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顧家北0813精品班作文大作文Manypeoplethinkitisveryimportanttoprotecttheenvironmentbuttheymakenoefforttodoitthemselves.Whydoyouthinkitisthecase?Whatactionscanbedonetoensurethatindividualsprotecttheenvironment?
顧家北Environmentalproblemshavethreatenedtheworldbutfewpeoplehavechosentotakeanyactiontodealwiththeseproblems,althoughtheyrealisetheimpactoftheseenvironmentalwoesontheirlives.Weshouldimplementsomechangestoimprovethesituation.Manypeoplespendmoneywisely,sotheyarenotwillingtopurchaseenvironmentallyfriendlyproducts,despitethefactthattheseproductscanhelppreservetheenvironment.Theseproductsarenormallymoreexpensivethanconventionalcounterparts.Forexample,LEDlightingdevicesareenergyefficient,butnormallychargeconsumersahigherpricethantraditionallightbulbs.Electriccarsarenormallylikelytocostmoremoneythanthosevehiclespoweredbypetrol.Asconsumersdonotoptforthesegreenproducts,itisnoteasytoconserveresourcesandreducepollution.Anotherreasonisthatmanypeoplearenotwillingtochangetheirwaysoflife,eventhoughtheselifestylescanbeharmfultotheenvironment.Theuseofelectricalequipmenthasledtoasharpriseinelectricityconsumption,whichmeansthatthepowergenerationsectorhasahigherdemandforfossilfuels.Peoplealsoprefertotravelbycar,butcaremissionscancauseglobalwarming,whichisathreattotheenvironment.Therelianceondifferentelectronicproductsincludingmobilephonesisanotherissue,sincemanyoftheseproductsendupinlandfillsites.Theseproblemscanbetackledbytwopolicies.Governmentscanenactlawstoforbidthosebehaviourswhichcancausedamagetotheenvironment,suchasdisposingofwastecarelessly.Thosewhodroplittershouldbefined,sotheenvironmentalimpactofthisbehaviourcanbereduced.Anothersolutionistooffersubsidiestoencouragepeopletogogreen.Forexample,thoseconsumerswhobuyfuelefficientcarscanbesubsidised,socaremissionscanbereducedsignificantly.Currently,moreandmorepeopleareawareoftheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionbutthepublicnevergiveprioritytoprotectenvironmentduringtheirdailylife.Onereasonaccountsforthephenomenonisthatpeoplelivecarefullywithoutspendingtheirmoneyonenvironmentalproducts.Householdslivewithatightbudgetarenotwillingtospendtheirmoneytheseproducts,whosepricesarehigherthanothersimilargoods.Forinstance,LEDlightsareenergysaving,buttheyaremoreexpensivethanincandescentbulbs.Similarly,pricesofelectricvehiclesarehigherthanthoseoftraditionalvehiclesaveragely.Forthesakeofmoney,peoplequitbuyinggreenproductsandthisiscontrarytoourpurposeofenvironmentalprotection.Anotherreasoncanbethatpeoplearenotwillingtochangetheirlivingstyles,whichneedtoconsumevariouskindsofenergy.Forexample,electronicappliancesconsumeelectricitywhiledrivingconsumespetrol.Especiallythosewhoarefondofplentyofmaterialsconsumemore.Personally,thegovernmentaresupposedtoestablishrelevantlawstobancitizensfromdoingdetrimentalbehaviourstoenvironment.Punishmentsareimperativeforthosewholittered.Ontheotherhand,itisalsoimperativeforthegovernmenttogivesubsidiestoencourageenvironmentalprotection.Somecountries,suchasChina,providesubsidiesforthosewhopurchasingvehiclesunder1.6L.Allinall,onlythroughthejointeffortsofgovernmentandindividualscanweliveinasustainableenvironment.Currently,alargeproportionofchildrenareexposedtoanoceanofcommercialadvertisementsdaytoday.Iamonthesidethattheads,whichpurposelyincitekidstobuysnacks,toysandelectronicgames,shouldbelimitedoreven,banned.Supposethatadsaimtokidswererectified,childrenwillnotrequesttheirparentstobuywhattheywantdayinanddayout.Kidslacksensitivitytoprice,nevertheless,parentstendtosatisfytheirmaterialneeds.Forinstance,somechildrenlikeexpensivetoysandgirlsareinfavorofclothes.Thiswillbringaheavyburdenforthemiddle-classfamilies.Onlybyminimizetheimpactofadsonkidscantheproblembeavoided.Childrenmayhaveeccentricbehavioursandbadlivinghabitsduetotheads.Somekidsarefansoffastfood,sincetheyseeadsofiteveryday.Othersareinbadtemper,duetotheviolentgamestheyplaydaily.Thepredominanceofgamesisalsoresultedfrommerchants’propaganda.Alltheseproblemswillinfluencethehealthygrowthprocessofkidsbothphysicallyandmentally.However,wecannotdenythatsomeadsdohavetheiradvantagestokids.Someadvertisementspromotenutrientfood,suchasmilk,wheat,etc.Meanwhile,someadvertisebooks,gamesandeducationaltoys.Parents,whoarenotfamiliarwiththeseproducts,canhaveacomprehensiveverdictaccordingtoadvertisements.Inanutshell,Istronglysuggestthegovernmentbanadswhosetargetconsumersarekids,especiallyiftheirproductsareharmfultochildren.Butiftheproductstheadvertisementsfocusonarebeneficial,thentheadsshouldbeallowed.小作文第一篇ThetableillustratestheproportionofpeoplewhoarelaidoffinPoland,Denmark,Germany,ItalyandHungary.Thetwocolonsarethefiguresofyoungpeople(agedfrom15-24)andallcitizensrespectively.ThehighestunemploymentrateforyounggoestoPoland,whichreaches37%andistwicemorethantherateofitsoverallrate15%.ComingnextisItaly.Theproportionofitsyoungcitizenswhoareoutofworkis23%anditsunemploymentofwholecountrycomestotopat18%.Hungaryshowsmediocreratesof21%and17%.AndGermanfiguresare4%and3%lowerthanDenmarkrespectively.Denmarkkeepsbothfigureslowest,withtheunemploymentratefor15-24agegroup8%andforoverallonly3%.Allofthefivecountriesshow3~5%rateslowerofoverallunemploymentthanthoseoftheyoung,exceptPolandwhichhasthelargestgapbetweenthetwofigures.第二篇ThebarchartsprovideusinformationabouthowfamiliesinanAsiancountryspenttheirmoneyin1998and2023.Aglanceatthechartstellsthatexpenditureondifferentgoodsin2023overweighedthatin1998exceptthatspentonclothes.Peoplegavemuchmoreprioritytospiritualenjoymentwhichleadtoahugeincreaseofexpenditureonholiday,eatingout,reading(newspapersandmagazines)andgoingtocinema,risingfrom8%to15%,6%to15%,3%to8%and3%to5%respectively.Thecostsforelectronicgoodsalsoincreasedfrom12%to14%duringthedecade.Theonlydifferenceisexpenditureonclotheswhichwastotallyoppositetothemainstream.Theproportionofitwas10%in1998;howeveritdroppedtohalfofitsoriginalratesin2023.Allinall,thepast10yearswitnessedahugechangeoftheexpenditureonvariousofaspectsforhouseholds.第三篇ThechartstelltheproportionofdifferentcategoriesofhousepeopleliveinthreepartsofAustraliain2023and2023.In2023,Victoriahad76%residentsinhouse,12%insemi-detachedhouse,11%inapartmentsandtherestinothertypes.InNSW,housealsoaccountedforthelargestpartof66%,with10%and13%induplexandflatrespectively.Andmorepeoplelivedinotherkinds.Tasmaniahadlargestproportionofhouselivingpopulation,whichreaches88%.Fiveyearslater,theratesforhousealldropped2%inthethreeregions.Asforsemi-detachedhouse,Victoria,NSWandTasmaniasaw1%increase,1percentdecreaseandstabilityrespectively.Thefiguresofflatallhadaslightlyincrease.Andfortherestunmentionedtypes,theyremainedthesameat1%exceptNSWrosefrom11%to12%.ThetablecomparesfiveEuropeancountriesintermsoftheproportionsofunemployedpeopleaswellasthefiguresforthoseyoungpeopleoutofwork.Polandhadthehighestyouthunemploymentrateat37%,nearlyfivetimesthelevelinDenmark.Thelevelsofunemploymentforyoungpeopleweresimilarinothercountries,withthehighestseeninItaly23%andthelowestinGermanyat17%.Itisclearfromthetablethatinallthesecountries,theunemploymentratefortheyoungergenerationwashigherthantheoverallunemploymentfigures.Interestingly,Poland,Germany,ItalyandHungaryhadsimilarunemploymentrates,rangingbetween15%and18%.ThefigureforDenmarkwassignificantlylowerat3%.Overall,youthunemploymentwasmoreseriousinPolandthaninothercountries.Denmarkhadthelowestfiguresforbothyouthunemploymentandoverallunemployment,whileothercountrieshadsimilarfiguresfortheseproblems.流程圖寫作Thechartillustrateshowtousecocoabeanstoproduceseveralfooditemsforcustomers.Firstly,wholebeansarecarefullypickingbeforedryingintheshell.Thentheyarepressedintococoaliquor,whichisthemainmaterialofthesecondstage.Thencocoaliquorisfurtherpresseduntilitbecomesacocacake,whichisdirectlysenttoindustrytomakecakesanddrinksorissoldtotheconsumeraftergrindedintococoapowder.Thecocoaliquorcanalsoconvertintococoaandthenbesenttorelevantindustry.Cocoaliquor,afterfurtherrefining,mixwithcocoaandsugarturnstoindustrychocolate.Finishedchocolateproductswillbeputontheshell,beforethefinalprocess.Allinall,cocoabeanscanbeusedtoproducecocoapowder,chocolateproductsandingredientsforrelevantindustrythroughthreesimplestagesstartingfrompre-processingrawmaterialtofinalpackagingforsell.顧家北Thewholebeansarepickedatthefirststagewithshellsremoved,andthendriedandpresseduntilcocoaliquoriscreated.Thismarksthestartofthesecondstage,whichinvolvesthreeprocesses.Thecocoaliquorcanbeusedtomakecocacakesinthefirstoption.Anotherchoiceisthemanufactureofcocoa,whilecocoaliquorisrefinedinthethirdprocesstoproduceindustrialchocolate.Inthefinalstage,thesematerialsareprocessedfurthertocreatedifferentendproductsforeithercorporateclientsorordinaryconsumers.Cocacakesaregroundintococoapowderforindividualconsumers,ordirectlydeliveredtocateringbusinesseswhichprovidedrinksandcakes.Cocoainthesecondprocedurementionedearlierisalsotransportedtothesebusinesses.Incontrast,theindustrialchocolateisflavoredwithsugar,andfinishedchocolateproductsaresubsequentlyavailableforconsumers.第一篇Thetableprovidesuswithdataofthepercentageofconsumerexpenditureondifferentitemsinfivecountriesin2023.ThebiggestnumberexistedinTurkey,wherepeoplespent32.14%oftheirincomeonfood,drinkandtobacco,almostfivetimesthenumberofpercentagespentonclothing(6.63%)andeighttimesthefigureofpercentagespentonspiritualenjoyment.ComingnextisIreland,whosepercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditureofeatingwas28.91%.Costsforclothingandfootwearaccountedforonly6.43%,threetimestheexpenditureofleisureandeducation.Spaintookthethirdplacethoughtheproportionofitsnationalconsumerexpenditurewasthelowest(1.98%).ExpenditureoffooditemsinSpainaccountedfor18.8%,threefoldthefigureofitsclothingspending.ItalyandSwedencitizenshadsmallpercentagesofincomespentonfood(16.36%,15.77%),onlyabouthalfthefigureofTurkey.However,theirclothingcosts(9%,5.4%)andspiritualpay-outs(3.2%,3.22%)wererelativelyhigh.Inanutshell,thepercentagesofnationalconsumerexpenditurebycategoryin2023variedalotamongthefivecountries.Butallsharedsomesimilarities,namely,largestproportionofexpenditureonfood,drinkandtobaccoandsmallestpercentageofleisureandeducationcosts.