Unit14IremembermeetingallofyouinGrade7.寫作題目：Unforgettableperson/thinginjuniorschoolUnit14寫作題目：Unforgettableper1

LearningaimWriteaboutunforgettableperson/eventLearningaimWriteaboutun2在初中三年的生活中，你永遠不會忘記的一個人或者一件事是什么？關于這個人或者這件事，你有什么看法或感想？

合作探究thepersonMyEnglishteacherMybestfriendTheonewhogavemehelp_____________________________________________________________________在初中三年的生活中，你永遠不會忘記的一個人或者一件事是什么？3theeventMyteacherpraisedmeMyclassmatefooledmeIarguedwithmybestfriendSomeonehelpedmewithouttellingmehisname_____________________________________________________theeventMyteacherpraisedme41.寫中學生活中的難忘的人/事。2.事件要有五要素：when,where,who,what,how/why3.最后闡述這件事對自己所產生的影響。寫作指導1.寫中學生活中的難忘的人/事。寫作指導5DearMissZhao，Asyouknow,I'vemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithyourhelp.Atthismoment,Iwanttosay“Thankyou”．IstillrememberwhenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn'tdowellinit.Ilostmyconfidenceandalmostgaveitup.Assoonasyouknewit,youhadalongtalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.YoualwaysencouragedmewheneverImadealittleprogress.EversincethenIhavebeeninterestedinitandimprovedmyselfalot.ThoughIhavetosaygoodbyetoyouverysoon,IstillthinkIamsoluckytobeyourstudent.Ihopeyoucanrelaxyourselfandkeephealthy.Bestwishestoyou!Yours，LiLeiEnjoyagoodcompositionDearMissZhao，Enjoyagoodco6theperson/theeventhowwho:__________when:________where:_____________yourfirstfeeling:_____what:_________appearance(外貌):_____howthepersonchangedyou:______howthepersonhelpedyou:________yourfirstfeeling:____yourfeeling:____________________howtheeventhelpedyou:_________howtheeventchangedyou:_______yourfeeling:____________________theperson/howwho:__________wh7寫作任務：三年的初中生活一定讓你記憶深刻，請寫出令你難忘的某個人或一件事，并闡述這個人或這件事對你的影響。字數要求：80詞左右writingtask寫作任務：writingtask8體裁：______________________寫作順序：_______________________時態：___________________________人稱：______________________關注以下寫作三要素：記敘文以時間、事件發展為順序以一般過去時為主第一人稱體裁：______________________關注以下寫91.Ioncehadanexperience…2.Itwasthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylife.3.ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasonedaymyclassmatesandIwenttothepark.4.Iwillneverforgetthemilitarytraining.5.TherearealotofmemoriesinmyheartthatIcan’tforget.WhenIwas…yearsold,I....各式開頭：1.Ioncehadanexperience…各式106.Asweallknow,everyonehassomethingspecialinhislife.IthinkIwillneverforget

…becauseonthatday…7.Ithinkmyjuniorhighwaswonderful,

becauseittaughtmetobe…8.WheneverIopenthebookfullofphotos,IalwayslookbackwhenI…9.Istillrememberthemostvaluabletimethat

Ihaveeverhad.10.Everyonehasadifferentjuniorhigh.Itmaybewonderful,excitingorhard.Ihavea…juniorhigh.6.Asweallknow,everyoneha11Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory.2.Onthatday,IbegantofeelthatIhavethedutyformylife.AndImustbestronger.3.IfeltthatIwasgrowingup,andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.4.Howexcitingandunforgettabletheexperiencewas!你的感受：你的感受：125.It’sreallyanimportantdaytomeandI’lllearntobe…allthetime.6.Juniorhighisapreciousmemorywithoutpressure,competitionandlotsofhomework.7.Fromthisexperience,IlearntthatIshouldbecareful.IfIamcareless,Iwilllosealotofchances.5.It’sreallyanimportantda13寫作任務：三年的初中生活一定讓你記憶深刻，請寫出令你難忘的某個人或一件事，并闡述這個人或這件事對你的影響。字數要求：80詞左右writingtask寫作任務：writingtask14開聲朗讀自己的文章，并從結構、人稱、時態、字數、拼寫、大小寫、標點符號等方面進行自我修正。Task1自我欣賞與修正Task1自我欣賞與修正15同伴互賞欣賞角度：

