題型11道歉信01題型解讀01題型解讀02答題模板構建03滿分詞匯模板04滿分句型模板05滿分作文模板06知識遷移強化命題特點道勤信是因為自己的過失或疏忽，給別人造成了損失或帶來了麻煩，或因為自己不能履行約定需要向對方賠禮道歉而寫的信件。道歉信的語言應當簡練、誠懇，并且希望收件人能夠原諒自己。時態通常以一般過去時為主，一般將來時為輔。通常以第一人稱為主。第一段表明寫作意圖，對某事表示歉意。第二段說明道歉的具體事由，希望對方諒解或再次約定。第三段再次表明歉意，請求諒解 并提出補救措施。【滿分詞匯模板】單詞apologize道歉；forgive原諒；pardon原諒；inconvenience不便；appointment約定；negligence疏忽大意；engagement約定；indeed確實；sincerely真誠地；短語muchtoone’sregret令某人非常遺憾的是；make?up和解；makeachoice選擇；apologizetosb.forsth.因某事向某人道歉；saysorrytosb.對某人說抱歉；beabsent/presentfrom缺席/出席；begyourforgivenessfor懇求你的原諒；causeinconvenience造成不便；miss/canceltheappointment錯過/取消約會；makeupfor.…彌補；expressmyregret表達我的道歉；beconsiderateof體諒；acceptmyapology接受我的道歉；conflictwith...與……沖突；makeanapologytosb.forsth.因某事向某人道歉【滿分句型模板之開篇“風頭”句】I'mtrulysorrytotellyouthat.….,andI’mwritingtoexpress/conveymydeepestapologytoyou...很抱歉告訴你……，我寫信向你表達我深深的歉意。2.Iamwritingtooweyouanapologyforbeingunableto...我沒能……,我寫信向你道歉。3.IamterriblysorryforwhatIdid,butbelieveIdidn'tmeanto...對于我做的事，我感到十分抱歉。但請你相信,我并非有意要……4.IapologizemostsincerelyforwhatIsaidthatday.Ididn'tmeantohurtyou.我誠摯地為那天我說的話向你道歉。我不是有意傷害你的。5.Pleaseforgivemefornotbeingabletoinformyou.請原諒我沒能通知你。6.Ioweyouanapologyforbeingunabletohelpyou.我沒能幫助你，應該向你道歉。7.IamindeedsorryforwhatIsaid,butbelieveIhadnointentionto...對于我說的話，我確實感到很抱歉。但請相信，我并非故意要......。Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords.請原諒我說話欠妥。 【滿分句型模板之開篇“豬肚”句】IfeelawfullysorryaboutitandIwonderifit'sconvenientforyoutomakeitanothertime.為此我感到非常抱歉，我想知道你是否方便另約時間。Muchtomyregret,Iwasunableto.….andIwishthatmyapologycouldhelptosomeextent.很遺憾,我不能夠……希望我的道歉在某種程度上能起到作用。I’mafraidIhavebroughtyoutoomuchtroubleandIwantyoutoknowhowregretfulIamfeeling.恐怕我給你帶來了太多麻煩，同時我也想讓你知道對此我覺得很抱歉。Ijustdonotknowwhattosayaboutthematter.關于這件事我不知該說些什么。IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.我想讓你知道現在我是多么遺憾。Ididnotmeantohurtyourfeelings.我不想傷害你的感情。Ifeelyouaredispleasedatmyfailingtokeepmypromise,butIhopeyouwillforgiveme.恐怕你會因為我的失約而不高興，但是希望你能原諒我。Itwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyoutogivemeanotherchancetodosth.Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.你太好了，再給我一次機會做某事。我保證不會再發生這種事情。Ifitisconvenientforyou,let'shaveanotherappointmenttodosth.如果方便的話，我們再約去做某事。Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?順便說一下，我們在下周的某個時間一起吃晚飯好嗎?【滿分句型模板之結尾“豹尾”句】1.Onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.對于造成的不便，我再次表示歉意。2.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapologies.我衷心希望你能理解我的處境,并接受我的道歉。3.