第二篇ThebarchartsshowthenumberofmarriagesanddivorcesinUSAandmaritalstatusofAmericanadultsduringtheperiodof1970to2023.Thenumberofmarriagesremainedat2.5millionin1970and1980,afterwhichithadaslightlydecreaseto2millionin2023.Thedivorcesnumberstartedform1millionin1970andsuddenlyincreasedtoalmost1.5millionduringthatdecade.Thenitdroppedtonearly1millionin1980andfinallyreachedtoitsstart(1million).Thepercentageofnevermarriedadultswas15%in1970andthefigureinclinedto20%thirtyyearslater.Theproportionsofbothmarriedandwidowedadultssawdropsduringthethreedecades.Marriedadultsaccountedfor70%in1970whilethefigurewaslessthan60%in2023.Asfordivorcerate,ithadasignificantriseformnearly0%toalmost10%.Allinall,theperiodfrom1970to2023witnessedahugechangeofmarriagesanddivorcesinAmerica.Boththetotalnumberandpercentageofmarriagedecreasedwhiletheproportionsofnevermarriedanddivorcedpeoplesawanupwardtrend.流程圖Thetwodiagramsillustratehowtoproducecementandhowtousecementtoproduceconcrete.Cementproductionisrelativelycomplexandusestwomaterials.Firstly,limestoneandclayareplacedinthecrusher,wherethesematerialsarecrushedbythecrusher.Thenpowderismixedbythemixer,beforebeingheatedbytherotatingheater.Atthenextstage,heatedpowderissenttothegrind,whereitisgroundedintocement.Andfinallycementispackedinthebags.Concreteproductionisrelativelysimple.15%ofcement,10%ofwater,25%ofsandand50%ofgravel,namelysmallstonesaremixintheconcretemixer,wheretheyturnedouttobeconcrete.Allinall,cementproductionincludes5stagesandtheoutcomecementisoneofthefourrawmaterialsoftheconcreteproduction.地圖Themapsshowhowanareachangedduringtheperiodof1780to2023.In1780,therewere100homeslocatedonthenorth-easterncornerwithwoodstothesouth.Arivercrossedtheareafromsouthtonorthwithfourfarmsinthemiddleoftheregion.80yearslater,thenumberofdwellingplacesdoubledto200,whilethenumberoffarmsdroppedbyhalfandwoodsalsoshrankinsize.Aroadwasbuiltinthenortharea,connectingthelivingplacetotheriver.Anothermajorchangeisthatabridgewasconstructedovertheriver.In2023,thenumberofhomessuddenlyincreasedto500andanewlybuiltroad,headingtowardssouthreplacedfarmandwoodsarea,whichlinkedthedwellingplacestotheschoolandsportsfieldinthesouth.Severalshopsopenedtotherightsideofthedownstreamriverwithawetlandforbirdstotheirsouth.Overall,thisareasawanincreaseinconstructionssuchasdwellingplaces,schoolsandfacilities,althoughfarmlandandforestswereremovedfornewbuildingsandtransportinfrastructure.大作文Weliveincitiesortownswhichhavemuseumsdisplayinghistoricalandculturalimportance,butpeopledonotvisitthem.Whydoyouthinkpeopledonotvisitmuseumsintheirlocalareas?Whatistheimportanceofmuseumstosociety?