writingpractice transformation teacingaims enablestudentstolearnandmasterthegoodstructureofapassageandhowtopolishyourcomposition writingstrategies transforming standards polishing writingpractice writingpractice transformation 李興民 東營市第一中學07級4班 teacingaims enablestudentstolearnandmasterthegoodstructureofapassageandhowtopolishyourcomposition writingstrategies transforming standards polishing writingpractice revision starsentences 1 從這張表格中我們可以看到 在過去的幾年里 北京發生了巨大的變化 2 我們對野生動物保護加以高度重視的時候到了 3 孩子參加有償勞動的一個優點是這種實踐可以培養小孩的獨立性 自主性和責任感 4 我堅決主張把教育放在第一位 因為科學技術決定了我們能否趕超那些發達國家 5 多數風俗習慣都產生了巨大的改變的原因是它們大多與封建迷信有關 與現代社會格格不入 6 目前 去國外旅游在青年人中間已成為一個普遍現象 1 ascanbeseenfromthistable greatchangeshavetakenplaceinbeijinginthepastseveralyears 2 itishightimethatwelaidgreatemphasisonthewildlifeprotection 3 anadvantageofchildren sparticipatinginsomepaidworkisthatthispracticecancultivatetheirindependence self deteminationandsenseofresponsibility 4 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