PAGEUnit2OnwardsandupwardsSectionⅥWriting在黑暗中用餐最近我在“黑暗餐廳”吃飯,在那里人們在完全黑暗的環境下吃飯,由盲人服務員服務。我想了解失明的經驗,我認為吃東西是最困難的活動。吃這頓飯很難。由于我們看不見東西在哪里,我和摯友打翻了杯子,弄掉了食物。我的味覺和嗅覺變得更加敏感,我吃得慢多了,努力揣測我吃的食物是什么。倒水很困難,還有,我始終用我摯友的杯子喝水。用叉子叉食物用時五分鐘,以失敗告終后,我確定用手。我俯下身,想吃米飯和蔬菜,但相反,卻把手伸進了一碗熱乎乎的濃湯里。“這道菜最好是用勺子,”服務員在我耳邊說,他幫了我的忙,但為時已晚。即運用勺子,大部分湯到頭來還是濺到了我的襯衫上。盡管沒人能看到我,但我感到很尷尬。服務員建議我們把盤子和碗舉著,靠近面部。然而,盡管我更加意識到盲人所面臨的挑戰,我照舊餓著離開了餐館。假定你是李華,曾經在一所聾啞學校做過助教,請依據以下要點用英文寫一篇作文,講一講你的助教經驗。1.一位失去生活信念的失聰女孩Jean在你的幫助下重拾生活信念;2.當時你遇到的最大困難是溝通障礙;3.你是如何克服困難的并學到了什么。留意:1.詞數80左右;2.可適當增加細微環節,以使行文連貫。

寫作指導描寫一次經驗屬于以記人敘事為主要內容,以敘述為主要表達方式的文體。在寫作時,要交代清晰時間(when)、地點(where)、人物(who)和事務(what),然后再進一步敘述事務(what)、緣由(why)和過程(how)。1.寫作時應留意的問題:(1)正確運用時態。最常用到的時態是一般過去時和過去進行時,但也要留意敏捷運用其他時態。(2)常用第一人稱,從“參加者”的角度進行敘述。(3)要重視句子的連接,用好過渡詞。2.寫作的一般步驟:(1)交代此次經驗發生的時間、地點和相關人物;(2)推動情節發展;(3)介紹經驗的結果或談自己的感想。審題謀篇詞匯儲備1.embarrassedadj.尷尬的,尷尬的2.delightfuladj.令人開心的,討人喜愛的3panionshipn.友情;友好交往4.upsetadj.不安的,苦惱的5.neverthelessadv.然而,不過詞匯運用1.總之,幫助Jean重拾生活信念是一次開心的經驗。Onthewhole,helpingJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeisadelightfulexperience.

2.我面對的最大的困難是溝通障礙。ThebiggestdifficultyIfacedwasthecommunicationbarriers.

3.此外,我盡一切努力與她建立友情及相互的信任。Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttoestablishcompanionshipandmutualtrustwithher.

句式升級1.用it作形式主語改寫句(1)。Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.

2.將句(2)改為強調句。ItwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.

串句成文(運用meanwhile等恰當的連接詞)Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.Inmymemory,thefirsttimewemet,shewasalwaysupset,makingmeembarrassed.Meanwhile,itwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.Nevertheless,Imadeit.First,Iadvisedhertogathercouragetoconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadofescapingfromthem.Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttoestablishcompanionshipandmutualtrustwithher.

Fortunately,whatIgotfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreallycontributetooursuccessandthateveryoneshouldbeconfidentaboutlife.

