雅思大作文 第三類 2020 3 28 1 第三類大作文 辯論一個有爭議的觀點或二個 截然 不同的觀點 并給出自己的意見 立場 或建議Somepeoplethinkschoolsshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicknowledge Othersthinktheyshouldalsoteachstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Somepeoplethinkspacetravelisimportant Othersthinkpeoplewillnotrememberthis Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Manyparentsthinkadvertisingonlytellsinformationaboutsnacksandtoystochildren Butcompaniesthinkadvertisingalsotellsusefulinformation Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Somepeoplebelievethatnationalsportsteamsshouldbefinanciallysupportedbythegovernment Someotherpeoplethinktheyshouldbefundedbyprivateresourcessuchascorporationsandindividuals Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinions 2020 3 28 2 第三類大作文推薦框架 題目特點 Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Doyouthinktheiradvantagesoutweightheirdisadvantages引言段 用自己的話轉述題目中有爭議的雙方 給出文章的目的 正方段 討論你傾向的觀點 陳述1 2個正方論點與論據 論點解釋例子逐步展開 反方段 陳述你反對的觀點 討論1 2個反方論點與論據 論點解釋例子逐步展開 與正方段比例為1 1or2 3結論段 明確給出自己的立場 陳述原因 與希望 2020 3 28 3 Somepeoplethinkspacetravelsuchaslandingonthemoonisimportantwhileothersargueitwillnotberememberedbypeople Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion 2020 3 28 4 1 開頭段 Introduction Spacetravelhasbeenatthecentreofglobaldebateformanyyears Somepeoplethinkthatspacetravelisworthwhile becauseitwillbenefithumanbeingsinthelongrun However othersregardmankind sexplorationintoandresearchonspaceasawasteoftime resourcesandmoney Beforeairingmyopinion Iwillanalyzethismajorissuefromdiverseperspectives 2020 3 28 5 2 正方段Advocatesofspacetravelhavestrongfeelingsaboutthistopic Tobeginwith itiswidelyacceptedthatspaceresearchwillresolvemanydifficultproblemsperplexingmankind Asevidenceofthis theyarguethatspaceexplorationwillenablehumanbeingstolearnmoreabouttheorigin developmentanddestinyoftheuniverseaswellasaboutearth Secondly throughspacetravel wemaydiscovernaturalresourcesonotherplanetsinordertomitigatetheenergycrisisonearth Lastbutnotleast spaceprovidesanidealenvironmentforscientiststocarryoutcertainsubtleexperimentswhichleadtotheadvancementofscienceandtechnology 2020 3 28 6 3 反方段Onthecontrary theothersideofthecoinhasvoicedstrongopposition sayingthatpeoplewillnotbeimpressedbyspaceexplorationbecauseitisoflittlevaluetohumanbeings Aboveeverythingelse aftersomanyyearsofarduousworkandeffortsandwithastronomicalinvestmentintospaceresearch wehavenotyetattaintedanadequateunderstandingofspace Besides uptillnow novisiblepracticalbenefitshavebeenachievedintheexplorationofspace Tomakethingsevenworse spacetravelhasproducedalargeamountofspacerubbishwhichcontaminatestheenvironmentinspace 2020 3 28 7 4 結論段 Conclusion Inshort althoughspaceprobeisaninvestmentinthefutureandproducesfar reachinginfluenceonoursociety Ipersonallybelievethatitdoesnotmakesenseforustospendanastronomicalsumofmoneyandahugeportionofhumanresourcesonspaceexplorationwhenhumanityhasmanyotherpressingissuestoaddress suchasenvironmentalprotection poverty diseasesandsoon 2020 3 28 8 Withtheincreasingglobalizationinbusinessandtrade airtransportisoftenusedtoexporttypesoffruitandvegetablestoothercountrieswherethoseplantscannotgroworareoutofseason Somepeoplethinkitisapositivedevelopmentwhileothersconsiderthisuseofairtransportunjustified Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion 2020 3 28 9 