顧家北Visitingmuseumsishardlyarewardingexperienceformanypeople,sotheywillnotconsiderthisoptionwhentheycanspendleisuretimeonotheractivities.Thesemuseumsdonotorganizenewexhibitionsthatcankeepupwiththetrends,orprovideanyformofentertainmentlikeinteractivegamestoattracttheyoungaudience.Thisiswhyatriptoamuseumcanhardlycompeteforattentionwithsports,picnicsandparties.AnotherreasonisthatpeoplecangatherinformationaboutthoseartefactsondisplayontheInternet.Theywillincreaseknowledgeaboutthestoriesbehindandtheculturalvalueofeachitem,withouthavingtovisitingthemuseuminperson.Museumscanencouragevisitors’interestintheirculturalheritageanddisseminateknowledgeaboutacityoracounty’sculturalassets.Someexhibitionsmayshowancientutensilsusedbypreviousgenerations,sopeoplewhoattendtheseexhibitionsmayhaveagoodideaofhowtraditionalfoodwascooked.Somehistoricaldocumentsandpaintingsmightshowthearchitecturalstylewhichusedtopredominate,andmanyvisitorsmightbeimpressedbythearchitecturalachievementsoftheirancestors.Withsuchknowledge,thesevisitorsmaymakeanefforttopreservesometraditionsandkeepsomeold-fashionedcookingskillsorbuildingtechniquesalive.Museumshavealsobeenoperatingasacenteroflearning,whereyoungpeoplecankeepuptodatewiththecutting-edgetechnologyindifferentfields.Theaviationmuseums,forexample,givechildrenaglimpseoftheairlineindustryandevenspacetravel,includingspaceshipsandequipmentsupportingastronautswhoexploredtheouterspace.Themuseumofarcheologycanshowthemhowsomespecieshavediedout,andpossiblyinspirethemtodoresearchinbiologyandextendourknowledgeofhowtopreserveourecosystem.Theycouldnotmakecontributionstosocialprogress,iftheydidnothaveaccesstosuchknowledge.Recently,anincreasingnumberofpeoplerefusedtopayavisittomuseumsintheirlocalplaces.Personally,followingreasonsmayaccountforthephenomenon.Somepeoplereckonmuseumsasboringplacessothattheyareneverwillingtovisit.Forexample,thehistoricalandculturalimportancedisplayedtherehasneverchangedandthereisnoentertainment,suchasinteractivegames.Allthesetendtoleftpeopleaboringfeeling.Incontrast,peopleprefertojoinsomeinterestingactivitiessuchasballgames,picnicanddiningout.Anotherreasonisthatnowadayspeoplelearnhistoryandacquirescienceknowledgethroughinternetratherthangotolibraryinperson.Informationoftheexhibition'sthehistoricalvalueandstorycanbeeasilyaccessedonline.However,visitingmuseumsplayanimportantroleintraditioninheriting.Ancientvesselsprovideuswithtraditionalcookingmethodswhilemuralsenableustocomprehendstyleofancientarchitecturetosomedegree.Itisadvantageousforyoungpeopletopassonthecultureiftheyhaveagoodacknowledgeoftheirowntraditionbyvisitingmuseums.Additionally,museumsofferusthemostadvancedscienceandtechnology,whichisbeneficialtothedevelopmentofthesociety.Thelatestdevelopmentofspaceanduniverseinourcountrycanbeacquiredinspacemuseumsandtheyoungcanunderstandthereasonofcreatureextinctionthroughvisitingarchaeologymuseums.Museumscanmotivatetheinterestsoftheadolescentsandtheyoungwillacceleratesthedevelopmentofsocietyinthefuture.Overall,visitingmuseumsisofgreatsignificanceforboththeindividuals’comprehendingofcultureandthedevelopmentofoursociety.顧家北Visitingmuseumsishardlyarewardingexperienceformanypeople,sotheywillnotconsiderthisoptionwhentheycanspendleisuretimeonotheractivities.Thesemuseumsdonotorganisenewexhibitionsthatcankeepupwiththetrends,orprovideanyformofentertainmentlikeinteractivegamestoattracttheyoungaudience.Thisiswhyatriptoamuseumcanhardlycompeteforattentionwithsports,picnicsandparties.AnotherreasonisthatpeoplecangatherinformationaboutthoseartefactsondisplayontheInternet.Theywillincreaseknowledgeaboutthestoriesbehindandtheculturalvalueofeachitem,withouthavingtovisitingthemuseuminperson.Museumscanencouragevisitors’interestintheirculturalheritageanddisseminateknowledgeaboutacityoracounty’sculturalassets.Someexhibitionsmayshowancientutensilsusedbypreviousgenerations,sopeoplewhoattendtheseexhibitionsmayhaveagoodideaofhowtraditionalfoodwascooked.Somehistoricaldocumentsandpaintingsmightshowthearchitecturalstylewhichusedtopredominate,andmanyvisitorsmightbeimpressedbythearchitecturalachievementsoftheirancestors.Withsuchknowledge,thesevisitorsmaymakeanefforttopreservesometraditionsandkeepsomeold-fashionedcookingskillsorbuildingtechniquesalive.Museumscanalsoprovideuswiththelatesttechnologicaladvances,whichisbeneficialtothedevelopmentofthesociety.Forexample,theaviationmuseumsofferuslatestknowledgeofaeronauticswhilethearchaeologymuseumshelpuscomprehendthereasonofextinction.Thisiswhymuseumscannotonlymotivatetheinterestsofteenagersbutalsoencouragethemtostudyhardinalongrun,whichwillacceleratetheimprovementofthesocietyinthefuture.(Self-writtenparagraph)Theaviationmuseumsspaceships,shuttles,astronauts,exploretheouterspace,Somepeoplethinkuniversityeducationshouldprovidestudentswithskillsofemploymentinthefuturewhileothersbelievethatpeopleshouldfocusonacademicstudyonly.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Somepeoplethinktheincreasingbusinessandculturalcontactbetweencountriesbringsmanypositiveeffects.Otherssayitcausesthelossofnationalidentities.Discussonbothsidesandgiveyouropinion.Peoplerelymoreonforeignproductsandimitatetraditionsandcultureofothercountries,whichleadtoahardwaytopassontheirownculture.Forinstance,toomuchrelianceontheforeigncosmeticswillsurelyshrinkthedemandofdomesticmarket,whichrequiresthelocalindustrytodownsizeworkforceandthustraditionalwaysofmakingupwillbeabandoned.Additionally,thosewhoareinfavorofcelebratingothers’festivalstendtogivelessprioritytotheirowntraditions.Thiswillputtheintangiblecultureheritageformourancestorsinadangeroussituation.Manycountriesspendalotofmoneyinart.Somepeoplethinkinvestmentinartisnecessary,butotherssaymoneyisbetterspentonpublicservicesandfacilities.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.翻譯練習1.人們對政府贊助藝術(governmentsponsorship)有不同的見解,特別在國家碰到預算問題的時候。Peoplehaveadopteddifferentattitudestowardsgovernmentsponsorshipofarts,especiallywhentheircountries’budgetsareinthered.2.我覺得我們應當一方面注重基礎設施,只有政府有盈余的時候才去投資藝術。Personally,weshouldgiveprioritytothepublicservicesandfacilities,whileinvestmentinartsisanoptiononlywhenfinanceissurplus.3.很多人支持藝術的投資認為藝術可以讓我們的城市更加地美麗和吸引人。Thosewhoareinfavorofartsinvestmentsharbortheideathatartsenableourcitytobeamoregloriousandattractiveone.4.藝術作品譬如說雕塑,繪畫,塑像,可以讓我們的公共場合,譬如說圖書館、地鐵站、甚至公共廁所都非常地美麗。Artworks,suchassculptures,paintingsandstatues,willaddcolortothepublicplaces,suchaslibraries,metrostationsandevenrestrooms.5.假如藝術行業繁榮發展,城市的建筑也有各種風格,我們可以更好地享受城市的生活。Prosperousdevelopmentofartswillleadtovariousstylesofarchitectures,thuswewillenjoyabettercitylife.6.接觸藝術讓我們減少壓力,也會讓我們心情更好。Artswillalsoloadoffourpressureandthusprovideuswithabettermood.主體部分第二段7.雖然藝術如此重要,很多人認為公共設施更加應當獲得政府的資助。Althoughartisofsogreatsignificance,amajorityofpeoplereckonthatinfrastructuresaremoreimperativetobesponsored.8.普通公民對公共設施(譬如說,水電供應,學校,圖書館,道路)更感愛好,這些設施對他們生活質量有直接的影響。Commoncitizensaremoreconsciousofpublicservices(electricityandwatersupply,schools,librariesandroads),sincethesearewhatdirectlycontributetotheirlivingquality.9.好的衛生條件和獲得干凈水可以提高大眾的健康和減少疾病,而學校和圖書館可以普及知識,提高人們的工作前景。