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題目為例More

and

more

companies

are

allowingemployees

to

work

at

home.

Doyouthink

this

is

a

positive

or

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班素材論據人際交往-6、14、29身體健康-14模糊工作和生活界限-14不適應-16構建和諧家庭關系-20科技發展能提高生產效率，讓企業家榨取潤-28互不干擾騰出地方建公園-37不方便，光跑路了，堵車-37利班題目Some

people

think

children

should

not

beallowed

to

watch

TV,

surf

the

internet

or

usemobile

phones.

Do

you

agree

or

disagree?使人變得孤僻，和家人交流的機會班素材Watchin or

surfing

the

internet

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done

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people

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people

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opportunitiesto

communicate

with

family

and

friends.改寫套用Working

at

home

is

something

done

byemployees

as

individual,

and

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them

of

opportunities

tocommunicate

with

managers

andcolleagues

face

to

face.班題目Some

people

think

children

should

notbe

allowed

to

watch

TV,

surf

the

internetor

use

mobile

phones.

Do

you

agree

ordisagree?

的使用會

人的隱私,模糊工作和生活的界限。班素材The

prevalence

of s

put

users’privacy

on

risks

of

being

interfered.

Thistrend

weakens

the

border

between

workand

life,

and

gives

people

a

reason

tocontact

a anywhere

and

anytimethey

like.改寫套用Working

at

home

puts

employees’privacy

on

risks

of

being

interfered.

Thistrend

weakens

the

border

between

workand

life,

and

gives

employers

a

reason

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his

staff

anywhere

and

anytimethey

like.班題目Some

people

think

all

new

doctors

andteachers

should

go

to

work

in

rural

areas,while

others

argue

that

people

should

gowhere

they

like.

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both

views

andgive

your

own

opinion.不適應，有情緒-消極態度班素材Rural

lifestyle

is

probably

too

big

a

jumpfor

new

doctors

and

teachers

who

usedto

be

city

dwellers

and

this

may

put

themin

a

negative

mood

towards

newenvironment.改寫套用Working

at

home

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probably

too

biga

jump

for

employers

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employeeswho

used

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work

in offices

and

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put

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negative

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new

environment.Know

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people

warn

that

the

era

ofthesilver

screen

is

coming

to

an

end

and

thatpeople

will

eventually

lose

interest

ingoing

to

the

cinema.

Do

you

agree

ordisagree

with

this

view?普通青年For

the

last

thirty

years

or

so,

more

emphasishas

been

placed

on

cinema,

and

it

has

beenargued

that

cinema

will

no

longer

be

anattractive

place

formovie-lovers

because

theera

of

silver

screen

is

over.

Overall,

I

disagreewith

the

view

expressed.文藝青年The

cinema

has

been

a

popular

form

ofentertainment

for

many

decades./

Even

thesilent

fi of

the

early

twentieth

centurywere

loved

by

audiences

around

the

world./Hollywood

is

now

an

enormous

business

andfi tars

like

the

Australianactress

NicoleKidman

earn

millions

of

dollars.那種青年?Nowadays,

the

human

society

is

progressing

rapidlyon

various

fronts.Yet

at

the

same

time,

whether

theera

of

silver

screen

comes

to

an

endand

people

willlose

interest

in

going

to

cinemas

has

sparked

muchdebate.

Some

people

think

the

era

of

cinema

is

notover,

while

others

disagree. ally,

I

am

in

favorof

the

former

view.那種青年Nowadays,

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human

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Yet

at

the

sametime,

whether

the

era

of

silver

screen

comesto

an

end

and

people

will

lose

interest

in

going

to

cinemas

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sparked

much

debate.Some

people

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the

era

of

cinema

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while

others

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the

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people

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see

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find

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ill-founded.比如這種開頭With

the

rapid

development

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science

andtechnology,

…are

playing

important

roles

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lives.

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when

it

comes

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people

hold

divergent

views.

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think…,

while

others

disagree.Speaking

for

myself,

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agree

with

the

latterview.比如這種結尾taking

all

the

factors

into

consideration,withall

the

aspects

carefully

considered,

judgingfrom

all

the

evidences

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convincedthat,

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positionthat…結構班講去模板化的開頭結尾語法？邏輯？各種小錯誤怎么破？改！！！點評注意小錯誤，犯這種錯誤會意外…。2014-1-21結構班批改講評示范Many

parents

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days

go

and

work

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taking

their

families

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them.

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familiesoutweigh

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the

rapid

development

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science

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work

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important

roles

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lives.

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it

comes

to

whetherpeople

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go

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work

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that

the

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