Carryingfreshfruitandvegetablesfromcountrytocountryviaairisbecomingmorecommonthesedays Somepeopleholdpositiveviewsaboutdoingthiswhileothersbelieveitshouldnotbedone Personally Ibelieveitsbenefitsaremorethanitsshortages 2020 3 28 10 Tostartwith airtransportationenablesfruitandvegetablestobeconsumedinavarietyofregions andthereforeprovidesconsumerswithawiderrangeofoptionsintheirdiet AnillustrationofthisisinnorthChina wheneatingvariousvegetablesinwinterwasaluxuryinthepast becauseoflackofsunlightandcoldweather Thissituationhasbeenchangedbyairtransport Asaresult bycarryinggoodsbyplanes citizenscanselectallkindsoffruitandvegetableswhichcomefromotherplacesorcountries Besides airtransportationhasincreasedpeople sincomeinsomeareas Forexample Hainan asouthernprovinceofChina exportsitstropicalfruittomanycountriesbyairandthathashelpedmanyfarmerstolessentheirimpoverishedcircumstances 2020 3 28 11 Admittedly purchasingproductswhichutilizesairtransportcancostconsumersmore Anexampleofthisisthatlastweek Iboughtsomeoranges thepriceofwhichwasdoubledbecausetheywerefromAmerica Althoughtheywerealittleexpensive Iwascontentabouttheirflavor Becauseofgoodquality thereby theirevaluatedpriceseemedacceptableandreasonable 2020 3 28 12 Ingeneral eventhoughthecostofproductsthathavebeencarriedbyaircanbehigher individualsstillprefertopurchasethembecausetheyarefreshandingoodquality Therefore Ibelieveairtransportwillremainorincreaseitspopularityinthefuture 2020 3 28 13 TaskResponse 4Youhaveonlyreallyansweredonehalfofthequestion Youaresupposedtodiscussbothsidesoftheargument butyouonlybrieflymentionedthatairtransportcanraisefoodcosts Also yourexamplesaretoospecific whereyoutalkaboutdifferentregionsofChina ortoopersonal aboutyourtriptothemarket InTask2 youaresupposedtodiscussthequestionfromanabstractpointofview whichmeansyouneedtohaveabroadperspective Cohesion Coherence 5LexicalResource 5GrammaticalRange Accuracy 6 2020 3 28 14 2020 3 28 15 2020 3 28 16 2020 3 28 17 Somepeoplethinkusingculturalheritagetoattracttouristisharmful Othersthinkthatistheonlywayforculturalheritagetoremain Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion 2020 3 28 18 Somepeoplearguethatutilizingculturalheritagetoattracttouristsisharmfulwhileothersbelievethatistheonlywayforculturalheritagetoremain Inmyopinion bothofthestatementsarereasonable 2020 3 28 19 Tourismaffordsindividualswithaccesstokeeptheminformedabouttheculturesofwheretheyarevisiting and atthemeanwhile itprovidesthelocalgovernmentwithasubstantialamountoffundsfromthetaxrevenue Thiscanbeinvestedinpreservingtangibleculturalheritagesuchashistoricalsites oldbuildingsandhistoricalrelicsfromtourism However Ibelievethereismorethanonewaytokeepculturalheritage forinstance someinternationalorganizationsareplayingakeyroleinprotectingit 2020 3 28 20 Additionally itisundeniablethatutilizingculturalheritagetoattracttouristshasitsdisadvantages oneofwhichisitmightharmculturalheritageafteralongduration Forexample buildingswithalonghistoryareoftendestroyedbyvisitors Barsinthatbuildingcannotsupportmanypeoplebecausetheyeasilybend Thesadfactisthattheywerebrokenintheendbecauseofthousandsofvisitors Besidesthat touristsmayhaveaneffectonlocalresidents cultures Nevertheless Iamoftheopinionthatitappearsaslightlypessimisticbecausetourismalsohasgoodeffectsonprotectingculturalheritage 2020 3 28 21 Ingeneral eachviewhasitsownideasbutisnotcompletelycorrect