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain請允許我再次表示歉意。4.I'msorryforalltheinconvenience.我為引起的所有不便表示歉意。5.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyoncemoreforanyinconveniencecaused.對于任何帶來的不便，請再次接受我真誠的道歉。【滿分作文模板一】Dear________(對象),I'mwritingtoexpressmysincereapologiestoyoufor_____________________（未能去書店withyouatourappointedtime.I’msorryfortheinconvenienceitmaycauseyou.______________________________（我會缺席的原因是因為）mygrandfather________________________________（突然生病）yesterdayandnowheisinhospital.Myfamilyaretakingturnstotakecareofhiminthehospital.SoIhavetostaywithhimthatday._____________________________（我真誠地希望）youcanacceptmyapologies.Meanwhile,__________________________________（我將感激不盡）ifyoucouldallowmetofixanotherdate.______________________________________(如果你方便的話),shallwemeetat8:00amnextSaturday?Ifnot,please________________________________(讓我提前知道)whattimesuitsyoubest.Sorryagainfortheinconvenience______________________________所引起的.Yours,LiHua【滿分作文模板示例】Dear__________（稱呼），Iamwritingthislettertosaysorrytoyouformyfault thatgotyouinjured.ItwasmorethanIcouldexpecttheknockonyouwouldhaveyourlegbrokenwhenItriedtopassyouonthebasketballcourt.Althoughithappenedaccidentally,Idofeelveryterribleforthisandblamemyself.Anyway,it’smyroughnessthatbroughtyousomuchhurtandtrouble!HowIwishIhadn’trushedsoquicklyorknockedyoudown!Isincerelyhopeyouwillgetbetterassoonaspossible.Ifyouforgivemeanddon’tmindenjoyingplayingbasketballwithmeafteryourrecovery,Iwillbehappy.Pleaseallowmetoexpressmyregretonceagain.Sincerely,LiHua【譯文】親愛的____:我寫這封信是為了為我的過錯使你受傷而向你表示抱歉。當我在籃球場上試圖超過你時，我對你的撞擊會打斷你的腿。雖然這是偶然發生的，但我確實為此感到很糟糕，并責怪我自己。總之，是我的粗暴給你帶來了這么多的傷害和麻煩！我真希望我沒有這么快就把你撞倒！我真誠地希望你能盡快好轉。如果你原諒我，也不介意在你康復后和我一起打籃球，我會很高興的。請允許我再次表示遺憾。李華1．假定你是李華，你的朋友Sarah曾邀請你參加她下個星期四的生日晚會，可是弟弟生病了，需要人照看，不能去參加。請根據以下要點給他寫一封道歉信。1.表達歉意;2.解釋原因;3.提出彌補的辦法。注意：1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearSarah,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSarah,

I’mindeedverysorrythatIwon’tattendtoyourbirthdaypartyasIwasplannedbefore.

Asforthesuddenchange,Ihavetoadmitithasanunavoidablereason.Mylittlebrotherarebeingsickfordays.Soitisnecessaryforhimtobecared.Iamresponsibleforlookingafterhimwhilemyparentsareworking.Therefore,Ihavetostaytoaccompanyhimthatday.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandforgivemyabsence.

Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeeingatthisweekend?Idolongforapleasantchatwithyouandgivethepresenttoyou.

