1、趙也茗Reading and writingA weekend to rememberTask One: Predicting and scanning1. Go through the passage quickly and tell the genre (體裁體裁), the main idea, the structure (結構結構), the conjunctions (銜接詞銜接詞) in the passage. Genre (體裁體裁) : Narration (記敘文）記敘文） Exposition(說明文）說明文） Argumentation (議論文）議論文） Main

2、idea: _ _ Structure: _ Para 1: _ _ Para 2: _ Para 3: _ It tells us what the writer did and how he/she felt last weekend.Summary-part-summary (總分總）We went to the countryside last weekend and it was interesting and scary.What did we do and how did we feel in the countryside?Last weekend was exciting a

3、nd unforgettable.in the countrysidelast weekendthe writer and her familybecause the writers sister finished high school.set up a tent; slept; visited; tasted; bought giftsinteresting; scary; exciting; unforgettablefirst; then; on the first night; the next morning; then; after that; finally; all in a

4、ll;1. What did the writer do on the first night? _ _2. What happened to the writer the next morning? How did the writer feel？ _ _They just sat under the moon and tell each other stories, and the writer went to bed early.The writer saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. She felt scared and surprised

5、.Task Two: Skimming The writer talked to the villagers and tasted some delicious local food.The writer bought some lovely gifts. No, they werent.Task Three: Enjoy the beautiful sentences Discuss the points we should pay attention to (注意注意) when writing a narration (記敘文記敘文). Task Four: Summary While

6、writing a narration(記敘文記敘文), we should pay attention to (注意注意) these points:1. The elements of narration; (記敘文的六要素）記敘文的六要素）2. the structure and complicity；(結構清晰，篇章完整）結構清晰，篇章完整） 3. the conjunctions and fluency; (銜接自然，行云流水）銜接自然，行云流水） 4. the sentences; (語言優美，句式多樣）語言優美，句式多樣） 5. the person and tense; (人稱

7、時態一致，準確）人稱時態一致，準確） 6. the handwriting and the number of the words. （書面漂亮，整潔，清晰；字數達到要求）（書面漂亮，整潔，清晰；字數達到要求） Write an 80-word passage on the topic “ A/An weekend” based on the knowledge you learned from the passage in 6-7 minutes. Task Five: Writing Share each others writing and express your ideas abou

8、t the strong points (優點優點) and shortcomings (不不足足) of the writing and give some suggestions. Task Six: Sharing and evaluation (分享與評價分享與評價)Homework1. Rewrite the passage again to make it perfect; 2. Write the passage “A/ AnDay” based on the knowledge you learned in this period.書面表達訓練策略書面表達訓練策略 假設你是李華

9、，上周末你參加了一次郊游假設你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游(outing)。請。請根據下面表格中的提示信息寫一篇題為根據下面表格中的提示信息寫一篇題為“A pleasant outing”的英語短文，參加某英文報紙的征文比賽。的英語短文，參加某英文報紙的征文比賽。主要問題主要問題: :1.1.層次不清晰層次不清晰2.2.拼寫和語法錯誤多拼寫和語法錯誤多3.3.漢語思維痕跡過重漢語思維痕跡過重 A pleasant Outing Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. We had a great time. At 7:30

10、 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some

11、 girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didnt go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very happy. What a pleasant outing it was! A pleasant Outing Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. We had a great time. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school ga

12、te. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some b

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