Itishardformetofollowoneofthem Ibelieve therefore thatauthoritiesshouldconsidermoreaboutdevelopingthestrongpointsandavoidtheweakpointsoftourism 2020 3 28 22 TaskResponse 4Youhavedonewelltoaddressissuesonbothsidesoftheargument butthequestionaskedyoutostateyourownviewaswell Inthistypeofquestion youmustchooseaside Cohesion Coherence 6LexicalResource 6GrammaticalRange Accuracy 6 2020 3 28 23 常見語法錯誤類型一 名詞單復數與冠詞的使用 2020 3 28 24 Fix1 Employeescanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanemployers Fix2 Anemployeecanbenefitfromtelecommutingthanhisorheremployer Fix3 Employeescanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthantheiremployers Fix4 Theemployeecanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanhisorheremployer 2020 3 28 25 1 Conflictsmayarisebetweentouristandlocalresident 2 Somepeoplethinkifchilddonotacceptextraeducation itiswastetotheirvalubletimeandenergy 2020 3 28 26 常見語法錯誤類型二 動詞的使用 2020 3 28 27 1 Growupinapoorfamilymakessomechildrenfeeltheyarenotascapableasotherchildren 2 Someeventsarenotreportbythemediainadependableway 3 Thegovernmentsofallcountriesonthisplanetisbeginningtorealizetheseverityofwatershortage 2020 3 28 28 常見語法錯誤類型三 介詞的使用 Countriesshouldpayattentiononthedisadvantagesglobalizationmaycreate Oneofthesolutionsontheunemploymentproblemistoincreasetheenrollmenttograduateschools Theinternethasinsteadofteachersinmanyclassrooms ManystudentshangwithinlocalKTVbarsduringweekendsforsingingKaraoke 2020 3 28 29 常見語法錯誤類型四 形容詞和副詞的使用 1 Theworldisdevelopingrapidandprovidesmanywonderfullyopportunitiesforpeople 2 Admitted moderncommunicationmeanssuchasmobilephonesorcomputersareusedmoreandmorewidebecauseoftheirconvenienceandefficiency Deliveringelectroniclettersormessagestakesliteralnotimeandcostslittle Theywillbecomemainstreamsoftextcommunicationsinthefutureandplayanincreasingimportantroleinsociety 2020 3 28 30 Thesetypesofmobilityaretermedrespectablyspatial vertical andideationalmobility Thepresenceofwaterisaprerequisitefortheexistingoflife 常見語法錯誤類型五 詞義 詞性混淆 2020 3 28 31 常見語法錯誤類型六 關系詞 IshallneverforgetthoseyearswhichIlivedinthefarmwhichyouvisitedlastweek Heisamanofgreatexperience fromwhomuchcanbelearned Idon tlikethewaywhichyouspeaktoher Elevenyearsafterdismissalfromschool youngAlbertEinsteinpublishedthemostamazingtheoryofrelativitywhichchangedourunderstandingoftheuniverse 2020 3 28 32 Withtheworldisdeveloping thecomputer aswellsometheothertechnologies havegainpopular greatgivenmuchpeopleconvenienceandefficient 2020 3 28 33 人類的長壽有助于人類社會的進步 Humanlongevitycontributestotheprogressionofmankind 2020 3 28 34 最近幾年 人們已經對不加控制的汽車尾氣排放所引起的嚴重后果表示了關注 Inrecentyears peoplehasshownconcernonthedireconsequencesoftheincreasedcaremissions 2020 3 28 35 我強烈反對減少學校中的音樂和體育課程 Iprofoundly stronglydisagreewithcurtailingthemusicalandP Ecoursesatschool 2020 3 28 36 在過去的二十年里 環境保護已經上升成最熱門的話題之一 Inthepast20years environmentalprotectionhasarisenasoneofthehottesttopics 2020 3 28 37 動物保護是耗費時間的和徒勞無益的 Animalprotectionisbothtime consumingandunrewarding 2020 3 28 38 老師的使命之一是幫助學生開拓新的視角并努力實現社會和學術目標 onemissionofteachersistohelpstudentstodevelopnewperspectivesandtostriveforsocialandacademicgoals 2020 3 28 39 跳槽的一個原因是追尋更廣泛的工作經驗和面對新挑戰 Thereasonofjob hoppingisseekingawidervarietyofworkingexperienceandtakingupnewchallenges 2020 3 28 40 在全球范圍內 全球化給每個行業既帶來了機會又造成了問題 Globalizationposesbothopportunitiesandpro