1、三、增加細節的 5 大策略在英語書面表達中，增加細節內容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提綱類寫作中，考生一 定不能簡單地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖 片內容，否則很有可能造成內容不充實、字數要求不達標或者結構不連貫。適當增加細節內 容，能夠使習作流暢、豐滿，達到應有的表達效果。r微技能突破微技能（一）列舉具體的實例進行補充說明i我們青少年應盡我們所能保護環境、拯救地球。We tee nagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.TWe teenagers

2、should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.Forexample, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags refuse to use single-use productsplant more trees and save water and energy.2我要花一些時間和父母待在一起。I II spend some time staying with my parents.TI | spend some time staying wit

3、h my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework.3. 我想找一個像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。I d like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.TI d like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible, we can traveltogether or share traveling experiences.4. 我是一個充滿活力的

4、健康男孩，我非常喜歡體育運動。I m a healthy boy full of energy , so I like sports very much.TIam a healthy boy full of energy, so I like sports very much , especially outdoor activities.WheneverI have time , I ll go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.【題組過關 1】根據括號內提示完成句子1. The In ternet is playi ng a mo

5、re and more importa nt part in our daily life.We can not only read newsfrom home and abroad（我們不僅能閱讀國內外的新聞 ）,but also get information , send emails and attend on li ne schools.2. Laura is a sta ndard America n style.She speaks perfect America n En glish（ 她說一口完美的美式英語），and that s why I am crazy about h

6、er.3. However , it seems people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communicationFor example , many people begin to pay less a 卄 ention to face-to-facecommunication（比如，很多人開始越來越不重視面對面的交流）.4. However, every coin has two sides, so does the Internet.For example, being lost in the Int

7、ernetmay afect our study and work（比如，沉溺于因特網也許會影響我們的學習和工作）.微技能（二）增添與所寫信息相關的神態、動作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內容1. 我有時去村西的小河游泳。I went swim ming in the river of the west of the village now and the n.TI went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then. The water in the river wasvery clear.（背景渲染）TWeathe

8、r permitting , Iwent swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.（ 相關 背景）2. 我發現了一些不良行為。I found some bad behavior.TIfound some bad behavior. Some people scribbled on the wall; some people played soccer onthe lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere .（相關行為描述 ）3. 晚飯后，這位男士走向了臥室。Af

9、ter supper, the man went to his bedroom.TAfter a rich meal, the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.（神態、動作 ）【題組過關 2】根據括號內提示完成句子5. Con sideri ng the activity is of great value/is meanin gful（ 考慮至卩這項活動很有意義）,weintend todesig n a uniform suited to our own class.6ll try my best to make your un cle

10、 happy here.I am eagerly look ing forward to his visit to ourcity（我熱切地期盼著他來我們城市參觀）.7. Many teenagers don t pay any attention to their health , especially during the holiday.They spend toomuch time watching TV（他們花費太多的時間看電視 ）,playing games and chatting on the Internet all night.8. Looking back to my s

11、tay in Britain , I felt very happy and satisfied（我感至 U 非常高興和滿意 ）.9.ln the summer vacation , I am longing to get/have a part-time job（ 我渴望得至 U份兼職工作 ）. 微技能（三）增加相關信息的時間、地點等內容1. 我要和父母一起去超市購物。I m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.TI m going to do some shopping with my parents i

12、n the supermarket and won t be back untilabout 5 : 00 in the afternoon.（增加時間）2. 我已經帶來了你讓我歸還的這兩本書。I have take n with me the two books you asked me to return.TIhave taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library .（增加地點） 【題組過關 3 根據括號內提示完成句子10. Yao Mi ng , who was born in Sha ngh

13、ai on September 12,1980（1980 年 9 月 12 日出生于上海）,started play ing for the Shan ghai Sharks as a tee nager.11. The Chinese Silk Road， which starts from today s Xi an and finally finishes at the east coastof（起源于今天的西安，并最后達到 的東海岸）the Mediterranean, is well-known to theworld.12. Today I paid a visit to one

