概要寫作之找要點Whatisasummary?

It'sa

shortstatement(陳述)thatcoversonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails.牛津高階英漢雙解詞典》概要：用簡短扼要(brief)的語言客觀(objective)全面(thoroughly)呈現要點。Example：Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Ignore:theunnecessarydetailsThemainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）要求01020304a60-wordsummary（一段60詞）cover4-5points（4-5個要點）useyourownwords（自己的語言）usethebriefsentences（簡明扼要）05properconnection

(恰當銜接）Part1

Requests?(高考寫作要求）1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）2WrongPoints/lackpoints（要點錯誤/少要點）3Notcompleteordetails(要點不全/細節作要點）◆While

writing1.WithoutOwnLanguage(抄原句，無自己語言）2.PoorVocabulary(詞匯簡單，無豐富詞匯句式）3.Notbriefandlogical(不簡潔，不連貫）4.Otherproblems(書寫/分段/拼寫/詞句錯誤等）Part2Problemsonsummarywriting

◆While

reading技巧01020304Skimmingforthetopicorpurpose略讀知主題/意圖Scanningforthetopicsentence尋讀找主題句Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points跳讀找主次要點Listallthepointsinaform用表格,列要點Part3SkillsofReadingforpoints05Fastreadingforthegenre快讀定體裁【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦A:a

narration(記敘文）--tellsastoryoreventB:anexposition（說明文）--explainsthorshareinformationC:anargumentation（議論文）---makesbbelievetheauthor'sopinionWhydoweneedtoknowthegenre?Narration(記敘文)1.story(5w+1h):who,what,whenwhere,why,how)2.event（beginning-development-ending)Exposition(說明文)1.介紹事物→描述性質/功用2.問題→解決方法3.現象→原因→本質Argumentation(議論文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sviewSkill1.

Fastreadingforthegenre【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill2--

Skimmingfor

thetopicorpurposeWhy?Knowingthetopiccanhelpus:1.leaveoutunnecessarydetails(刪除無關細節）2.presentallthepointscorrectly（正確呈現要點）【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜麗莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview次要點常出現：列舉項目中/段中頻度高/邏輯關系Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingSkill3-DiscoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocationTip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsOneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盜版行為)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.合并改寫：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.event（beginning-development-ending)1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Otherproblems(書寫/分段/拼寫/詞句錯誤等）【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives.Evidencesshowthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanjob-holders.Aninvestigationshowsthatwhenevertheunemploymentrate(失業率）increasesby1%，thedeathrateincreasescorrespondingly(相應地)by2%.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.A:Hard-workingpeoplelivelongerB:HousewivesarehealthierC:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateD:Workisgoodforhealth【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill3-Discoverthetopicsentencesbelowandthinkabouttheirlocation

B1U2StandardandDilaets(expositon說明文)Para1:Believeitornot,thereisnosuchthingasstandardEnglish.(段落第2句,前面是一個問句）Para2:AmericanEnglishhasmanydialets.(段落第2句）Para3:Geographyalsoplaysapartinmakingdialects.(段落第1句）Tip1---Topicsentencecanbethefirstorthelastsentenceortheanswerofaquestion.(西方喜歡開門見山，主題句常見句首，也有句尾和問句后的答句）【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Consolidaton---underlinethetopicsentence

Whyisworkgoodforhealth？

Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy，awayfromloneliness.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Instead，thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy.Besides，workgivesonethesenseoffulfillment(滿足感)andasenseofachievement(成就感）.Workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety.Whenawriterfinisheshiswritingoradoctorsuccessfullyoperatesonapatientorateacherseeshisstudentsprogress，theyarehappybeyondwords.Tip2--Whenyouscan,payattentiontothelinkingwordssuchasfirst,besides,ontheotherhand【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill4-Skipping

forthekeypointsorsub-pointsSkippingfor

thesignalwordsaspoints主要點信號詞：1.結果關系（so/asaresult)2.轉折后（however/but，tobehonest）次要點常出現：列舉項目中/段中頻度高/邏輯關系Whilesportsareforfun,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople’slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames？Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgethonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theydogoodtothepeople'smentalhealth.

Underlinethecentralpointsandsubpoints

(用下劃線劃出中心論點和次要點）

Tip3--Whenwriting,connectallpointsbrieflyWhy表示結果(enjoythegames為keypoints，幾個because后是次要點(exciting,gethonor,dogoodto

)Summary:

Weappreciatethegamesfortheymakeourlifeexcitingandtheyaregoodforourmind.【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦

What’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Forexample,DaVinci’spaintingMonaLisa(蒙娜麗莎）wasboughtfortoomuchmoneybecauseitstandsforthetopskillsinit.Moststarsaregreatintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeak(尖端）toearnthatgoodearnings.DoesthepointsneedtocontainMonalisa?Why?Tip4-LeaveoutunnecessaryexamplesordetailsNo,itisonlyforthemainpoints:youhavetopayifitisthebest.Sub-points:talents,hardtraining(=keepperforming)Consolidation-Skimforcentralpoints&subpoints