ItismuchtomyregretthatImissthechanceofsuchahappyget-toghther.Onceagain,pleaseacceptemysecereapology.Yours,LiHua【導語】這是一篇應用文。要求考生向朋友Sarah寫一封道歉信。【詳解】1.詞匯積累出席，參加：attend→takepartin承認：admit→concede原因：reason→cause必需的：necessary→essential2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Idolongforapleasantchatwithyouandgivethepresenttoyou.拓展句：Idolongforapleasantchatwithyouandgivethepresenttoyou,whichstandsformybestwishtoyou.【點睛】【高分句型1】Asforthesuddenchange,Ihavetoadmitithasanunavoidablereason.（運用了省略that的賓語從句）【高分句型2】ItismuchtomyregretthatImissthechanceofsuchahappyget-toghther.（運用了it作形式主語）2．假定你是李華，你的外教老師David與你約定每周六晚上一次口語課，但是你身體有不適的癥狀，按照規定要居家隔離，因此，請你給David寫一封道歉信，內容包括：1.表達歉意；2.說明理由；3.提出補救方案。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearDavid,I’mindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon’tbeabletoattendtheoralclassthisSaturdayasscheduled.Recently,I’mnotfeelingwellandrequiredtostayathomeaccordingtotherules.However,Iamveryfondofyourclassesandwouldliketomakeupforthelostlessons.SoI’mwonderingwhetherit’spossibleforthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreviewthroughthevideo.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給外教老師David寫一封道歉信，因自己身體不適需要居家隔離而不能按照原定計劃上口語課進行道歉，并提出補救方案。【詳解】1.詞匯積累確實、非常：indeed→terribly喜歡：befondof→bekeenon彌補：makeupfor→compensatefor機會：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：However,Iamveryfondofyourclassesandwouldliketomakeupforthelostlessons.SoI’mwonderingwhetherit’spossibleforthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreviewthroughthevideo.拓展句：However,becauseIamveryfondofyourclassesandwouldliketomakeupforthelostlessons,I’mwonderingwhetherit’spossibleforthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreviewthroughthevideo.【點睛】【高分句型1】I’mindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon’tbeabletoattendtheoralclassthisSaturdayasscheduled.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】SoI’mwonderingwhetherit’spossibleforthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreviewthroughthevideo.（運用了whether引導的賓語從句和ifso結構的省略句）3．假定你是李華，作為芝加哥大學(ChicagoUniversity)的交換生正在美國學習。今天早晨你騎車上學時不小心刮擦到了一輛停在路邊的汽車。由于著急上學，你無法在原地等候車主。請用英語寫一張留言條，內容包括：1．表明身份；2．簡述事情經過；3．道歉并表示愿意賠償；4．聯系方式：Tel:5893677；E-mail:lihua@注意：1．詞數80左右；2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearSir/Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina,studyingatChicagoUniversity.I’msosorrythatmybikescratchedyourcarwhenIwasridingtoschoolthismorning.Iunderstanditwillcertainlyputyouinaverybadmood.IsincerelyapologizeforwhatIdidandpromiseIwillcoveralltherelevantcosts.Asschoolwillstartsoon,Ican’twaitonthesceneforyou.Pleasecontactmeat5893671orlihua@.ManyapologiesagainforalltheinconvenienceI’vecausedyou!Bestregards!Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。考生李華今天早晨騎車上學時不小心刮擦到了一輛停在路邊的汽車。由于著急上學，無法在原地等候車主。請李華用英語寫一張留言條。【詳解】1.詞匯積累誠摯地：truly→sincerely支付：pay→cover聯系：touch→contact開始：start→begin2.句式拓展陳述句變強調句原句：Asschoolwillstartsoon,Ican’twaitonthesceneforyou.拓展句：ItisasschoolwillstartsoonthatIcan’twaitonthesceneforyou.【點睛】[高分句型1]ManyapologiesagainforalltheinconvenienceI’vecausedyou!（運用了省略that的定語從句）[高分句型2]Asschoolwillstartsoon,Ican’twaitonthesceneforyou.（運用了as引導的原因狀語從句）4．假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Tom寫信告訴你由于他最近迷上電腦游戲而熬夜，忽視學業，并受父母責罵，和父母發生了爭吵，心里很煩惱。你回信勸說他正確解決這個問題。內容包括：1.表示理解；2.指出玩手機游戲的危害（至少兩點）；3.建議向父母道歉。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearTom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTom,I’veheardthatrecentlyyouareobsessedwithcomputergamesandyourparentsarenothappywiththatbecauseyoustayupatnighttoplaycomputergamesandpaylessattentiontostudy.Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnotrightthing.Iunderstandyouandalsothinkcomputergamesareinteresting.However,wearestudents.Studyisourmaintask.Wehavetostudyhardsothatwecangototopuniversityandfindadecentjobinthefuture.Pleasedon'targuewithyourparents,sincetheyarejustconcernedaboutyourhealthandstudy.Ithinkyoushouldapologizetothemsincerely.Youaresupposedtofocusonyourstudyinsteadofmobilephonegames,whichhavenegativeeffectsonyourhealth.Isuggestthatyoufinishyourhomeworkfirstandfindabalancebetweenstudyandentertainment.Ihopethatmysuggestioncanhelpyou.Expectingyourgoodnews.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，假定考生是李華，你的美國筆友Tom寫信告訴你由于他最近迷上電腦游戲而熬夜，忽視學業，并受父母責罵，和父母發生了爭吵，心里很煩惱。你回信勸說他正確解決這個問題。【詳解】1.詞匯積累沉迷于：beaddictedto→beobsessedwith對……滿意：besatisfiedwith→behappywith關心：beworriedabout→beconcernedabout建議：advise→suggest2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Iunderstandyouandalsothinkcomputergamesareinteresting.However,wearestudents.拓展句：AlthoughIunderstandyouandalsothinkcomputergamesareinteresting,wearestudents.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’veheardthatrecentlyyouareobsessedwithcomputergamesandyourparentsarenothappywiththatbecauseyoustayupatnighttoplaycomputergamesandpaylessattentiontostudy.(運用了because引導原因狀語從句)[高分句型2]Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnotrightthing.(運用了what引導主語從句)5．假如你是李華，你本來和好友湯姆約好今天一起吃晚飯，但你因忙而意外爽約了。現請你根據下面的內容要點，用英文給湯姆寫一電子郵件表示道歉，內容包括：1、表示歉意；2、說明爽約的原因；3、提出補救的辦法。注意：1、詞數80左右；2、可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTom,

I’mawfullysorryaboutforgettingourdinnerdate.

Forthewholeday,I,togetherwithseveralotherstudentsincharge,wasfullyengagedinpreparingfortheArtFestivaltobeheldnextweek.Wediscussedthethemeforthefestival,checkedallthearrangements,adjustedsomeprogramsandlaterinterviewedsome20volunteers.SobusywasIatworkthatthedinnerdateslippedmymind.

HowabouttreatingyoutoalunchnextFridayattheItalianrestaurant?Again,Iapologizeformissingthedinnerdate.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生用英文給湯姆寫一封道歉信，表示歉意、說明爽約的原因以及提出補救的辦法。【詳解】1.詞匯積累和……一起：alongwith→togetherwith一些：some→several忙于：bebusydoingsth.→befullyengagedin道歉：makeanapology→apologizefor2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Forthewholeday,I,togetherwithseveralotherstudentsincharge,wasfullyengagedinpreparingfortheArtFestivaltobeheldnextweek.拓展句：Forthewholeday,I,togetherwithseveralotherstudentsincharge,wasfullyengagedinpreparingfortheArtFestival,whichwillbeheldnextweek.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’mawfullysorryaboutforgettingourdinnerdate.(運用了動名詞作賓語)[高分句型2]SobusywasIatworkthatthedinnerdateslippedmymind.(運用了倒裝句)6．假定你是李華，你校組織的“英語交流到山區”活動將于下周一舉行。你是志愿者，但因生病不能參加，請你用英語給組織者Mr.George寫一封道歉信，內容包括：1.表達歉意；2.解釋原因；3.已將志愿工作安排他人完成。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearMr.George,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.George,IamLiHua,avolunteeroftheactivity"EnglishCommunicationtotheMountains".Now,I'mwritingtoexpressmysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingpresentattheactivitytobeheldnextMonday.ThereasonformyabsenceisthatIsuddenlyfellill.Myparentssentmetohospital,andIhavetostaythereforaweek.Asformyvolunteerwork,IhaveaskedmyclassmateTomtodoit.Sincerelyhopingthatyoucanacceptmyapologies.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給給組織者Mr.George寫一封道歉信，解釋自己不能去校組織的“英語交流到山區”活動當志愿者的原因。【詳解】1.詞匯積累表達：express→convey真誠的：sincere→heartfelt生病：fallill→getill至于：asfor→withregardto2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Now,I'mwritingtoexpressmysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingpresentattheactivitytobeheldnextMonday.拓展句：Now,I'mwritingtoexpressmysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingpresentattheactivitythatwillbeheldnextMonday.【點睛】[高分句型1]ThereasonformyabsenceisthatIsuddenlyfellill.(運用了that引導的表語從句)[高分句型2]Sincerelyhopingthatyoucanacceptmyapologies.(運用了that引導的賓語從句)7．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友David本周六即將結束在中國的旅行，乘飛機返回英國，你因有事無法按原定計劃取機場為他送行，只好寫信向他道歉，內容如下:1.表達歉意；2.說明不能送行的原因。注意:1.詞數80左右；2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。【答案】DearDavid,I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIcannotmakeittoseeyouoffattheairportthisSaturdayaspromised.Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.ThereasonwhyIcan'tgetawayisthatIhavetohelpmakepreparationsfortheEnglishSpeakingContesttobeheldthisweekend.Actually,Ihavejustbeeninformedofthisplanbytheschoolmaster.Moreover,asthechairmanoftheStudentUnion,Ifeelresponsibleforthisjob.HowIwishIcouldhavethechancetotalkwithyouoncemoreaboutthehappydayswespenttogetherbeforeyouleave!Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Wishyouasafejourney.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫信向英國朋友David道歉，自己因有事無法按原定計劃去機場為他送行，并告知不能送行的原因。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態：根據提示，時態主要為一般現在時和現在完成時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.表達歉意；2.說明不能送行的原因。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）seeyouoff,apologizefor,getaway,makepreparationsfor,informof,feelresponsiblefor,understandmysituation,acceptmyapology第三步：連詞成句1.I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIcannotmakeittoseeyouoffattheairportthisSaturdayaspromised.2.Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.3.ThereasonwhyIcan'tgetawayisthatIhavetohelpmakepreparationsfortheEnglishSpeakingContesttobeheldthisweekend.4.Ihavejustbeeninformedofthisplanbytheschoolmaster.5.AsthechairmanoftheStudentUnion,Ifeelresponsibleforthisjob.6.HowIwishIcouldhavethechancetotalkwithyouoncemoreaboutthehappydayswespenttogetherbeforeyouleave!7.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.8.Wishyouasafejourney.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）表并列補充關系：Moreover表因果關系：Thus連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰。【點睛】[高分句型1]I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIcannotmakeittoseeyouoffattheairportthisSaturdayaspromised.（that從句為賓語從句）[高分句型2]ThereasonwhyIcan'tgetawayisthatIhavetohelpmakepreparationsfortheEnglishSpeakingContesttobeheldthisweekend.（運用了固定句型：Thereasonwhy...isthat...）8．假定你是李華，你原與留學生朋友Bob約好周六下午一起去看電影，現因故不能赴約，請寫一封電子郵件。主要內容：１表示道歉；２說明原因；３另約時間注意:：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.結束語已為你寫好。DearBob，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.【答案】DearBob，I’msorrytotellyoutellthatIcannotgotoseethemoviewithyouthisSaturdayasplanned.I’mwritingtomakeanapologyforanyinconvenienceIcaused.OurschoolwillholdaLiteratureFestivalnextweekandinvitesomeforeignpoetstoattendthefestival.Bycoincidence,I’vebeenassignedtopickthemupattheairportthisSunday.Ihopethesuddenchangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.Shallwemakeitanothertime,forexample,thisSunday?Theticketsarestillavailable.Ifit’snotconvenientforyou,pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Bytheway,I’llbefreeanytimenextweek.I’mterriblysorryagainforanyinconvenience.Andlookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.9．假設你是李華，作為交換生（anexchangestudent）正在英國windmillCollege學習。今天早晨你騎車上學時不小心刮擦到了一輛停在路邊的汽車。由于急著上學，你無法在原地等候車主。請留一張便條，內容包括：1.表明身份；2.簡述事情經過；3.道歉并表示愿意賠償；4.聯系方式（Tel:5893671

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