14、of the greatest cities in Asia , Beijing in China（在亞洲，中國的北京 ）.13was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment/immediately/as soon as/directly（.就.）I arrived here at 6 o clock in the morning by plane.微技能（四）適當增加與所給信息相關的原因、結果、條件、讓步、手段、目的、地點等內容1. 假設你是李華，你的英國筆友 Henry 最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請根據下面要點寫一封回信，說明你的

15、計劃，并簡述理由。1.休息；2.讀書；3.參加社會活動。（1）1 need a good rest.I ll do some reading.TI need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.Of course ,I ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well.（因果關系）（2）1 ll take part in some social activities.TIf I have free time , I ll t

16、ake part in some social activities.（ 條件狀語 ）TIf possible, I ll take part in some social activities.（ 條件狀語）TIf possible, I ll take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know moreabout the society.（結果狀語）2. Tracy 來電話：咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）見面取消。Tracy called , say ing that she could n t m

17、eet you at Bolt on Coffee.TTracy called , say ing that she could n t meet you at Bolt on Coffee as she had somethingimportant to do .（原因狀語）3. 幫助鄰居的孩子們補習英語。I also helped childre n in the n eighborhood with their En glish less ons.TIalso helped childre n in the n eighborhood with their En glish less o

18、n sTo my joy, they maderapid progress and their parents thought highly of me .（增添結果）【題組過關 4 根據括號內提示完成句子14. Tomb Sweeping Day , one of the traditional Chinese festivals（ 傳統的中國節日之一 ）,usually fallsaround April 5 every year to honor the dead and satisfy their ancestors.15. With the global climate becomi

19、ng warmer and warmer（ 伴隨著全球氣候變得越來越暖禾廿）,ourearth is faced with great threat.16.Situated/Located in northeast（坐落在東北咅 B ）, Beijing is well-known for its cultural relics whichhave bee n there for a long history.17. During this period , people will go to clean the graves and pay respect to their ancestor

20、s , carryingfood and fruit（帶上食物和水果）.18. Being a senior school stude nt（作為一名高中生 ）,it s every one s duty to do someth ing to saveour earth.19. As is known to all/As every one knows（眾所周知）,Earth Hour is an activity which aims at sav ing energy.微技能（五）結尾適當發揮，寫出個人感受、評價、希望愿景、倡議等1.Although I was very tired t

21、his summer holiday ， I felt very happy for what I did.（ 個人感受 ）2.1 think such activities are necessary and meaningful.（評價）3n a word， if she would like to learn Chinese ， I hope she will do it well.（ 愿景）4.As students, it s our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.（ 倡議）【題組過關 5 根據括號內

22、提示完成句子20. As a professional basketball player（作為一名專業的籃球運動員），he is one of China sbest-k nown athletes.21.1 thi nk Beijing is well worth a seco nd visit（ 非常值得再次參觀 ）.22n my view， no matter how/however attractive the Internet is（不管因特網多么吸引人），itshouldn t separate us from our loved ones.23. We drew a concl

23、usion through the experiment（通過這個實驗我們得出一個結論）:thetemperature does n t cha nge whe n ice is melt ing into water.24. Let s develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributionsto our environment（盡力為我們的環境做出更多貢獻）.25. Therefore，we should spend time with our families ，en

24、joying the time when we are together（享 受我們在一起的時光）.r隨堂限時練I.按要求對下列句子進行擴充1. 每天要努力學習，為每一次考試做出仔細的計劃。（增加條件狀語）Study hard every day and make careful plans for every examf we are prepared : we will not feelworried.2.復旦大學位于上海。（增加 which 引導的非限制性定語從句）Fudan University is located in Shanghai , which is an internat

25、ional city where I can get a lot of knowledgeand experience.3. 不管我將面對什么樣的困難，我都不會屈服。（增加目的狀語）To realize my dream, whatever challenge I will face , I will never give in.4我們應該學會如何與他人相處。（增加具體信息說明）We should learn how to get along well with others.For example ，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.5.些學生非常擔心考試以至于晚上無法入睡。（增加結果狀語）Some students are so worried about exams that they can t fall asleep at night.As a result，they feelsleepy in the day time and