主題15

——熱點話題

I.主題詞匯

eathealthyfood,obeythetrafficrules,obeyallthelaws,beoptimistictosometrouble,behappy,to

makefulluseoftime（充分利用時間）,doexerciseregularly,takepartinsports,allinall/inaword

/tosumup（總之）

IL常用句型

1.Weshouldobeyallthelaws,beoptimistictosometrouble,andbehappyinordertocherishour

lives.

2.Lifeisastar,ashinningstar,apreciousshinningstar.

3.Inmyopinion,weoughttodosomethingtocherishourlife.

4.Thesecretofsuccessistobelieveinyourself.Taketimetodeliberate,butwhenthetimefor

actionhasarrived,stopthinkingbutfaceitbravely.

5.NapoleonBonapartesays,"besuccessful!Judgemenonlybytheresultsoftheiractions.^Whenit

comestovictory,hesitationandindecisionaresureofdefeat.

6.Talkingwithouttakingactionspeakslouder.AsWilliamShakespeareputsit,"Actionis

eloquence.^^

7.Lifegoeson,anditneverstopsforanyone.AsAlbertEinsteinsays,“Lifeislikeridingabicycle.

Tokeepyourbalanceyoumustkeepmoving.^Donotstoptryingjustbecauseyouareafraidof

makingmistakes,foryoushouldalwaysknowourgreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfallingbutin

risingeverytimeyoufall.

8.ThebestadviceIevergot:doyourbestandmostimportant,keepitinperspective.

9.SeveralpiecesI'vegotteninmylifehavereallymadeadifference.

10.Andbytheway,youdon'tchangeanythingbybeingmean.Usuallyyoudon'tgetanywhere.

a.Rememberthatyoucandoanythingyouwanttodo.Don'tletanyonesay,"You'renotsmart

enough...It9stoohard...It'sadumbidea."

b.Alwaysdothebestjobyoucandoatwhateveryou'reassigned,evenifyouthinkifsboring.

c.Don'tbeacredithog.Ifyou'reconstantlyintheneighborhoodofgoodthings,goodthingswill

happentoyou.

11.Whiletheprocessishard,theresultsarecheerful.Haditnotbeenforthestruggling,weshould

nothaveachievedourfinalgoals.However,stronglythewavesoflifebeat,lifewillfinallyflow,in

peace.

12.Lifecanbethestreammeanderingwithjoy.Withthewarmthofsunshine,pickingabook,Iread

outthepoems,freely.Lifeastheflowingwater.

13.Lifeislikethemonopoly.Duringthegame,wemightloseandwemightwinaswell.Butthere

isonethingfbrsure—wegainexperience.Itenablesustoviewthingsthoroughlyandmakeupour

minds.Welearnfromthepastsothatwecantakeactiontofulfillourgoals.Monopolycanbea

miniatureoflife.Weobeytherulesandmanagetopursuethegreatestsuccess.Gamesarecruel,sois

life.Wehavetogetfullypreparedfortherollingdice.

14.rdliketogivesomesuggestionstomyfriendswholoveonlineshopping.First,donotsurfthe

Internetfbrtoomuchtime.Next,controlyourselfwhenyoudoshoppingonline.

15.I'mgivingseveralsuggestionstomyfriendswholoveonlineshopping.First,don'tbeattracted

bytheadvertisements.Someofthemaren'ttrue.Second,neverbuythingsyoudon'tneed.

16.Ifyourloveonlineshopping,perhapsyoushouldchoosethoseshopswhichpeopledon't

complainaboutthequality.

III.模擬試題

Lifeisprecious/valuable

A.Whatdoyouthinkoflife?

B.Why?(giveatleasttworeasons)

C.Howwillyoucherishyourlife?

要點分析

1.在寫文章時，注意寫實，不要太空洞，只談大道理

2.Life指的是生命，而不是生活

3.第三個問題要展開，分層次詳寫

寫作思路

?對生命的看法

1.Asweallknow,lifeisveryprecioustoeveryone.

2.Lifeisthebasicthingontheearth.Withoutlife,therewon'tbeanythingontheEarth,soI

thinklifeisprecious.

?如何珍愛生命

1.Wecan'tplaywithfire.

2.Whenwegoacrosstheroad,weshouldlookleftandrightinordertomakesurethere

arenocarscoming.

3.First,wemustobeythetrafficruleswhenwegoacrosstheroad.Weshouldknowit's

importanttoprotectourselves.

4.Second,weshouldeathealthyfoodandoftendoexercisetokeepfit.It'sagoodwayto

cherishourlives.

5.Asastudent,weshouldstudyhardanddonotwastetoomuchtimeonplaying.

6.Weshouldalsorespectothers.Wemustn'tkillanimals.

7.Recently,adisasterhappenedinwesternChina,soweshouldmakeanefforttohelp

peoplethereovercomedifficulties.

?總結生命的意義

1.Allinall,everyonehasgotonlyonelife,sowemustcherishit.

2.Tosumup,lifeisvaluable.Weshouldmakegooduseofit.

范文講評

原文稿

Ithinklifeisthemostpreciousthingintheworld.Therearesomereasonsfbrit.

Firstofall,everyoneonlyhasonelife.Wecan'tgetasecondchancetolivelikegames.

Secondly,everyoneisdifferent,eventwinshavedifferences.Noone

cantaketheplaceofyou,andyoucan'ttaketheplaceofothers.Lifeissoweakthatevenaword

cankillaperson.Weshouldcherishourlife.Wecanhaveahealthydietandtrytokeepourselves

fromdangers.Inaddition,livingahappylifeisagoodwaytocherishourlives.

Generallyspeaking,lifeisprecious,soweshouldcherishOUKlives.

點評與評分

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1.Everyone是指“每個人或物”，后跟of；而everyone是指“人人，每人”

修改稿

Ithinklifeismostpreciousthingintheworld.Therearesomereasonsforit.

Firstofall,everyoneonlyhasonelife.Wecan'tgetasecondchancetolivelikegames.

Secondly,everyoneisdifferent,eventwinshavedifferences.Noonecantaketheplaceofyou,and

youcan'ttaketheplaceofothers.What'smore,life

issoweakthatevenawordcankillaperson.Therefore,weshouldcherishourlife.Wecanhavea

healthydietandtrytokeepourselvesfromdangers.livingahappylifeisagoodwaytocherishour

lives.

Generallyspeaking,lifeisprecious,soweshouldcherishourlives.

范文選登

1.Asweallknow,lifeisveryprecioustoeveryone.Weonlyhaveonechancetoenjoythelife.So

weshouldcherishourlife.

Somepeopledon'trealizethatlifeisimportant,sotheyaren'tcarefulenoughtokeepthemselves

safe.Ifwedon'tloveourlife,we'llhavenochancetoseethebeautifulworld.Therefore,wemust

protectourselves.

Inmyopinion,weoughttodosomethingtocherishourlife.Wecan'tplaywithfire.Whenwego

acrosstheroad,weshouldlookleftandrightinordertimakesuretherearenocarscoming.We

can'tdoanythingdangerous.

Inaword,lefscherishourlife.

2.Lifeisthebasicthingontheearth.Withoutlife,therewon'tbeanythingontheEarth,soIthink

lifeisprecious.Howdowecherishourlives?First,wemustobeythetrafficruleswhenwegoacross

theroad.Weshouldknowit'sgoodtoprotectourselves.Second,weshouldeatthehealthyfoodand

oftendoexercisetokeepfit.It'sagoodwaytocherishourlives.

Allinall,everyonehasgotonlyonelife,sowemustcherishit.

3.Inmyview,lifeisprecious.Butnowadays,theenvironmentpollutionismoreandmoreserious.

Thereismoreandmoredirtysmokeintheair.It'sharmfultoourlife.Inaddition,manypeopledie

ofdiseases.SoIthinkit'snecessaryforustocherishourlives.

