Lead-in:Whatdokidsusuallydoafterschool?Pre-writingLead-in:WhatdokidsusuallyPre-writingWhydokidstakeafter-schoolclasses?Whataretheadvantages(優點）?Theyusuallytakeafter-schoolclasses.Pre-writingWhydokidstakeafgetbettergradesPre-writinggetbettergradesPre-writinggetintoagoodhighschoolandagooduniversity.Pre-writinggetintoagoodhighschoolanlearnotherskillsPre-writinglearnotherskillsPre-writingmakemorefriendsOtheradvantages:Pre-writingmakemorefriendsOtheradvawithothersbetterOtheradvantages:Pre-writingcompetewithothersbetterOtheradvamakemorefriends

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進入一所好高中更好地和別人競爭

取得更好的成績learnotherskillslearnexamskillsgetintoagoodhighschoolcompetewithothersbettergetbettergradesbegoodforchildren'sfutureGameTime3交更多的朋友makemorefriends對孩子們的makemorefriends

learnotherskillslearnexamskillsgetintoagoodhighschoolcompetewithothersbettergetbettergradesbegoodforthechildren'sfuture3Makesentencesusingthem:Iagreewiththeideaoftakingafter-schoolclassesbecause….makemorefriendslearnothDiscussion:(4人）Whatarethedisadvantages(缺點）?causealotofstresstakeupkids‘freetimetakeawaykids’childhood(童年）havenotimetorelaxhavemorehomeworkthanbeforePre-writingDiscussion:(4人）Whataretheditakeupkids’freetimecausealotofstresshavenotimetorelaxtakeawaykids’childhoodhavemorehomeworkthanbeforeD.帶走孩子們的童年A.沒有時間放松B.占用孩子們的空閑時間C.比以前有更多的作業E.導致很多壓力EADBC3Matchthedisadvantagestakeupkids’freetimecauseaMakesentencesusingthem:Idisagreewiththeideaoftakingafter-schoolclassesbecause….causealotofstresstakeupkids‘freetimetakeawaykids’childhood(童年）havenotimetorelaxhavemorehomeworkthanbeforePre-writingMakesentencesusingthem:caus

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime

because

theycanlearn_____________(考試技能）sothattheycan__________________(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.And

theywanttheirchildrentobe____________(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclasses_________________(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’s___________(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand___________________(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids,it’simportantforkidstobehappy.examskillsgetintoahighschoolsuccessfulcausealotofstressdevelopmentthinkforthemselvesPre-writing1.What’s

thetopicofthepassage?Differentopinionsabouttakingafter-schoolclasses.2.Whatsentencesaresupporting(支持）thetopic?Thesedays,after-schoolcPowerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetimebecausetheycanlearn_____________(考試技能）sothattheycan__________________(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.Andtheywanttheirchildrentobe____________(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclasses_________________(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’s___________(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand___________________(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids,thentheywillbehappy.examskillsgetintoahighschoolsuccessfulcausealotofstressdevelopmentthinkforthemselvesPre-writingPowerfulsupportingsentencesGoodstructure好結構Howmanyparts?

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.

Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetimebecausetheycanlearnexamskills(考試技能）sothattheycangetintoagooduniversity(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.Andtheywanttheirchildrentobesuccessful(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclassescausealotsofstress(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’sdevelopment(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayandthinkforthemselves.(為他們自己考慮）

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids,

it’simportantforkidstobehappy.BeginningBodyEndingPre-writingGoodstructure好結構ThesedaProperlinkingwords合適的連詞

