顧家北0813精品班作文大作文Maｎypｅoplethinkiｔｉsvｅｒyimpｏrtanｔtｏｐrotecｔthｅenviｒonmentbｕttheymaｋｅnoeｆforttodｏiｔthemｓelvｅs.Whyｄoyoｕthinkｉtisｔhｅｃasｅ？Whatacｔioｎsｃaｎbedonetｏensｕreｔhatindivｉduaｌｓpｒoｔecttheenviｒonmｅｎt？

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hｅtwofigures.第二篇ＴhebarchaｒtsprovｉdeｕsinｆormatioｎabｏｕthoｗfaｍiｌiesiｎanAsiａnｃｏuntrｙspenttheirｍoneｙin1９９8anｄ２0２３．Aglａｎｃeatthechａｒtsｔｅlｌｓtｈａｔexpenｄitureonｄiffeｒｅntgooｄsin20２3overwｅighedthatin１99８eｘｃｅpttｈａt(yī)sｐｅnｔonclothｅs.Peoｐlｅgａｖemucｈmoreｐrｉorｉｔｙtospirｉｔｕalenjｏｙmeｎｔwhｉchｌｅadtoahugeｉncrｅaseｏｆｅxｐenｄiｔureonholiday,eａｔingouｔ，readiｎg(nｅwspapｅrsａndmａgazines)anｄgoingtoｃｉnema,rｉsｉngfｒom8％ｔo１5％,６%to１5％，３%to８％ａnd3%to5%respectiｖeｌy.Ｔｈecostsforeｌeｃｔronicgoodsalsoiｎｃｒeａｓedfrom12％to14%dｕringthｅdecａde.Tｈｅonlｙdiffｅrenceｉsexpenditureoncloｔhｅswhiｃｈｗａsｔoｔaｌlyoppｏｓiｔeｔoｔｈemainstｒeaｍ.Thｅprｏportiｏｎoｆitwａｓ10％ｉn19９８;hoｗeveriｔdroppｅdtｏｈalfofitsｏｒｉginalratesin2023.Aｌlｉnalｌ,ｔhepａst１0yeａｒｓwitｎessedahuｇecｈangeofｔheeｘpｅnditurｅｏnvariousofasｐectｓfoｒｈoｕsｅｈｏlｄs.第三篇ThｅｃhａrtｓtellthｅpｒoｐｏｒtionｏfｄiｆferenｔｃategoriesofhousepeopleｌiveｉnｔｈreepartsofAusｔraｌiain2０２3ａnd２０２3.In2０23,Vicｔoｒiaｈad76%ｒeｓｉdentsiｎhｏｕsｅ,１２％iｎseｍi-ｄｅtaｃｈedｈouｓe,11%ｉnapａrtmentｓaｎｄtherestinotｈeｒｔｙpｅs．InNSW，hoｕseａｌsoａｃcoｕnｔedfｏrｔhelargesｔparｔｏf66%,with1０%ａnｄ13％inｄｕplｅｘandflaｔrespｅctｉvelｙ.Andmｏreｐeopleｌｉvedinothｅrkiｎds.Taｓmanｉahａdlaｒgesｔpropoｒtionofｈｏuselｉｖｉngpopulatiｏn,ｗhichrｅａcｈes8８%．Fiveyeaｒslater，ｔheratｅｓfｏrhｏusｅalｌdroppｅｄ2%iｎtheｔｈreeregｉonｓ．Asforseｍi-dｅtachedhoｕsｅ,Victｏｒia,ＮSＷａndTaｓmaｎiasaw１%incｒease,1percentdeｃｒeasｅandsｔabiliｔyreｓpｅｃtｉvelｙ.Theｆigureｓｏfflaｔallhadaｓlighｔｌyiｎcreaｓｅ.Aｎdｆｏrｔhｅｒｅstｕnmentionｅｄｔｙpes,thｅyｒｅmaｉnｅdtｈeｓameat1%eｘｃeptNSWrｏsｅｆｒoｍ11%to12%．ThetaｂｌecｏmparesｆｉｖeEuroｐeancountrieｓinteｒｍsｏftｈeｐropｏrtionsoｆunｅmｐloｙｅｄｐeopｌeasweｌlasthefiguｒesfortｈoｓｅｙoｕngpｅopleoutofwork.Ｐolａndｈadtｈeｈighｅｓｔｙｏuthuｎemｐloymenｔrateａt(yī)3７%,ｎeaｒlyfivｅtiｍeｓthｅｌeveｌｉnDenmark.Ｔheleｖelsｏfuｎempｌoymentfｏｒyoｕnｇpeoｐlewｅresiｍilaｒinothercouｎtｒies,ｗiththehigｈｅstseｅninIｔalｙ２3％aｎdｔｈeｌowestｉnGermaｎyａｔ17%.Itiｓcｌeaｒfromｔheｔabletｈatinalltheｓecouｎtｒies,theuneｍployｍeｎｔrａt(yī)ｅｆorｔｈeｙounｇergｅnerａt(yī)iｏnwａshigｈerｔhaｎｔｈeoverallunemploymｅｎtfigｕres．Intereｓｔinｇly,Pｏlanｄ,Ｇermaｎy，IｔalyanｄＨｕngaryｈadsimilaｒuｎemｐlｏymentrates,ranginｇｂeｔweeｎ1５%ａnd18%.TｈeｆigurefoｒＤenｍaｒkwassignｉficａｎtｌyｌoweｒaｔ3％.Overaｌｌ,youthuneｍployｍentwａsmoreｓeriousinPｏlａndtｈａninothercountｒiｅs．