Toachievethegoal,weshoulddomoreexercise.Takingpartinsportscanpreventusfrom

sufferingpains.Next,wecanalsoeatmorefruitandvegetablestokeepfit.Ifwehavegothealthy

bodies,wewon'talwaysbesick.

Allinall,everyonehasonlyonelife,sowemustcherishit.

4.Lifeislikeasausage

Russianssay,"Thereisanendfbreverything,exceptforsausages——theyhavetwoends.^^I

didn'ttakethefood-relatedsayingseriouslyatfirstandthoughtitwasajoke,buttimeaftertime,I

cametorealizetheprofoundmeaningbehindit.

Weallknowhowourliveswillend,andscientistshavetoldushowtheystarted.It'slikea

sausagewithtwoends.Weareallthesame—exceptforthe“filling”.Inthecase,lifeisjustthe

sameasthefood.Themiddleisfbryoutotry.

5.Lifeislikeaboatingrace,inwhichyoucanenjoyswavesofchanges,aswellasthesunshineof

friendship.

Changesoccurinourliveseveryday.Nomatterifthey'regoodorbad,youhavetoacceptthem.

Theyaretheinevitablechallengesintheboatingrace,becauseiftherewerenowaves,therewouldn't

betheboatingrace,butasleepingrace.Inaddition,changeshelpusgoon.Goodchangespushyouto

gofasterwhilethebadonesawaityoutoovercomethemandwillthusgiveyouasenseof

achievement.

Duringtherace,youcanforgetaboutthefiercecompetitionandenjoythebeautifulsunshine.

Itisfriendshipthatenablesustosurvivenumeroussetbacks,itisfriendshipthatjoinsustogether,

anditisfriendshipthatwewillcherishmostandforever.

Whetheryouwintheboatingraceornotdependsonyourself.Youdon'thavetobetoofast,but

youhavetoimmerseyourselfintherace,enjoyingthebeautifulsceneryandthefun.So,justenjoy

yourselfwiththebeliefthatnomatterwhathappens,lifegoeson!Nomatterwhathappens,the

boatingracewillgoon.

范文鏈接

1.Onlineshoppingischangingthewayofourlife

a.AstheInternethasbecomeanimportantpartinourdailylife,onlineshoppingbringsconvenience

anditischangingthewayofourlife.I'minfavorofonlineshopping.Thebiggestadvantageisthat

itisquickandconvenient.PeoplecanbuyanythingontheInternetbycallingcellphonesorclicking

themouseonthecomputer.There5revariousproductionsforustochoose.However,itstillcauses

problems.Forexample,thequalityoftheproductionsometimesisnotasgoodasthatwebuyinthe

departmentstores.Soinmyopinion,ifweloveonlineshopping,perhapsweshouldchoosethose

shopswhichpeopledon'tcomplainaboutthequality.Onlineshoppingisnodoubtagoodwayfor

ourlifeanditalsosavesbothtimeandmoney.

b.Noonecandenythatonlineshoppingplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Almosteveryone

lovesonlineshopping.SodoI.Ithinkitreallymakesourlifeeasier.Ithasalotofadvantages.We

cangoshoppingwithoutleavingourhome.Itcansaveourtimetodosomethingmoreimportant.

Also,ithasitsdisadvantages.Somepeoplemaybecrazyforitanddonotworkanymore.Itwastes

toomuchtime.SoIhavesomesuggestionstomyfriendswholoveonlineshopping.First,weshould

neverspendtoomuchtimeonit.Second,weshouldonlybuythingswhichweneed.

Tosumup,onlineshoppingisactuallychangingthewayofourlife,butpleaseuseitproperlyand

don'tletitruinourlife.

c.Withthedevelopmentofthescienceandtechnology,shoppingonlinebecomesmoreandmore

popular.Itischangingthewayofourlife.Inmyopinion,onlineshoppingisagoodwaybecauseifs

convenientandcheap.Wecanbuythingsbylowerprice.Italsohassomedisadvantages.Maybethe

goodswhichweseeontheinternetaredifferentfromthethingsweget.However,Ihavesome

suggestionstodealwithit.Beforewedecidetobuysomethingonline,weshouldthinkitover.