【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Skill5-Listallthepointsintheform(用表格列要點)Tip5：TheformmakestheoutlineclearlyandlogicalforlaterwritingTopic

logicMainidea(para1-)Supportingdetailsrewriting【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦Part4--SummaryWriting:---Howtolookforthekeypoints

1.知文體（genre)-理解思路(outline)

2.知話題（topic)----找全要點(allpoints)3.主題句topicsentence-段首尾和問題后

4.主次要點(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，刪細節5.列表格（form)--弄懂層次和邏輯（outline&logical)【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦

閱讀下面短文,根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。

①Throughouthistory,musicspreadamongpeopleofdifferentcultures.

Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷竊).

②Sharingmusiconlinepreventsrecordingcompaniesfrommakingmoneyfromtheirefforts.Theysaythatsharingmusiconlinehasresultedinahugedropinprofitsandsalesoverthepast10years.PeoplewhofindmusicforfreeonlinearenotpayingforCDsoreveryMP3downloaded.Totrulyunderstandtheinfluenceofmusicpiracy(盜版行為)oncreators,onemustunderstandhowmanypeopleareinvolvedintherecordingprocess.Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦

③Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.OneonlinebloggerstatesthatheoriginallypaidforanentireCDandthatheshouldbeabletodowiththematerialwhateverhewants.Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichmeanspeoplelikethebloggerarethieves.④Althoughwedon’tspreadtoday’smusicinthesamewaywedidbefore,there’snodoubtthatpeoplearoundtheworldlovetosharemusic.However,internetpiracywouldpreventmusiciansfromcontinuingproducingalbumsforfearoftheft.Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦1.知文體（genre)-理解思路(outline)

本文是一篇Argumentation(議論文)thetopic→thesupportingevidence→writer’sview未允許的網上音樂分享是盜竊--盜版會影響唱片相關人的利益/即使購買唱片也不能隨意分享--保護音樂版權2.知話題（topic)----找全要點(allpoints)Sharingmusiconline【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦a60-wordsummary（一段60詞）Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Thiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.PoorVocabulary(詞匯簡單，無豐富詞匯句式）Forthesaleofeachalbum,profitsmustbesharedamongmusicians,soundengineers,musicproducers,managers,advertisers,andthecompanysellingtheproduct.Skill4-Skippingforthekeypointsorsub-points3Notcompleteordetails(要點不全/細節作要點）轉折后（however/but，tobehonest）Part1Requests?(高考寫作要求）【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦A:a

narration(記敘文）--tellsastoryoreventWhat’smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Agroupofgreatteachersfromotherclasseshappilycametoourbeautifulandfriendlyclass.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint：workishelpfultohealth.D:WorkisgoodforhealthScientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Themainidea:Teacherscame（toourclass）Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy，worriedandsolitarywhentheyhavenothingtodo.3.主題句topicsentence-段首尾和問題后

Para1:Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷竊).Para2:Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.Para3:Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.

Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦4.主次要點(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，刪細節Para1:Sharingmusiconlinewithoutpermissionistheft(偷竊).Intoday’stechnologicaladvancedsociety,

however,peoplespreadmusiconline,sometimeswithoutanartist’spermission.合并改寫：Nowadays,itisregardedasathefttosharemusiconlinewithoutpermission.Para2:Manypeoplebelievesharingmusiconlyaffectstherecordingartist,buttherealityisthatsharinghurtsbusinessofallthecompaniesinvolved.合并改寫：Actually,notonlydoesitaffectrelevantrecordingmusiciansbutalsodoesharmtobusinessinvolvedintherecordingprocess.【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦4.主次要點(CPandSP)----合并，改寫，刪細節Para3:Therearemanypeoplewhodon’tseetheharminsharingmusiconlineandeventhinktheyhavetherighttodoit.

Whilehemayhavelegallypaidforthemusic,hedoesnothavetherighttoprovidepermission,whichmeanspeoplelikethebloggerarethieves.合并改寫：However,manypeopletakenonoticeoftheharm.Eventhoughtheypurchasemusic,theycan'tshareitonline.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusicsothatartistswillmakeenoughprofitstocontinuetheirmusiccareers.合并改寫：Ifwewantthemusicianstocontinueproducingalbumsforustoappreciate,weneedtoprotectmusicians’copyright.(要點4)【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦C:UnemploymentrateanddeathrateThiscanleadtomanyproblems,andmusiccompaniesarenowdealingwiththispractice.1WrongTopic(主旨和原文不符）【名校課堂】獲獎PPT--學年浙江高考概要寫作之找要點（一）推薦（最新版本）推薦閱讀下面短文,根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。主題句topicsentence-段首尾和問題后Scientistsfindthatthehard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Para4:Therefore,ifpeoplewanttocontinuelisteningtotheirfavoriteartists,theyneedtobuytheirmusic