知識點九：書面表達一、中考作文都有提示性詞匯，或中文提示、或詞組短語、或英文提示。我們在進行寫作時，要根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，設想幾個承上啟下的連詞。將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時切忌結構分散，廢話連篇，嚴重跑題二、語言通順，表達準確、避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。、多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。三、不會表達，另辟蹊徑中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采來打分。造句越簡單準確越好。復合句很好，但造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話： “錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不多給分。”如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。以下給出09年各地中考話題作文以供參考練習。話題1.健康隨著陽光體育運動在全國開展，政府對中學生身體素質有所下降這個問題給予了高度重視，提出了這樣的標語：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同學們參加了各種體育鍛煉之后，校園里出現了可喜的變化，強身健體，增強了學習效果，校園生活豐富了。請你報道一下學校開展這一活動的情況。注意：1.詞數80100左右。2.要求文章結構合理、內容通順、句子連貫。參考詞匯：build up ones body strength強健身體reduce diseases減少疾病構思方法1.認真閱讀、理解和思考題目中給出的所有信息點。信息點是圍繞著提示從文字中扣出來的。2.這個題目的信息點應該是：a.陽光體育；b.政府重視中學生身體；c.提出的標語；d.參加了各種體育鍛煉；e.有利于強身健體；f.增強了學習效果；g.校園生活豐富了。寫作方法 1.安排以上信息點在文中的邏輯關系。2.用所掌握的詞匯、詞組、固定句型將所有信息點表現在文章中。(The Sunny Sports, pay attention to the health of the students, raise the slogan, take part in the exercise, build up ones body strength, reduce diseases, and make study effective, school life, colorful)3.文章最后加入個人評價(觀點)。范文1As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid more attention to the health of the students and raised the EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY slogan. So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sports in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball and so on. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more active .Above all our study has all been improved.Lets take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases. 范文2Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.Though we live a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY has been raised by the government.At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look! The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it. The school life has become colorful and we are energetic. As a result we study harder and better.The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Lets keep on doing it.例2健康對于我們每個人來說是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了這個問題，你很為他們擔憂。請你以此為話題，并結合提示給他們寫一封信。提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是開車或坐車；2.每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次，或打球、或游泳；3.飲食要健康；4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。要求：1.短文結構完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法準確，符合邏輯；2.80100詞左右；3.開頭和結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數。構思方法1.找到信息點。2.這個題目的信息點應該是：a.作為兒(女)擔憂父(母)的身體狀況；b.上班最好步行；c.每周至少一次到體育場館從事體育鍛煉(球類運動、游泳等)；d.健康的飲食；e.早睡不熬夜。1.首先要談到對父(母的身體狀況擔憂。2.然后引出希望父(母)怎么做。3.作為小輩向父母提出建議和要求時，要注意語氣，不可以命令。4.注意信的寫作格式。范文1Dear Dad (Mum),Youre so busy every day that you dont pay much attention to your health. Im worried about your health all the time. Id like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isnt far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? Youd better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going swimming is also a nice choice, too. Whats more, its necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you can be healthier!Your loving son (daughter)Tom (Mary)范文2Dear Dad (Mum),Youre so busy every day that you dont pay much attention to your health. I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far. What about walking there because it can make you much stronger? Id like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.Im looking forward to receiving your letter.Your loving son (daughter)Tom (Mary)話題2 自行車自行車在北京仍然受歡迎，騎車上學或上班都很方便。如今越來越多的人, 這使得而騎車既可以.,又可以那么你更喜歡哪種交通工具呢?為什么?Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. It is easy to go to school or to go to work by bike, for waiting a bus always wastes us some time and always makes us worried. Now more and more people become rich enough to buy cars and it makes air dirty. Riding bicycles is good for us. It can help people keep healthy and save energy. I prefer riding a bike because it is cheaper and it can also help keep air from polluting話題3吸煙有害 It has been proved that smokers have made up half of the population in China. And the smokers are becoming younger and younger, even including some middle school students. Nowadays more and more people have realized smoking can do harm to peoples health. However, some people still enjoy smoking. Why? Because some of them think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others think that smoking can refresh them. In fact, smoking is a bad habit. It can cause a lot of diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires. Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves, but also bad for non-smokers. Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking. Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students. As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings. More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. But they are never bored with it. Some people think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others think that smoking can refresh them. Smoking causes many illnesses. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires. In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking. Please stop smoking at once.話題4 留守兒童如今，在我們身邊，父母均在外打工的留守兒童比比皆是。關注留守兒童，事構建和諧社會的重要內容。關注留守兒童，要靠全社會的共同努力。你認為留守兒童面臨的主要問題有那些？為了解決留守兒童的問題，請你向當地政府提建議提示：1.缺乏父母的關愛，性格孤僻，學習壓力大、自卑。 2.缺乏安全保障（家庭照管不力，容易犯錯誤甚至犯罪）。建議：1.學校建立留守兒童心里咨詢室，老師應該把愛播撒到每一個留守兒童的心田。 2.政府利用節假日建立留守兒童家長學校。 3.社會各界開展與留守兒童一幫一結對子的活動。 4.父母盡可能回到孩子身邊，給孩子生活上和學習上的幫助和關愛。Dear Mayor:(市長)Im a middle school student. Im writing to tell you something around us. Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the countryside, you know, they have many problems. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because theyre short of their families care.How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays; you can organize hand-in-hand activity to call on more people to help them. You can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says:” If everyone gives their love, the world will be better. Its very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.Best wishes to you! Sincerely, Li Hue話題5 和諧社會Harmonious Society假設你是李曉平，是黃岡中學的學生。請你圍繞“建設和諧社會”的主題，根據下面所給出的提示，用英語給全省中學生寫一封倡議書。1人與社會：祖國、家鄉、學校，熱愛關心；2人與人：家人、師長、同學，誠信互助；3人與自然：能源、環境、動植物，愛惜保護；4你的態度：內容由考生自己擬定。注意：1詞數80左右；2倡議書的開頭、結尾以及提示句已為你寫好，不計入詞數；3內容可適當發揮，注意行文連貫。Build a Harmonious SocietyDear fellow students, our government is going to build a harmonious society. I think it is everyones duty to work hard to achieve this goal. As high school students, what should we do? First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities. Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Most important of all, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life. Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students, lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute! Li Xiaoping From Huanggang High 話題6 環保根據所給中文提示語，以“Saving the Earth為題寫一篇80字左右的段文。注意語句擴展，意思連慣。段文開頭已給出。中文提示語： 1. 任何保護環境已成為世界最大難題之一。 2. 垃圾污染環境、損害健康，不要到處扔垃圾。 3. 廢水流到江里、湖里和田地里，污染農作物，殺死大量的魚。 4. 保持環境干凈和整潔。我們只有一個地球，應該保護她，使我們的家園更加美麗。所給詞語：pollute , harm, throw, rubbish, pour, try ones best Saving the Earth How to protect the environment becomes.How to protect the environment becomes one of the biggest problems in the world. We can find the rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms peoples health. So we should not throw rubbish onto the ground. Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers, the lakes and the fields. It can pollute plants, sometimes it can kill lots of fish.We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We have only one earth. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful為了保護地球有限的資源，我們應該采取什么措施呢？請根據下面的提示寫一篇約80詞的短文，短文開頭已經給出。提示詞；1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it 2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines 3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down 4.recycle useful rubbish, save resourcesAlthough the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water. Water is the source of life. No water, no life. So its very important for us to do so. Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.Save electricity. It is crucial. We cant imagine what the life will be like without it. Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on. We can save resources in this way.話題7旅游我們的家鄉有著悠久的歷史和秀麗的風光。假設你是一名導游，你正在接待一個來自英國的旅游團，請寫一篇短文簡要介紹我市的風景名勝，不少于60詞。參考詞匯：long history, beautiful views, tour guide, relaxing , educational, friendlyGood morning, everyone! Nice to meet you ! Im your tour guide today, Welcome to my hometown -Huanggang.Huanggang lies in the middle of Hubei Province; it has a very long history and many beautiful views. For example, Chibi Park and Ehuang Bridge are the most beautiful and relaxing among them. And the air is very clean and fresh. Hongan is very historical and educational. Huangmei is famous for the Huangmei Opera -one of the greatest local operas in China.Huanggang is also a good place for shopping and having delicious food . So far, a lot of new shopping malls and plazas have been built. You can buy what you like there ,If you want to try traditional Huanggang fodd,you can go to Night Snack Street, The food there is both delicious and cheap.There are still many other interesting and exciting things waiting for you to enjoy yourselves! Lets go for them!