Denmarkhadthelowｅstfigｕresforboｔhyouthunemｐlｏymentａndoverallｕｎemｐloyｍｅnｔ,whilｅoｔherｃounｔｒiesｈadsｉmilarfｉｇuｒesfortｈｅｓｅproｂleｍｓ.流程圖寫作Thｅchartｉllustratesｈowtousｅｃocoａbｅanｓtｏproducｅsｅvｅrａlfoodiｔｅmｓforcuｓtomeｒs.Firstｌy,ｗholｅbeansarｅcarefｕlｌｙpickingbeｆｏrｅdryｉngintｈesｈell.Tｈenｔｈeyaｒepressedｉnｔococｏａliqｕor,whicｈisthｅmainmａt(yī)erialofthesecoｎｄｓtagｅ.Thｅｎcocoaliｑuorisfurｔherpresｓeduntilｉｔｂeｃomesａcocaｃake，whｉcｈisdirｅctlｙsｅｎｔｔoindusｔｒyｔomaｋｅｃakeｓanddrinkｓorissｏｌｄtothｅｃonsumeraftｅrgrｉnｄeｄintocoｃoapowｄeｒ.Thecoｃoalｉquorｃanalｓoｃonveｒｔｉnｔoｃoｃoａａndｔhｅnbeseｎｔｔorｅｌeｖanｔｉnduｓtry.Cｏcoaｌiquor,afｔeｒfuｒtｈerｒeｆining，mixwｉthｃocoａandsｕgarturnstoinｄｕstrychocolate.Finishｅdcｈocolatepｒoｄuctswillbeｐutoｎtheｓhell,ｂeｆorｅｔｈeｆｉｎalproceｓs.Aｌlｉnalｌ,cocoabeanｓcanbｅｕsｅdtoproduｃecｏcoapｏｗder,cｈocolateｐｒoｄuctsａｎdｉngｒｅｄｉentｓfｏrｒelevaｎtｉｎｄusｔrythｒoｕghthreesimpｌestagesstartiｎgfｒompre-prｏcｅsｓｉｎgrawmaterialｔoｆiｎalpacｋaginｇforselｌ．顧家北Ｔhｅwｈolebｅansarepicｋedａt(yī)theｆiｒstsｔageｗｉthｓhellsrｅmoved,anｄｔhenｄrieｄａndprｅｓseduｎtｉｌcocoaliｑuoｒisｃrｅatｅd.Thiｓｍarkｓtｈestaｒｔoｆtheｓecｏｎdｓtage,wｈｉcｈｉnｖoｌvesthreepｒoｃesｓeｓ．Tｈｅcｏcoａlｉquｏrcanbeusedｔoｍakｅｃｏcacakesｉnthｅｆirstｏption.Anotherchoiceisthemaｎufactｕｒｅofcoｃoａ,whilecｏcoaliｑuｏriｓrｅfineｄｉntｈethirdpｒｏcesｓtｏproｄｕceindｕstrialcｈocｏlaｔe．Inthefiｎａlｓｔage，ｔhesematerialsarｅprocｅssｅdfurtｈｅrtoｃｒeatedｉfferentendｐroductsfｏreitheｒｃｏrｐｏrateclｉｅntsoroｒｄinarｙcｏnsumeｒs.Cocacaｋesａｒｅｇrouｎdiｎtocoｃoapｏwｄｅrfｏrinｄiｖiduａｌconsumers,ｏrｄirectlｙｄeｌivｅrｅdtocaterｉｎgbusiｎｅsseswhicｈpｒoｖidedrinksandcakes.Coｃｏａiｎtheｓｅconｄｐrｏｃeｄｕremenｔioｎeｄearlieriｓaｌsoｔransportedtothesebusiｎｅsses.Iｎcｏntrast，thｅinｄustrｉalchocolａｔeｉsｆlａvoｒedwiｔhsuｇａr,ａndfinｉshｅｄｃｈocolateproductsaｒesubsequentlｙavaiｌaｂleｆoｒｃｏnsuｍers.第一篇Thetａbｌeｐroviｄeｓｕsｗｉthdａt(yī)aoｆthｅｐｅrｃentagｅofｃｏnｓｕmeｒeｘpenditureoｎｄiｆfeｒｅntiｔemsinfiveｃountｒiesin2023．ThebiggestnumberexｉsteｄinＴｕｒkey,wｈｅrepeｏｐleｓpｅnt３2.14％oftheiriｎcoｍｅｏnｆooｄ，drinkandtoｂａｃcｏ,aｌmｏstfivetｉmeｓthenumberofpercentagesｐenｔoncｌoｔhing(6.63%)ａｎdeiｇhttiｍestheｆiguｒeofperｃｅｎtagespeｎｔonspiriｔuaｌeｎjoyment.ＣｏmingｎextisＩrｅlanｄ,whoｓepｅrcentａgeofnaｔiｏnａlｃonsｕmｅrexｐendituｒeｏｆeaｔingｗaｓ28.91％.Cｏｓtsｆoｒcｌotｈｉngandfｏotwearａccoｕｎtｅdfoｒoｎly６.43%,ｔhreetimesｔheeｘｐｅnｄitｕｒeｏflｅisureaｎdedｕcatiｏn.Sｐａiｎtooｋｔheｔｈｉrdplaｃeｔhoughthepｒopoｒtionｏfiｔsnａｔｉoｎalconｓｕmerｅｘpendiｔuｒｅwasthｅlowest(1.98％).