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寫作專題突破應(yīng)用文寫作類型一書信體應(yīng)用文第5講咨詢信&告知信(1)咨詢信是寫信人對(duì)某方面的信息感興趣，希望了解詳細(xì)信息的信件。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：(2)告知信多是從個(gè)人角度出發(fā)，將對(duì)方想要了解的事情告訴對(duì)方，讓對(duì)方知道。告知信通常分為兩類：①告知某人有某事將要發(fā)生；②回復(fù)某人關(guān)于某事的詢問。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：(2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷改編)假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：1．你完成的作品；2．你的感想。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。一、找全要點(diǎn)(一)題干要求1．寫信目的：①IamwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday．2．介紹告知的內(nèi)容：②Ichosetodrawabeautifullandscapescene．③Idrewprettyflowers，acalmlake，andaclearbluesky．④Thefreshairandthebirdsongaddedacalmingeffecttothewholeprocess．⑤Itwasagoodexperiencetocreateartundertheopensky．⑥Icouldnotonlyconnectwithnaturebutalsofullyexpressmycreativity．3．你的感想：⑦Overall，Ithoroughlyenjoyedtheartclass．(二)邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)分享這次經(jīng)歷：⑧Ican'twaittoshowyoumycreationinpersonandperhapswecanenjoyasimilarexperiencetogether．二、塑造亮點(diǎn)(一)高級(jí)詞匯(升格②③⑤句中的加黑詞匯)1．beautiful→_________________________2．pretty→______3．good→_________________________________________breathtaking/picturesquelovelyunique/meaningful/rewarding/fruitful(二)高級(jí)句式1．用with合并詞匯升格后的②③句______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．用狀語從句合并詞匯升格后的⑤⑥句______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ichosetodrawabreathtakinglandscapescenewithlovelyflowers，acalmlake，andaclearbluesky．Itwasauniqueexperiencetocreateartundertheopensky，becauseIcouldnotonlyconnectwithnaturebutalsofullyexpressmycreativity．(謄寫成文，注意邏輯銜接和行文規(guī)范)DearChris，IamwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday．Intheclass，wewereaskedtocreateourartworkinspiredbynature．Ichosetodrawabreathtakinglandscapescenewithlovelyflowers，acalmlake，andaclearbluesky．Thefreshairandthebirdsongaddedacalmingeffecttothewholeprocess．Itwasauniqueexperiencetocreateartundertheopensky，becauseIcouldnotonlyconnectwithnaturebutalsofullyexpressmycreativity．Overall，Ithoroughlyenjoyedtheartclass．Ican'twaittoshowyoumycreationinpersonandperhapswecanenjoyasimilarexperiencetogether．Yours，LiHua(一)咨詢信1．開頭句(1)Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding/concerning...我寫信是想知道你能否給我提供有關(guān)……的信息。(2)Iamwonderingifyoucould/wouldletmeknowsomethingabout...我想知道你能否告知我有關(guān)……的情況。(3)I'mwritingtoinquire/askforsomeinformation/detailsabout...我寫信是為了咨詢有關(guān)……的信息/細(xì)節(jié)。2．主體句(1)I'dliketoknowsomethingabout...Iwouldalsoliketoinquire...我想知道關(guān)于……的一些事情。我還想咨詢……(2)AnotherpointIamuncertain/unclearaboutis...我還不確定的另外一點(diǎn)是……(3)Couldyoubesokindtotellmethetimearrangementfor...？你能告訴我……的時(shí)間安排嗎？(4)I'dbegratefulifyoucouldletmeknowifthereareanyspecialrequirementsfor...如果你能告訴我……有何特定要求，我將不勝感激。3．結(jié)尾句(1)Iamlookingforwardtoyourimmediate/promptresponse．期待你的及時(shí)答復(fù)。(2)Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucansendmeareplyassoonaspossible．如果你能盡快給我回復(fù)，我將非常感激。(3)Thankyouforyourkindness，andyourpromptreplytothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated．感謝你的善意，對(duì)于你對(duì)這封信的及時(shí)回復(fù)我們將非常感激。(二)告知信1．開頭句(1)It'sapleasureformetoinformyouof...我很高興地通知你……(2)Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails．我寫信是想告訴你一些相關(guān)的細(xì)節(jié)。(3)Havinglearnedthat...，Ican'twaittosharesomerelevantdetailswithyou．得知……，我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相關(guān)的細(xì)節(jié)。2．主體句(1)Somedetailsregarding/concerning...areasfollows．一些關(guān)于……的細(xì)節(jié)如下。(2)...willtakeplacebetween...and...，sowe'dbetter...……將在……和……之間進(jìn)行，所以我們最好……(3)Awiderangeofmeaningfulactivitieswillbeheldin...，including...，whichareboundtoappealtoenthusiastslikeyou．將在……舉辦多種多樣包括……在內(nèi)的有意義的活動(dòng)，這些活動(dòng)一定會(huì)吸引像你一樣的愛好者。(4)...isarrangedtostartfrom...，whichwilllast...……被安排從……開始，將為期……3．結(jié)尾句(1)Ifyouwanttoknowmoredetailedinformation/anythingelse，pleasedon'thesitatetocontactme/dropmealine．如果你想知道更多詳細(xì)信息/其他事情，請(qǐng)盡管聯(lián)系我/寫信給我。(2)Isincerelyhope