話題5

夢想與目標

分析新疆近6年中考真題可知，該話題在書面表達中未作考查。結合全國近4年中考真題分析可知，此話題通常有以下命題角度：1.夢想與目標的內容及重要性；2.樹立夢想與目標的原因；3.實現夢想與目標的方法。佳句賞析?夢想與目標的內容及重要性1.As

the

saying

goes,

“Great

dreams

make

a

bright

future.”

My

dream

is

to

be

a

doctor

in

the

future.2.Just

as

President

Xi

once

said,

I

would

like

to

contribute

to

my

hometown.3.No

matter

who

you

are

and

what

you

are

doing,

you

should

have

your

dreams

and

hold

on

to

them

because

they

can

give

you

chances

to

taste

success.（No

matter

who表明夢想對每個人都很重要）4.It's

of

great

importance

for

us

to

make

up

our

minds

to

achieve

our

dreams.5.The

future

belongs

to

those

who

believe

in

the

beauty

of

their

dreams.?樹立夢想與目標的原因1.More

and

more

young

people

wish

to

return

to

their

hometowns

and

contribute

to

their

hometowns'

development

after

graduation.（contribute

to促成，有助于）2.I

like

talking

to

people

and

asking

questions,

so

I

want

to

be

a

journalist

when

I

grow

up.3.Since

my

early

age,

I

have

been

admiring

tour

guides

who

travel

worldwide.（who引導定語從句，解釋說明夢想的職業）4.I

dream

of

being

a

good

teacher

who

teaches

kids

not

only

knowledge

but

also

the

truth

of

life.5.The

speech

given

by

a

famous

doctor

made

me

realize

my

dream

of

becoming

a

doctor

to

help

others.?實現夢想與目標的方法1.My

first

plan

has

to

do

with

my

physical

health.

I

will

keep

exercising

every

day

to

build

up

my

body.（have

to

do

with與……有關，此處在闡明計劃后具體描述實施該計劃的方式）2.To

improve

myself,

I

plan

to

spend

one

hour

a

day

（in）

reading

the

books

I'm

interested

in.（動詞不定式作目的狀語前置）3.I

will

make

every

effort

to

discover

the

value

of

traditional

Chinese

medicine

and

make

it

more

popular

in

the

world.（make

every

effort

to

do

sth.竭盡全力做某事）4.Hard

work

pays

off.

I

believe

as

long

as

I

try

my

best,

my

dream

will

come

true

some

day.（Hard

work

pays

off.天道酬勤。）5.Stick

to

your

dream,

and

you

are

sure

to

achieve

success

in

the

end.6.I

strongly

believe

that

nothing

is

impossible

if

you

put

your

heart

into

it.7.If

you

want

to

make

your

dream

come

true,

you

should

learn

all

kinds

of

knowledge

to

enrich

your

brain.（用if引導的條件狀語從句描寫實現夢想的途徑）8.I

plan

to

take

up

some

hobbies

like

painting

and

taking

photos.（用such

as/like對愛好進行舉例）9.I

will

do

the

following

things

to

make

my

dream

come

true.10.All

in

all,

I'm

sure

I

will

realize

my

dream

as

long

as

I

try

my

best.句子仿寫1）擁有夢想和希望對一個人的發展是非常重要的。［用短語be

of

great

importance仿寫］____________________________________________________________________________It's

of

great

importance

for

a

person's

development

to

have

dreams

and

hopes.2）我打算成為一名老師,所以我將要在大學學習教育。［用連詞so仿寫］___________________________________________________________________________I

am

going

to

be

a

teacher,

so

I'm

going

to

study

education

at

university.3）當我長大后，我想成為一個能拯救很多人的好醫生。［用who引導的定語從句仿寫］________________________________________________________________________When

I

grow

up,

I

want

to

be

a

good

doctor

who

can

save

many

people.4）我夢想著成為一名鋼琴家，因為我真的很喜歡彈鋼琴。［用短語dream

of仿寫］_______________________________________________________________________I

dream

of

being

a

pianist

because

I

truly/really

like

playing

the

piano.5）為了實現我的夢想，我會認真度過我有限的時間。［用動詞不定式作目的狀語仿寫］__________________________________________________________________________To

make

my

dream

come

true,

I

ought

to

spend

my

limited

time

carefully.6）總之，只要我盡最大的努力，我確信我能實現我的夢想。［用連詞as

long

as仿寫］__________________________________________________________________All

in

all,

I'm

sure

I

will

realize

my

dream

as

long

as

I

try

my

best.7）我希望我能盡我所能幫助更多生活在山區的學生。［用that引導的賓語從句仿寫］________________________________________________________________________________I

hope

that

I

can

try

my

best

to

help

more

students

living

in

the

mountain

areas.8）除非你全身心地投入學習，否則你不會實現你的夢想。［用put

one's

heart

into仿寫］_______________________________________________________________________You

won't

realize

your

dream

until

you

put

your

heart

into

your

study.