ＥxpeｎｄitureoｆfoｏditeｍsiｎSｐainacｃｏｕntedfor1８．8%，tｈreefｏlｄthefｉgureｏｆiｔsｃlothinｇspｅnding．ItaｌyaｎdSwｅｄｅｎciｔizenshadsmａllperｃeｎtａgesofiｎｃoｍespenｔｏnfooｄ（１6．３6%，15.77%),onlyaboｕthalfｔhefiｇureｏfTｕｒkeｙ.Howｅver,theirclothinｇcｏｓts(9%,5．4%)aｎdspiｒituａｌｐay-oｕｔｓ(３.２%,3．22%)weｒerｅlativｅlyhigh.Ｉnanｕｔsheｌl，thepｅrｃentageｓｏfｎatioｎalconsumerｅxｐeｎdiｔureｂycａｔegｏｒｙin2023varieｄａｌotaｍoｎgtｈefivecｏuntriｅs.Buｔａｌlshａredsoｍesimｉlaｒities,namely,larｇestｐｒｏportionofexpｅnｄｉtｕreｏnfood,drｉnkandｔｏｂaｃｃoandｓmaｌlesｔpercentageｏfｌｅｉsureaｎdｅducatiｏncosts.第二篇TheｂａrｃｈaｒtsshowｔheｎuｍbeｒｏfｍａｒriａgesａnｄdivｏrcesiｎUSAandmａritalstaｔusofＡmｅｒicanａdultsduringtｈeperioｄｏf197０to202３．Tｈenumberoｆｍarriagｅsrｅmａinedat2.５ｍilliｏｎin1970and1９80，aｆterwｈichithadaslightｌydecｒｅａsｅto2mｉlliｏnin2０２3．Thediｖorceｓnuｍbersｔａrｔｅdfoｒm1millｉｏniｎ１9７0aｎdsｕddeｎlｙｉncｒｅasedｔoalmosｔ1.5ｍilｌiondｕriｎgthatdecａde.Theniｔdｒｏppedtｏnearlｙ1mｉlｌioｎｉn1980andfinａllｙreａcｈedtoitssｔａｒt（１milｌioｎ）.Theｐerｃenｔaｇｅofneｖｅrmarrｉｅdaduｌtswas15%iｎ1970anｄthefｉgｕrｅiｎclinｅdto２０%thirtyyearslater.Ｔｈepｒｏｐｏrtioｎsofbｏthmａｒrieｄandwidｏｗedaduｌtsｓawdroｐsduriｎgthethrｅedｅcaｄeｓ.Marｒiedａdultsaccｏuntedｆor70％in1９70whiｌｅｔｈefigurewaslesｓthａn60％in2023．Aｓfｏrdｉvorcerａｔｅ,ｉthａdasignificantrisｅformnearly0%toalmost1０%.Ａlｌiｎalｌ，ｔheｐerｉodfrom１９70ｔo2023wiｔｎeｓsｅdａｈugechanｇeofmaｒriagesanｄｄｉvorcesinAmeriｃa.Bothtｈetotaｌｎumberanｄpｅｒcｅｎtageofmａrriageｄecreａsedｗｈileｔｈepｒｏｐoｒtｉoｎsoｆnevermａｒｒiedａnｄdｉvｏｒcedｐeoｐｌesawanupｗardｔrｅnd.流程圖Thetwodiagramｓilｌustraｔｅhｏwtoproｄｕｃecｅｍenｔａndhowtousecｅmeｎtｔｏproｄuceconcrｅtｅ．Ｃｅmenｔprｏductioｎｉsreｌaｔｉｖelycomｐlｅxａｎｄusestｗomatｅriａｌs.Ｆirstly,limestoneaｎdｃｌａyarepｌacedinｔhecrusher,wheretｈesemａt(yī)eｒiaｌｓarecｒｕsｈeｄｂｙthecrｕｓｈer.Thenｐｏwdｅrismixedbｙtｈemiｘｅr,ｂefoｒebeingheatedbytｈerｏtaｔingheateｒ.Atthenextstage，heatedpowｄeriｓsentｔｏthegrind,wｈｅreｉtiｓgroundeｄｉｎtoceｍent.Ａndfｉnalｌycｅmｅntiｓｐａｃkｅdinｔｈｅbａgs.Ｃｏncrｅtｅｐroductionｉsrelativelysimpｌe.15%ofcemeｎt，10%ofwａt(yī)ｅr,25％ofsanｄａnd5０%oｆgravel，namelysmallstoｎｅsａremixintheｃoncｒetｅmixer,whｅrethｅytｕｒｎedｏuttｏｂｅｃoncｒｅte．Alliｎaｌｌ，cｅmentpｒｏducｔioｎｉncluｄｅs５staｇesandthｅｏｕｔcomeceｍeｎｔisoneofthefoｕrraｗmaｔeriaｌsoｆtheconｃretｅproduｃtiｏn.地圖Themａｐsshowhowanａreachaｎgｅddurｉngtｈeｐeriodｏf1780to202３.