1、精選優質文檔-傾情為你奉上初中英語作文高分秘訣1. 動筆之前，認真審題中考考試說明指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。2. 圍繞中心，擬定提綱書面表達評分原則有四條：（1）內容要點；（2）運用詞匯和結構的數量；（3）運用語法結構和詞匯的準確性;(4）上下文的連貫性。由此可見，要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏

2、要點，同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，設想幾個承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時切忌結構分散，廢話連篇，嚴重跑題。書面表達，內容廣泛，題材多樣，要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記，要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況；如果是書信，則要注意書信的格式，注意短文字數不要低于或超過規定的字數太多。3. 語言通順，表達準確 (1) 避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。(2) (2) 多用簡單句型，記

3、事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1) 語態、時態要準確無誤。2) 主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。3) 注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。4) 注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。5) 注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。標點符號特別注意漢英的不同，例如： 漢語 英語 A. 句號 。 . B. 省略號 C. 頓號

4、 、 無(4) 描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2) 服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3) 內心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4) 感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5) 動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring

5、, fetch 等。(5) 上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據故事情節，事情發生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法：1) 表示并列關系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or 2) 表示轉折關系的過渡詞：but, yet, however 3) 表示時間關系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time,

6、later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that 4) 表示空間關系的過渡詞：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside 5) 表示比較關系的過渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as 6) 表示對照

7、關系的過渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though 7) 表示遞進關系的過渡詞： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again 8) 表示因果關系的過渡詞：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result9) 表示解釋說明的過渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually 10) 表示強調的過渡詞：i

8、n fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 11) 表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 12) 表示列舉的過渡詞：for example , such as 13) 表示總結性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, i

9、n general, in all, in a word, generally speaking 4. 不會表達，另辟蹊徑中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語表達習慣。(1) 迂回而行 當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時，可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路，然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。(2) 小詞大用 漢語中有些語意看來很復雜很文

10、雅，但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3) 借花獻佛 有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現。因為剛剛做過題，記憶猶新，那么就可信手拈來，為我所用。5. 錦上添花，量力而行 如果你還有時間和精力，想把書面表達寫得更好，那么，請注意以下幾點：(1) 句型多樣化，不要I（We）到底，使人覺得乏味。(2) 適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句。(3) 進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句。(4) 適當使用

11、分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞。(5) 偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。(6) 適當調換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7) 上下句子緊接時，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節省篇幅。6. 書寫工整，卷面整潔字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認，要保持卷面的整潔。7. 寫完之后，勿忘檢查中考作文時，由于時間緊、內容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手：(1) 格式是否有錯。(2) 拼寫有無錯誤。(3) 語

12、言是否用錯。(4) 時態、語態錯誤。(5) 標點錯誤。(6) 人稱是否用錯?！咀⒁狻看藭r不宜在卷面上作較大的改動以免顧此失彼，影響全局。總之，只要平時同學們多練習寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧，合理分配時間，在中考時一定能寫出高質量的作文，得到令人滿意的考分。3、 典型例題（一）（2012河北）書面表達（共計10分） 91.假如你叫李華，請你就“英語老師用英語還是用英漢雙語教學，這一問題，根據下面的提示和要求，給你的老師Miss Li 寫一封信，談一談你的看法。提示：（1）What is your idea? (2) Why do you think so? (3)What is your ad

13、vice?要求：（1）信須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。 （2）信中不要涉及真實的人名和校名。開頭和結尾已給出，不記錄總次數。 （3）詞數：60-80.Dear Miss Li,I think youd better use Hopefully you can think about it. Best wishes! Yours, Li HuaDear Miss Li, I think you'd better use English in class. When you speak English, we'll have a good chance to improve ou

14、r listening kills .It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have, the more progress we will make ! So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak clearly and slowly. This way,

15、 we can learn English better and better.Hopefully you can think about it.Best wishes! Yours, Li HuaDear Miss Li, I think you'd better use both English and Chinese. The best way to learn English is to use it. When you teach in English, it's good for our listening. At the same time it is helpf

