1、Writing 中考作文指導Writing 中考作文指導書面表達評分標準：第五檔：（1315分）能寫明全部要點，語言基本無誤或有少量拼寫錯誤，行文流暢，表達清楚。第四檔：（1012分）能寫明大部分要點，語言有一些錯誤，但行文基本流暢，表達基本清楚。第三檔：（79分）能寫明一些要點，語言錯誤較多，但意思基本連貫，表達基本清楚。第二檔：（46分）能寫出少數要點，語言錯誤較多，意思不連貫，影響意思表達。第一檔：（13分）只能寫出若干詞語，無可讀的句子。滿分提示：語言無誤(語法和中英文表達)；連接詞至少3；高級句子至少2；詞數夠；層次清晰。書面表達評分標準：滿分提示：語言無誤(語法和中英文表達)；連得

2、滿分作文的步驟：第一步：審題明確體裁、時態、人稱具體做法：用筆勾畫得滿分作文的步驟：第一步：審題假設你是陽光中學的李明，你在學校看到一張環保俱樂部的招募海報。請根據海報內容，用英語給Helen寫一封電子郵件，詢問與該俱樂部相關的具體信息，郵件內容應包括： 1. 如何申請加入俱樂部； 2. 俱樂部活動的時間和需要做的事情； 3. 你還想了解到該俱樂部的其他信息。 人稱：第一人稱時態：一般現在時詢問需用疑問句句型。假設你是陽光中學的李明，你在學校看到一張環保俱樂部的招募海報注意：1.文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱；2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范；3.詞數：80左右，郵件的開頭與結尾

3、已經給出，不計入總詞數。注意：1.文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱；2.語第二步：列要點具體做法：有層次地寫出要點 列出相關單詞、詞組、句型（1） 如何申請加入俱樂部；（2） 俱樂部活動的時間和需要做的事情；（3） 其他信息join the club/be a member of the clubthe time and the activities千萬不要遺漏！千萬不要遺漏！千萬不要遺漏！introduce my friends to join the club考慮所用詢問句型： I want to know+賓從/ I wonder+賓從 I would like to know+賓從

4、Could you tell me+賓從注意賓語從句中的語序。How can I第二步：列要點（1） 如何申請加入俱樂部；（2） 俱樂部活 第三步：連詞成句如何申請加入俱樂部；2.俱樂部活動的時間和需要做的事情；3.你還想了解到該俱樂部的其他信息。I would like to know how I can join your club.Could you tell me the time and the activities?3. I wonder if I can introduce my friends to join your club.;擴充內容Do I have to write

5、an application letter? I just need to give you a call and tell you something about myself.I can only take part in activities at the weekend.I want to know what I should prepare before the activities. I hope to get your reply. My email is 609913370. 第三步：連詞成句如何申請加入俱樂部；2.俱樂部活動的時間和 第四步：美化I would like to

6、 know how I can join your club.Could you tell me the time and the activities ?I wonder if I can introduce my friends to join your club.If I want to be a member of your club, do I have to write an application letter? Or I just need to give you a call and tell you something about myself.I can only tak

7、e part in activities at the weekend.I hope to get your reply. My email is 609913370.I want to know what I should prepare before the activities. Firstly, I would like to know how I can join your club. If I want to be a member of your club, do I have to write an application letter? Or I just need to g

8、ive you a call and tell you something about myself.Secondly, I can only take part in activities at the weekend. Could you please tell me the time and the activities you organize? And I also want to know what I should prepare before the activities. Finally, can I introduce my friends to join the club

9、? I am looking forward to your early reply. Please call me onor email me at 609913370. 第四步：美化I would like to know ho1.Second, Please tell me when the activity starts and ends.2.Sometime I have no time to help your.3.If you allowed, we will do as possible as we can to help the club do a

10、nything.4. I wonders whether I can go to club anytime or not.5. Last, I want to know how many people will join us? 第五步: 檢查Spelling(拼寫)Capital letter(大小寫）Punctuation(標點符號）Tense (時態)（主謂一致）1.Second, Please tell me when 6. I also consider what the club need us to do. Otherwise, I want to learn about oth

11、er information.7. How many members there are in the club? I also want to know what should I do？8. If I can join you, I will think it is my pleasure. If I join the club, will I need to do what?9. I think it is important for us to protect environment.10.Then I wonder that when the club takes action. M

12、issing words（漏詞）Using wrong word（選詞錯誤）Chinglish（中式英語）Wrong structure（結構混亂）6. I also consider what the cl好作賞析遺漏要點！好作賞析遺漏要點！內容可以進行適當的擴充！固定搭配用錯 my內容可以進行適當的擴充！固定搭配用錯 my缺少主句，whether引導賓語從句the句意不通缺少主句，whether引導賓語從句the句意不通2021年中考英語寫作指導2021年中考英語寫作指導另外作文中書寫不規范，卷面不整潔也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整潔分，這兩分不能丟！）。解決方法：平時認真規范書寫，

13、少用或不用膠帶或修正液，盡量減少涂改。規范抄寫另外作文中書寫不規范，卷面不整潔也是要失分的（中考中有12怎樣寫出高分作文？1、審題（體裁、人稱、時態）2、列要點，寫出重點單詞，短語和句型4、美化：注意開頭與結尾連接詞的使用；有把握地使用高級句子中英文的表達差異及語法問題5、檢查修改，規范抄寫3、連詞成句（有層次）擴充內容千萬不要遺漏要點大錯指：內容要點遺漏、句子語法結構錯誤、時態、語態誤用。小錯指：冠詞、介詞、拼寫、標點等方面的錯誤怎樣寫出高分作文？1、審題（體裁、人稱、時態）2、列要點，寫Proper conjuctions(恰當的連接詞)時間順序First (of all), second

14、, then, last but not the leastFirstly, secondly, finally/at last/in the end對稱關系on one hand, on the other hand轉折關系but, however, although/though因果關系because, so, as a result, therefore, thus,條件if, unless遞進順序Whats more, moreover美化文章 Proper conjuctions(恰當的連接詞)時間順序 美化文章 I hope you can help me. Im _ your h

15、elp.2.They arrived very early. They arrived _.3. His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised._, his dog was saved at last.4. I think learning English is interesting._5. We should protect the environment._Can you make these sentences better?looking forward toas early as they couldTo his surprise

16、I find it really fun to learn EnglishIts our duty to protect the environment. 美化文章 I hope you can help me.C美化文章 She is too young to carry the heavy box.She isnt old enough to carry the heavy box.She is so young that she cant carry the heavy box.She is such a young girl that shae cant carry the heavy box.6.She is very yo