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甄嬛傳之各種情緒描寫Hecametomewiththelongface.悲傷和消沉Maryfeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpweepingbitterly.他哭喪著臉來找我。瑪麗感到一陣悲傷,忍不住痛哭起來。Filledwithanger,Jimwasunabletosayasingleword.憤怒和恐懼Afloodoffearwelledupinsidehim.Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.吉姆滿腔憤怒,一句話也說不出來。他心中涌起一陣恐懼。他轉向我,眼里充滿了恐懼。Withmyheartinmymouth,Iwentforthejobinterview.Hisvoicewasfullofanxiety.Hewaspacingtheroomnervously.緊張和不安我提心吊膽地前去參加面試。他的聲音飽含焦慮。他正緊張地在房間里走來走去。Shewascompletelyovercomeby

disappointment.*beovercomeby被...所壓倒WordscannotexpresshowdisappointedIwas.失望和沮喪她完全被失望的情緒所壓倒。言語無法形容我是多么的失望。Hefeelshischeeksburningwithregret.Arippleofregretwelledupinmyheart.Heloweredhishead,fellingextremelyregretful.后悔與遺憾他后悔得臉頰發燙。一陣悔意涌上心頭。他低下頭,感覺極其后悔。Hearingtheunexpectednews,Maryfrozewithshock,asifrootedtothespot.Thelittleboywasspeechlesswithshock,gapingatme.Grandfather’sdeathwasreallyaboltfromtheblue.驚訝與震驚聽到這個意外的消息,瑪麗呆住了,動彈不得。小男孩驚得說不出話,目瞪口呆地看著我。祖父去世的消息對我來說簡直是晴天霹靂。Hecoveredhisfaceinhands,withregretfultearsineyes.Marywasseized/overwhelmed/overcomebyastrongfeelingofregret.內疚與悔恨他雙手掩面,眼里充滿悔恨的淚水。瑪麗感到內心涌起一陣強烈的懊悔。Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.Henoddedslowlyandsmiledwithalookofgratitude.Withgratefultearshanginginhiseyes,hekeptexpressinghisgratitude,“Thankyousomuch!”感動與感激她熱淚盈眶,表示衷心的感謝。他慢慢地點了點頭,露出了感激的微笑。他眼中滿是感激的淚水,不停地說:“非常感謝!”Alicesteppedintothetallbuildingwheresheworkedandbreathedasighofrelief.Relieved,shewenthomewithaweightliftedoffherheart.

Ifinallysatdownandcried,amixtureofwarmthandreliefflooded/washedoverme.安心與寬慰還好還好愛麗絲走進她上班的大樓,松了口氣。她松了口氣,回家了,心頭重擔卸下。我終于坐下來哭了起來,心中滿是溫暖和寬慰。IwasgreenwithenvywhenIheardshahadaboyfriend.Hearingthis,hefeltsickwithjealousy.羨慕與嫉妒還好還好當我聽說她有男朋友的時候,我真是嫉妒死了。聽到這個,他羨慕得要死。閱讀下面短文,根據所給情節進行續寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意:1.所續寫短文的詞數應為l50左右;2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好:Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.時空線(明線)情節線(明線)情感線(暗線)時間:OneweekendinJuly空間:intheforest人物:

Janeandherhusband,Tom事物:Jane'syellowblouse動作:quarrel-getlost-regret-hearthehelicopter'ssoundUnfortunately-angry-surprise-tired-love-hungryandthirsty-joy-carefully-unfortunately-...續寫段落Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.呼應點(即可能的解決方法):Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.thecluesofthestory:情感線exhausted&scared→cry→regretful&worried→sad情感線?Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.

Jane,__________________(又累又怕),laydownnearastone,

missingherfamily

atadistance.Allthesweetmemorycrowdedinand________________________(她情不自禁哭了起來).“Hadn’tIquarreledwith

Tom,

walkedawayand

climbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Shere

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