四．附錄（45大俗詞）

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people，persons

替換為individuals，characters，folksEg.Whileitwasfineforearlyphysiciststolearnandunderstandthefewlawsandideasthatexistedduringtheirtimes,now,nooneindividualcanpossiblydigestandassimilatealloftheknowledgeinanygivenarea.（給大家一個(gè)長難句玩玩，過癮吧！J）Eg.Folksaroundherewillalwayslendahandifyouneedit.2、

good

替換為positive，sound,decent,desirable,favorable，rosy，promising，perfect，pleasurable，excellent，outstanding等等Eg.Heischaracterizedbyhisdecentlanguageanddecentbehavior.Eg.Hejustacceptedadesirablejobinthefilmindustry.Eg.Theperformancereceivedafavorablereview.Eg.Peopleallovertheworldarelongingforrosyfinance-predictions.3、

bad

替換為dreadful，unfavorable，poor，adverse,undesirable,unpleasant等Eg.Internet,theindispensibletoolinmodernlife,oftencontainssomeundesirablemessages.Eg.Departmentsconcernedsupposedtodealwiththisunpleasantmatteringoodtime.Eg.Thisbehaviorhadexertedsomeadverseimpactsonthenormaldevelopmentofthesocietyasawhole.如果bad做表語，可以有belessimpressive代替。Eg.

Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames，enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.4、

Inbrief,brieflyspeaking

替換為Intheaggregate,simplyputitEg.Simplyputit,withoutspecialists,oursocietywouldfinditselfboggeddownintheSargassoseaofinformationoverloaded.5、

notonly…,butalso…

替換為notsimply…,but…aswellEg.Mr.FuLisongisnotsimplyapostgraduatestudent,butanexpertinCETaswell.6、

ThecauseofXisnotA,butB（X事件發(fā)生的原因不在于A，而在于B。）替換為FromwherewasXstemming?PartlyitwasduetoA.Nonetheless,AcouldnotbeheldresponsibleforX.Therehadtobeanothercause,andtherewas,B.7、

AbringaboutB

替換為Aistoserveasacatalyst（催化劑）forBEg.Theuseofmediainthetwentieswastoserveasacatalystfortherevolutionaryideasthatwerecirculation.8、

Sth.attractSb.

替換為Sth.sparkone’sinterest.Eg.Thefirstsentence,“Fancyalady?”immediatelysparkthereader’sinterest.9、

Sb.willnotdo…

替換為Sb.beleastlikelytodo….10、Sth.isgood,because…..

替換為Sth.distinguishesitselfinpartby…..Eg.Theessaydistinguishesitselfinpartbyitsexcellentorganization.11、Eachonemakesalittlecontribution,butwetogethercanachievemuchmore.

替換為Eachindividualcanonlyaddonesmallrungtotheladder,buttogetherwecanclimbtothemoon.12、Although

替換為While…,…Eg.Whilestillcatching-uptomeninsomespheresofmodernlife,womenappeartobewayaheadinatleastoneundesirablecategory.13、Themost+adj./theadj.-est+n.

替換為nothingismore…thann.Eg.Today,nothingismorerepresentativeofthefastpaceofmodernsocietythanfastfood.14、Affect替換為haveinfluenceon,haveimpacton,imposeinfluenceon,exertimpacton15、Thereisan.prep.+n.替換為Prep.+n.exist(s)an./pl.Eg.Infrontofhimexisttwopredicaments.16、many替換為anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,anarrayof,hordesof,swarmsof,massiveof17、some替換為asliceof,quiteafew,several18、think替換為clingtotheideathat,harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,

itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat19、thing替換為affair,business,matter20、common替換為sharedEg.ItisashearedviewthatCETisjustbullshit.21、getmuchbenefit替換為reaphugefruitsEg.Thebook,fromwhichIhavereapedhugefruits,iscomposedbyseveralprofessorsfromesteemeduniversities.22、inmyopinion替換為

