1、山東德州2013屆高考英語短文改錯+書面表達精練精析7. 短文改錯此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。China, with a huge number of bicycles, called “the Kingdom 1. _of Bikes

2、”. Bikes, what many people still ride to go to work, serve 2. _as an important means of transportation. There are some reason 3. _for it. First, the price of bikes is low, comparing with that of cars. 4. _Second, many people go to work by bike to avoid the traffic jam. 5. _However, riding bikes save

3、s money and time for most people. 6. _Besides these two advantages, riding bikes is also effective way 7. _to keep fit for those working in offices or lacking of exercise. 8. _Many people believed that cars are more comfortable and faster 9. _than bikes, but bikes will remain importantly in our dail

4、y life. 10. _. 書面表達近年來，食品安全問題在校園內外時有發生；你校上周就發生了一起食物中毒事件，兩名學生在校外吃了一種油炸食品而引起胃痛。請你以李華的名義用英文給某英語報社編輯寫一封信，談談你對這一現象的看法。詞數：100左右, 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。內容必須包括：. 有些商家只顧賺錢，無視人們的健康和安全；. 學生應盡量在校園內吃飯，不要到校外亂吃；. 為了防止類似事件發生， 提出你的建議。Dear Editor, Last week, two students of our school suffered from stomach ache because they a

5、te some poisonous fried food outside campus. Yours faithfully, Li Hua答案解析. 1. 【解析】called前加is “被叫做”，表被動，前面缺少系動詞。2. 【解析】whatwhich which引導非限制性定語從句。3. 【解析】reasonreasons reason“原因”，為可數名詞，其前有some，要用復數。4. 【解析】comparingcompared compared with“和比起來”，為固定搭配。5. 6. 【解析】HoweverThus/Therefore/So 由上下文知，句子之間是因果關系，故用T

6、hus/Therefore/So。7. 【解析】effective前加an an effective way“一種有效的方法”。8. 【解析】去掉of lack“缺乏”，是及物動詞，不需加介詞。9. 【解析】believedbelieve 整篇文章主要運用一般現在時，此處用一般過去時不符合全篇時態。10. 【解析】importantlyimportant remain“仍然是”，是系動詞，其后加形容詞作表語。. 【參考范文】 Dear Editor, Last week, two students of our school suffered from stomach ache because

7、 they ate some poisonous fried food outside campus. Nowadays in our country, some business people care little about peoples health and safety as long as they can make money. Some even sell polluted or poisonous food to consumers, and this often leads to serious health problems. In order to prevent such tragedy happening again, we students should try to avoid buying food from the stores or stalls out of the school, and we should have meals in school dining rooms. Only in this way can we protect ourselves. Besides, the local government and the school should take