讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

Jennywastheonlychildinherfamily.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shegaveasighandhadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes,butIdon’thavemoneyonme,”shereplied.“That’snothing!I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman.“Comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellsoattractive.Asshewaseating,Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.

“Nothing.ActuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidJenny[asshewipedhertears.]“Evenastrangerinthestreeetwouldgivemeabowlofnoodles[while]mymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowedno

careforme.Sheissomerciless[

comparedtoastranger]!”

Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”

Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;Sherememberedhermother’sfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“Whydidn’tIthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelindebted.Whyhaven’tIthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme?”

Onthewayhome,Jennymadeuphermindto

makeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.What/HowWhen/WhereWhoWhy文本解讀SettingCharacterPlotTheme

OnedayWhenwhowherethestreet,Jenny’shome

Jenny(anonlychild)

&

hermotherNarrator敘事者“thirdperson”perspective第三人稱視角Tense:________________Simplepasttense文本解讀SettingCharacterCharacteranalysisDetails..文本解讀......Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”......Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;Sherememberedhermother’sfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.

Jennywastheonlychildinherfamily.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours.....CharacteranalysisBehaviorsHowwouldthemotherreactafterherdaughterrushedoutofthehouseangrily?Whatwouldshedonext?WhatwillJenny’spsychologicalstatebelike?Whatwouldbetheresultofthestory?文本解讀

WorkouttheconflictortheclimaxBeginningDevelopmentConflictClimax/Ending

Anownerofastandsellingnoodlesinthestreet

treated

Jennywithabowlofnoodles

forfree

and

hadabriefchatwithJenny

Remembertosolvetheconflict.Jenny,theonlychild,hadaquarrelwithhermotherandranoutthehouseangrily..文本解讀+創(chuàng)設(shè)情境whattheownerofthestandsellingnoodlesinthestreetsaidleft/Jenny/numbwithshock.PlotA.amercilessmother.B.awarm-heartedseller.C.afamilytragedy.D.a

touching

mother-daughterstory.

Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”

Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;clue

線索文本解讀+主題探究Theme

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創(chuàng)設(shè)情節(jié)突出主題Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAddsomedetailsbyraisingquestions根據(jù)原文信息：“Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,...”思考：WouldJenny’smotherbeathome?Whatmightshebedoing?根據(jù)第二自然段首句“Agentletouchonherhair

calledhermindback”思考：第一自然段應(yīng)該怎么寫(xiě)？

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calledhermindback......Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAdddetailsbyraisingquestionsWhotouchedherhair?Whatwasthemotherlike?WhatwouldshesaytoJenny?HowwouldJennyresponsetomakeupforherrudenessandfault?創(chuàng)設(shè)情節(jié)突出主題所見(jiàn)所聞所感所思外貌描寫(xiě)環(huán)境描寫(xiě)語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)心理描寫(xiě)情感描寫(xiě)所見(jiàn)所做所感Appearance/SurroundingsConversations/LanguagesBehavior/Actions/VerbsEmotions/Feelings通過(guò)細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)呈現(xiàn)出情節(jié)的________跌宕起伏UP---DOWN--UPUsethedescriptivetechniquestoenrichthedetails創(chuàng)設(shè)情節(jié)突出主題

[Approachingthedoorway],Jennytookadeepbreath.However,shefoundthedoorlocked.[Tiredandsad],shesatdowninfrontofthehouse.“Wheremightmymotherbe？”shewondered.“Isshereallysoangrywithmethatshedoesn'twanttoshowanycareforme？”Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother,andshejustrealizedthatallthescoldingfromhermo