formypart，frommyownperspective23、moreandmore替換為Increasing(ly)，growing。（注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly）Eg.Sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.24、hardly替換為littleifanything,littleornothing25、helpful替換為beneficialrewarding,bebeneficialof26、customer替換為shopper，client,consumer,purchaser27、very（非常）替換為exceedingly,extremely28、necessary，inevitable替換為hardlyunnecessary,hardlyevitable...29、sbtakeinterestin替換為sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb30、attractone'sattention替換為captureone'sattention31、aspect替換為facet，dimension，sphere32、indicate,suggest替換為beindicativeof,besuggestiveof33、fear替換為befearfulof34、cause,produce替換為giveriseto,resultin,trigger,contributeto,evoke,provoke35、..reasonsforsth替換為Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth36、Wanttodo替換為desiretodo,beinclinedtodo….37、payattentionto替換為pourattentioninto,focusone’sattentionto….38、Remember替換為bearinmindthatEg.Eachyear,therewerecertaincourseofferingsmadeavailable,andstudentsweretochoosefromthoseofferings,ofcoursesbearinginmindrequirementsforgraduationsetforthbytheadministration.39、Have替換為enjoy,possess（haveacupoftea,havearepair-work,haveanoperation）40、Communication替換為interaction41、beagainst,disagreewithsth替換為frownonsth42、forexample替換為tonameonlyafew,toillustrate,tobespecific,toexemplifyit,…43、nearly替換為nextto,virtually44、meaning替換為implication,connotation,indication45、一般否定替換為befarfromEg.Thefundraisedbythelocalgovernmentisfarfrombeingsufficient.46、Stop替換為putanendto小作文補(bǔ)充常用句式1.倡議書、建議信中常用表達(dá)：I’mwritingtoappealto…for…,giventhat…h(huán)asbecomeaseriousissue.I’mwritingthelettertocallon…,sincesomeofyoumayknowthat…..Itisobligatorythat….Hopefullyyouwilljoinintheactionandextendwarmhelptothoseneedypersons.Feelfreetocontactuswhenyouhavecometoadecision.It’slovethatsetstheworldgoing.Yourkindness/attention/effort/generousness/donation/participationwellbehighlyvalued.

2.感謝信常用表達(dá)Wearewritingtothankyouforthewonderfultimewehad…Wearewritingtoexpressmyappreciationforallthatyoudidformeduring…Weareindebtedtoyoufor…Wearegratefultoyoufor…Itwasvery(morethan)kind/generous/considerateofyouto…Nothingcouldconveymygratitudetoyoufor…Thankyouagainforyourgenerosity/hospitality…

3.邀請(qǐng)函常用表達(dá)ItiswiththegreatestpleasurethatIwritetocordiallyinviteyoutoattend(themeeting/seminar/party)…Itgivesmethegreatestpleasuretoinviteyoutovisit…WillyouandMrs.…(攜夫人)givethepleasureofdinningwithusat…?(本句為接受邀請(qǐng))Iamdelightedtoacceptyourkindinvitationto…andamlookingforwardtothat…(活動(dòng))withgreatpleasure…

4.請(qǐng)求信常用表達(dá)I’mwritingtorequestyoutomakeaninvestigationonthematter….Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgranttherequestfor…WouldyoumindifI….?(這句提出要求的口氣客氣的不得了)Willyoubekindenoughtogiveme….

5.詢問信常用表達(dá)I’mwritingtoobtaintherelevantinformationconcerningthecoursesyouoffer.I’mwritingtoaskifyoucouldgrantmeafavor.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmecopiesofthecourseoutline.Iwonderifitistoolatetoapplytothisposition.WouldyoupleasebekindenoughtosendmeanapplicationformandothermaterialsnecessaryformyapplicationsothatIcanbegintheapplicationprocedure?Iwouldbereallyindebtedtoyouifyoudidmethefavor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.6.投訴信常用表達(dá)I’mwritingtobringyourattentionto…I’mwritingtocomplainabout…I’mwritingtoprotestagainst…I’mwritingtoexpressmyindignationat…Ithinkit’shightimethatyourealized(注意虛擬語氣時(shí)態(tài))…Weknowthatyouarenotgenerallycareless,butwewouldlikeyourassurancethatthiswillnothappenagain.ImustwarnyouthatunlessyoudosomethingaboutthesituationIwillbeforcedtotakelegalaction.Tobefrank,Iamnotpreparedtoputupwiththesituationanymore.Hopeyoucanaddresstheproblemsoon.Hopefullyyouwilltakestepstorectifythissituationsoon.Yourseriousconsiderationintomycomplaintwillbeverymuchappreciated.

