1、Make Your Compositions More BeautifulMake Your Compositions More Beautiful 1. words2. useful expressions3. linking words4. sentence structures5. passage organization一. 運用高級詞匯1.這件事情挺難的。2. 我們就會了解父母的辛苦工作。Well then know about parents hardship.3. 這有助于我們學會節儉。This helps us learn to be thrifty.This is a cha

2、llenging job.高級詞匯舉例:significanthardshipavailablecontactdemandingrelativelywastefulfrequent二.增加形容詞或副詞1.在我們的校園里有一個小池塘。2. 如果父母的收入較好,There lies a lovely pond in our beautiful campus.If their parents have a relatively high income,. 表示程度的副詞舉例hardlyseldomrarelymerelyrelativelyslightlya bitpartlycompletely三

3、. 置于句首的副詞1. 這極有可能使孩子養成依賴父母的習慣。2. 尤其當父母有足夠的錢養家時，。Probably this will make the children develop the habit of living on parents.Especially when their parents have enoughmoney to support the family,. 句首副詞舉例strangelyfrequentlyespeciallyunbelievablyunexpectedlysurprisinglybesides四. 各類句型1.插入語然而, 其他同學持有不同意見。

4、 The other students, however, hold the different views.另外，他們會以為將來可以依賴父母。Besides, theyll think they can rely on their parents in the future.2. It 句型我們期望今年有個好收成。It is expected that there will be a good harvest.30%學生認為無必要讓孩子知道父母的收入。30% of the students think it unnecessary to let children know how much

5、their parents earn.3. with 結構作業做完了，那個男孩出去玩了。With the homework finished, the boy went out to play.有了父母可依賴，他們就不再努力學習了。Theyll not study hard any more, with parents to depend on.4.分詞短語30%同學不贊同這一看法， 認為孩子不應當。30% of my classmates disagree to it, saying children shouldnt.知道了這點，他們會越來越努力學習。Knowing this, theyl

6、l study harder and harder.5.從句他所做的一切使我們很失望。（主語從句）What he did disappointed us all. 我們應當知道父母的收入，因為這有助于我們理解他們的艱辛。（狀語從句）We should know parents income,because itll help us understand how hard they have to work.五. 連接成分表示時間:first of all; to begin with; and then; finally; eventually-表示遞進:whats more; moreove

7、r; furthermore; in addition; to make things worse; the most important of all; 表示并列:and; but; or; so表示轉折:however; on the contrary; nevertheless; anyway; anyhow; in spite of; despite 表示因果:as a result; result in; thus; owing to; due to; as a consequence; therefore表示結論:in short; in brief; in a word; abo

8、ve all; on the whole Joe, who is a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem. Joe, a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem. Joe is a lawyer in town. Joe persuaded them to settle the problem. 六. 綜合運用I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. I found four chairs there

9、. They were in good shape. They were at a reasonable price.I followed your advice and went to the supermarket, where I found four reasonably-priced chairs which were in good shape.Following your advice, I went to the supermarket where I found four reasonably- priced chairs in good shape.05年浙江卷書面表達:你

10、的英國朋友正在做一個課題: 世界各地的生日慶祝方式。 請你根據以下要點寫一短文： 一. 通常方式: 1.生日聚會 2.生日禮物 3.生日祝福二. 我認為有意義的慶祝方式和理由。詞數 100-120。 Chinese students celebrate their birthday in various ways. The most common way, however, is just to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On t

11、he birthday, one usually receive nice gifts as well as pure-hearted wishes. Besides, parents will prepare a special dinner or cake to show their deepest love for their children. Since birthday celebrations is one of the most important activities in ones life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For in