2025年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫之寫好段落開頭句方法一：時間狀語從句Once/While/When/As/Themoment...,sb.dosth.簡單句：Shegotontothebus.改寫后：Oncethebusstopped,shegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.

車一停下來，她就立刻上了車，興奮中松了口氣。簡單句：Itbegantorain.改寫后：AsIwasleavingthehouse,itbegantorain.

我剛要離開家，就下雨了。方法二：讓步狀語從句的倒裝adj.+as/though+sb.was,sb.dosth.簡單句：Hewasexhaustedandhungry.

Hecrossedthefinishline.改寫后：Exhaustedandhungryashewas,hestillinsistedoncrossingthefinishline.

盡管他又累又餓，他仍然堅持沖過終點線。簡單句：Themanwasugly.

Hehadakindheart.改寫后：Uglythoughthemanwas,heboreakindheartaspureasadiamond.

盡管他很丑，但是懷有一顆鉆石一樣純凈的心方法三、形容詞或形容詞短語作狀語+獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)情緒形容詞1and情緒形容詞2，sb.dosth.

，+獨立主格簡單句：Jackkneltdown.Hewasdesperateandhopeless.Histearsfloweddownhisface.改寫后：Desperateandhopeless,Jackkneltdown,tearsstreamingdownhischeek.

絕望中，杰克跪下來，眼淚從臉頰流下。實例演練：（因腳傷被迫放棄馬拉松比賽，半年后，在父親的鼓舞下重新參加比賽并與總統(tǒng)握手的故事）OnhersecondmarathoninPortland,shehadherfootinjured.

Painfulandexhausted,Pattihadnochoicebuttostoprunning,eyesfilledwithdisappointment.Halfayearlater,PattiraninWashingtonandfinallyshookthehandofthePresident.

Unabletocontainherjoy,Pattichokedwithtearsspillingoutofhiseyes,"Withoutmyfather,Iwouldn'teupinthepetitiontoday.Itwashisencouragementandpanythatinspiredmetomoveon.”形容詞或形容詞短語作狀語例句Lost/deepinthought,shedidn’tseemtonoticethateveryonewaslookingather.她陷入沉思，似乎沒有注意到每個人都在看著她。Tiredandthirsty,hewenttotheteahouse

immediately.又累又渴，他直接去了茶館Warmhearted,myfatherevenvolunteeredtodrivethelittleboytohishome.我的父親是如此的熱心，以至于自愿開車把小男孩送回家。Puzzledandcurious,Aliceunwrappedherpresentsecretly.既困惑又好奇，愛麗絲偷偷打開了她的生日禮物。Nervousyetdetermined,Iraisedmyhead.緊張但是很堅定，我抬起我的頭。Unabletocontainherjoyandexcitement,shethrewherselfintohermother’sarms,murmuring,

“Thankyou.dearmum.”她難以抑制高興和激動，撲到母親的懷里，喃喃道,“謝謝你，媽媽。”有感而發(fā)類Seeingsth,Ifeltasifithadbeendoingandsaying,”........”看到某物，感覺某物好像在做某動作，并且說“（突出主題的話）”。舉例：1）女主人獨自走進森林迷路的故事,看到了直升機。Seeingthehelicopter,Janefeltasifithadbeenfortingherwithitsthunderousvoice,“Yourwaitingpaysoff.”看到那架直升機，簡覺得它好像在用雷鳴般的聲音安慰她，“你的等待是有回報的。”主人公亞瑟遇到了銀行搶劫，他巧妙把可能藏有贓款的行李箱

suitcase運到了警察局的故事。最后的升華句，能不能借用我們今天用到的句型呢？我們一起來看看Seeingthesuitcase,Arthurfeltasifithadbeenpraisinghim,“Yourdidgreatjob!”

看到手提箱，亞瑟覺得好像在稱贊他，“干得好！”3）主人公“我”與健忘媽媽一塊去旅游的故事。途中媽媽忘記了帳篷tent，媽媽執(zhí)意要返程尋找。看到帳篷的那一刻，你就可以用上這一句Seeingthetent,Ifeltasithadbeensighingandsaying,“Iwanttoexperiencetheoutsideworld.”看到帳篷，我感覺它一直在嘆息著說，“我想體驗外面的世界。”助人為樂類fromthenon+

行動

+Onlyinthiswaycouldmoreandmorepeople......(用倒裝)舉例：1)Fromthenon,Iwouldtrymybesttohelpsblikesb..Onlyinthiswaycouldmoreandmorepeoplehelpeachotherinthefuture.從那時起，我會盡我最大的努力幫助某些人，就像某人一樣。只有這樣，將來才能有越來越多的人互相幫助。Fromthenon,

Ihavekeptajackandsomemontoolsinmycar.Whenmeetingpeopleinneedontheroad,Iwouldtrymaybesttohelpthemlikeafamily.Onlyinthiswaycanmoreandmorepeoplehelpeachotherinthefuture.從那時起，我在我的車里放了一個千斤頂和一些常見的工具。當(dāng)我在路上遇到需要幫助的人時，我會盡力像家人一樣幫助他們。只有這樣，將來才能有越來越多的人互相幫助。動作+感動+感悟某人看到了某物或者拿著某物，眼淚毫無控制地流了下來。

正是...讓世界轉(zhuǎn)動，在某人的心里深深地感受到了這一點。(用強調(diào)句)sblookedatsth/heldsth,tearsrollingdown

uncontrollably.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoaround,whichsbfeltdeepinone’sheart.Heheldthecoinstightly,tearsrollingdown

uncontrollably.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoaround,whichBernardfeltdeepinhislittleheart.他緊緊地握著硬幣，眼淚毫無控制地流了下來。正是愛讓世界轉(zhuǎn)動，伯納德在他的心里深深地感受到了這一點。Itdawnedonmethat

amomentofkindnesscouldmeansomuchtoanother,

andthatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良對另一個人來說意義重大，而一個簡單的行為可以使世界變得如此美好。4.Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.有時候小小的善行，可能足以帶來巨大的改變。三、自我成長類1.追夢理念I(lǐng)t'snevertoolatetolearn./Eachindividualhastherighttopursuehisdreams.活到老，學(xué)到老。/每個人都有追求自己夢想的權(quán)利。2.終身學(xué)習(xí)Mostpeoplecangetonboardwiththeideaoflifelonglearning,butfewofusreallymittomakinglearningar