寫作基本要求:人稱,時態；2.要點齊全；3.結構:開頭，正文，結尾；4.好詞好句。Task2①欣賞與修正請交換習作欣賞，用紅筆劃出對方的亮點詞、句,

并運用改錯符號找出不足，進行適當修改。②評分以滿分15分為標準，給同伴的習作打分。③點評由亮點欣賞到不足的修正（篇章結構分析-細節點評)同伴互賞欣賞角度：Task2①欣賞與修正16

集體賞析，共同進步Task3Task317Task8Summary

Everypersonyoumet,everythingyoudidmakesapartofyounow.Nomatterhappyorsad,youshouldthankthepersonandeventthathelpyougrowup.感恩過去,感恩親友,感恩師長…..Task8SummaryEverypersonyo18描繪人物外貌詞匯：good-lookingprettylovelyslimoverweightmiddle-agedfitwearglassesalwayssmile描繪人物性格詞匯：braveself-confidentwarm-heartedpatienteasy-goingoutgoingenergeticforgetfulgeneroushardworkinghelpfulhumorousoptimisticpunctualtalentedgood-temperedstraightforwardconsideratehonest描繪人物外貌詞匯：19Samplewriting

TheonepersonfrommyjuniorhighschooldaysthatIwillneverforgetisMrs.Wong,myEnglishteacherinGrade7.

WhenIfirststartedGrade7,Iwasshyanddidnotdaretospeaktoanyone.MyEnglishwasnotverygoodandIfeltnervouswhenIhadtoanswerquestionsinclass.IwouldhaveproblemsspeakingeventhoughIknewtheanswer.Ifeltquiteunhappywithmyself.

OnedayMrs.Wongspoketomeafterclass.Sheencouragedmetospeakslowly.ShealsotoldmethatshebelievedIcouldspeakwellifIpracticemore.Iwastouchedbywhatshesaidanditmademeworkharderonmyspeakingskills.Mrs.WongcontinuedtoencouragemeandIbecameevenmoreconfident.IimprovedsomuchthatIwonanEnglishspeechcontestthatyear!

IwillalwaysbegratefultoMrs.Wongforheradviceandsupport.Samplewriting20Unit14IremembermeetingallofyouinGrade7.寫作題目：Unforgettableperson/thinginjuniorschoolUnit14寫作題目：Unforgettableper21

LearningaimWriteaboutunforgettableperson/eventLearningaimWriteaboutun22在初中三年的生活中，你永遠不會忘記的一個人或者一件事是什么？關于這個人或者這件事，你有什么看法或感想？

