高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習母子分歧：興趣與現實的碰撞1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文Jackwasabrightandcuriouschild,alwayseagertolearnnewthingsandexplorethemysteriousworldaboutscience.However,heoftenfoundhimselfindisagreementwithhismother.Hismotherwasalwaysbusywithherworkandshedidn’thaveenoughtimetolearnabouthisinterestsandpassions.Oneday,Jackcamehomefromschoolfeelingparticularlyexcited.Hejustfoundasci-fibookaboutanadventureonthemoon.Uponarrivingathome,hecouldn’ttearhimselfawayfromthebook.Hereadandreaduntilitwasdark.Havingfinishedreadingit,hecouldn’twaittoshareitwithhismother,onlytobetoldthatheshouldfocusonmorepracticalsubjectslikemathandhistory,whichwouldhelphimgetintoagoodcollegeandhaveasuccessfulcareer.4續寫原文Jackcouldn’tunderstandwhyhismotherdidn’tseethevalueinwhathewasdoing.Hefeltthatshewasholdinghimbackandnotallowinghimtopursuehistrueinterests.“Whycan’tyouseehowimportantthisistome?”Jackaskedhismotherangrily.“I’mnevergoingtobehappyifIhavetospendmylifedoingthingsthatIshownointerestinjustbecausetheyarepracticalormakeyouproud.”Theoncepeacefulhomewasfilledwithtensionandanger.Hismother’svoicegrewlouderassheshouted,“Youcan’tjustdowhateveryouwant!Youshouldberesponsibleforyourfuture!”Jack,fueledbyhisownfrustration,shotback,“Iamtiredofyoualwaystellingmewhattodo!Iamnotachildanymore!Youonlycareaboutyourownfeeling!Youneverthoughtaboutmyfeeling!”Theyweresocaughtupintheirownangerandhurtthattheyfailedtoseehowtheirwordsandactionswereaffectingeachother.5段首句Paragraph1：Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.Paragraph2：WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8杰克是個對科學充滿好奇的孩子。一天，他讀了一本關于月球探險的科幻書后，迫不及待想和母親分享，卻被母親要求專注于數學和歷史等實用學科，以助力進入好大學和擁有成功事業。杰克對此不理解，認為母親阻礙他追求興趣，雙方發生激烈爭吵。家中充滿緊張和憤怒，兩人都因情緒激動而忽視了對彼此的傷害，為后續的和解與溝通埋下伏筆。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Para1:

Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.杰克猛地沖進臥室，用力鎖上門。他撲倒在床上，淚水奪眶而出。心中滿是委屈和憤怒，他不明白為什么母親總是不理解他。他想起曾經和母親一起度過的快樂時光，那些溫馨的畫面此刻卻讓他更加難過。他在房間里來回踱步，嘴里不停地嘟囔著母親的不理解。突然，他看到書桌上擺放的那本科幻書，思緒又回到了書中精彩的內容上，他渴望能像書中的主人公一樣，勇敢地追求自己的夢想。10續寫思路分析Para2：WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.當杰克聽到母親的話時，悔恨的淚水順著臉頰滑落。母親溫柔地說：“杰克，媽媽錯了，不該忽視你的興趣。”杰克打開門，一下子撲進母親的懷里，泣不成聲。他向母親道歉，說自己不該那么沖動。母親拉著他的手，坐在床邊，耐心地傾聽他對科學的熱愛和憧憬。從那以后，母親開始主動了解科學知識，陪杰克一起探索科學的奧秘。杰克也更加努力地學習各學科知識，他明白了，追求興趣和為未來做準備并不沖突。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.Throwinghimselfontothebed,heburstintotears.Hisheartwasfilledwithgrievancesandanger.Hecouldn'tfigureoutwhyhismotheralwaysfailedtounderstandhim.Memoriesofthehappytimeshehadspentwithhismotherfloodedhismind.Thosewarmscenesnowonlymadehimfeelmoremiserable.Hepacedbackandforthintheroom,mutteringabouthismother'sincomprehension.Suddenly,hiseyesfellonthescience-fictionbookonthedesk.Histhoughtsweredrawnbacktothewonderfulcontentinthebook.Heyearnedtobeliketheprotagonistinthebook,bravelypursuinghisdreams.13范文呈現WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.Hismothersaidsoftly,"Jack,Iwaswrong.Ishouldn'thaveignoredyourinterests."Jackopenedthedoorandthrewhimselfintohismother'sarms,sobbinguncontrollably.Heapologizedtohismotherforhisimpulsiveness.Hismothertookhishandandsathimdownonthebed,patientlylisteningtohisloveandaspirationsforscience.Fromthenon,hismotherstartedtoactivelylearnaboutscienceandaccompaniedJacktoexplorethemysteriesofscience.Jackalsoworkedharderinallsubjects.Herealizedthatpursuinghisinterestsandpreparingforthefuturewerenotinconflict.14升級版范文呈現Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.Withaheart-wrenchingsob,heflunghimselfontothebed,theweightofhisemotionsalmosttoomuchtobear.Amaelstromofgrievancesandangersurgedwithinhim,ashegrappledwiththeincomprehensionofhismother.Memoriesoftheiridyllicpast,filledwithlaughterandtendermoments,nowservedonlytodeepenhissenseofloss.Pacingrestlesslyacrosstheroom,hemutteredincoherently,hiswordsajumbledmixoffrustrationandlonging.Then,hiseyesalighteduponthescience-fictionbookthathadsparkedthiswholeconflict.Ashestaredatit,afiercelongingignitedwithinhim,ayearningtobelikethefearlessheroeswithinitspages,unshackledbytheconstraintsofpracticality,andfreetopursuehiswildestdreams.15升級版范文呈現WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.Hismother,hervoiceladenwithremorse,said,"Jack,Iwasterriblywrong.Ishouldhavevaluedyourpassions."Inaninstant,thedoorswungopen,andJack,hisbodywrackedwithsobs,threwhimselfintohismother'sembrace.Wordsofapologytumbledfromhislipsashebeggedforforgivenessforhisoutburst.Hismother,withagentletouch,ledhimtothebedandsatbesidehim,hereyesfixedintentlyonhisfaceashepouredouthisheartabouthislo