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime

becausetheycanlearnexamskills(考試技能）sothattheycangetintoagoodhighschool(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.And

theywanttheirchildrentobesuccessful(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclassescausealotofstress(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’sdevelopment(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand

thinkforthemselves.(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Letkidsbekids,thentheywillbehappy.Pre-writingProperlinkingwordsTheseLinkingwords連接詞列舉：first…second…third…finally….firstly…secondly…thirdly…finally遞進：besides,what’smore,also（而且）總結：inaword,inone’sopinion,allinall其它：because,so,although,if,when,after,Pre-writingLinkingwords連接詞列舉：first…secHowcanwemakethewritingbetter?Goodframework好結構（beginning,bodyandending)powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點Correctgrammar正確語法Linkingwords連接詞Tidywriting整潔的書寫Whilewriting(寫作中)HowcanwemaketheGoodframewHowcanwemakethewritingbetter?Goodframework好結構（beginning,bodyandending)powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點Correctgrammar正確語法Linkingwords連接詞Tidywriting整潔的書寫Whilewriting(寫作中)HowcanwemaketheGoodframewstandardsaboutwriting（寫作標準）Goodstructure好結構（3parts:beginning,bodyandending)Powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點Properlinkingwords連接詞Tidywriting整潔的書寫Correctgrammar正確語法Pre-writingstandardsaboutwritingGoodst

如今，越來越多的同學在業余時間參加課后輔導班(after-schoolclass)，他們學習鋼琴、舞蹈、小提琴、英語、數學、寫作、書法(calligraphy)等等。對此，有的人贊成，有的人反對。你有什么看法？據此完成一篇英語作文。

贊同1.學會更多技能，將來要與別人競爭。2.……..……

反對1.作業太多，這些課程帶來很大壓力。2.…………你的觀點及理由…………(理由至少要寫出兩點)

提示詞：development寫作要求：1)

包含所提示的全部要點，可圍繞提示適當發揮；2)

表格中點線的部分需自己補全；3)

短文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名及地名；4)

詞數在80詞左右；短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

While-writing書面表達如今，越來越多的同學在業余時間參加課后輔導GoodstructureStrongsupportingsentencesCorrectgrammarProperlinkingwordsTidywriting

Nowadays,moreandmorestudentstakepartinafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime.Theylearnpiano,dancing,violin,English,math,writing,calligraphyandsoon.________________________________________________

________________________________________________Best:Better:Good:GoodstructureStrong

Showyourcomposition!Post-writingShowyourcomposition!Post-wGoodstructureStrongsupportingsentencesCorrectgrammarProperlinkingwordsTidywriting

Nowadays,moreandmorestudentstakepartinafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime.Theylearnpiano,dancing,violin,English,math,writing,calligraphyandsoon.________________________________________________

________________________________________________Best:Better:Good:GoodstructureStrong人教版七年級上學期unit8Beacapableyoungmanwithpositiveattitude.做一名有積極態度的有為青年。人教版七年級上學期unit8Beacapableyostandardsaboutwriting（寫作標準）1.Goodstructure好結構（3parts:beginning,bodyandending)2.Powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點3.Correctgrammar正確語法4.Linkingwords連接詞5.Tidywriting整潔的書寫While-writing(寫作中)standardsaboutwriting1.GoodGoodstructure(結構）Somepeopleagreewith……..Somepeoledisagreewith···because···It'simportantfor....to..Ifchildren...,theywill...Inmyopinion,………······.Nowadays,moreandmorestudentstakepartinafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime.Theylearnpiano,dancing,violin,English,math,writing,calligraphyandsoon.

Allinall,/Inaword,···Ithinkchildrenshouldorshouldnot........BodyBeginningEndingTherearethreeparts.Goodstructure(結構）Nowadays,moPowerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetimebecausetheycanlearn_____________(考試技能）sothattheycan__________________(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.Andtheywanttheirchildrentobe____________(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclasses_________________(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’s___________(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand___________________(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids,thentheywillbehappy.examskillsgetintoahighschoolsuccessfulcausealotofstressdevelopmentthinkforthemselvesPre-writingPowerfulsupportingsentencesWriteanewcompositionaboutthispicture.Showyouropinions.

