2020年7月浙江省高考讀后續寫精講2020年7月浙江省高考讀后續寫精講1ReadforbasicinformationwhowhatwhenwhereElliandI,polarbearstophotographpolarbearsaresearchcampoutside..,CanadaQ:Whatwastakingpicturesofpolarbearslike?onefallReadforbasicinformationwhow2Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingatareresearchcampoutside"thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld-thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears-likeallwildanimals-shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffedandsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough-hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇)Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebearspunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.Q:Whatwastakingpicturesofpolarbearslike?Onefall,mywifeElliandIh3Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingatareresearchcampoutside"thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld-thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears-likeallwildanimals-shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffedandsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough-hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇)Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebearspunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.Q:Whatdoes“that”refertointhissentence?thatOnefall,mywifeElliandIh4Onefall,mywifeandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”---thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears---likeallwildanimals---shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourspaghettiandgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahigh,wirefence.Heclawed,bit,andshovedthewiremesh.Hestoodonhishindlegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,bangedpots,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbear-hejustgrowledandwentbacktotryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws.Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter,Isnappedsomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIcreptuptoouruninvitedguestand,thoughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar,thebearranbacktothelaketowashhiseyes.Q:Whatdoes“thosetimes”refertointhissentence?thosetimesOnefall,mywifeandIhada5Onefall,mywifeandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”---thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears---likeallwildanimals---shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourspaghettiandgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahigh,wirefence.Heclawed,bit,andshovedthewiremesh.Hestoodonhishindlegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,bangedpots,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbear-hejustgrowledandwentbacktotryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws.Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter,Isnappedsomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIcreptuptoouruninvitedguestand,thoughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar,thebearranbacktothelaketowashhiseyes.thosetimesThistime,itwasgoingtobedangerous!Onefall,mywifeandIhada6understandthestructureOrientationsettingthesceneOnefall,mywifeandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”---thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears---likeallwildanimals---shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.adangerousencounterwithpolarbearsunderstandthestructureOrient7understandthestructureComplicationseriesofeventsWhathappened?Howwasitgoingtobesolved?AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffedandsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough-hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇)Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebearspunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.understandthestructureCompli8ourdinnerattractedayoungpolarbearActionsofmywifeandIReactionsofthepolarbear1trybeardefenseactions23yellat;hitpotshard;fireblankshotgunshellsmakingloudnoisestoscarebearsoffkeeptryingtoteardownthefenceradiosbforhelpahelicopter,30mtoarriveusepeppersprayapproachslowly,sprayinthefaceanangryroar,runtowashhiseyesourdinnerattractedayoungp9understandthestructureOrientationsettingthesceneadangerousencounterwithpolarbearsComplicationseriesofeventsWhathappened?Howwasitgoingtobesolved?ourdinnerattractedayoungpolarbearwetriedmanywaysbutinvainunderstandthestructureOrient10understandthestructureOrientationsettingthesceneadangerousencounterwithpolarbearsComplicationseriesofeventsWhathappened?Howwasitgoingtobesolved?ourdinnerattractedayoungpolarbearwetriedmanywaysbutinvainparagraph1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoour

camp.ResolutionHowwastheproblemsolved?paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