16、ul to improve our speaking, reading and writing .However ,if you only ous English, we can't follow you sometimes , especially when you explain grammar rules and language points. So my advice is "Use English when possible and use Chinese when necessary". This way, we can learn English b

17、etter.Hopefully you can think about it.Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua（二）【河北省2011】B) 書面表達（共計10分）91.假如你看到或聽到下面這則消息，請以李華的名義，給你的英國筆友Davy發一封電子郵件，告訴他這個感人的故事及你的感受。河北農業大學93級學生李寶元因病于1996年去世。他所在班級的26名同學決定共同幫助李寶元的父母。十五年來，他們寄出15張匯敖羊和56封信。提示：(1) Tell him the true story.(2) Talk about how you feel about it.(3) Say so

18、mething about what you can learn from it.要求：（1）文稿須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。（2）電子郵件的開頭和結尾己給出，不計入總詞數。（3）詞數：6080個。參考詞匯：money order (匯款單), go on, be moved (感動), be full of loveI'd like to tell you a true story. Li Baoyuan. a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family. Unluckily, he_-.Hi

19、Davy,Id like to tell you a true story. Li Baoyuan, a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family. Unluckily, he became ill and died in 1996. However, all his 26 classmates decided to help Baoyuans parents. In the past fifteen years, theyve sent 15 money orders and 56 letters to

20、his parents. And their true love is still going on.Im really moved. As a student, I should learn from them and try to help others. If everyone would like to do that, the whole world will be full of love!What do you think of it?Please write soon!Li Hua75. 成長中每個人都要面對煩惱，并解決問題。假設你叫劉明，是美國中學生愛麗絲的朋友。你收到了她的

21、電子郵件，請給她回復，回答她的問題，提出你的建議，并就此事談談你的看法。Hi! Liu Ming, Im so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, Im afraid she wont pay me back. I dont know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. Im looking forward to

22、hearing from you soon. Yours,Alice    參考例文：Hi！Alice ,I'm glad to hear from youYes，I sometimes have the same problemI think if she really needs the money，you'd better lend it to herYou don't need to worry too muchShe'll probably pay you back when she has moneyIf you don

23、't lend her the money，I'm afraid you may lose the friendI think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each otherSo when my friends need money，I will try my best to help themMaybe I'll get it back，or maybe I won'tI hope what I said can help you Yours， Liu Ming（四）2010 北京

24、 十、文段表達（15分）根據中外提示和英文書信內容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信，信的開頭惡化結尾已給出，其詞數布局如梭完成的回信內。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。 假設你叫劉京，是美國中學生托尼的筆友，你收到了他的來信。請給托尼寫一封回信，回答他的問題，介紹北京良好的公交服務，并談談你的感受。Hi! Liu Jing,My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he ahs heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself. He says the

25、bus service in Beijing is very good now, and people can to anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Tony Dear Tony,Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is rea

26、lly good now. There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village. Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap.I like taking a bus because I think its comfortable and also good for th

27、e environment. So its a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing.If you have more questions, please ask me. Yours, Liu Jing（5） 天津 假如你是某學生雜志社的編輯Diana，收到了讀者Steve的一封來信，心中傾訴了他的煩惱。請根據提示內容，給Steve寫一封回信。提示：與人交流課上參與小組討論，表達自己的想法；課間和同學們交流表達善意主動問候同學；對同學友好；幫助同學參加活動積極參加班級活動（如：運動會、歌詠比賽等）參考詞匯：小組討論 group wo

28、rk 表達 express要求：1. 詞數：80-100個。2. 開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。 3. 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發揮。Dear Diana,I just came to a new school. And I cant get on well with my new classmatesWhat should I do? Steve* Dear Steve, Ive learned about your problem. I think _ Best wishes DianaDear Steve, Ive leaned your problem. I think you

29、should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to talk with your classmates at break. If you want to get on well with your classmates, dont forget to say hello when you meet them. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meeting, football games and singing competitions. Im sure you will soon be among friends. Best wished DianaXI. 書面表達(共1小題；滿分20分) (2013年 安徽）今天是父親節。假定你是李華，請給你的美國朋友John寫一封電子郵件，談談你將如何與父親一起度過這個特別的日子