Ｉn1780,theｒeweｒe100hｏmeslｏcateｄonｔhenorth-eａsterｎｃorneｒwithｗoｏｄｓtotｈesouth.Arivercrossedtｈeａreafroｍsoｕthtonｏrｔｈwithfourfarmsintheｍiddleoftheregiｏn.80yearslａt(yī)er，thenumbeｒoｆｄwelｌinｇpｌacｅsdｏubｌeｄto２00,wｈilｅｔhenｕmbｅｒｏfｆarmsdｒoppｅdbｙhaｌｆandwoodsalsoｓhｒａnkinsｉze.Ａｒｏadwasbuilｔｉnthenorｔhａrea,cｏnnecｔｉngtｈeｌｉvingｐlacetｏｔｈeｒiver.Anoｔhermａjoｒcｈaｎｇｅisｔhａt(yī)abridgeｗaｓcｏｎstｒｕctｅｄovertheriver.Iｎ2023,ｔhenuｍberoｆhoｍeｓsuｄｄeｎlyｉｎcrｅａsｅdto500aｎdanewｌybuiltrｏad,heａdingtoｗａrdssｏｕthrｅplacｅdｆaｒｍandwｏodsaｒｅa,whｉchlinkedtｈedwellingpｌacestｏthesｃhoｏlandｓpｏrtsfieldinthesouth．Seｖｅraｌｓhoｐsopeｎedtothｅrightｓideofthedowｎstｒｅaｍｒiverｗithawｅtlandｆorbirdstotｈeｉrsoｕth.Oｖｅｒalｌ,thｉｓａｒeasａwanincreaseｉnconstructionssuchａsdwｅｌlinｇｐlａceｓ,schｏolsandｆacilities,altｈoughfarmｌaｎdaｎdfｏrｅｓtswerｅｒemｏvedｆorｎewｂｕiｌｄinｇsandtranｓｐortiｎfraｓtructure．大作文Weｌiveincｉｔiesortｏｗnswｈiｃhｈａｖemuseumsdisｐlａyinghistoriｃaｌandcｕlturａlimpｏｒｔance，butｐeopledoｎotvisiｔｔheｍ.Whydoyouｔhinｋpeopledonotｖisiｔｍｕsｅumsiｎtｈｅirloｃaｌareas?Whａｔistheｉｍｐoｒｔanceｏｆmｕseumsｔｏsｏcietｙ？顧家北Ｖisitｉｎgmuseumsiｓhardlｙａrewarｄingeｘｐerienceｆoｒmanypeople,soｔheywillnotconsiderthｉsoptiｏnwhenｔheycaｎspendlｅｉsuｒetｉｍeonoｔhｅracｔivitiｅs.Thesｅｍuｓｅuｍsｄonotorgaｎｉzenｅweｘｈiｂiｔionｓｔhatcankeｅpuｐwithｔhｅtreｎｄs，ｏrprovideanyformｏfentertainｍｅｎtlikeiｎteracｔｉvｅｇaｍestoattraｃｔtheyouｎｇaudｉencｅ．Thｉsiswhyatrｉptoａmuseumcanharｄlycomｐetefoｒaｔtｅntionｗitｈspoｒts,pｉcｎicsａｎｄpaｒties．Aｎoｔherreasonｉsthatpｅoｐｌｅcaｎgａt(yī)hｅrinfｏrmatiｏnabｏuｔthoseartefａctsoｎdisplaｙontｈeIｎterｎｅt.Theywiｌｌincｒｅaseknoｗleｄｇeaｂouｔthestoriesｂｅhinｄandtｈeculturalvalｕeｏｆeacｈitem,wｉtｈｏutｈaviｎgtｏvｉsitｉｎｇtheｍuｓeuminpｅrｓｏn.Musｅumscａnｅncourageｖｉsｉtors’ｉnteresｔiｎthｅircultuｒalheritaｇeａndｄisseｍｉnatｅknｏｗledｇｅａｂoutacitｙoｒaｃounty’sｃｕltｕｒａlasseｔs．Somｅexhibiｔionｓmayshowaｎｃiｅｎtuｔｅnsｉlｓusedbypｒevioｕｓgenｅｒatｉｏns,sｏpeopｌewhoaｔｔenｄｔｈeｓeｅxhｉｂｉtiｏnsmａyｈaｖeagｏodideaofhoｗｔｒaditｉonalfｏoｄwａscoｏked.Ｓoｍehｉstoricalｄoｃumｅntｓaｎdｐaintｉｎgsmighｔｓhowthearｃhitecturalstylewhichuｓeｄtopｒedｏminate,andmanｙｖiｓiｔｏｒｓｍightbeiｍpressedｂythearcｈiｔecturalachｉｅvｅｍentsｏftheirancesｔorｓ.Ｗiｔhsuchｋnowlｅｄge,tｈeseｖisitｏrsｍａymａkｅanｅffｏrtｔopreseｒｖesometraditｉｏnsaｎdkｅｅpsｏｍｅold-fasｈionｅｄcｏｏkingskillｓorｂuildingtｅｃhniquｅsalｉvｅ.Museumshａveａlsobeenoｐeraｔingasaｃｅnteroｆlearｎing,whereyｏungpeｏplecａnkeepuｐｔｏdaｔewiｔhｔhecutting-edgetechnologyindifferentfｉeｌds．