話題8 學校學習提示：在學習和生活中，你遇到過高興和難過傷心的事，請用英語描述這樣的經歷要求：1：詞數不少于60個，開頭已給出可選用下列詞匯：experience 經歷經驗 unhappiness 不快樂 confidence 自信心Hights And Lows In My LifeWe all have experienced highs and lows in our lives. I will never forget the experience when I began to learn English. I like English but I couldntt get the right way in learning. The more I wanted to remember, the harder I found it was. I was in a low spirit. I almost gave it up.Luckily, my English teacher encouraged me and helped me find a good way. By and by, I realized English was not such a terrible thing. I became brave enough to open my mouth to speak English. How excited I was! My confidence came back to me. Believe it or not, I won the first prize in Spoken English Competition in our school. It was the first time I experienced the highs in my life!話題9語言學習As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.Its good to study in groups and help each other.We should do more reading in our free time, If we have any problems, wed better ask others for help.As a student, working hard is important, but dont forget to play sports and keep healthy.I hope all of these will be helpful to us.How to be a good learner? As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Its good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time, If we have any problems, wed better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but dont forget to do sports and keep healthy.I hope all of these will be helpful to us.你校英文報欲征集有關學習經驗的小短文.請以How to be a good learner為題,寫一篇英語短文.短文應包含以下要點:1,概述:學法的重要性.2,提高學習效率的方法:有計劃,善思考,勤總結(sum up);會用工具書,善用機會和資源(resources);勞逸結合.3,成功的秘訣(key):勤奮加方法.Possible Version: How to be a good learnerlearning methods is very important to every student. Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the efforts. A poor learner also wishes to improve himself but doesnt know how.To be a good learner, one should have a proper study plan and be good at thinking and solving problems with the help of reference books, for example, a dictionary. One also has to sum up what has been learned, seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources. Besides, one is supposed to be good both at work and rest.Remember that diligence and good methods are the key to success. E-mail （電子郵件）Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,Im a Chinese boy. My name is Li Hong. Im very happy to know that Iall stay in your house for the English Summer Camp. Id like to say something about myself so that you can know me well. Im fifteen years old. I have a happy family with three people. Im studying in No. 1 Middle School. We learn eight subjects. Im interested in all of them. I like reading and playing the piano. I like English very much, but my English is not good enough. I think you can help me with my English. I hope to meet you soon.Best Wishes,Li Hong自我推薦Dear Chairman,I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am well. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the street. On the bus, I always give my seat to women with babies. Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park.If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others.Ill be glad if Im received, I am waiting for your answer.Yours, Wang LinThe Changes in My Hometown （家鄉變化）In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.Im sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.英語學習Everybody has different ideas about learning English, but I think learning English should become our habit. I love English and I have been studying English for four years. I have two foreign pen pals. We write to each other in English. They often tell me much interesting news about their countries. I enjoy telling the stories to my friends at school. I think English gives me lots of fun. And the more I learn English, the more confident I am. In my school, I am the monitor of English. Im other students god example. Im often praised by me teacher. English helps me succeed in studying.English has been a part of my life.環保Water is very important to humans. It is used in homes, in farming and so on. We know that much wa