understandthestructureOrient11understandthecharacterWhatcharactertraitsofmywifeandIdoyoufindinthepassage?providecluesfromthetext.※adventurousonesinglegoaltophotographpolarbears---amazingbutdangerous※determinedMakingthebestofthiscloseencounterItooksomepicturesofthebear.※kindtoscarebearsoff;thesprayburnstheeyes,butdoesn'thurtthemunderstandthecharacterWhatc12understandthecharacterWhatwouldbethepossiblereason(s)thatleadthebearstothecamp?1.sniffandsmellourgarlicbread2.followhisnose3.sometimesloudnoiseswillscarebearsoff---butnotthisoneThepolarbearwasindesperateneedoffood.Whywouldapolarbearlivinginitsnaturalhabitatbesohungry?climatechangeleadtofoodshortageLoseitswaytoitshomeIllnesspreventsitfromhuntingforfood…understandthecharacterWhatw13understandthethemetwoadventurousandkindfansofphotographyahungryandangrybearTheybothwantedtoprotectthemselves,onefromhunger,theotherfromtheattack.Canthesituationbesolvedpeacefully?Theme:cananimalsandhumansliveharmoniouslywitheachother?understandthethemetwoadvent14understandthelanguageHepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.…hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws.Withanangryroar,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.VividdescriptionsunderstandthelanguageHepull15DescriptionsofbearsThen,finally,thebeargotangry,roseuponhishindlegs,andbegantogrowl.ThebearbegantochasehimandKeeshranaway.ButasKeeshran,hedroppedalittleroundballontheice.Thebearstoppedandsmelledit,thenswallowedit.Thiscontinued,andthenthebearsuddenlystooduprightandroaredloudlyinpainandranaroundwildly,beatingitspawsmadlyagainstitsbody.Afterawhilethebeargrewweakandtired,forhewasveryheavyandhadbeenjumpingaroundviolently.Finallyhewentofftotheicealongtheshore,shakinghisheadslowlyfromsidetoside,andsittingdownnowandthentosquealandcry.---KeeshbyJackLondonDescriptionsofbearsThen,fin16DescriptionsofbearsThesuncaughttheendsofthehairsalonghisback.Shiningblackandsilkythebearstoodonitshindlegs,halfup,andstudiedBrain,juststudiedhim,thenlowereditselfandmovedslowlytotheleft,eatingberriesasitrolledalong,wufflinganddelicatelyusingitsmouthtolifteachberryfromthestem,andinsecondsitwasgone.Gone,andBrianstillhadnotmoved.Histonguewasstuckthetopofhismouth,thetiphalfout,hiseyeswerewideandhishandswerereachingforaberry.---HatchetbyGaryPaulsenDescriptionsofbearsThesunc17DescriptionsofbearsButthenshestopped,turned,andchargedstraightforme.Shewasontopofme,bitingmyarms,shoulders,andbackpack.Theforceofeachbitewaslikeasledgehammerwithteeth.Overandovershebitme.Afterwhatfeltlikehoursbutwasmerelyminutes,shedisappeared.Sheslammeddownontopofmeandbitmyshoulderandarms.Suddenlyshestopped.Therewasdeadsilenceexceptforthesoundofherheavybreathingandsniffing.Icouldfeelherbreathonthebackofmyneckandherfrontclawsdiggingintomylowerbackbelowmypack,whereshestood.Icouldsmelltheterrible,pungentodorsheemitted.For30seconds,shestoodtherecrushingme—mychestsmashedintotheground,myforeheadinthedirt.Andthenshewasgone.

---TheUnbelievableTrueStoryoftheHikerWhoSurvivedBack-to-BackGrizzlyBearAttacksDescriptionsofbearsButthen18學生習作賞析Afewminuteslater,thebearcameback.Withtwobloodshotandswolleneyes,heletoutadeafeningroar,chargedatthefenceandshovedthemeshwithhisfullstrength.Thefencecouldn’thelptrembling.Moaningandgroaning,whichdeeplywrungourheart.Itwouldhavedevastatedanythinginitswayandattackusinafewminutes.Wehavenoaternativebuttoanxiouslywaitforthehelicopter.Withacrackingnoise,thebearrushedin,approachingusrapidly.Wetriedpeppersprayagain,butinvain.ElliandIwereforcedtofleeseparatelytoescapetheoutrageousclaws.Attheverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Withthebearchasingbehind,“Elli,comeon,”Iyelled,attractingthebeartoanoppositedirection,butunfortunately,Iwastrappedtoanarrowcorner,whereIcouldalmosthearthegaspsofit.Attheverymoment,severalgunshotsechoedtoscareitoff.Thebearliftedhisfaceandstaredatthegiantfigureofthehelicopter.Slowly,heflinched.Relievedyetenhausted,Iclimbedintothehelicopter,huggingtightlywithElli.Itwassuchabreathtakingexperience,butasIdevelopedthefilmlater,italljustbecameworthwhile.點評：本文通過細膩的描寫勾畫出了千鈞一發之際的驚險，（字數超出規定，不忍刪減，當然也會跟學生探討這個問題）；最后“洗出的照片”很完美地回照了前文！學生習作賞析Afewminuteslater,the19學生習作賞析A

few

minutes

later,

the

bear

came

back.

Nose

twitching

and

mouth

wide

opening,

he

slammed

on

the

broken

fence

with

his

powerful

paws.

We

could

even

saw

the

sharp

teeth

inside

and

heard

the

deep

voice

from

the

bottom

of

his

throat.

He

was

absolutely

on

edge.

We

paced

back,

looked

straight

into

his

eyes

and

pretended

not

to

be

afraid.

On

the

vastsnowfield,

nothing

could

be

heard

except

our

rapid

heartbeats

with

the

cracks

from

the

fence.

Suddenly,

a

huge

shadow

pounced

on

us

without

mercy.

A

chill

spreading

down

my

spine,

what

we

coulddo

was

lying

down

and

praying.At

the

very

moment,

the

helicopter

arrived.

An

arrow

with

special

medicine

was

shot,

which

came

into

effect

immediately.

The

bear

fainted

onto

the

ground

just

several

meters

away

from

us.

We

quickly

packed

our

baggage,

boarded

the

helicopter

and

finally

breathed

a

sigh

of

relief.

Looking

outside,

the

massive

bear

seemed

helpless

especially

in

this

frozen

island.

The

manager

explained

that

it

was

the

climate

change

that