Ｔｈeａviatiｏnmusｅums，ｆｏrｅｘａmple,giｖechiｌｄrｅnaglｉmpｓeoｆtｈｅａirｌiｎｅindustrｙandｅｖenｓｐacetravｅl,incｌuｄingｓｐacｅｓhipsａｎdequipmeｎtsｕｐpｏrtinｇastronauｔswhoｅｘｐｌoredtheｏuterspａｃｅ．Tｈemuseuｍｏｆarcheｏloｇycanshowthｅmｈoｗsomesｐecieshａｖｅdiedoｕt,anｄpoｓsiblyiｎｓｐｉrethemｔoｄｏｒｅｓearｃhｉnbiolｏｇyaｎdextｅndourknoｗledgeofhowtopreseｒveｏｕｒeｃｏsysｔem.Theycoｕｌdｎotｍaｋecｏntｒibutｉｏnｓtosocialpｒogresｓ,ifｔｈｅydiｄnotｈaveaｃceｓｓtoｓuchｋnowledge．Recenｔｌy,anincreａｓinｇnumberofpeoｐｌerefusedtopａyａｖｉsitｔｏmｕseｕmsｉｎtｈｅirlｏｃａlplａｃｅs．Ｐersoｎａlly,ｆollowingreasoｎsmayacｃｏuｎtfortｈepheｎomenon.Ｓomeｐｅoplereckonｍuseuｍsａｓboｒｉｎgｐlacｅssotｈaｔtheｙａrｅnevｅrwiｌlingtovｉsit.Ｆorｅｘample,tｈehｉstｏｒｉｃalａndｃulturａlimpｏｒtａnceｄisｐlａｙedthｅreｈasneveｒｃhangｅdａｎdthereisnoｅntertaｉnmｅnｔ,ｓuchasintｅractivｅｇameｓ.Allｔhesetｅndtoleftpｅｏpleａboｒinｇfeｅling.Incontraｓt,peoｐlepｒefertojoinsomeinｔerestinｇaｃtivitieｓｓuｃｈaｓballgames,piｃｎicandｄinｉngout.Anotherｒeａsonｉsthａt(yī)nowadayspeopleｌearnｈistoryandａｃquirｅｓｃienceknowledgｅthroughinterｎetraｔherｔｈaｎgoｔoliｂrarｙinｐｅrson．Informatiｏnoftｈeeｘhibitｉｏn＇stｈｅhisｔoricａｌvａlｕeandｓtorycanｂeeａsilyａcｃesｓedoｎline.Ｈowevｅｒ,visｉtiｎgmｕseｕｍspｌayａｎｉｍportａntroｌeintraｄｉtioniｎheriting.Ancｉentvｅsselsｐroviｄeuswithｔｒaditioｎalcｏokiｎgmetｈodswhileｍｕralsｅnabｌeustｏｃoｍpｒｅhｅｎdstyleofａnciｅｎtaｒchiteｃtｕｒetosomedegree.Ｉtisadvantageｏusｆorｙounｇpeｏpletoｐasｓｏntｈecultｕreiftheｙhaｖeagoｏdacknowledgeoftheirｏwntraｄｉｔionbｙvisitinｇmｕseｕmｓ.Ａddｉtionalｌy，ｍuseumsｏｆferｕstｈemostａdvanceｄscｉｅnｃｅａｎdtechｎology,whｉｃhisbenefｉｃｉａltｏtｈeｄeｖelｏpmenｔofthesoｃiety．Thｅlateｓtdeｖelopmenｔofspaｃｅanduｎiversｅｉｎｏurｃountryｃａｎｂeacquiredｉnspａcemusｅumsandtｈeyouｎgcａnuｎｄｅrsｔａnｄthereasonofcrｅａt(yī)uｒeeｘtiｎｃtｉoｎthrｏughｖiｓｉtingarcｈaｅｏlogymuseｕms.Ｍuｓeuｍｓcanmotivateｔｈeinterestsｏftheaｄｏｌｅsｃｅntsａｎdtheyouｎgwｉllacceｌerａt(yī)estheｄｅvｅlopmentｏfsｏｃietｙiｎthefutuｒe．Ｏveｒall，vｉsitingmuseumｓｉsoｆｇreａｔsignｉfiｃanceforbotｈtｈｅｉｎｄividualｓ’compｒeｈｅndiｎgofｃultureaｎdtheｄevelopｍentofoｕrｓoｃiｅtｙ．顧家北Visiｔingmｕseuｍｓishａrdlyarewardｉnｇexperienceformａｎｙpｅoplｅ,sotheywｉｌlnotｃonsｉderthiｓoptｉoｎwhｅntheycanｓpｅｎdlｅisｕrｅtimeonｏtheractivitｉｅｓ.Theｓeｍuｓeuｍsdonotorｇａｎiseneweｘｈｉbiｔiｏnsthatｃankeepupｗiththetｒｅnｄｓ,orprｏviｄeａnyfｏrｍｏfenｔertaｉnｍenｔlikeiｎteｒactｉvegamesｔｏattｒacttheyoｕｎgａudience.Thisiswhyaｔriｐｔｏａmｕsｅｕmcaｎhardlycompeｔeforattｅntionｗiｔhｓportｓ,picnｉcsanｄparties.AｎotｈerreａsｏnisthaｔpeoplecangatｈｅrinｆormationaｂoutthoseartｅfactｓondiｓpｌaｙontheIntｅrnet.Tｈeywiｌlｉnｃreasekｎoｗleｄgeabｏuｔｔｈｅstorieｓbehindandtheｃulturａlｖalueｏfｅachｉｔem,ｗiｔhoｕthavingtｏvisｉtinｇtheｍusｅuｍinpersoｎ.Museumｓcaｎｅnｃouｒageｖisitors’ｉntｅｒestintheｉrcultｕrａlｈeritaｇeａnddissｅmｉｎaｔeknowledgｅａboutacityoｒａcounty’scuｌｔuralaｓsetｓ．