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screamambulanceListenandguess:stepsWhathappened?SceneTheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.231465978Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.

TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

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Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.

TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedwithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingvery.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

repeatedlyheavilybeattackedshockinglyandseverelyashockingattackasevereattackafraid?

Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.

ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.

ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

solutionQuickaction

Askpeoplearoundfor__________,butnobodycould__________________any.Use__________and_________to_______injuriesApply_____________tothe_________to_____________________.teatowelsbandagestape

pressure

slowthebleedingwoundstreatputtheirhandsonRetelling

Askpeoplearoundfor__________,butnobodycould__________________any.Use__________and_________to_______injuriesApply_____________tothe_________to_____________________.teatowelsbandages

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pressure壓力

slowthebleedingwoundsFirst/firstly..Andthen/Second…Finally...treatputtheirhandsonHewashonoredforwhathehaddone.Johnwaspresentedwithhisawardataceremonywhichrecognizedthebraveryoftenpeoplewhohadsavedthelifeofanother.Beforereceivingtheirawardslastnight,JohnandthenineotherLifeSaversattendedaspecialreceptionyesterdayhostedbythePrimeMinister.I'm____ofwhatIdidbutIwasjustdoingwhatI'dbeen_____.ThereisnodoubtthatJohn'squickthinkingandthefirstaidskillshelearnedatschoolsavedMsSlade'slife.Itshowsthataknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.Doesaknowledgeoffirstaidreallymakeadifference？

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②Johnwaspresentedwithhisawardataceremonywhichrecognizedthebraveryoftenpeoplewhohadsavedthelifeofanother.③Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.

④ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

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"I'mproudofwhatIdidbutIwasjustdoingwhatI'dbeentaught,"Johnsaid.⑥JohnhadtakenpartintheYoungLifesaverSchemeathishighschool.WhencongratulatingJohn,Mr.AlanSoutherton,DirectoroftheYoungLifesaverSchemesaid,“ThereisnodoubtthatJohn'squickthinkingandthefirstaidskillshelearnedatschoolsavedMsSlade'slife.Itshowsthataknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.“⑦Beforereceivingtheirawardslastnight,JohnandthenineotherLifeSaversattendedaspecialreceptionyesterdayhostedbythePrimeMinisterHeroicTeenagerReceivesAwardNewscommentNewsbodyNewstitleNewsleadsNewsleads

②Johnwaspresentedwithhisawardataceremonywhichrecognizedthebraveryoftenpeoplewhohadsavedthelifeofanother.③Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.

④ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

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"I'mproudofwhatIdidbutIwasjustdoingwhatI'dbeentaught,"Johnsaid.⑥JohnhadtakenpartintheYoungLifesaverSchemeathishighschool.WhencongratulatingJohn,Mr.AlanSoutherton,DirectoroftheYoungLifesaverSchemesaid,“ThereisnodoubtthatJohn'squickthinkingandthefirstaidskillshelearnedatschoolsavedMsSlade'slife.Itshowsthataknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.“⑦Beforereceivingtheirawardslastnight,JohnandthenineotherLifeSaversattendedaspecialreceptionyesterdayhostedbythePrimeMinisterwhowhatwhenwherewhy②Johnwaspresentedwithhisawardataceremonywhichrecognizedthebraveryoftenpeoplewhohadsavedthelifeofanother.③Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.

④ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

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"I'mproudofwhatIdidbutIwasjustdoingwhatI'dbeentaught,"Johnsaid.⑥JohnhadtakenpartintheYoungLifesaverSchemeathishighschool.WhencongratulatingJohn,Mr.AlanSoutherton,DirectoroftheYoungLifesaverSchemesaid,“ThereisnodoubtthatJohn'squickthinkingandthefirstaidskillshelearnedatschoolsavedMsSlade'slife.Itshowsthataknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.“⑦Beforereceivingtheirawardslastnight,JohnandthenineotherLifeSaversattendedaspecialreceptionyesterdayhostedbythePrimeMinisterSeventeen-year-oldteenager,JohnJanson,washonoredattheLifesaverAwardslastnightinRivertownforgivinglifesavingfirstaidonhisneighborafterashockingknifeattack.

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Johnwaspresentedwithhisawardataceremonywhichrecognizedthebraveryoftenpeoplewhohadsavedthelifeofanother.③Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.

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ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.

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"I'mproudofwhatIdidbutIwasjustdoingwhatI'dbeentaught,"Johnsaid.⑥

JohnhadtakenpartintheYoungLifesaverSchemeathishighschool.WhencongratulatingJohn,Mr.AlanSoutherton,DirectoroftheYoungLifesaverSchemesaid,“ThereisnodoubtthatJohn'squickthinkingandthefirstaidskillshelearnedatschoolsavedMsSlade'slife.Itshowsthataknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.“⑦

Beforereceivingtheirawardslastnight,JohnandthenineotherLifeSaversattendedaspecialreceptionyesterdayhostedbythePrimeMinisterThenewsleadscanhelpreadersknowthestructureandcontentsofthenewsreportinashorttime.Itisattractive,conciseandsummarized.