Accesstosanitaryconditionandpurifiedwatercanimprovepublic’sfitnessanddecreasediseaseswhileschoolsandlibrariesspreadacknowledgesoastobettertheircareerprospects.10.相比之下,對于大部分人來說,雕塑、繪畫或者歌劇是奢侈品(luxuryitems),不也許給他們帶來什么實際的(tangible)好處。Incontrast,sculptures,paintingsandoperasareluxuryitemsforthemajority,whichwillneverbringthemanytangibleadvantages.主體部分第三段11.我自己的見解是公共設施促進經濟發展,從而使政府有錢去資助藝術。Asformypart,publicfacilitieswillenhancetheeconomicdevelopmentandenablethegovernmenttosponsorarts.12.譬如說,投資交通系統可以讓人們上下班容易,提高生產力,而投資高鐵和飛機場可以讓物品運送更加方便。Forinstance,investmentintransportationsystemmakesurbancommuteeasier,whileinvestmentinhigh-speedrailandairportmakesgoodtransportationmoreconvenient.13.有了這些設施,城市可以吸引投資,變得更加富裕,人們生活更好。Thecitycanattractmoreinvestmentswiththesefacilitiesandthuspeoplewillembracearicherandbetterlife.14.相比之下,投資藝術很多時候在短時間很難獲得一個好的經濟回報。Onthecontrary,investmentinartishardtoreceiveaneconomicrewardinashortrun.15.因此,我認為即便藝術讓我們的城市更加美麗,我認為政府的重心應當是在公共設施上。Asaresult,eventhoughartmakesourcitymorebeautiful,Iinsistthatthegovernmentshouldlayemphasisonpublicservicesandfacilities.顧家北句1Citizensholddifferentviewsaboutgovernmentsponsorshiptowardstheart,especiallywhenfacingbudgetproblems.改:這個分詞結構有歧義,不大清楚是修飾government,還是citizens正:Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutgovernmentfundingforthearts,especiallywhenacountrystruggleswithbudgetdeficits.句2Ireckonthatweshouldgiveprioritytoinfrastructuresandthentoinvestintheartwhenhavingasurplus.改:toinvest不清楚是否和前面的to對稱,由于前面的to是個介詞正:Ireckonthatweshouldgiveprioritytoessentialservicesandinfrastructuresandthenfundtheartswhengovernmentshaveabudgetsurplus.句3Manypeoplesupporttoprovidefundsonarts,whichcanmakeourcitiesmoreappealingandattractive.改:沒有supportto的表達;fundson也不是習慣的表達正:Manypeoplesupportthepublicfundsforthearts,whichcanmakeourcitiesmorevisuallyattractive.句4Theworkofartsuchassculptures,paintingandstatuescanmakepublicplaceslikelibrary,metrostationandevenbathroompretty.改:library這些名詞都是可數名詞,要加復數正:Itistruethatartworks,includingsculptures,paintingsandstatuescandecoratepublicfacilitiessuchaslibraries,metrostations,oreventoilets,andincreasetheartisticappealoftheseplaces.句5Iftheartindustrydevelopedprosperously,andthedifferentbuildingsofcitiesalsohavetheuniquestyles.Andforthereason,wewillenjoythecitylifebetter.改:developed時態不對;第一句話沒有主句,有兩個連詞,正:Iftheartindustryprospers,citieshaveamixofdifferentarchitecturalstylesandwearemorelikelytoenjoyurbanlife.句6Ifweareexposedtoart,itcandecreaseourpressureandmakeourmoodwell.改:well是個副詞,一般makesomething+形容詞正:Exposuretoartworkscanreduceourpressureandputusinagoodmood.句7Thoughtheartisveryimportant,manypeoplethinkthepublicfacilitiesshouldbefocusedmoreandshouldgetthegovernmentsponsorshipfirstly.改:focusedmore一般不這么表達;假如是art單獨寫,不需要用定冠詞正:Althoughthefundingfortheartsisimportant,manypeoplewouldarguethatpublicfacilitiesdeservemoreofpublicmoney.句8Ordinarypeoplearemoreinterestedinpublicfacilities(suchaswaterandelectricitypower,schools,libraries,roadways),whichhasadirectimpactontheirlivingstandards.改:一般當你列舉幾個名詞的時候,要用and相連;定語從句的has和前面的名詞不一致正:Ordinarypeoplearemoreinterestedinpublicfacilities(suchaswaterandelectricitysupplynetworks,schools,librariesandroads),whichhaveadirectimpactontheirlivingstandards.句9Forexample,goodsanitat
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