Sｏmeｅxhibiｔionｓmayshowａｎｃiｅnｔuteｎsilsusedbypreviouｓgeｎeratiｏns,sｏpｅoｐlewhoaｔtenｄtheseeｘｈibｉtionsmａyhaｖeagｏｏdiｄeaofhowtraditionａlｆｏｏdwaｓcoｏked.Ｓomehiｓtoricaldoｃumentsａndpａintｉｎgsmigｈtshowthｅarｃhitｅｃｔｕｒａlsｔylｅｗｈiｃhusedtopredoｍiｎate,aｎｄｍanyｖisitorsmｉghｔｂｅiｍｐressedbyｔhearｃhiteｃｔｕralaｃｈｉeｖemeｎｔsoftｈeiranceｓtors．Wiｔhｓｕchknowｌedｇe,thｅｓeｖiｓｉtorsmaｙmaｋeaｎｅfforｔtopreｓeｒvesomeｔraditioｎｓａndkeepsomeｏｌd－faｓｈｉoneｄcookｉｎgsｋiｌlsorbuildｉnｇｔechｎiqｕｅsａlive.Museumsｃａｎalsoprｏｖiｄeuswｉthｔｈelatｅsttｅchnologicａladvanｃeｓ,whｉｃhisbenｅｆiciaｌｔoｔｈedeveloｐｍｅｎtofｔhesｏｃｉety.Ｆｏrexamplｅ,ｔheａvｉａt(yī)ioｎmｕseｕｍｓoｆfｅｒuslａt(yī)estknoｗｌedgeofａeｒoｎauticswhilethearｃhａeoloｇymuseuｍshelpuｓcomprehendtｈｅreasonofｅｘtiｎcｔiｏn.Thiｓiｓｗhｙmuseｕmｓcannｏtｏnlymｏtiｖaｔeｔｈeinｔerｅstsoｆtｅenagersbutaｌｓoencｏｕragethｅmｔｏstｕｄｙhardinalｏngrun,ｗｈichwiｌlacceleratｅｔｈeiｍprｏｖeｍentofｔhesocietyｉnｔheｆｕture.（Seｌｆ-wｒitｔeｎｐａrａgraph)Theaｖiatioｎmuseumsｓpaceships,ｓhuttleｓ,aｓｔroｎauｔs,exｐloretheouｔersｐaｃe,Someｐeopｌethinkuｎｉversiｔyｅduｃationshouldｐrovｉdestuｄentswｉthｓkｉllsofemploｙmｅntｉntｈefｕtureｗhilｅothｅrsbeliｅveｔhatpeopleｓｈｏuｌdｆｏｃusｏnａcaｄemiｃstuｄyｏnlｙ.Discuｓsbｏthviewsａnｄgiｖeyｏuｒoｗｎopiｎiｏn.Sｏmeｐeｏplethiｎkthｅinｃreasingbusｉｎessaｎｄculturalcontactbeｔweencountｒiesbrinｇsmａnyposｉｔiveefｆｅcts.Oｔheｒssaｙitcauｓestｈeｌosｓofｎationalideｎtiｔies.Disｃussonbothsidesandｇｉｖeyｏuropｉniｏｎ．Peoplｅreｌｙｍoreｏnfｏreignpｒodｕctsandimitaｔetrａdiｔionsaｎｄｃultureoｆｏtｈercountrｉes,whichleaｄtoahardwａytoｐassoｎｔheｉrowｎculｔuｒｅ.Forｉnstanｃｅ,ｔoomuchrelianceｏnｔheforｅｉgncoｓｍeｔｉｃｓwｉllsurelyshrinｋtｈedｅｍandoｆdomesｔｉcｍａｒkｅt，whiｃｈreqｕirｅｓｔｈｅｌoｃａlindustｒyｔｏdownsｉzewoｒｋforceanｄthustrａdｉtionalwａysofmakingupｗｉllbｅａbaｎｄonｅｄ.Additiｏnally,thｏsewhｏａreiｎｆａvoroｆｃeleｂｒaｔiｎgoｔhｅrs’festｉｖａlsｔｅndｔogiｖelessprioritytｏtｈeｉrowｎtraｄitionｓ.Tｈｉｓwｉllｐuｔtheintanｇibｌeculturehｅritａgeforｍoｕraｎceｓtｏrｓｉnadａｎgerousｓiｔuａt(yī)ioｎ.Mａnyｃｏｕntriesｓpｅndalotofｍoneyiｎａrｔ.Sｏmepeoｐlｅｔhinkinｖｅｓｔmentinarｔiｓｎeｃessary，bｕtothｅrssaｙmoneyisbetterspｅntonpｕbｌｉcservicｅsａｎdfａcilｉties.Ｄiscｕssbothviewsanｄgiveyｏurownｏpiｎiｏn．翻譯練習１.人們對政府贊助藝術(gｏvernmentｓpｏnsorshiｐ）有不同的見解,特別在國家碰到預算問題的時候。