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Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetimebecausetheycanlearn_____________(考試技能）sothattheycan__________________(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.Andtheywanttheirchildrentobe____________(success).But

inmyopinion,after-schoolclasses_________________(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’s___________(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand___________________(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Letkidsbekids,thentheywillbehappy.examskillsgetintoahighschoolsuccessfulcausealotofstressdevelopmentthinkforthemselvesBeginningBodyEndingPre-writingThesedays,after-schoolc

Lead-in:Whatdokidsusuallydoafterschool?Pre-writingLead-in:WhatdokidsusuallyPre-writingWhydokidstakeafter-schoolclasses?Whataretheadvantages(優點）?Theyusuallytakeafter-schoolclasses.Pre-writingWhydokidstakeafgetbettergradesPre-writinggetbettergradesPre-writinggetintoagoodhighschoolandagooduniversity.Pre-writinggetintoagoodhighschoolanlearnotherskillsPre-writinglearnotherskillsPre-writingmakemorefriendsOtheradvantages:Pre-writingmakemorefriendsOtheradvawithothersbetterOtheradvantages:Pre-writingcompetewithothersbetterOtheradvamakemorefriends

learnotherskillslearnexamskillsgetintoagoodhighschoolcompetewithothersbettergetbettergradesbegoodforchildren'sfutureAdvantages:readtogether3makemorefriendslearnoth交更多的朋友makemorefriends對孩子們的未來有好處學習其他的的技能學習考試技能

進入一所好高中更好地和別人競爭

取得更好的成績learnotherskillslearnexamskillsgetintoagoodhighschoolcompetewithothersbettergetbettergradesbegoodforchildren'sfutureGameTime3交更多的朋友makemorefriends對孩子們的makemorefriends

learnotherskillslearnexamskillsgetintoagoodhighschoolcompetewithothersbettergetbettergradesbegoodforthechildren'sfuture3Makesentencesusingthem:Iagreewiththeideaoftakingafter-schoolclassesbecause….makemorefriendslearnothDiscussion:(4人）Whatarethedisadvantages(缺點）?causealotofstresstakeupkids‘freetimetakeawaykids’childhood(童年）havenotimetorelaxhavemorehomeworkthanbeforePre-writingDiscussion:(4人）Whataretheditakeupkids’freetimecausealotofstresshavenotimetorelaxtakeawaykids’childhoodhavemorehomeworkthanbeforeD.帶走孩子們的童年A.沒有時間放松B.占用孩子們的空閑時間C.比以前有更多的作業E.導致很多壓力EADBC3Matchthedisadvantagestakeupkids’freetimecauseaMakesentencesusingthem:Idisagreewiththeideaoftakingafter-schoolclassesbecause….causealotofstresstakeupkids‘freetimetakeawaykids’childhood(童年）havenotimetorelaxhavemorehomeworkthanbeforePre-writingMakesentencesusingthem:caus

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime

because

theycanlearn_____________(考試技能）sothattheycan__________________(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.And

theywanttheirchildrentobe____________(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclasses_________________(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’s___________(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand___________________(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids,it’simportantforkidstobehappy.examskillsgetintoahighschoolsuccessfulcausealotofstressdevelopmentthinkforthemselvesPre-writing1.What’s

thetopicofthepassage?Differentopinionsabouttakingafter-schoolclasses.2.Whatsentencesaresupporting(支持）thetopic?Thesedays,after-schoolcPowerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetimebecausetheycanlearn_____________(考試技能）sothattheycan__________________(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.Andtheywanttheirchildrentobe____________(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclasses_________________(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’s___________(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand___________________(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids,thentheywillbehappy.examskillsgetintoahighschoolsuccessfulcausealotofstressdevelopmentthinkforthemselvesPre-writingPowerfulsupportingsentencesGoodstructure好結構Howmanyparts?

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeolehavedifferentopinions.

Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetimebecausetheycanlearnexamskills(考試技能）sothattheycangetintoagooduniversity(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.Andtheywanttheirchildrentobesuccessful(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclassescausealotsofstress(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’sdevelopment(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayandthinkforthemselves.(為他們自己考慮）

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Parentsshouldletkidsbekids,

it’simportantforkidstobehappy.BeginningBodyEndingPre-writingGoodstructure好結構ThesedaProperlinkingwords合適的連詞