What'smore,weshouldneverbelieveotherseasily.Allinall,shoppingonlineproperlyisreallya

niceidea.

d.Withthedevelopmentofscience,moreandmorepeoplegoshoppingonline.Inmyopinion,it'sa

goodwaytochangeourlife.Therearesomeadvantagesforit.First,onlineshoppingismuchcheaper

andmoreconvenient.Wedon'tneedtogoout.Wecanchoosedifferentkindsofthingswhichwe

want.however,italsohassomedisadvantages.Foronething,it'sbadfbroureyes.Foranother,we

maywastemoneyonthingswhichwedon'treallyneed.

Forthesereasons,I'dliketogivesomesuggestionstomyfriendswholoveonlineshopping.

First,donotsurftheinternetfortoomuchtime.Next,controlyourselfwhenyoudoshoppingonline.

Inaword,ifyoudoonlineshoppinginaproperway,Ibelieveourlifewillbebetter.

e.Onlineshoppingischangingthewayoflife.Itmakesourlifemoreconvenientandmoreenjoyable.

Therearetwoadvantages.First,wenolongerhavetogoouttobuythings.Simplymovingthe

mousecanenableustogetsomethingwewant.Secondly,onlineshoppingusuallycostslessmoney.

Butinfact,onlineshoppingisn'tasperfectasitseemstobe.Therearealsosomedisadvantages.

Mostly,thegoodsdon'tmeetourexpectationsandit'sinconvenienttoreturnthem.

Therefore,I'mgivingseveralsuggestionstomyfriendswholoveonlineshopping.First,don'tbe

attractedbytheadvertisements.Someofthemaren'ttrue.Second,neverbuythingswedon'tneed.I

believeonlineshoppingwillmakeourlifebetterifweuseitproperly.

Wherearewegoing,Dad

a.DearEditor,

Iamabigfanof“wherearewegoing,Dad."Therefore,IwanttorecommendShanghaitoyou

sothatfathersandchildrencanhaveawonderfulthree-daytrip.ThereasonwhyIchoosethiscityis

thatShanghaiisnotonlyabeautifulcity,butalsoaninternationalcitywithlotsofinterestingplaces.

Onthefirstday,theycanwalkdowntoBund,theoldpartofthecitywithlotsofEuropeanstyle

bulidings.ThentheycanwalkalongthewaterfrontandlookupattheOrientalPearlTVTower

acrosstheHuangPuRiver.Onthesecondday,People'sSquareisagoodchoice.Childrencanfly

kitesaswellasfeedthepigeons.Atlast,YuGardenisanecessaryplacetovisit.There9relotsofcraft

shopsinit.FathersandchildrencanhavealotofdeliciouslocalChinesefoodthere,suchas

dumpling.IamsurethatfathersandchildrenwillhavehaveapleasanttripinShanghai.

b.Recently,"wherearewegoing,Dad“hasbecomeaverypopularshow.IfIwasoneofthedads,I

wouldtakemychildrentoBeijing.First,wewillgotoTian'anmenSquare.Itisfancinating.Every

morning,wecanseesoldiersraisingtheflag.Next,wewillgototheGreatWall.Itismadeofstones.

Itismagnificentandwithalonghistory.Wecanenjoytheamazinglandscapes.Finally,wewillvisit

theSummerPalace.Itisfilledwithancientstuff.WewilllearnaboutthepastofChina.Ithinkitwill

beanunforgettableandmeaningtrip.IwillhavesuchagoodtimethatIwilllookforwardtomy

secondvisittoBeijing.

c.AsthemostpopularTVprogrammeinChina,“wherearewegoing,Dad^attractedmillionsofthe

familiestogooutasafamilyactivity.TheplaceIwanttointroducetothemisHainanIsland.

