1、A Spring OutingSpring came with all its glories. The new grass exposed its green colour. The pretty flowers opened their blossoms.We were tempted to go for an outing.It was Sunday, the 20th of April. We set out very early on bikes, carrying bottles of champagne, beer and bags of cakes, bacon and coo

2、ked eggs.We rode along the winding paths in the fields, across the meadows and down the roads.The willow were fresh and green. The swallows were flying to and fro, up and down the sky. The birds, like musicians,snang their melodious songs in the trees, and the butterflies,like colorful dancers, were

3、 fluttering here and there. We breathed the fresh air deeply and laughed heartily.At 10 a.m. we arrived at the foot of the $hushan Hill.We left our bikes with a bike-repairing shop and began to climb up the Hill. Near the top, under a big tree with luxuriant foliage we had our picnic. We drank and a

4、te, talked and laughed.After the picnic we stood in the breeze with our hands on our waists, enjoying the fine landscape. Then we lay on the grass talking about our life and studies.At about 4 p. m. , we returned with balmy greenness on our backs and freshness in our hearts.點評這篇記敘文除了敘述清楚了時間、地點、人物和事件

5、外，還對春天的美景作了一番描述，而這美妙的一切正是他們去春游的原因，因此也就引出他們去春游的結果。文章構思巧妙，語言簡潔而充滿詩情畫意。只是篇幅稍長?？荚嚂r由于時間所限，構思時一定要把握住文章的長度。參考譯文春游春天來了，帶著無限的嬌美。小草，已露出嫩綠色，花已開放了，我們怎么能不去郊游!那是4月20號，星期天。一大早，我們帶著香檳酒、啤酒、蛋糕、咸薰肉和雞蛋，騎著自行車出發了!我們沿著鄉間彎彎曲曲小道，穿過草地走向大道。嫩綠的楊柳掛在路旁，燕子在天空飛來飛去，鳥兒在樹上歌唱，彩蝶到處飛舞。我們深深地呼吸著新鮮的空氣，盡情地放聲大笑。上午10點鐘，我們到達墅山腳下。我們將自行車寄放在一家自行車修理鋪，然后開始爬山。我們在靠近山頂，一棵茂密的大樹下坐下來開始野餐。我們慢慢地吃著，喝著，說著，笑著。野餐后，