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拍攝北極熊遇險目錄CONTENTS1讀原文

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填表格2讀P1P2首句

定情節發展列大綱

兩段12句法3寫句式

招招升級45寫句式

招招升級

水到渠成

范文賞析1讀原文

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Onefall,

mywifeElliandI

hadasinglegoal：tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandI

cookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybear

followedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.2020年浙江卷6月真題原文Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws（爪子）.Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter（相遇）,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’ tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoI

approached

ouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar（吼叫）,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.

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（adj./v./短語）（主要）角色1acouple,wantingtophotopolarbears（主要）角色2ayoungmalepolarbearhungryandfierce背景事件MywifeandIwantedtophotographpolarbears.微情節

動作(v.)/情緒(adj.)

ElliandIcookeddinner.(p3)Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp(p4)Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactions.(p5)Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.(p6)Weusepepperspraytoburnthebear’seyes.(p7)ElliandI

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定情節發展Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp._______________________________________________________Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived._______________________________________________________2Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.P1大意P1角色續寫思路theangrybearElliandI

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定情節發展Theangrybearcamebackandhitthefencemorefiercely.ElliandI;

theangrybear2①Whatdidthebeardo?②Howdidwefeel?③Whatdidwedo?④howdidthebearreact?Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.P2大意P2角色續寫思路

動作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

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定情節發展Wewererescuedandphotographedthebearonboard.theangrybearElliandI

2②whatdidtheangrybeardo?①Seeingthehelicopter,howdidwefeel?whatdidwedo?ElliandI;

theangrybear③Afterbeingrescued,whatdidwedo?列大綱：兩段12句法3Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

列大綱：兩段12句法

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2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內容？

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列大綱：兩段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

結局/升華主旨續寫首段首句續寫二段首句承接首段首句3Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Itwasanunforgettableexperience.Itsmashedthefencemadly.Thehelicopterthrewaropetous.Thebearwasnearingus.Wewereterrified.

Ellifetchedthegarlicbread.Wethrewthebreadtoit.Thebreadusedup.Weclimbeditquickly.

Wewererescued.Thebearheadedforourcamp.

Iphotoedthebear.3Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.寫句式

招招升級4Step4.寫句式

招招升級

e.g.:1）Angeroverwhelminghim,hesmashedhispawsmadlyagainstthewirefence,thrustinghissharpclawsatus.2）Suddenly,Ellidashedtothekitchen,shoutingthatshewenttofetchthegarlicbread.3）Atthisonce-in-a-lifetimemoment,Ireachedintomybackpackandpulledoutthecamera,photographingthatimpressivescene.招式1：

非謂語動詞常用句式：①...,doing②Doing...,.....③Havingdone...,...

寫句式

招招升級e.g.:4）MuchasIwantedtophotographtheapproachingbear,mysurvivalinstinctovertookmydesiretocapturetheperfectphoto.招式2：as引導倒裝句，意為“雖然”

...as主+謂，xxx.

4Step4.寫句式

招招升級

e.g.:5）Withnothingtoeat,theguywildlybangedagainandshovedthewoodenpostswhichwereevidentlycollapsing!6）Withthisangrygiantbeastwithinastone'sthrow,IhuddledwithEllitightly.招式3：

with復合結構常用句式：

with復合結構：with+n.+doing/done/todo/介詞/adj...

寫句式

招招升級

e.g.:7）Thrilledbutrelieved,wecaughttheropetightlyandeventuallylandedonthehelicoptersafeandsound.招式4：

形容詞作狀語，表示情緒感受

常用句式：①Adj.+adj.,...②...,adj.+adj.4

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范文賞析5Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Angeroverwhelminghim,hesmashedhispawsmadlyagainstthewirefence,thrustinghissharpclawsatus.MuchasIwantedtophotographtheapproachingbear,mysurvivalinstinctovertookmydesiretocapturetheperfectphoto.Suddenly,Ellidashedtothekitchen,shoutingthatshewenttofetchthegarlicbread.Thenwethrewthebreadattheintruderalittlebitatatimeuntilitranout.Withnothingtoeat,theguywildlybangedagainandshovedthewoodenpostswhichwereevidentlycollapsing!Withthisangrygiantbeastwithinastone'sth