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AfterMumfinisheddoingallthedishes,Mary,myeight-year-oldsister,andIcouldnotwaittoclimbontoourcouch.WebothwaitedforMumtoturnontheoldtapeplayer----itwasourtimewithDad.

Dadhadbeenservinginthearmyinadistantplacefor2years,andhedidn’tcomebackevenonce,[eventhoughhesometimessentbackafewphotos(inwhich

healwayssmiledinauniform.)Throughthetwoyears,ourfamilyreceivedatleastonetapeaweekfromDad.Mumplayedaparttouseveryeveningaftersupper.EverydaywhenMumturnedonthetapeplayer,Dadbegangreetingusandaskedeachofushowourdayshadgoneandwhatwehaddone.Speakingtothetapemachineasifhecouldheareveryword,eachofustoldhimaboutouradventures,includingalmosteverything:therabbitwekept,thequarrelsandhappinessbetweenourfriendsandsiblings,thehumourousEnglishteacherwerecentlymet[andsoon.]Mumwrotedownourresponseonebyone,sentencebysentence,soDadwaskeptup-to-date.Inthefollowingtapes,hepraisedourgooddeedsandgentlycorrectedourerrors.AfterwetoldDadourtales,hetoldussomeinterestingstoriesorreadthebooks(Mumhadsenthim.)Theevenings“withmyDad”hadbeenthehappinesttimesoverthetime,buteveryonehadadreaminthebottomofourheart

(thatwecouldseethefaceofDad,notonlyhearhisvoice.)[Knowinghewouldcomebackinoneortwoweeksfromhislasttape],eachofuswaswildwithjoy,[waitingforthatspecialday.]What/HowWhen/WhereWhoWhy文本解讀SettingCharacterPlotTheme

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(thatwecouldseethefaceofDad,notonlyhearhisvoice.)[Knowinghewouldcomebackinoneortwoweeksfromhislasttape],eachofuswaswildwithjoy,[waitingforthatspecialday.].AfterMumfinisheddoingallthedishes,Mary,myeight-year-oldsister,andIcouldnotwaittoclimbontoourcouch.Mumwrotedownourresponseonebyone,sentencebysentence,soDadwaskeptup-to-date.Inthefollowingtapes,hepraisedourgooddeedsandgentlycorrectedourerrors.AfterwetoldDadourtales,hetoldussomeinterestingstoriesorreadthebooks(Mumhadsenthim.)

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Sevendayslater,allofuswereplayinginouryardwhenthegateinthefenceopened..

創(chuàng)設(shè)情節(jié)突出主題Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAddsomedetailsbyraisingquestions

根據(jù)第1自然段首句，可知：有客來訪。

根據(jù)第2自然段首句“[Puzzledbythescene],Iwas/atalosswhatIshoulddo..

”可以判定：第1段應(yīng)該描寫一番家人和來客的互動(dòng)，且令作者有點(diǎn)無所適從。

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.Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAdddetailsbyraisingquestions結(jié)合原文信息[Knowinghe(Dad)wouldcomebackinoneortwoweeksfromhislasttape]...和第1自然段家人的一番互動(dòng)，斟酌出合情合理的圓滿結(jié)局。創(chuàng)設(shè)情節(jié)突出主題所見所聞所感所思外貌描寫環(huán)境描寫語言描寫動(dòng)作描寫心理描寫情感描寫所見所做所感Appearance/SurroundingsConversations/LanguagesBehavior/Actions/VerbsEmotions/Feelings通過細(xì)節(jié)描寫呈現(xiàn)出情節(jié)的________跌宕起伏UP---DOWN--UPUsethedescriptivetechniquestoenrichthedetails創(chuàng)設(shè)情節(jié)突出主題

Sevendayslater,allofuswereplayinginouryardwhenthegateinthefenceopened.Atallman(inauniform)walkedthroughthegate.Mysisteryelled,[runningtowardstheman].[Only/inasecond]didsheclimbonhisshoulders.Mumranbehind.ThemanembracedMumandkissedhergently.動(dòng)作描寫范文賞析情緒、感受、心理活動(dòng)描寫情緒、感受、心理活動(dòng)描寫動(dòng)作描寫

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[Puzzledbythescene],Iwas/atalosswhatIshoulddo.Soon,thetall,uniformedmancameupandsmileddownatme.Ilookedupandasked[hesitantlyandeagerly],“Areyoumyfather?”Heburstintotears,kneltdown,pulledmeintohisarmsandsaid,“Absolutely!Myprincess!Happybirthdaytoyou!”ThemomentIheardhisvoice,I