40分寫作規范練(四)寫作(共兩節，滿分40分)第一節(滿分15分)[2024·湖南省百所學校高三上聯考]假定你是李華，上個月你去了長城旅游。請你就此寫封電子郵件和外國網友Lucy共享此事，內容包括：1．描述過程；2．你的體會；3．建議她去長城旅游。留意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2．可以適當增加微小環節，以使行文連貫。DearLucy，Howareyoudoing？_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua

其次節讀后續寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，依據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。[2024·浙江省高三5月模擬卷]Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm，”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don'tbelateforsupper，”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost！”“OK！”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.留意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；2．請按如下格式在相應位置作答。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

40分寫作規范練(四)第一節DearLucy，Howareyoudoing?Lastmonth,IwentonatriptotheGreatWallwithmyparents.Therewerealotoftourists,amongwhomweresomeforeigners.Iclimbedforafewhourswithperseveranceandeventuallyreachedthedesireddestination.IwasstruckbytheheightandgloryoftheGreatWall.IwasfullofadmirationfortheancientpeopleofChinabecausetheymadealotofeffortstobuildit.IknowyouareeagertovisittheGreatWall,soIrecommendyouenjoyitsbeautyinthenearfuture.I'mconvincedthatitwillbringyouadifferenttravelexperience.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua其次節【語篇解讀】本文以人物為線索綻開，講解并描述了父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個摯友家體驗農場生活，見父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗的閱歷。解析：1.段落續寫：①由第一段首句內容“突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的馬前。”可知，第一段可描寫兔子出現后帶來的反應擴綻開，可以寫馬的反應，也可以寫人的反應，但要留意與其次段首句相呼應。②由其次段首句內容“我們不知道自己在哪里，天黑了。”可知，其次段可呼應前文保羅叔叔的囑咐——不要延誤吃晚飯，可從如何尋路返回農場去寫。2．續寫線索：兔子出現——馬受驚——迷路——天黑——被叔叔找到——到達農舍答案：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itsabruptappearancescaredmyhorse,makingitrunoffthetrackwildly.IsparednoeffortstoholdonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepup,extremelyworriedaboutmysafety.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforeariver,outofbreath.Relieved,welookedaroundtryingtofindthetrack.However,itwasnowheretobefound.Soaimlesslydidthefrightenedhorserunthatwegotlostunconsciously.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Nothinginsightwasfamiliarandneitherdidweknowwherethefarmhousewas.Justatthepointo