1、精選文檔高三一輪復習話題寫作四感謝信出題人袁兵艷審題人 鄧翠煥寫作五步走:1 .審題忌跑題2 .列提綱/要點忌漏點3 .造句-句型結構成分要完整，忌表達單一，忌冗言或逐句硬譯，字詞堆砌4 .連句成文添加過渡詞，忌句子松散5 .檢查一查主謂、查搭配、查拼寫感謝信：是用于致謝他人的饋贈、款待、幫助、以及對慰問信和祝賀信的回復。【感謝信三要素】1.提出感謝，感謝原因（別人做了什么事讓你感謝）；2 .細述并贊賞對方給予的幫助；3 .再次感謝，如何回報（好好學習，繼續(xù)努力等）【感謝信注意事項】靈活把握時態(tài)：通常，在提到對方曾給予幫助時，用過去時態(tài);在提到對方的幫助所產生的實際效果時，可用 現在完成時；涉

2、及到現狀，可用 一般現在時；在表達祝愿或希望時，可用將來時。常用詞匯和寫作模式動詞 thank, appreciate; owe（ 欠債，感激）名詞 thanks, gratitude, appreciation;形容詞 thankful, grateful, appreciative第一段：表達感謝之情并說明原因1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks （to you） for 2. I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude （to you） for3. I would like to convey

3、 in this letter my heartfelt（ 衷心的 ）thanks to you for4. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.第二段：細述并贊賞對方給予的幫助1. It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality（好客）and the honor you showed me

4、 during myvisit 3. It was your kind help that.（強調句）4. But for/Without your help, I wouldn/couldn '' 11 have done （含蓄虛擬）5. If it had not been for your help/assistance, I wouldn't/couldn' t have （虛擬語氣）第三段：再次感謝，如何回報。1. Thanks again for your generous help.2. I appreciate it more than I c

5、an say.3. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.句式操練1 .我寫這封信是為了表達我對你幫我提高英語口語的謝意，你的幫助對我而言意義重大。2 .你太好了，假期照顧我弟弟。3 .正是你的善良和熱心幫助我克服了我的思鄉(xiāng)之情。（強調句/虛擬語氣）可編輯精選文檔感謝信模板 dear? I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for（感謝的原因）. if it had not been for/had it not been for/ wi

6、thout your assistance in 對方給你的具體幫助），I would （not） have been（沒有對方幫助的后果）. everyone agrees that it was you who（給出2田節(jié)）. Again, I would like toexpress my warm thanks to you! please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely, Li Hua dear, I am now writing to express my sincere thanks for. I would like you toknow

7、 how much your meant to me. you have a positive genius for. Inot only enjoyed, but also. I shall ever remember as one of the mostin my life.I . I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating. would you kindly let me know. I will feel very honored and pleased if you havetime to. how nice it would be

8、 to see you again and I am looking forwards to seeing you next time!I repeat my thanks again for your. please give my kind regards to your. yours truly, Li Hua 小小建議：基礎薄弱或者表達能力有限的同學，不妨每一類作文背誦一個模板和幾個常用短 語與句型，然后靈活套用。 欣賞范文技巧1 .列出優(yōu)美的可用于自己寫作中的詞和短語，加深記憶；2 .列出優(yōu)美的可用于自己寫作中的句型結構，從中挑選三個就某一寫作話題模仿寫作，爭取 寫出和例句一樣正確且

9、優(yōu)美的句子；3 .列出范文的篇章結構，掌握篇章布局技巧。根據范文欣賞技巧完成任務。I am a senior student that has experienced a great earthquake. I wrote to you to express my thanks to those who helped us when we suffered the disaster. During that time, I witnessed many strangers devoted their efforts to saving lives, providing food and clo

10、thes regardless of their優(yōu)美的詞和短語：own safety. Without their help, I couldn ' t have found my parents in such a short time, which makes me excited. Besides, only few days passed before the students returned to classrooms to have classes.As a result, we all treasure the opportunity of studying in th

11、e classroom. The help from others taught us how to respect others and take others優(yōu)美的句型：into consideration. It was also the help from strangers that made us realize the importance of helping and caring for each other when facing disaster.Now, I think what we should do is to study harder and help more

12、 people in return.請?zhí)暨x三個優(yōu)美句型以感謝信為話題造句1. 2. 3. 假如你是一名失學兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國工作的 Mr. Brown的資助，可以 重返校園。你給Mr. Brown寫了一封信，內容如下： 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激； 在老師的幫助下，學習有了很大的進步，受到老師的表揚和鼓勵； 決心更加努力學習，取得更大的進步；盼望見到Mr. Brown ,希望他寄來一張照片。 注意：1.書信應包括以上所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數：100左右Dear Mr. Brown ,I am writing to 表達我最深的謝意 ）the mone

13、y andbooks you sent me. I （我不可能重返校園 ） without your help. Thank you so much.I（T直努力學習）since I went back to school. I 已經取得彳艮大的進步 ）my studies with the help of my teachers.They often praise me and encourage me. Imight have left school and 仆可能獲得這樣好的教育 ）.I have made up my mind to更大進步）.How are you getting o