Peoplehaveadopｔeｄdifｆerｅntａt(yī)titudeｓtowardsｇoveｒｎｍentsponsorshipoｆarts，eｓpecｉａllywｈentｈｅirｃountｒieｓ’buｄgetsaｒeｉntherｅd.2．我覺得我們應當一方面注重基礎設施,只有政府有盈余的時候才去投資藝術。Peｒｓonａlly，weshoulｄgiveｐｒｉoｒｉtyｔothepuｂlicservｉcesａndfａciｌities，whｉleｉｎveｓtmenｔｉnartsiｓanopｔｉoｎonlywhenfｉnanceiｓｓurｐlus.3.很多人支持藝術的投資認為藝術可以讓我們的城市更加地美麗和吸引人。Ｔｈoｓewhoａreinfavorｏfarｔsinｖestmentshaｒbortｈeｉdeaｔｈatartseｎableoｕrcityｔobeamorｅgloriｏusandａt(yī)ｔｒactiｖｅone.４.藝術作品譬如說雕塑，繪畫，塑像，可以讓我們的公共場合,譬如說圖書館、地鐵站、甚至公共廁所都非常地美麗。Ａｒtwｏｒks,suchaｓｓculptuｒｅs,paintingsaｎdstａt(yī)ues,willadｄｃoｌortothepｕblｉｃｐlaces,suchａsliｂｒarieｓ,ｍｅtrｏstatｉoｎｓａndevｅnrestrooｍs．5.假如藝術行業(yè)繁榮發(fā)展，城市的建筑也有各種風格，我們可以更好地享受城市的生活。Pｒospｅrｏuｓｄevｅloｐmeｎtｏｆartswillleadｔoｖａriousｓｔｙlｅsofarchitectｕres,ｔhuswｅｗilleｎjoyａbeｔteｒcitylife．6.接觸藝術讓我們減少壓力,也會讓我們心情更好。Ａrtｓwillalsoｌoadoffｏurprｅｓsureandthusｐｒｏｖideuｓwitｈabｅtｔｅrｍood.主體部分第二段7．雖然藝術如此重要，很多人認為公共設施更加應當獲得政府的資助。Althouｇhartｉsoｆsｏgｒeａt(yī)ｓｉgnificance，amａjｏrityoｆｐｅoplerｅckoｎthａt(yī)ｉnfrａsｔrｕctuｒｅsareｍoｒeimperativetobesｐonsorｅd.8.普通公民對公共設施（譬如說,水電供應,學校,圖書館,道路）更感愛好,這些設施對他們生活質(zhì)量有直接的影響。Comｍoncｉｔｉｚensaｒemorｅｃｏｎｓcｉousｏfpuｂlicserｖｉｃes(eｌectｒiｃｉｔyａnｄwaｔｅrｓｕpｐly,scｈooｌs,ｌｉbｒａｒｉesandroads）,siｎcetｈeｓeaｒewhatｄirｅctlyｃontrｉbuteｔothｅiｒｌivingｑuａlity.9.好的衛(wèi)生條件和獲得干凈水可以提高大眾的健康和減少疾病，而學校和圖書館可以普及知識,提高人們的工作前景。Ａcｃesｓｔｏsanitaryconditｉoｎanｄpｕrｉfieｄwatｅrcａnimpｒovepublic’sｆitｎｅsｓanddecreａsedisｅａseswhiｌｅschoolｓanｄlｉbｒariesspreadacｋｎｏｗｌedｇｅsｏaｓｔobeｔteｒtheircａreeｒpｒosｐectｓ.10．相比之下，對于大部分人來說,雕塑、繪畫或者歌劇是奢侈品(luxuryｉtemｓ）,不也許給他們帶來什么實際的(tａngibｌe)好處。Incontrast,sｃulpｔｕｒes,paintingsanｄｏperasａrｅlｕxｕryitemsfｏrtheｍａjｏｒity，whiｃhwｉllｎｅverbｒiｎｇｔｈｅmanyｔangibleadvanｔages.主體部分第三段１１.我自己的見解是公共設施促進經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，從而使政府有錢去資助藝術。Asｆormｙｐaｒt,publicfａcｉｌitieswilleｎhanｃetheeconomｉcdｅvｅloｐmentａnｄenablｅtheｇovｅrｎmｅnttｏsｐｏnsoｒarts.１2．譬如說,投資交通系統(tǒng)可以讓人們上下班容易，提高生產(chǎn)力，而投資高鐵和飛機場可以讓物品運送更加方便。Foｒinstａnce,iｎｖestmentｉｎｔransｐoｒtatioｎｓystemmakeｓuｒbancoｍmuteeasiｅr,whileｉnvestmｅntinhigh－ｓpeｅｄrａilａndａirporｔmakｅsｇoodtranｓpｏrtationmorecoｎvｅｎienｔ．１3.有了這些設施，城市可以吸引投資，變得更加富裕,人們生活更好。Thｅcｉtycａｎatｔractｍorｅinvｅsｔmentswithtｈesefaｃilｉｔiesaｎdｔhｕspｅoｐｌeｗilleｍbracearichｅｒａndbｅｔtｅrlife.14.相比之下,投資藝術很多時候在短時間很難獲得一個好的經(jīng)濟回報。Ontheconｔｒary,invesｔｍentinartｉsｈaｒdtoreceiｖｅａnecoｎoｍicrｅwaｒdiｎashorｔrun.15.因此,我認為即便藝術讓我們的城市更加美麗,我認為政府的重心應當是在公共設施上。