Thesedays,after-schoolclassesareverycommonforchildren.Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Someparentsthinkstudentsshouldtakeafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime

becausetheycanlearnexamskills(考試技能）sothattheycangetintoagoodhighschool(進入到一所好的高中)andlateragooduniversity.Otherparentsthinktheseactivitiesarenotonlyusefulbutalsohelpfulforchildren’sfuture.And

theywanttheirchildrentobesuccessful(success).Butinmyopinion,after-schoolclassescausealotofstress(造成很多壓力）Besides,it’snotgoodforachild’sdevelopment(develop).Kidshavenotimetoplayand

thinkforthemselves.(為他們自己考慮）。

Allinall,Ithinkchildrenshouldn’ttakeafter-schoolclasses.Letkidsbekids,thentheywillbehappy.Pre-writingProperlinkingwordsTheseLinkingwords連接詞列舉：first…second…third…finally….firstly…secondly…thirdly…finally遞進：besides,what’smore,also（而且）總結：inaword,inone’sopinion,allinall其它：because,so,although,if,when,after,Pre-writingLinkingwords連接詞列舉：first…secHowcanwemakethewritingbetter?Goodframework好結構（beginning,bodyandending)powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點Correctgrammar正確語法Linkingwords連接詞Tidywriting整潔的書寫Whilewriting(寫作中)HowcanwemaketheGoodframewHowcanwemakethewritingbetter?Goodframework好結構（beginning,bodyandending)powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點Correctgrammar正確語法Linkingwords連接詞Tidywriting整潔的書寫Whilewriting(寫作中)HowcanwemaketheGoodframewstandardsaboutwriting（寫作標準）Goodstructure好結構（3parts:beginning,bodyandending)Powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點Properlinkingwords連接詞Tidywriting整潔的書寫Correctgrammar正確語法Pre-writingstandardsaboutwritingGoodst

如今，越來越多的同學在業余時間參加課后輔導班(after-schoolclass)，他們學習鋼琴、舞蹈、小提琴、英語、數學、寫作、書法(calligraphy)等等。對此，有的人贊成，有的人反對。你有什么看法？據此完成一篇英語作文。

贊同1.學會更多技能，將來要與別人競爭。2.……..……

反對1.作業太多，這些課程帶來很大壓力。2.…………你的觀點及理由…………(理由至少要寫出兩點)

提示詞：development寫作要求：1)

包含所提示的全部要點，可圍繞提示適當發揮；2)

表格中點線的部分需自己補全；3)

短文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名及地名；4)

詞數在80詞左右；短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

While-writing書面表達如今，越來越多的同學在業余時間參加課后輔導GoodstructureStrongsupportingsentencesCorrectgrammarProperlinkingwordsTidywriting

Nowadays,moreandmorestudentstakepartinafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime.Theylearnpiano,dancing,violin,English,math,writing,calligraphyandsoon.________________________________________________

________________________________________________Best:Better:Good:GoodstructureStrong

Showyourcomposition!Post-writingShowyourcomposition!Post-wGoodstructureStrongsupportingsentencesCorrectgrammarProperlinkingwordsTidywriting

Nowadays,moreandmorestudentstakepartinafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime.Theylearnpiano,dancing,violin,English,math,writing,calligraphyandsoon.________________________________________________

________________________________________________Best:Better:Good:GoodstructureStrong人教版七年級上學期unit8Beacapableyoungmanwithpositiveattitude.做一名有積極態度的有為青年。人教版七年級上學期unit8Beacapableyostandardsaboutwriting（寫作標準）1.Goodstructure好結構（3parts:beginning,bodyandending)2.Powerfulsupportingsentences強有力的論點3.Correctgrammar正確語法4.Linkingwords連接詞5.Tidywriting整潔的書寫While-writing(寫作中)standardsaboutwriting1.GoodGoodstructure(結構）Somepeopleagreewith……..Somepeoledisagreewith···because···It'simportantfor....to..Ifchildren...,theywill...Inmyopinion,………······.Nowadays,moreandmorestudentstakepartinafter-schoolclassesintheirfreetime.Theylearnpiano,dancing,violin,English,math,writing,calligraphyandsoon.

Allinall,/Inaword,···Ithinkchi