7.申請(qǐng)信常用表達(dá)（申請(qǐng)職位）Iamwritingtoapplyforthepostof…Inreplytoyouradvertisementin…Ibegtoapplyforthepostof…inyourcompany.ImmediatelyIsawyouradvertisementintheSundayEveningfor…IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationandforwhichIhavelookingfor.Thekindofworkinwhichyourcompanyisengagedparticularinterestsme…Ihavethenecessaryqualificationsandexperiencesneededforthepositionof…advertisedinthepaper…Ishallbringwithmethefulldetailsofmytestimonialsasyourequest…IhopeImaybegrantedaninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualificationmorefully.Ishouldbepleasedtoattendforaninterviewatyourconvenience,whenIcouldgiveyourfurtherdetailsconcerningmyself.Itseemstomethatthisexperience,togetherwithmyeducation,hasgivenmeidealpreparationtoassumetheroleof…insuchafirmasyours.（申請(qǐng)學(xué)位）IwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourcollegeMymajorinterestsare…,andIunderstandyouruniversityhasagoodprograminthosefields.Enclosedpleasefindaresumeandaphoto…Shouldyouthinkfavorablyofmyapplication,kindlygrantmeaninterview?學(xué)生作文中常見句型錯(cuò)誤P48

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TVnowplaysandimportantroleinourdailylife,Becausewethinkitextremelyimportant.書寫錯(cuò)誤、邏輯謬誤TVnowplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife,becauseitprovidesuswithmessagesnecessarytous.

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Althoughanopportunityisrare,butwemustbereadytoseizeit.邏輯冗余、主干搭配不當(dāng)Althoughopportunitiesarerare,wemustbereadytoseizethem.Opportunitiesarerare,butwemustbereadytoseizethem.

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Withariseinthenumberofcarsandbuses,trafficinShanghaihasbecomemoreandmorecrowded.主干搭配不當(dāng)Withariseinthenumberofcarsandbuses,trafficinShanghaihasbecomeheavier.Withariseinthenumberofcarsandbuses,Shanghaihasbecomemoreandmorecrowded.

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Eachofusmaytakeapart-timejobtohelpsupportourselves,butifyouspendtoomuchtimeonit,yourstudywillbeaffected.指代不一致Eachofusmaytakeapart-timejobtohelpsupporthimself,butifhespendstoomuchtimeonit,hisacademicperformancemaybeaffected.

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Therearemanypeoplecomplainthepaper-makingmillpolluteourfreshwatercanbypeopleuse.成分冗余Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainthepaper-makingmillpollutingourfreshwaterusedbypeople.

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Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.邏輯主語前后不一致Attheageofsix,IwastaughtEnglishbymyfather.

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Beforesubmittinganywrittenwork,carefulproofreadingmustbedone.邏輯主語前后不一致Beforesubmittinganywrittenwork,onemustdocarefulproofreading.

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ThecomputerlikeTV,ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.詞性誤用Likecomputer,TVhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

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Wenaturallyassumedthattheyhadarrivedthere.Theyleftseveralhoursago.句間邏輯缺失Wenaturallyassumedthattheyhadarrivedthere,fortheyleftseveralhoursago.

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Whendemandforgoodswasshrinking.Firmswouldclosedownorlayoffworkers.句間邏輯謬誤Wheredemandforgoodswasshrinking,firmswouldclosedownorlayoffworkers.

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Youhavehadthedisease,youareimmunetoitfortherestofyourlife.句間邏輯缺失Onceyouhavehadthedisease,youareimmunetoitfortherestofyourlife.12.

Billyelledatthehowlingdoginhisunderwear.修飾成分造成歧義Inhisunderwear,Billyelledatthehowlingdog.

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Thefootballgamewasplayedinourstadiumthatwasfullofexcitement.修飾成分造成歧義Thefootballgamethatwasfullofexcitementwasplayedinourstadium.14.

However,everythinghasitsblackside.選詞搭配不當(dāng)However,therearetwosidestoeverything\everythinghasitsdrawbacks\everythinghasitsprosandcons.或However,everythinghasitsdark\negativeside.

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MylevelofEnglishhasthusbeenimproved.主謂