Asaｒeｓulｔ,eventhougｈartmａkeｓoｕrｃitymoｒeｂeautifｕl,Iinsistｔhatｔheｇｏｖernmenｔshouldｌaｙemphasisonpubｌicｓｅrvicesａｎdfaciｌities．顧家北句1Ｃitiｚenshｏｌdｄｉｆfｅrｅｎtviｅwsaboutｇovernmentsponsorshiptｏwaｒdstheart,esｐeｃiａlｌywheｎfacingｂudgetｐroblｅms.改：這個分詞結構有歧義,不大清楚是修飾goｖernmenｔ,還是ｃｉtizens正：Peoplehavedifferentviewsabｏuｔgoｖernmｅntfundinｇfｏｒtheaｒtｓ,esｐecｉallｙwheｎacoｕntrystrugｇlｅｓwｉthｂudgｅtdeficitｓ．句２Irｅｃkoｎthatwｅshoｕldｇiveprｉｏｒiｔyｔｏinfraｓtｒucｔurｅｓandtｈenｔｏinvｅstintheartｗhenｈaｖｉｎgaｓｕrpluｓ.改：toｉｎｖest不清楚是否和前面的to對稱，由于前面的to是個介詞正:Irｅｃkｏnthaｔwesｈouｌｄgiｖｅprｉorｉtytoesｓentｉａlsｅrvｉcｅsａndinfrastruｃtｕreｓaｎdthenfundthｅaｒtswhengｏvｅrnmentshaveａbudｇeｔsurplｕｓ.句3Mａｎｙpｅopｌｅsｕppｏrttoprｏvidefｕndsoｎarts,wｈichcａnmakeourcｉtiesmoｒeappealｉnｇaｎdａｔtrａｃtive.改：沒有supporttｏ的表達;fundson也不是習慣的表達正：Manypｅopｌesupportthepubｌicfｕndsfortheａｒｔｓ，whichｃanmakeouｒcitiesmoreｖisuａllyattraｃtive．句4Thewｏｒkofarｔｓuｃhaｓsｃulｐtuｒes,ｐaiｎtinｇandsｔａt(yī)ｕesｃanｍakepuｂｌicpｌaceｓlikelibｒａｒｙ，mｅｔrostaｔｉonandevenｂａt(yī)ｈroｏmｐretty.改:lｉｂrary這些名詞都是可數(shù)名詞,要加復數(shù)正:Iｔistruethatartworks，incｌudｉnｇsculｐtureｓ,ｐａiｎtiｎgsandstａt(yī)uesｃaｎdecoratｅpubｌicｆａｃiliｔiessuchasliｂｒａｒｉes，mｅtroｓtａt(yī)ionｓ,oreventoiｌets，andｉncrｅａsetheartistiｃapｐeaｌoftheseｐlａｃeｓ．句5Ifthｅartindusｔrydevelｏpｅdprosperｏuslｙ，ａｎdthediｆferentｂuiｌdｉnｇsofcｉｔiｅsａlsohavetheuｎiqｕestyles.Aｎdfortｈereason,wewiｌlｅnｊｏytheciｔyliｆebetter.改：ｄeveｌoped時態(tài)不對;第一句話沒有主句,有兩個連詞，正:Ifthｅaｒtindustrｙprospeｒs,cｉtieｓｈaｖｅａmixｏfdiffｅrentａrｃhiteｃtｕralｓtyｌesaｎdwearemorelｉkeｌytoenjｏyurbanｌife.句６Ifweａreｅｘｐoｓedtｏart,itcaｎdｅcreaｓeourprｅssｕｒeａｎｄｍakeｏurmoｏdwｅll.改:welｌ是個副詞,一般makesomethiｎg+形容詞正：Exposuｒetoarｔworkscａnrｅdｕｃeｏurpressureａndputusinａgoodmｏoｄ.句７Thoｕghtheartiｓveryｉmporｔant,ｍanypｅopｌeｔhinktｈepublicｆaciliｔｉesshouldｂefocusｅdmorｅａndｓｈｏuldgeｔtｈeｇovｅrnｍenｔsponsｏｒｓｈipfiｒstly.改：focusedmｏre一般不這么表達;假如是art單獨寫，不需要用定冠詞正：Altｈouｇhthｅfｕndinｇfｏrｔｈｅartsiｓｉｍpoｒtanｔ,manｙpeoplｅwoｕlｄarguethatpublｉcfａcｉlitiesdeserｖemｏｒeofpubliｃmｏney．句８Oｒdinarypｅoｐleaｒemoreinteｒesteｄinpｕblicfａcｉｌｉtieｓ(suｃｈasｗateｒandeleｃｔricityｐower，sｃhooｌs,librarｉｅs，ｒoａｄwａys)，ｗhichhaｓadirectimpaｃtontｈeｉrlivｉｎｇｓtａｎdａrｄs．改:一般當你列舉幾個名詞的時候,要用ａnd相連；定語從句的has和前面的名詞不一致正：Orｄinaryｐｅｏｐlearemｏreｉnteｒestedｉnpubliｃfaｃilitｉes（suｃhaswａｔeraｎdｅlecｔricｉtｙsupｐlｙnetwｏrks,sｃhｏols,lｉbｒａriｅsanｄroａdｓ),ｗｈichhaveaｄｉrecｔimpactｏntｈeirliｖingsｔａnｄａrds．句9Ｆｏrexamplｅ,ｇｏodｓanｉtat