1、尊敬的簽證官您好！我是來自中國山東的簽證申請人 XX。我計劃于XXXX年8月22日至8月28日之間前往 法國與我的兩位好友一同自助旅行。我們本定于8月14日與8月20日之間在法國相聚并一同游覽法國的美麗風光， 可因為我的申請資料準備不充分不準確導致赴法的簽證申請被拒。因為一直期待著能夠踏上美麗的法國領土，與兩位好友一起開心游覽，在得知被拒的結果后，我個人非常的難過，我的兩位朋友也非常的失落。因為大家平時的工作學習都非常的忙碌，能夠一起去法國游覽對我們來說是很難得的機會，而能夠互相分享旅途中的樂趣，也是我們最為期待的事情，因此他們為我更改了旅行計劃，希望我能認真準備再次申請，且能于8月下旬和他們

2、一起去法國旅游。為了能最終達成這一行程，我決定在短期內再次申請，認真準備并補全所有材料。因此此次遞交的材料與上次有著非常大的不同，更全面與準確。同時針對上次的失誤，我向您做出如下的解釋，懇請您百忙之中能夠抽時間審閱：1. 關于上次簽證材料的誤漏。由于我本人準備申根國家簽證資料的經驗比較欠缺，同時由于我在外地，材料的遞交有諸多不便，因此我決定找一個代理幫忙整理所有材料。而正是這一決定，讓我受到了極大的誤導。譬如，我的此次的法國之旅是有兩個朋友同行的，而代辦機構幫忙整理的材料中并未提及此點。此次材料中我加附了兩名同行者護照首頁與法國簽證頁的文件。2. 關于此行的目的。我去法國的目的純屬對法國悠久的

3、歷史文化、聞名已久的名勝古跡、以及美麗的人文與自然風光的向往。而絕無長期滯留法國的意向。原因如下：1）我的父母愛人、親人朋友全都在中國，我與他們感情深厚無法離開他們。2 ）我受過良好的教育，有著豐富的工作經驗。曾長期就職于世界五百強的跨國大公司：XXXXXX公司（您可以參見我在此公司任職期間獲得的多次嘉獎的文件，以及拜耳為我開具的收入證明）。只是由于我丈夫的公司業務越來越繁忙， 我才離職幫忙經營自家公司。由此可見，在中國我擁有良好的工作機會及高薪，而對法語一竅不通的我在法國則很難生存。3. 關于電話問題。由于我重點負責招生代理的業務，常用電腦在外辦公，見客戶時間較多，靈活度較高。同時因為英語比

4、較好，極少情況下也曾在公司的學校幫忙代教過英語課程。而有些辦公室內勤人員 對我個人并不熟悉，猛然間接到使館電話，雖然與我相識，但對于我的各人信息并不能準確的回答，導致回答信息的混亂與不準確。但這并不妨礙我是公司的經營者與管理者的事實。而我本人也因為是第一次辦理導致的過度緊張和興奮，對于使館的電話也未能流利回答。希望您能予以理解。4. 關于銀行流水。我的工資獎金收入常用支付寶理財這一收益較高的工具來管理。為了方便法國旅游的行程，我將里面的余額在幾天前全部轉入我的銀行賬戶。因此此次我又附加提供了支付寶的蓋章對賬單， 從支付寶與建設銀行賬戶間的轉賬記錄您可以看到，我有著穩定的較高的固定收入， 賬戶里

5、的所有余額是一個穩定積累的結果。綜上所述，我只是一個向往去法國和朋友一起旅行的旅游簽證申請者。所有提供的資料和情況絕無虛假， 全部屬實，希望您能夠明辨。由于在百忙的工作與學習中能夠與志同道合的朋友抽出一致的時間一同旅游的機會非常難得，同時我本人也有著足夠的消費能力，也絕無意愿和理由在法國做旅游外的其他逗留，因此懇切地希望您能批準我的簽證并給我這個機會成行。謝謝！申請者：（此處親筆簽名）日期：英文翻譯版：Interpretation for Visa ApplicationDear visa officer:Thank you for reading my letter. I am XXXX X

6、XX, a visa applicant from Shandong, China. I plan to travel in France with two of my friends from August 22nd to 28th, XXXX. Actually, we used to schedule to travel in France together between August 14th and 20th, but because of my inaccurate and insufficient visa application information, I was reje

7、cted on August 4th, 2015.Since I have been looking forward to being able to set foot on the beautifulFrench territory with the company of my two friends, after learning theresult ofapplication, I am very upset, and my two friends also feel very frustrated. Since normally we are always busy with work

8、 and study, going to France together for travelling is quite a rare opportunity for us, and being able to share the fun during the trip is also the most anticipated things for us. As a result, my two friends changed their travel plans, with the hope that I can prepare and apply again, and finally ge

9、t passed, so that I can go with them in late August.In order to reach the trip, I decided to apply again after a short term, with much more accurate and sufficient collection of application materials. So the materials submitted this time is a lot different from the last one. And at the same time, ac

10、cording to the errors and omissions I made last time, I would like to make the following explanation, and thank for your attention to give a reading of them:1. On the omissions of the visa materials submitted last timeDue to the lacking of experience in visa application, and inconvenience of submiss

11、ion for a person from a distant city, I decided to entrust the preparation of my visa materials to an agency. Finally, it was proved a huge mistake: For example, my trip to France would be accompanied by two of my friends, while the agency didn' mention it at all in the materials. So thistime, I

12、 have also added the passport documents of them as a proof.2. On the purpose of the tripI choose to go to France just for the yearning of having a look at its classic and beautiful culture, the famous historic sites, as well as the beauty of the humanities and natural scenery, without any intention

13、of long stay in there. And get reasons as follows: 1) My parents, relatives and friends are all in China, and I have a very deep feeling with them, which makes me not want to leave them for any reason. 2) I was well educated and got a lot of experience of work.I used to work for an international Wor

14、ld' Top500 company for six years, and got manyawards(documents and income certificate enclosed) as an excellent employee, Thus, I want to say, in China I can get good job opportunities and high salaries quite easily, but if in France, I would suffer a very difficult survival with knowing nothing

15、 about French.3. On the phone call.Because I am mainly in charge of the recruitment of the agencies, I use the computer and meet clients a lot. That means my working time and place are highly flexible, so I am not always at the office. At the same time, due tomy relatively good English, in very few

16、cases, I helped to teach English in theschool of the company. And since some of the office admin staff they are not that familiar with me, it caused a confusion and panic of them when receiving the phone call of embassy out of a sudden. That is also the reason why some of them cannot give the accura

17、te personal information of mine. On the other hand, when I got the call from embassy for the first time in my life, due to the excessive tension and surprise, I also did not make a very good performance of myself. On this point, I hope I could get your understanding.4. On the bank financial flowI us

18、ually manage my income and bonuses with a financial tool called ALIPAY, so that I can get higher interests. In order to facilitate the French trip, I transferred the savings in it to my bank account. I also got a stamped documents to prove that, and from the transfer records, it can be seen that I have a stable fixed income which is pretty high, and my account balance is the result of a steady accumulation of the salaries.To sum up, I ' m just a tourist visa applicant who aspire