廣告植入可以接受。”的英語表達(dá)法為：20% people (20% of the people ) think / hold the opinion that the product placement is acceptable .2. 餅狀圖往往是對(duì)一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的看法，所以往往餅狀圖往往是對(duì)一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的看法，所以往往用現(xiàn)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)來描述在時(shí)來描述。而許多學(xué)生用錯(cuò)了時(shí)態(tài)。而許多學(xué)生用錯(cuò)了時(shí)態(tài)例文例文（蘇州二檢卷：春晚廣告范文） The

2、2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussion due to product placement in the programs. As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the productplacement appears in the programs naturally. And 15

3、% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself. However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programs. 25% of them even feel h

4、urt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV. From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programs. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidabl

5、e, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audiences feelings into account . II學(xué)生佳句、佳作學(xué)生佳句、佳作:導(dǎo)入話題：導(dǎo)入話題：As the pie chart shows, different people have / hold different opinions towards the product placement.By analyzing the pie chart, we can come to a conclusion that differen

6、t people have / hold different opinions towards the product placement.According to / From the pie chart, we can draw a conclusion that most people are against this practice.百分?jǐn)?shù)所表達(dá)的意義及正確的表達(dá)法百分?jǐn)?shù)所表達(dá)的意義及正確的表達(dá)法15% of the people have the view that this action can cater to the need of the development of CC

7、TV, but 10% of the people think quite differently that the product placement can do harm to the image of CCTV . Besides, 25% of the people think there are too many advertisements placed during the performances and they have nothing to do with/ have no relation to the programs, which makes audience f

8、eel annoyed. On the contrary, 20% of the people conveyed think it is natural to place advertisements. 描述不錯(cuò)，但思路混亂。描述不錯(cuò)，但思路混亂。20% people think that it is natural to play advertise-ments during the performances, which will not do harm to the performances. 15% people hold the opinion that it can satisfy

9、 the needs of the development of CCTV. However, every coin has two sides. 30% people think that the advertisements have no connection with the performances and 25% of the people point out that too many advertisements make the performances boring, which will make the audience lose interest in it .In

10、addition , 10% people think this practice does damage to the image of CCTV. 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：1.As far as I am concerned, the disadvantages of the product placement outweigh the advantages of it. There is no doubt that the commercial advertisements will bring great profits to CCTV. But no one can deny the f

11、act that it will change the meaning of the Spring Festival Gala. Meanwhile, it can ruin the image of CCTV.2. As far as I am concerned, the product placement shouldnt appear in the programs. Although CCTV can make plenty of money through the practice, they shouldnt ignore the negative effects due to

12、the product placement. CCTV represents China so they must know that a good image is more important than profit in a long run. 佳作佳作: The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussion due to product placement in the programs. As is sh

13、own in the pie chart, different people hold different opinions towards the practice. Some people are in favor of this kind of practice. About 15% people hold the opinion that it is needed for the development of Gala. Another 20% think it natural to place advertisements in the programs, which does no

14、t affect peoples interest in the performance to a degree. However, others hold the opposite opinion. 10% people think this kind of phenomenon does do great harm to the image of CCTV. Besides, 15% of the conveyed complain there are too many advertisements, which will make the Spring Festival Gala boring. The other 30 percent of the people consider that the advertisements are not related to the programs . As far as I am concerned, as a saying goes, every coin has two sides, this practice has both advantag