合作探究thepersonMyEnglishteacherMybestfriendTheonewhogavemehelp_____________________________________________________________________在初中三年的生活中，你永遠不會忘記的一個人或者一件事是什么？23theeventMyteacherpraisedmeMyclassmatefooledmeIarguedwithmybestfriendSomeonehelpedmewithouttellingmehisname_____________________________________________________theeventMyteacherpraisedme241.寫中學生活中的難忘的人/事。2.事件要有五要素：when,where,who,what,how/why3.最后闡述這件事對自己所產生的影響。寫作指導1.寫中學生活中的難忘的人/事。寫作指導25DearMissZhao，Asyouknow,I'vemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithyourhelp.Atthismoment,Iwanttosay“Thankyou”．IstillrememberwhenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn'tdowellinit.Ilostmyconfidenceandalmostgaveitup.Assoonasyouknewit,youhadalongtalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.YoualwaysencouragedmewheneverImadealittleprogress.EversincethenIhavebeeninterestedinitandimprovedmyselfalot.ThoughIhavetosaygoodbyetoyouverysoon,IstillthinkIamsoluckytobeyourstudent.Ihopeyoucanrelaxyourselfandkeephealthy.Bestwishestoyou!Yours，LiLeiEnjoyagoodcompositionDearMissZhao，Enjoyagoodco26theperson/theeventhowwho:__________when:________where:_____________yourfirstfeeling:_____what:_________appearance(外貌):_____howthepersonchangedyou:______howthepersonhelpedyou:________yourfirstfeeling:____yourfeeling:____________________howtheeventhelpedyou:_________howtheeventchangedyou:_______yourfeeling:____________________theperson/howwho:__________wh27寫作任務：三年的初中生活一定讓你記憶深刻，請寫出令你難忘的某個人或一件事，并闡述這個人或這件事對你的影響。字數要求：80詞左右writingtask寫作任務：writingtask28體裁：______________________寫作順序：_______________________時態：___________________________人稱：______________________關注以下寫作三要素：記敘文以時間、事件發展為順序以一般過去時為主第一人稱體裁：______________________關注以下寫291.Ioncehadanexperience…2.Itwasthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylife.3.ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasonedaymyclassmatesandIwenttothepark.4.Iwillneverforgetthemilitarytraining.5.TherearealotofmemoriesinmyheartthatIcan’tforget.WhenIwas…yearsold,I....各式開頭：1.Ioncehadanexperience…各式306.Asweallknow,everyonehassomethingspecialinhislife.IthinkIwillneverforget

…becauseonthatday…7.Ithinkmyjuniorhighwaswonderful,

becauseittaughtmetobe…8.WheneverIopenthebookfullofphotos,IalwayslookbackwhenI…9.Istillrememberthemostvaluabletimethat

Ihaveeverhad.10.Everyonehasadifferentjuniorhigh.Itmaybewonderful,excitingorhard.Ihavea…juniorhigh.6.Asweallknow,everyoneha31Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory.2.Onthatday,IbegantofeelthatIhavethedutyformylife.AndImustbestronger.3.IfeltthatIwasgrowingup,andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.4.Howexcitingandunforgettabletheexperiencewas!你的感受：你的感受：325.It’sreallyanimportantdaytomeandI’lllearntobe…allthetime.6.Juniorhighisapreciousmemorywithoutpressure,competitionandlotsofhomework.7.Fromthisexperience,IlearntthatIshouldbecareful.IfIamcareless,Iwilllosealotofchances.5.It’sreallyanimportantda33寫作任務：三年的初中生活一定讓你記憶深刻，請寫出令你難忘的某個人或一件事，并闡述這個人或這件事對你的影響。字數要求：80詞左右writingtask寫作任務：writingtask34開聲朗讀自己的文章，并從結構、人稱、時態、字數、拼寫、大小寫、標點符號等方面進行自我修正。Task1自我欣賞與修正Task1自我欣賞與修正35同伴互賞欣賞角度：

寫作基本要求:人稱,時態；2.要點齊全；3.結構:開頭，正文，結尾；4.好詞好句。Task2①欣賞與修正請交換習作欣賞，用紅筆劃出對方的亮點詞、句,

并運用改錯符號找出不足，進行適當修改。②評分以滿分15分為標準，給同伴的習作打分。③點評由亮點欣賞到不足的修正（篇章結構分析-細節點評)同伴互賞欣賞角度：Task2①欣賞與修正36

集體賞析，共同進步Task3Task337Task8Summary

Everypersonyoumet,everythingyoudidmakesapartofyounow.Nomatterhappyorsad,youshouldthankthepersonandeventthathelpyougrowup.感恩過去,感恩親友,感恩師長…..Task8SummaryEverypersonyo38描繪人物外貌詞匯：good-lookingprettylovelyslimoverweightmiddle-agedfitwearglassesalwayssmile描繪人物性格詞匯：braveself-confident