閱讀下面短文,依據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Lifeisfilledwithchallenges.Aswegetolderwecometorealizethatthosechallengesaretheverythingsthatcomewithfriendship.Whenwearefacedwithachallenge,weusuallyhavetwochoices:wecantrytobeatitoff(擊退),orwecandecidethatthethingpresentingthechallengeisn'tworththetroubleandstopdoingit.Althoughtherearecertainlytimeswhenstoppingistherightthingtodo,inmostcasesallthatisneedediscommitment(投入)andcommunication.Whenwearecommittedtosomething,itmeansthatnomatterhowpainfulorhowuncomfortablesomethingis,wewillalwayschoosetofaceitandworkitthroughinsteadofrunningawayfromit.Communicationismakingspacefordiscussionandtalkingabouthowyoufeelinsteadofjustsayingwhattheotherpersondidwrong.Ifyoucansaytoafriend“Igotmyfeelingshurt.”insteadof“Youhurtmyfeelings.”,youaregoingtobeabletosolvetheproblemmuchfaster.Indealingwithmanychallengesthatfriendshipwillbringtoyou,trytoseethemforwhattheyare:smallhurdles(障礙)youneedtojumporgetoveronyourwaythroughlife.Nothingissobigthatitisimpossibletogetover,andhurtisonlytoservetomakeusstronger.It'sallpartofgrowingup,andithappenstoeveryone,andsomedayyouwilllookbackonallofthisandsay,“Hardasitwas,itmademewhoIamtoday.Andthatisagoodthing.”寫作指導Step1通讀全文,理清結構主旨大意:文章共四段,論述如何面對挑戰以及迎接挑戰對我們自身成長的好處。基本可以確定challenge、commitment、communication為關鍵詞。文章結構:第一段:生活中充溢挑戰,挑戰伴隨著友情而出現。其次段:當我們面對挑戰時,我們會做出兩種選擇:英勇地戰勝它或選擇躲避。但更多的時候,我們須要的是投入與溝通。第三段:投入工作,迎接挑戰意味著面對問題并解決問題,而溝通意味著為探討留出空間,避開指責他人。第四段:戰勝挑戰會使我們更加成熟、強大,挑戰幫助我們成長。Step2刪繁就簡,提煉要點第一段:Lifeisfilledwithchallenges,andchallengesaretheverythingsthatcomewithfriendship.其次段:Inmostcasesallthatisneedediscommitmentandcommunicationwhenwearefacedwithachallenge.

第三段:Wewillalwayschoosetofaceitandworkitthroughinsteadofrunningawayfromit.Communicationismakingspacefordiscussionandtalkingabouthowyoufeelinsteadofjustsayingwhattheotherpersondidwrong.

第四段:It'sallpartofgrowingup,andithappenstoeveryone,andsomedayyouwilllookbackonallofthisandsay,“Hardasitwas,itmademewhoIamtoday.Andthatisagoodthing.”

Step3合并改寫,潤色升級要點1:Lifeisfullofchallengesthatcomewithfriendship.(對原要點語義轉換)

要點2:Inmostcases,whendealingwithsuchachallenge,commitmentandcommunicationarewhatweneed.(用狀語從句的省略;用what引導名詞性從句)

要點3:Commitmentmeansfacingitandworkingitthroughwhilecommunicationmeansmakingspacefordiscussionandavoidingblamingothers.

(choosetoface改為meanfacing;sayingwhattheotherpersondidwrong改為blamingothers)要點4:Rememberthatchallengesactuallydousgoodfortheyarepartofgrowingup,makingwhowearetoday.(用dosb.good)

Step4聯句成篇,復查謄寫通讀初稿內容并進行細致檢查,可以從以下幾方面進行重點審查:①所寫概要覆蓋了原文的全部要點信息,且各要點的表達相對獨立。②全文在語言上沒有語法或用詞的錯誤,文章結構緊湊且上下句連貫穿順。③標點符號運用精確,單詞拼法沒有錯誤。④詞數符合要求,總詞數在60左右(不少于40,不超過80)。最終,把檢查無誤的初稿謄寫到答卷上,保持書寫規范,字跡清晰。Lifeisfullofchallengesthatcomewithfriendship.(要點1)Inmostcases,whendealingwithsuchachallenge,commitmentand