1、專(zhuān)四-寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)1商英教研室專(zhuān)四-寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)1商英教研室主要內(nèi)容評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)&寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題自我剖析&互評(píng)題型分析&應(yīng)對(duì)模板主要內(nèi)容評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)&寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題自我剖析&互評(píng)一、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)&寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題剖析一、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)&寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題剖析Whats wrong with your composition?知己know about yourselfWhats wrong with your composiFinish the composition in the 2016 TEM4.And reflect on the problems about your composition.Finish the composition i

2、n the 英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)四作文寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)1內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)語(yǔ)言得體詞匯句子切題；論證充分。有條理；層次清晰。無(wú)拼寫(xiě)問(wèn)題；恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確、地道。無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；無(wú)標(biāo)點(diǎn)問(wèn)題；句式多樣。語(yǔ)氣恰當(dāng)內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)語(yǔ)言得體詞匯句子切題；有條理；無(wú)拼寫(xiě)問(wèn)題；無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤1.內(nèi)容&結(jié)構(gòu)：面對(duì)新題型材料作文，無(wú)所適從，容易跑題，不知道怎么展開(kāi)？是否條理、層次清晰？2.詞匯：拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤？用詞簡(jiǎn)單，不地道，顯得low?This policy can make the farmers financial burden less and less.This policy can relieve the farmers financial burden.

3、To be continued1.內(nèi)容&結(jié)構(gòu)：3.句子：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤：主謂一致，虛擬語(yǔ)氣句式單一不高級(jí)無(wú)新意（是否是模板的鍋？）3.句子：模板可以借鑒，但要用有新意的！模板Switch your composition with your partner, and exchange constructive remarks on each others composition.Whats wrong with your composition?Switch your composition with y二、題型分析&應(yīng)對(duì)二、題型分析&應(yīng)對(duì)分值：20大于200詞45分鐘題型：材料作文、命題作文、圖表

4、圖畫(huà)作文分值：20材料作文2016&2017：材料作文Read carefully the following excerpt (about) and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and thenComment on whether You should(can) support yourself with information from the excerpt.材料作文2016&2017：材

5、料作文材料作文三段式開(kāi)頭：縮寫(xiě)/總結(jié)材料提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)主體：論證自己的觀點(diǎn)結(jié)尾：總結(jié)&重申自己觀點(diǎn)材料作文三段式命題作文三段式開(kāi)頭：引出主題提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)主體：論證自己的觀點(diǎn)結(jié)尾：總結(jié)&重申自己觀點(diǎn)圖表圖畫(huà)作文三段式開(kāi)頭：描述圖表圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)主體：論證自己的觀點(diǎn)結(jié)尾：總結(jié)&重申自己觀點(diǎn)命題作文三段式圖表圖畫(huà)作文三段式三種題型的實(shí)質(zhì)不同材料作文開(kāi)頭：縮寫(xiě)/總結(jié)材料提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)命題作文：引出主題提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)圖表圖畫(huà)作文：描述圖表圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)三種題型的實(shí)質(zhì)不同材料作文開(kāi)頭：縮寫(xiě)/總結(jié)材料提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)材料作文的開(kāi)頭如何縮寫(xiě)/總結(jié)材料1.抓取關(guān)鍵信息&關(guān)鍵句2.如何縮寫(xiě)提取出來(lái)的關(guān)鍵句：同義

6、單詞/短語(yǔ)替換;去掉修飾成分；用幾個(gè)抽象概括詞取代一堆具體詞（比如頭銜etc）；如果是引言，用概括后的間接引語(yǔ)代替直接引語(yǔ)材料作文的開(kāi)頭縮寫(xiě)/總結(jié)材料的注意事項(xiàng)：1.不要篇幅太長(zhǎng)，2.切不可一字不差地照抄原文。縮寫(xiě)/總結(jié)材料的注意事項(xiàng)：Exercise:The beginning part of the 2017 TEM4 Writing Exercise:參考With the wide use of intelligent machines, people began to worry about their threat to human intelligence. They hold t

7、he idea that even if the artificial intelligence is of great help to human jobs and facilitates human life, the development of the artificial intelligence will unavoidably deprive human of mental effort and cause the regress of brain. From my perspective,參考With the wide use of intelli命題作文的開(kāi)頭引出話題的方法1

8、.背景介紹改寫(xiě)題干中背景/擺出兩種對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)/簡(jiǎn)單分析現(xiàn)象原因或結(jié)果Nowadays, there follows a craze forWith the development of , is becoming a more and more serious problem.The early 1990s saw an unprecedented tide of In the past three decades, China has witnessed dramatic improvement in Recently, the phenomenon that has caused wide

9、 attention/become a subject of widespread controversy.命題作文的開(kāi)頭Other people are inclined to think thatOpposed to this opinion, there is another view thatOther people are inclined to t2.提問(wèn)題3.引用2.提問(wèn)題圖表圖畫(huà)作文的開(kāi)頭描述圖表圖畫(huà)的方法As is indicted in the chart above,.As can be seen in the picture,This picture intends t

10、o 圖表圖畫(huà)作文的開(kāi)頭三、模板三、模板（一）通用模板題型材料作文命題作文圖畫(huà)圖表作文共性：除了開(kāi)頭略有不同，開(kāi)頭：+提出自己觀點(diǎn)主體：論證自己觀點(diǎn)結(jié)尾：總結(jié)、重申自己觀點(diǎn)（一）通用模板題型1.開(kāi)頭：提出自己觀點(diǎn)的模板Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former/latter one.In my view/opinion,As for me, Im in favor of As far as I am concerned, I think.From my point of view,Personally, .1.開(kāi)頭：2.主體：論證自己

11、觀點(diǎn)的模板1）引出理由There are many reasons explaining/accounting for/contributing to my view.There are many reasons which may account for.There are many factors deciding/influencing.The following reasons can account for/support/prove.The reasons for. mainly lie in the following . aspects.This argument can be

12、 proved by the following facts.2.主體：論證自己觀點(diǎn)的模板2)舉例論證There are numerous examples supporting this argument.There are many examples which can support this argument.Lets take as an/another example.A case in point is A good example to illustrate is For instance，2)舉例論證3.結(jié)尾：總結(jié)、重申自己觀點(diǎn)1)總結(jié)：Considering the abo

13、ve-mentioned, I think.All the above-mentioned tells us that.Therefore,Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that.To conclude/In a word/In sum/In general.Therefore, it is safe to draw the conclusion that2)強(qiáng)調(diào)重申(強(qiáng)調(diào)句/倒裝句/虛擬語(yǔ)氣)Only in this way can people It is high time t

14、hat we It is that 3.結(jié)尾：總結(jié)、重申自己觀點(diǎn)常見(jiàn)作文內(nèi)容類(lèi)型立場(chǎng)選擇型既定觀點(diǎn)型建議方法型利弊分析型題型（3）材料作文命題作文圖畫(huà)圖表作文常見(jiàn)作文內(nèi)容類(lèi)型題型（3）建議方法型模板It is high time for us to take some effective measures to.It is high time that we took some effective measures to.It is necessary/imperative to take some measures to The following measures can be taken toEffective measures.should be taken to.建議方法型模板It is high time for us 利弊分析型模板benef