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②Izzy,nine,restartedfatherColm'sheartbystamping(踩)onhischestafterhefelldownathomeandstoppedbreathing.

③Izzy'smother,Debbie,immediatelycalled999butIzzyknewdoctorswouldneverarriveintimetosaveherfather,sodecidedtouseCPR.

④However,shequicklydiscoveredherarmsweren'tstrongenough,soshestampedonherfather'schestinstead.

⑤Debbiethentookoverwithsomemoreconventionalchestcompressions(按壓)untiltheambulancearrived.

⑥Izzy,whohasbeengivenabraveryawardbyherschool,said:"Ijustkickedhimreallyhard.MymumtaughtmeCPRbutIknewIwasn'tstrongenoughtousehands.Iwasquitescared.ThedoctorsaidImightaswellbeadoctororanurse.MymumsaidthatDadwasgoingtohospitalwithabigfootprintonhischest.

⑦"She'salittlestar,"saidDebbie,"iwasreallyupsetbutIzzyjusttookover.Ijustcan'tbelievewhatshedid.Ireallythinkallchildrenshouldbetaughtfirstaid.IzzydidCPRthenthedoctorturnedup.Colmhadtohavemoretreatmentonthewaytothehospitalandwe'vegottoseeanexpert."

⑧TruckdriverColm,35,sufferedamysteryallergicreactiononSaturdayandwastakentohospital,butwassenthomeonlyforittohappenagainthenextday.Thesecondattackwassoseriousthathisairwayswelled,preventinghimfrombreathing,hisbloodpressuredroppedsuddenly,andhisheartstoppedforamoment.

⑨Hehasnowmadeafullrecoveryfromhissuffering.whowhathowwhen

Aschoolgirlsavedherfather’slifebykickinghiminthechestafterhesufferedaseriousallergic(過敏的)reactionwhichstoppedhisheart.

②Izzy,nine,restartedfatherColm'sheartbystamping(踩)onhischestafterhefelldownathomeandstoppedbreathing.

③Izzy'smother,Debbie,immediatelycalled999butIzzyknewdoctorswouldneverarriveintimetosaveherfather,sodecidedtouseCPR.

④However,shequicklydiscoveredherarmsweren'tstrongenough,soshestampedonherfather'schestinstead.

⑤Debbiethentookoverwithsomemoreconventionalchestcompressions(按壓)untiltheambulancearrived.

⑥Izzy,whohasbeengivenabraveryawardbyherschool,said:"Ijustkickedhimreallyhard.MymumtaughtmeCPRbutIknewIwasn'tstrongenoughtousehands.Iwasquitescared.ThedoctorsaidImightaswellbeadoctororanurse.MymumsaidthatDadwasgoingtohospitalwithabigfootprintonhischest.

⑦"She'salittlestar,"saidDebbie,"iwasreallyupsetbutIzzyjusttookover.Ijustcan'tbelievewhatshedid.Ireallythinkallchildrenshouldbetaughtfirstaid.IzzydidCPRthenthedoctorturnedup.Colmhadtohavemoretreatmentonthewaytothehospitalandwe'vegottoseeanexpert."

⑧TruckdriverColm,35,sufferedamysteryallergicreactiononSaturdayandwastakentohospital,butwassenthomeonlyforittohappenagainthenextday.Thesecondattackwassoseriousthathisairwayswelled,preventinghimfrombreathing,hisbloodpressuredroppedsuddenly,andhisheartstoppedforamoment.

⑨Hehasnowmadeafullrecoveryfromhissuffering.

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Aschoolgirlsavedherfather’slifebykickinghiminthechestafterhesufferedaseriousallergic(過敏的)reactionwhichstoppedhisheart.

②Izzy,nine,restartedfatherColm'sheartbystamping(踩)onhischestafterhefelldownathomeandstoppedbreathing.

③Izzy'smother,Debbie,immediatelycalled999butIzzyknewdoctorswouldneverarriveintimetosaveherfather,sodecidedtouseCPR.

④However,shequicklydiscoveredherarmsweren'tstrongenough,soshestampedonherfather'schestinstead.

⑤Debbiethentookoverwithsomemoreconventionalchestcompressions(按壓)untiltheambulancearrived.

⑥Izzy,whohasbeengivenabraveryawardbyherschool,said:"Ijustkickedhimreallyhard.MymumtaughtmeCPRbutIknewIwasn'tstrongenoughtousehands.Iwasquitescared.ThedoctorsaidImightaswellbeadoctororanurse.Mymu