Hainanislandisfamousforitsbeautifulseaviewandfreshair.Ifsenjoyableforthefamilyto

relaxandmakesandcastleinordertolearnhowtofinishthetaskbyteamwork.Theycanenjoythe

deliciousseafoodaswell.

IhopethattheeditorsoftheTVprogrammewilltakemyadviceandbringlaughterandwarmthto

millionsofpeople'slife.

3.Themostshockingnewstome

a.Aboutseveralmonthsago,IheardapieceashockingnewsthatauniversitystudentcalledYao

Jiaxinusedaknifeawomanaftershewasknockeddownbyhiscar.IfeltveryshockedwhenIread

hismotivewhichwaspublishedonnewspaperwastopreventthewomanaskinghimformoney.I

can'tagreewithhisopinion—moneyismoreimportantthanalife.

Inconclusion,IthinknowadaysmanyschoolsinChinaaregoodatteachingstudentsbutpoorat

educatingthem.Ihopethisproblemwillbesolvedinthernearfuture.

b.YoucouldhardlyimaginehowshockingIwasarrestedbecausehedroveafterdrinking.

Inmyview,MrGaoispublicfigurewhoisafamousmusicianwithgreattalent.Heisoftenstrict

withhimself.Irememberheeversaid,“ifsomeonedoesnotcarefbrothers9lives,hecan'tbeareal

musician.Buthedidsomethingdangeroustoothers5lives.

Fromthisevent,welearnthatwemustkeepsafefirst.Neverdriveafterdrinking.Ibelieveif

everyonecandolikethis,accidentswillhappenlesssothatwecanbesaferinthefuture.

Stopdrunkdriving

Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatdrunkdrivinghasbeenagreatproblemwithwhich

weareconfronted.Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingforit.Firstly,carsgainincreasingpopularity

withrapiddevelopmentofpeople'slivingstandards.Secondly,peopletakepartinmoreactivitiesor

banquetsthaneverbefore,wheretheywilldrinkalot.Then,theymaygetdrunkbutcontinueto

drive.Inordertocontrolit,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Wecanmake

newlawsandenhancedriver'sawarenessofpublicsafety.Togetherwithourefforts,wewillsolve

theproblemofdrunkdrivinginthenearfuture.

Howtomakeyourlifemeaningful?

Peopleholdvariousopinionsonthepurposeoflife.Somethinkthattheyliveformoney,andsome

forfun,Inmyopinion,Iliveforexperiences,forexperiencesenablemetounderstandthemeaning

oflife.Thefirstreasonofmybeliefisthatmoneyandfamearen'tadequateforleadingahappylife.

Somepeoplehaveenoughmoneyandfame,buttheyhavenointerestortimetoenjoytheirlife.

Secondly,livingjustforfunisalsounacceptabletome.Inmyopinion,tolearnfromallthe

experiences,togainself-contentinallthehappenings,andtoenjoylifefromdifferentangles,you

willfindyourlifeworthwhileandmeaningful.

Thisismylife

Althoughmylifeisfulloftests,booksandcountless,Icanstillfindhappinessfromit,Athome,

myparentsoftentelljokestomakemerelaxed.Theyalwayspreparenicebreakfastanddinnerfor

me.Icanfeellovefromthemallthetime.Atschool,Istudyinaclasswhichislikeabigfamily.All

theclassmateshelpandencourageeachother.Wefeelhappywhenwediscussandworkoutdifficult

problemstogether.Wefeelhappywhenweplayintheplayground.Eventheshortbreakafteratest

alsomakesmehappy.Tome,lifeisajourneyandIthinkitisajourneyafconstantlearning,of

happiness,andoflove.

Aletterfor(help)

1feelverysorrytohearthatafloodinghappenedinyourhometownBeijing,andyourhousesfell

downinthedisaster.However1amalsogladtotheeffortsoftherescuers,moreandmoresurvivors

arerescued.Thereliefsupplieshavebeentimelydistributed