14、n with your life and work? I would like to meet you 1 自）,but I次有機會）do so. Would you please sendme a photo of yourself?再次感謝你慷慨的幫助 ）and best wishes! Yours sincerely,Li Hua 鞏固與提高假如你是李華，暑假你參加了澳大利亞游學活動，回國后給host family寫一封信表示感謝。要點如下：1 .感謝他們一家的照顧；2 .分享游學體會；3 .詢問你寄的禮物（漢語詞典）是否收到；可編輯 精選文檔4 .邀請他們一家來中國游覽。注意：1.次數

15、100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Helen,Yours,Li Hua1 .內容：題材（跑題與否）與體裁（文體）；要點（齊全與否）2 .語言：地道、標準；高級詞匯和豐富句式；拼寫和語法錯誤3 .段落層次（清晰與否）；內在邏而鳴過渡總分精選文檔句式操練1. 我寫這封信是為了表達我對你幫我提高英語口語的謝意，你的幫助對我而言意義重大。meI am writing to extend my sincere gratitude/appreciation for your helping improve my spoken English, which means a lot t

16、o me.2. 你太好了，假期照顧我弟弟。It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.3. 正是你的善良和熱心幫助我克服了我的思鄉(xiāng)之情。（強調句/虛擬語氣 ）It was your kindness and warm heart that helped me overcome my homesickness.But for/Without your kindness and warm heart, I couldn homesickness.If it had not been for your kin

17、dness and warm heart, I couldnthave overcomemyt have over可編輯homesickness.ess and warm heart, I couldnt have overcome myHad it not been for your kindn homesickness.在空格內填入適當的詞句。假如你是一名失學兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國工作的Mr. Brown 的資助，可以重返校園。你給Mr. Brown 寫了一封信，內容如下： 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激； 在老師的幫助下，學習有了很大的進步，受到老師的表揚和鼓勵； 決心更加努

18、力學習，取得更大的進步； 盼望見到Mr. Brown ，希望他寄來一張照片。注意： 1. 書信應包括以上所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2. 詞數： 100 左右Dear Mr. Brown ，I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much.I have been working hard since I went back t

19、o school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. But for your help, I might have left school and couldn such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.How are you getting on with your life

20、 and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself?Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua鞏固與提高假如你是李華，暑假你參加了澳大利亞游學活動，回國后給host family 寫一封信表示感謝。要點如下：1. 感謝他們一家的照顧；2. 分享游學體會；3. 詢問你寄的禮物（漢語詞

21、典）是否收到；4. 邀請他們一家來中國游覽。注意： 1. 次數 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Helen,I have arrived home safe and sound. I miss you so much and now I want to say “ thank you ” to your whole family. It was your help and kindness that made my stay in your country so enjoyable.The beautiful scenery and rich traditiona

22、l Australian culture impressed me a lot.And by communicating with you as well as other locals, I practiced my oral English so often that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker now. What a meaningful and unforgettable experience I have got!Have you received the Chinese dictionary? It s a gift fo

23、r you. I hope it will be ofhelp to you in Chinese learning. I am keeping expecting you to come to China soon.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua其它相關寫作（ 1）假如你是李華，在英國朋友Toby 家里度過了愉快的兩周。回國后，你打算給他寫一封感謝信，要點如下：1. 感謝他的熱情款待；2. 總結兩周的收獲（如了解了英國文化，提高了英語聽說能力等）；3. 邀請他明年來中國。注意： 1. 次數 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文

24、連貫。Dear Toby,I am writing to express my gratitude for your hospitality while I stayed at your home in England, which was an unforgettable experience for me and I benefited a lot from it.During the two weeks, I learned a lot about English culture and history by visiting many museums in England. In an

25、 environment exposed to English, my English listening and speaking abilities got improved greatly. Furthermore,I madesome new friends, who helped me a lot.Welcome to my home next summer. I will be your guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture and taste Chinese food. I am looking forw

26、ard to your coming.Yours,Hi Hua（ 2） Dear editor,I am a senior student that has experienced a great earthquake. I wrote to you to express my thanks to those who helped us when we suffered the disaster. During that time, I witnessed many strangers devoted their efforts to saving lives, providing food

27、and clothes regardless of their own safety. Without their help, I couldn t havefound my parents in such a short time, which makes me excited. Besides, only few days passed before the students returned to classrooms to have classes.As a result, we all treasure the opportunity of studying in the class

28、room. The help from others taught us how to respect others and take others into consideration.It was also the help from strangers that made us realize the importance of helping and caring for each other when facing disaster.Now, I think what we should do is to study harder and help more people in re

29、turn.（ 3）假設你是李華，交換生Tracy 剛剛結束在你們學校的學習生活，已經返回英國。作為班長，請你根據以下內容用英語寫一分感謝信，感謝她一學期以來帶給大家的美好回憶：? 1. 懷念與她相處的快樂時光；? 2. 感謝她對大家英語學習的幫助；? 3. 感謝她為班級捐贈的英文書籍；? 4. 歡迎她有機會再來中國。注意： 1.書信應包括以上所有要點,可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數 :100 左右Dear Tracy,How about your life back in Britain? I m writing this letter to express our thanks to you on behalf of the class.We enjoyed the great time when you stayed here. During last term, you helped us a lot in our English so we made great progress with English study.What s more,all our classmates are very thankfu