（2024山東臨沂改編）假定你是李平，請根據該郵件內容，用英語給Eric回復。Hi

Li

Ping,

You

mentioned

your

dream

job

in

your

last

letter.

I'm

really

interested

in

it.

Why

did

you

choose

it?

What/Who

influenced

you

to

make

the

decision?

Tell

me

your

experience,

please.

I

look

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon!Eric要求：

1.參考郵件內容，可適當發揮；

2.語句通順、意思連貫、語法正確、書寫規范；

3.文中不得出現真實姓名、校名等信息；

4.詞數80-120。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。【審題】話題：夢想職業文體：______文要點：需要從郵件中提煉要點，郵件中的3個句子即3個要點：①你選擇該夢想職業的原因；②影響你做此決定的人或事；③敘述你的經歷。人稱:用第____人稱時態：要點①和②：用__________________時要點③：用__________時應用一一般現在/一般過去一般過去【寫作框架】【潤色與升格】連句成篇句子升格Dear

Eric,

Thanks

for

your

e-mail.

I'm

very

glad

to

tell

you

something

about

my

dream

job.

①I

have

wanted

to

be

a

teacher

since

I

was

a

child,

because

I

think

teaching

is

a

sacred

profession

and

I

enjoy

staying

with

children.（要點1：選擇該夢想職業的原因）

Besides,

I

want

to

be

a

teacher

because

of

the

power

of

an

example—Miss

Li,

my

English

teacher.①用結構“dream

of

doing

sth.”升格句子：______________________________________________________________________________I

have

dreamed/dreamt

of

being

a

teacher

since

I

was

a

child連句成篇句子升格（要點2：影響你做此決定的人或事）She

often

helps

me

with

my

English

in

her

spare

time,

which

has

a

great

influence

on

me.

②I

still

remember

one

thing.

Once

I

failed

in

an

important

English

exam

and

was

upset.

She

cheered

me

up

and

told

me

some

good

ways

to

improve

my

English.

With

her

help,

I

made

great

progress

in

English.

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

be

a

good

teacher

like

her

when

I

grow

up.（要點3：敘述經歷并升華主題）②用that引導的賓語從句連接兩個句子：_____________________________________________________________________________I

still

remember

that

once

I

failed

in

an

important

English

exam

and

was

upset.連句成篇句子升格

③I

know

it

is

not

easy

to

be

a

teacher.

I

will

work

harder

to

realize

my

dream.

Best

wishes!Li

Ping③用although引導的讓步狀語從句和短語“make

every

effort

to”升格句子：_________________________________________________________________________________________Although

I

know

it

is

not

easy

to

be

a

teacher,

I

will

make

every

effort

to

realize

my

dream.【謄寫】Dear

Eric,

Thanks

for

your

e-mail.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm

very

glad

to

tell

you

something

about

my

dream

job.

I

have

dreamed/dreamt

of

being

a

teacher

since

I

was

a

child,

because

I

think

teaching

is

a

sacred

profession

and

I

enjoy

staying

with

children.

Besides,

I

want

to

be

a

teacher

because

of

the

power

of

an

example—Miss

Li,

my

English

teacher.

She

often

helps

me

with

my

English

in

her

spare

time,

which

has

a

great

influence

on

me.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best

wishes!Li

PingI

still

remember

that

once

I

failed

in

an

important

English

exam

and

was

upset.

She

cheered

me

up

and

told

me

some

good

ways

to

improve

my

English.

With

her

help,

I

made

great

progress

in

English.

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

be

a

good

teacher

like

her

when

I

grow

up.

Although

I

know

it

is

not

easy

to

be

a

teacher,

I

will

make

every

effort

to

realize

my

dream.

人類因夢想而偉大，人生因拼搏而精彩。每個人都有一個夢想，你的夢想是什么？某英語學習網站正在開展“夢想成就未來”的征文比賽，請參照思維導圖，以“My

Dream

Job”為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：

1.參考思維導圖，可適當發揮；

2.語句通順、意思連貫、語法正確、書寫規范；

3.文中不得出現真實姓名、校名等信息；

4.詞數80-120。My

Dream

Job_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

It's

important

for

everyone

to

have

a

dream.

Everyone

has

his

or

her

own

dream.

Dreams

make

us

full

of

hope

for

the

future.

Encouraged

by

my

mother,

I

dream

of

becoming

a

doctor

like

her

one

day.

Though

my

mother

is

very

busy,

she

often

says

she

feels

happy

when

she

helps

patients,

which

moves

me

a

lot.

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